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Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think Sam is the stalker and we still don't who the killer is, but I think Edward is just a sweet awkward guy.

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

boy bella really was clueless in this one.  i mean, sam told her she was with 3 strange guys that night on the phone and she never caught it let alone any other comments.  great work as always

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Enjoyed all the twists and tension.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

What the hell, well that explains a lot, Nasty pieces of work the pair of them.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Very suspicious of Sam, he is not nice, Bella should see tha by the way he treats Seth.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

:):)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

And the mystery deepens...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

 That he is, can't say I liked him before.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

All very creepy.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

The story as a whole was fantastic!  There was so much suspense.  Every chapter seemed to bring on more questions.  Emily really was the biggest psycho! 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it and cant wait for more you guys are the best Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it.  Was completely twisted and Awww inspiring.  Love the Emily twist and the ending was fantastic. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved this story. So good. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for another good story!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the story...I enjoyed it.  It was very well done for a short Halloween thriller.  I also really appreciate writers who still write (especially well and frequently) for the Twilight fandom.  It has been abandoned by so many authors.  Thanks again for all your efforts.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

You did a great job, as usual! I even felt a tiny bit sorry for crazy Emily. Glad to hear Sam got what was coming to him, too! Jessica naming her daughter after her friends was kind of fitting, and sweet. Guess I'm just real glad that Bella and Edward ended up happy and together,as they should always be!

Reviewer: nikkirocsurworld Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 😊

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ladies as always great story I enjoyed very much!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved this story :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks Nikky and Kasi for another wonderful story! :)

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great story as always. I think the ending was perfect. You guys have some of the best stories out there. I'm glad you are going to be making some of your stories into original fictions. I for one will be buying them as they become available. Looking forward to your next story! Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it and now they all are in a better place happy and together thank you for it all I always love getting lost in your stories

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for another satisfying story!  I love that your stories are a bit quirky, have unusual villains, and always have Edward and Bella together at the end. I look forward to more!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love it when a guest reviewer says nice thing.  I figured Sam was in it some way but Emily no clue loved it. 

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

I figured that the stalker was Sam, but I thought that maybe the killer was a woman but I thought maybe it had to do with Edward. Can't wait until tomorrow.

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Your guest is amazing!!!! He discovered all of the mystery!!! Although i was right finally!!! Sam was really the stalker! And yes I agree this Bella was an idiot for not seeing what was really in front! Great chapter!!!! Love the story!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thank goodness the two crazies are gone! Now we can have a little romance with E/B!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow I so didn't see that coming damn now will Bella be ok will she ever be able to recover from this update soon

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

I was shocked it was Emily but a good twist.  I knew Sam was her stalker he was just so crazy.  Glad Edward came and saved her.  Love it so much. 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

That was horrifying! Bella lucked out, escaping death at Emily's hands as well as Sam's! Glad Edward showed up when he did! Maybe he and Bella can figure out things when she gets out of the hospital.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Knew Sam was one or the other but Emily the killer that was good. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Kudos to your guest reviewer!  I wonder why she remains anonymous?  I see you have tied this all up nicely and hopefully at the end of this chapter it was Bella just being in shock, and not being shot, that made her nearly pass out and have to go to the hospital. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

I did think it was Sam, but I thought he was both stalker and killer until the beginning of this chapter. I just hate that so many girls got killed! Looking forward to a HEA!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

I suspected Sam for a long time as the stalker. Such a fun story.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

So guest reviewer was spot on but I am stoked that I was so close to being spot on.  Great story! But then again all your stories are great. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hello left field...never saw you coming!

figured sam was the stalker but towards the end, had my doubts that he was the murderer.

i loved it

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

It is still Sam in my eyes. And I hope I am right for Seth's sake. Sam is good with computers and has everyplace wired she frequents.  He doesn't have to be anywhere as long as his cameras are.  He could have set an automated call to action upon answering so he can "talk" to the stalker.  But it is him. He hates Edward and would set him up in a heartbeat. Not to mention make him miserable by killing the only girl interested in him which would also link him to another killing.  He is possessive and demanding to the point of scary. I really worry for Angela and now Seth. The fact that Jess is falling for his lies and becoming someone else will probably just save her life but could end it too if he gives her an ultimatum. The killer could say I will find you and kill you next unless you give me Intel on Bella or Edward or whoever. She would totally sell out her friends and even family to save her own ass. Jess is a walking advertisement for a weak human willing to be manipulated. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 7

Proof it was not Edward it was the person taking the pictures.  Edward is just too sweet I hope rose fights for custody of Seth cause Sam sucks as a dad.  She really should move of SAMs house. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

I think Angela is next to be killed when she goes back to the apartment for the dress after her hair appt.  I think Jessica is the mystery POV.  Still think Sam is the killer.

Love it!!!!

:)

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Soooo is going to let Angela go back and get that dress by herself??  Why didnt she call Jasper and Emmett about Jessica's pic herself??

What is she going to do about, Sam and his craziness??

 

looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

hello!!!! I hope everything is ok wih you!!!! Hve not written in a lon long time!!!! This story is amazing I just read it today but I am on the edge of the seat!!!!!! Sam must be the stalker, he must be. He is trying to get Bella for himself; I don´t think he is the killer but with your stories I always get everything wrong jajajajaja none of my thoughts have been right before. But that is what I like the most your stories always have amazing twist ant turns. Any way great chapter great story can´t wait for more!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

I dont trust Sam.

Reviewer: nikkirocsurworld Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Don't kill Angela!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

This is starting to make me chew on my fingers, just a bit! I'm going around and around, in my head, trying to figure out who is doing this. I don't know if he's truly evil, but I'm hating Sam, more and more! He's nasty to Bella and the way he treats his son is just awful! Still don't believe Edward is the bad guy, either! Now I'm afraid that Angela will be hurt when she goes back to the apartment!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hope Angela isn't the next victim

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sam is definitely not right in the head. He's irrationally jealous and treats his five year old son with jealousy and anger.  Not dad material!  I feel badly for Seth! I don't think Edward is the killer. He may be a stalker, but I don't think he's making the calls.  Is Sam doing it all?  Is some other unnamed man in on this?  You do have me guessing and I like that. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow Jessica is believing the stalker over her life long friend and Sam is not right in the head Bella needs to tell the worker on Seths case and who is the killer and who is the stalker will Angela be OK 

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hope that Angla isn't the next one. I was thinking it was Sam but I'm not so sure. Now I'm kind of thinking it's a woman whose the stalker and killer who I think are the same person.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can see how Edward can be creepy but I still think it's Sam. He's bi-polar!  What keeps me going is knowing you're hea w/ B&E girls.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm afraid for Angela going back to the apartment by herself!  I can't help but think Sam's involved in this somehow. He sure is being ridiculous about Seth. I can't wait for the next chapter!  I'm supposed to be working and keep checking to make sure no one catches me reading. I couldn't wait until lunch to read this chapter!  Had to read it as soon as I got the notification!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sam is still one of the bad guys probably both. I think he is talking to Jess now trying to frame Edward.  Not sure who the Mystery POV is?  Sam is a horrible father!  I am willing to sacrifice an HEA with E/B so that Seth gets an HEA. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

Still on the PsychoSam train. He's a computer wiz....I'm sure there are ways to prerecord phones to call another phone at a certain time.  Great way to take the suspicion off of you.

But.....is it bella??

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

so lost with who it could be . . . based on mystery pov, thought maybe tia or tanya. now with b's little episode, thinking if something is up with her

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ok. You've confused me. Edward left early. He could have done the apartment. Then again, Sam could be paying someone to make calls. Either way  she needs to dump Sam. 

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh you have switched the mystery POV from  "Wanting" and "Getting" her to "Wanting To Kill" her. So either motives have switched, the meaning of "Wanting Her To Be Mine" is clarified or there are two stalkers working together to round her up and take.  If it is two stalkers,  they obviously do not communicate and want two different outcomes. I still say Sam is involved but I hope I am wrong for Seth's sake. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story! Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Okay she needs to dump Sam. Like lets get a move on with the dumping. I'm waiting for Tia to end up dead to prove a point.... but still can they break up I mean Sam's an asshole and no good for Bella. I don't care if he saved Bella from a mugging. She needs to drop him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

What a run of rotten luck, to be stalked twice! There seems to be a cloud over Bella's head and I sure would like to learn who has put it there.The idea that it's someone who knows her and her friends sends chills down my spine! I'm hanging on to your promise that there will be a happy B/E ending!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

OK now I think I may have been wrong to think Sam is the killer.  You're doing a wonderful job of writing this story!  You have me running in circles. Could the killer be a woman?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is scary stuff!

 

Is Edward going to cancel the date with Tia, since Bella told him Yes?

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

loving this

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is a real mystery.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm not sure of anything any more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMFG I am so confused who is doing this . 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Bella why are they after her who is it and will they get to her

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Dang things are getting g crazy. Love her imagination.  Don't know what to think.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

So mystery POV is a girl.  This chapter really makes it look like Edward is the stalker, but I hope he isn't.  My gut says no.  This chapter was extra creepy!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh wow!!

I have just one question.  Bella is walking and going to the store alone.  Why isnt she following the directions of the police and her father?  NEVER BE ALONE?

 

If someone has been stalking her, why have the police offered any sort of protection?  Since they know the stalker has killed before?

Looking forward to more :)

 

Reviewer: Danatech Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think that the killer the stalker and the boyfriend are the same but maybe I'm wrong and I want Bella with Edward the weirdo 😜

xo

Dani

Reviewer: Danatech Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh! I'm happy that now I have a Halloween story to read and with a stalker! That's a plus!

loved the banner by the way! Great art.

xo

Dani

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

damn i hate sam

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

she needs to dump sam pronto :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

That was a strange chapter. Sam was married and maybe has a kid that Bella didn't know about. Can't she see his escalating hostility? Hmmm. Love the Edward kiss!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow crazy story loving it. 

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

I still say it is Sam. Yeah he could be set up, but I doubt it. He is discreet in him manipulation and he is a jersey most of the time. It doesn't help that he's hiding his past. There is no way in hell I would stick around him if I was being stalked and found out he has close ties to the recent death. Especially with the whole cat thing. Then in the stalkers POV he or she is never trying to get between her and Sam. This could be all part of the set up but I am sticking with Sam as the killer. 

 

I also cannot believe Bella is so accepting about Sam's past. Being married, possible claim to a child that shows up in said man's back yard and having a ex with hooked is NOT something that falls in line with that was my past so I don't want to talk about it file. He may have been drunk but he did express his future intensions and she should be concerned about what else he doesn't deem worthy of her knowledge. Killer or not that is grounds for a breakup.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Who was the boogyman?  Why was Seth in Sams backyard? 

I still think Edward is innocent!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow I love it it keeps you on your toes who is who what is really going on and who is behind what

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, now I'm confused! If Sam was hit on the head in his backyard, who did it? I'm still hoping that Edward is the good guy, because Sam exhibits a lot of signs of an abuser. The story Alice and Edward told about Leah and Sam didn't sit well, either! That call on the supposedly safe cell phone doesn't help any, also!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Still sticking with Sam as the psycho!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: nii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

sam's the killer, the shadow bella saw when sam was outside was seth or molly

edward's the stalker

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm still leaning towards Sam.  I just can't see Edward being the crazy caller.  I could see him watching her from afar but not being scary & mean. 

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

I still like Sam for the caller & wouldn't put it past him to injure himself

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm now confused. Are you hinting that Edward is the killer?  I surely hope not.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

no clue now I think Sam is scary maybe he is working with someone else to hurt girls but now I think it is someone I dont know yet?  Sam is going to freak out if he finds out that Bella was at Edward and if he ever finds out that they kissed he will hurt someone.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nope still think Sam is stalking her and he was calling her from the porch. No sure about the guy running away but Sam is still my number one suspect.  What was Seth doing in SAMs backyard is he the boogeyman.  And the cat being both in forks and in SAMs house. To many coincidences. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

good

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