Date: 26 Jan 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Treasure Trove
Not my usual kind of story but decided to give it a try. I've really enjoyed these first 9 chapters. Very creative and different.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Crashing the Council Meeting
:) cant wait to read more sooo goood :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bella
More more more please! Very creative spin for an AU story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. :) Updating now.
Date: 12 Jan 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Sightings
:-) I'm looking forward for more…
Author's Response:
Updating now! :)
Date: 03 Jan 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Opportunity Calls
good
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Surfacing
Good story, but maybe you can move it on a bit faster, it's getting a tad dull to hear the same thing over and over
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Most of this is pre-written but it speeds up soon.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Surfacing
Thanks, please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 05 Dec 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Home and House-calls
can't wait to read what's next
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. :)
Date: 25 Nov 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 8 - All Fish Go To Heaven
poor bella i wood find a way back
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 25 Nov 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8 - All Fish Go To Heaven
thanks, please update soon. =)
Author's Response:
Updating now. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Realisation
thanks for this awesome fanfiction,
My only complain is the Bella character, please give her more personality: is she angry or sad ? , what about her thougths, what is she thinking about her past relationship with Edward or Jacob? what about her own happiness
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! Bella is... mixed up at the moment, she's pretty much lost herself in the mermaids' hive-mind, so it will take time for her to 'work herself out'. Hopefully her thinking will clear up as the chapters progress. :)
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Forks on Alert
i wish they couyld find her and i don't know build a tank for her intil they find i way to help her
Author's Response:
Maybe...
Thanks for the review again. :)
Date: 13 Nov 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Maritime Life
poor bella i feel for her
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Colony
Lol just had a thought that made me laugh so hard. Wouldn't it be awesome if her first hunt on the beach was Mike?
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Nov 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Colony
poor bella i hope the cullens and the wolfs and get her back
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Underworld
if i was bella i wood kill her and the sisterhood
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for the review.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Jacob
Poor Bella, wonder what happened after she was bit. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Great. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 30 Oct 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Jacob
Definitely want to read more.
Author's Response:
Great! :) Glad you like it.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Jacob
poor seth how can wolfs not know how to swim
Author's Response:
Lol, true, poor Seth. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 25 Oct 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bella
Very interesting and already off to a good start!! Please continue I love it:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like it :)
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bella
Good, was that a vamp or a merk.
Author's Response:
More will be revealed, lol. Thanks for reviewing. :)