Date: 15 Dec 2016 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 25 Full Circle
Fantastic story
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
I know how Bella's feeling..seen your beloved Hubby being embraced by other woman was definitely make me angry...but then... have a hot sex...really worth it.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 Whacking Some Balls
So papa Carlisle misunderstanding....he seem not so keen about Bella " past lifestye".. well it was good that mama Esme now know that Bella was as innocent/pure as Edward was...maybe papa Cullen should know about it as well...
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Day at the Spa
Oh I love mama Esme...
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks
Mama Esme...so loving and understanding..
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 Big Changes
Their first time sweet and tender...deflowered each other..
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
They are married...congratulations!!
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Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes
Oh yes..she want to get married...you're lucky man Edward.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
Dry humping...hahaha..nice..
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello
Happy New year...Edward! Bella!
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 Skinned Knees and Kisses
Awww..they kissed...so sweet..
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 She's a Virgin?
Good..l love virgin Bella..very interesting..
Date: 21 Oct 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
I love Bella I love Edward and I love apple pie..
Date: 28 Feb 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello
Wow I bet Edward's mom and dad are not going to be happy with him picking Bella as his Girl!!! lol
Author's Response:
Hmm... probably not their first choice. Lol. Thanks for reading!
XOXO
Lissa
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Big O
Loved this story! I really enjoyed reading it on my first few days off for Christmas break!
Author's Response:
I'm so thrilled you liked it. This was our first baby and so close to our hearts. I really love that you found it and gave it a chance. Thanks so much! XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Big O
AWESOME!!! thanks so much for completing this amazing story on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
No, thank you so much for giving it a try. We so much appreciate that you read and enjoyed this and our other stuff. Even more so that you decided to stop in and let us know about it! This was our first story, our baby, and it holds a special place in our hearts and we couldn't be more thrilled that you loved it! Thank you so much!
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Big O
wonderful
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and stopping by to let us know. We're soooo happy you enjoyed it :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 26 Amazing Grace
has been a terrific read
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. This story was our baby and we loved writing it. It was so fun and we were blown away by the support. We're both true Southern girls, so of course we had to write from our roots. Thanks for reading and letting us know you enjoyed it! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 23 May 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Big O
Just right ending, and then some! I have enjoyed so much everything you guys have written and continue to do so with Smoke On The Water. I'm sure the new one will be great also!
Author's Response:
We're so very thankful you have our stuff a try and we're beyond thrilled that you like it. It's so scary to put your work out there... especially the first story. But we have had so much support and love. We loved these characters and this story. It was harder than we ever expected to mark it complete. We're finding that true with all our stories. So to know people enjoy them, take the time to read them when there are so many other stories out there, makes us happier than words could say. Thank you so much for reading and for all of your wonderful reviews! We've read and loved each one. You've taken us back to when we were posting this story and all the excitement we had. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 23 May 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 26 Amazing Grace
I laughed over Caius and the skanky sex tape, smiled over Aro and Emily and shook my head over Renee. I think Bella has the right attitude about her mom and agree that Esme is her true mother! Emmett becoming a pastor is a bit of a surprise, but with Rose at his side he'll be great. So glad Alice and Jasper finally are doing what's right for them! Had an "awwww" moment when Grace was born, but just generally am happy for them all! Sounds to me as if they have the world by the tail!
Date: 23 May 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 25 Full Circle
What's not to love? You two have done an amazing job of story telling and it's been a delight from the first chapter!
Date: 23 May 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 24 Paradise Delights
FABULOUS, SEXY, ROMANTIC HONEYMOON! I hope Rose and Emmett are having half as good a time! If Alice and Jasper would only work out something to make them happy, all would be well! I think a combining of Bella's new style music and the guys usual stuff would be really great!
Date: 22 May 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 23 Paradise
Truly a wonderful honeymoon! We should all be so lucky!
Author's Response:
I truly enjoyed every single word you left during your journey through this fic. It seems you had not read the OS which makes me happy also. I like when people learn the surprise as they go! These two had a little bit of a bumpy ride with everyone around them, but we'd like to think we kept BxE consistent and together for the most part of the fic. Alice and Jasper's ride was a bit more rocky, but they'll get there ... eventually! I can't express how tru;y grateful we are that you both read and then reviewed every single chapter. As you've already seen what is coming up for each review, it kinda defeats the purpose of a reply to them all now. But just know that we both read and loved EVERY SINGLE comment you left and enjoyed seeing this journey through your eyes. Thank you so much. There;s a couple more left, and we'll get a little Jasper and Alice closure and a peek into the future for them all :)
Fyre
Date: 22 May 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 22 I Do Again
No surprise here when Renee blew the wedding off. She spent most of Bella's life being a horrible mother, why would she change now? Lovrly ceremony and I was glad Bella asked her dad to walk her down the aisle. I'm thrilled he got balls enough to seperate from the awful woman he was married to!
Date: 22 May 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 Hands Off, Skank!
Sorry to be so mean, but I flat laughed my ass off when Bella decked Jessica and Alice beat on Lauren! Just hilarious! Life is going so well for everyone now, professionally as well as privately!
Date: 22 May 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 20 Revelations
I hope Jasper and Alice can work things out between them, it's been sad to see them be a couple of stubborn mules over this! It is so frustrating since it's pretty obvious they have feelings for each other and can't seem to find a compromise!
Date: 22 May 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward
It's great that Emmett and Rose are going to be married, but Alice is just being a stubborn fool! You have to love Edward for the effort he's making with Bella's dad, and hate how awful her mom is!
Date: 22 May 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
Sure didn't take long to have their first disagreement and first makeup sex! As long as they keep talking to each other, they will do just fine!
Date: 22 May 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 Whacking Some Balls
Just as I suspected, there was enough love between family members to save the day!
Date: 22 May 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 16 A Day at the Spa
Looks to me like Esme has given Rose and Alice a lot to consider. All in all, I think this was a good day for all four women, they discussed some real important things!
Date: 22 May 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks
I'm thinking if they have Mama Cullen on their side, that's half the battle, she's going to make the adjustments a bit easier with everyone. I really like Edward's attitude and am glad he's convinced Bella not to be ashamed of what they did and how they did it.
Date: 22 May 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 Big Changes
Great way to meet the parents! Their wedding night will always be memorable, that's for sure! I hope this goes better then I'm afraid it may, because it will cause a split between Edward and his folks if they all say the wrong thing!
Date: 22 May 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
I sure hope this doesn't go wrong, now that they have committed to each other. Maybe when the news breaks, Jasper and Emmett will be inspired to go after their girls, too!
Date: 22 May 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes
What an epiphany for Miss Bella! Best thing in the world, meeting Lily and her parents, now she knows what to do! I really laughed at Alice and Rose's revenge, too!
Date: 21 May 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves
I really don't care for creepy Caius, but Marcus seems to be okay. It seems a shame guys like Caius can dictate how the groups have to live their lives, at least in public! Edward and Bella are going to have to decide what to do about their relationship pretty soon since the tour is coming to a close!
Author's Response:
Caius does seem like a creepy dude or just a money hungry record exec. They definitely decided something on their relationship and I know you've already read past that point. Thank you so much for reading!
Fyre
Date: 21 May 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
I think all he would have to do is ask and she would say yes!
Author's Response:
Hmmm... maybe, I know that's all it would take for me. After that I'd be the one dragging him somewhere as fast as I could. Lol. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 May 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello
Well, now he knows about Bella's delightful mother! I'm fairly certain this is the best New Years Eve Bella has ever had, and maybe Edward also!
Author's Response:
Best Nw Year's ever! And there's no hope for Renee. I so appreciate you taking thetime to review every single chapter!
Fyre
Date: 21 May 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 Skinned Knees and Kisses
I don't blame her for pretending to be asleep. It was scary when Mike forced himself on Bella! Being high on whatever made him a danger to her, so it's a real good thing Edward came to the rescue! Especiall sinc it led to all that kissing!
Author's Response:
LOL she sure did. Mike is a huge prock and dinally got taken care of a little bit. Maybe he'll back off now.
Fyre
Date: 21 May 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 She's a Virgin?
This just makes it tough for Jasper 'cause he likes Alice so much. Makes me wonder if Rose is planning something like that with Emmett. As for Bella and Edward, they are becoming closer and closer.
Author's Response:
Definitely! Alice and Jasper have a tough road ahead of them, Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Fyre
Date: 21 May 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
Someone needs to smack the hell out of Renee, and save a good, hard swat for Charlie as well! How can they be that way to their own child? It's a damn shame that they are so stupid as to not cherish their own flesh and blood! It sure cheered Bella up to tell Edward about them and that has to lighten the burden a bit just sharing some of it.
Author's Response:
So many people wanted to lynch Renee at this point. Lol. She definitely would deserve it. Charlie isn't much better. Poor Bella may have talent, but she wasn't blessed in the parental department. At least she has good friends and now Edward. Thank you so much for reading and please know we are so appreciative that you're giving us some of your time to review. This story was our first baby and we just LOVE knowing it's still being read and what you think of it. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 May 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 5 Edward and the Teeny Weeny
Looks like they both are changing their perceptions of the other, nd starting to really get along, too! Mike and Jessica doing thet in the bus with all and sundry listening in was kind of gross! Glad the guys set them straight. Seems like it's not only the girls who are the skanks!
Author's Response:
I think so, they both relize they might have misjudged the other. Yep, Mike and Jessica are gross, but the boys told them off!
Fyre
Date: 21 May 2015 5:12 AM Title: Bella Meet Edward
I loved Brad Pitt in Meet Joe Black, just to be different. This chapter I think Edward pretty much redeemed himself with Bella and they will get along much better now. They are a lot alike, they just don't know it yet!
Author's Response:
Brad was gorgeous in Meet Joe Black. But then, he's beautiful in pretty much everything. Lol. Edward did come a long way in showing Bella his true colors and the kind of person he is which was much better than he showed originally. They are a lot alike and it's about time they start getting to know each other. :) XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 May 2015 4:51 AM Title: Edward Meet Bella
It's too bad Edward let his prejudices get in the way of his better judgement. DSure didn't impress Bella much and now she thinks he's a major jerk! This will be a bit messy before it straightens up, I'm afraid!
Author's Response:
He definitely wasn't letting his Christian values show through, but he's only human and prone to make mistakes. Hopefully he'll be able to make it up to her. ;) Thanks! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 May 2015 12:59 AM Title: Bella
I see where this might get the two groups off to a rocky start, each thinking they know who the others are, and both groups being off by quite a bit! Maybe on this tour, they will get to know the truth behind the hype!
Author's Response:
There's definitely some misconceptions going on which might lead to a few fireworks. ;) Thanks! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 21 May 2015 12:42 AM Title: Edward
You ever notice hardly anyone has good things to say about managers in the music industry? Aro sounds like a prime example of that! It should be an pretty interesting tour for the guys, paired with a sexy singer like Issa!
Author's Response:
Aro definitely seems slimy. Lol. It's certainly going to be an interesting tour. ;) Thank you for reading! XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2015 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Big O
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much! We so appreciate the support you've shown us. We have something new and different we will be bringing you soon. Hopefully you'll give it a try and enjoy it. ;) Thanks for EVERYTHING!!! XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 26 Amazing Grace
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much dearest Deb. XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 25 Full Circle
:):)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the support you give :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 Paradise Delights
:):)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 23 Paradise
:):)
Author's Response:
You are always so sweet!!! Thank you so much! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 11 Jan 2015 11:02 PM Title: Edward
I am so hooked on this story!
Author's Response:
Yayyy, I hope so. I would have suggested you not read the OS first, but since you did now you know what you're working toward. ;) I hope you enjoy the journey and we so look forward to hearing from you as you catch up to us. Thanks so much for leaving us your thoughts!
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 I Do Again
:):)
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you!!! :) XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hands Off, Skank!
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! I think you already have the teaser so I will jut express my huge thanks here!!!
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 20 Revelations
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward
I hope Charlie does try. Merry Christmas
Author's Response:
I think he will ;) Thank you so much again!!!
Fyre
Date: 26 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward
I hope Bella and Charlie make up, I always hate when a story writes them like this. I don't know why it don't bother me about her and Renee not being that close. As for Rose and Emmett I'm not surprise, Alice thou does suprise me. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Well Edward had to things to say and maybe Charlie took it to heart. Maybe because renee wasn't a large part of the Twilight books? So you expected Rose and Em? Thought we were being sneaky LOL. Alice is just in a rough patch right now and maybe she will get a clearer perspective soon ;) Thanks so much for leaving your thoughts, Merry Christmas! Here's your teaser for 20...
Fyre
My mother scoffs. "Mr. Cullen, I'm sure she has you thinking she's amazing right now, and if what I hear about you is true then I'm sure it was easy to be lured in when you are as innocent as you are. But we know our daughter well."
Edward crosses his arms over his chest, and I can tell he's getting angry. "I'm not sure you do, Mrs. Swan. I don't think ya know her at all. I don't think you can see past your own bitterness at whatever has you hatin' life so much to see anythin'. For sure not your beautiful daughter."
My mother laughs. "That's very sweet. It's cute you're so protective. I can tell you really love her. That actually makes me feel bad for you since I know she's just going to screw you over."
Edward opens his mouth to say something when suddenly my father's hand slams down on the table, rattling all the glasses and silverware.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward
Well if anyone is going to get to Charlie it is Edward, and what is up with Alice she rather lose Jasper because he won't sleep with her if they ain't married, Rose seems to have turned around and Emmett still wants to be with her knowing that she has slept with other men.
Author's Response:
Yep, that's a fact. Edward had some things to say and hopefully Charlie will listen. Alice has issues with the no sex tilmarriage and Jasper will not budge on his vow, so until they can agree it just won't work. Maybe something will make her see the light soon ;) Emmett finally manned up and claimed his gorl and no, he does not care one bit that she isn't a virgin. Thanks so much for leaving your thoughts, Merry Christmas! Here's your teaser for 20...
Fyre
My mother scoffs. "Mr. Cullen, I'm sure she has you thinking she's amazing right now, and if what I hear about you is true then I'm sure it was easy to be lured in when you are as innocent as you are. But we know our daughter well."
Edward crosses his arms over his chest, and I can tell he's getting angry. "I'm not sure you do, Mrs. Swan. I don't think ya know her at all. I don't think you can see past your own bitterness at whatever has you hatin' life so much to see anythin'. For sure not your beautiful daughter."
My mother laughs. "That's very sweet. It's cute you're so protective. I can tell you really love her. That actually makes me feel bad for you since I know she's just going to screw you over."
Edward opens his mouth to say something when suddenly my father's hand slams down on the table, rattling all the glasses and silverware.
Date: 23 Dec 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story! Anytime you post is fine with me. It's always a treat when I see an update so thank you and happy holidays!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much. You have no idea how happy it makes us to know people are enjoying our story. It looks like we will probably be posting Christmas in the evening most likely. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 20 Dec 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
It is totally up to you when you post it, the sooner the better thou. I won't be able to read it until late afternoon but that ok because by then I'll be ready to settle down for some quite time reading. Great chapter by the way.
Author's Response:
Thanks. We're glad you enjoyed it. We will hopefully get it out to you in time to enjoy after the hustle and bustle of Christmas, Christmas Day. XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
:) whenever you are able to update will be fine. Merry Christmas
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas to you and your family. We have a special Christmas surprise we're hoping to start posting today so keep an eye out. ;) Thanks so much!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 20 Dec 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?
Christmas Day or Night would be a lovely treat...
Author's Response:
Okay. Thank you so much for letting us know your thoughts. Also thank you for reading. I hope you have a great holiday. XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 17 Whacking Some Balls
Loving this story
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hopefully you waited to read the o/s until after chapter 14 since it has quite the spoiler. ;) Lol. You are amazing and we are so beyond grateful that you are giving us some of your time to read our work and leave us all of these lovely reviews. Thank you so much! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Day at the Spa
Excellent Chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. We appreciate your review and that you are enjoying the story enough to continue reading. :) XOXO
Lissa
Here is a teaser for the next chapter...
Ten minutes into the ride and no one has uttered a word. The silence is almost worse than the tongue lashing I'm sure Emmett is dying to let loose of.
Finally, Jasper breaks the silence. He holds his hand out to me for a shake and says, "Congratulations, Edward. I'm happy for you and Bella."
"Congratulations? Congratulations!" Emmett yells out, turning to look at us like we're crazy. "How can you congratulate him on sneakin' off into the night and gettin' married?" He looks to Jasper.
"It wasn't sneakin' off into the night. It was durin' the day. Quit bein' such a drama queen," I bite out.
"Now hold up"—Jasper holds his hands up—"Bella's already like family to me. They didn't do anythin' to me by gettin' married. Yeah, I'm a little hurt not to be invited, but I trust Edward to know what he's doin'."
Date: 05 Dec 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks
So sweet
Author's Response:
Yayyy so glad you liked it :)The reviews for chapter 14 were so unexpected and such a pleasant surprise. We will be sticking firm for next Wed though ;) Here's a small teaser to keep you til then though...
Fyre
Finally, Mrs. Cullen puts her menu away and turns to Edward and me. "Son, will you please fill us in on what happened? How the two of you came to be married?"
Edward looks at me and smiles, and then he turns to his mama. "Sure …"
Mr. Cullen interrupts, "Yes, Edward. Please tell us how you came to marry Miss Issa here when we weren't even made aware that you two were datin'. It seems we have a lot of catchin' up to do."
Edward frowns at his dad. "Well, I was tryin' to tell ya how I came to marry Bella,"—he makes sure to stress my real name—"before ya interrupted."
"By all means, please continue then," Mr. Cullen says as he makes a go ahead motion with his hand.
Date: 03 Dec 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks
Well that went better then I expected, lets hope Rose and Alice can get with the program and forgive Bella
Author's Response:
Yep, Esme surprised us! All girls chapter coming up, the boys will follow. Let's hope the girls don't go too rough on her. Thanks sooooo much for your words. The reviews for chapter 14 were so unexpected and such a pleasant surprise. We will be sticking firm for next Wed though ;) Here's a small teaser to keep you til then though...
Fyre
Finally, Mrs. Cullen puts her menu away and turns to Edward and me. "Son, will you please fill us in on what happened? How the two of you came to be married?"
Edward looks at me and smiles, and then he turns to his mama. "Sure ..."
Mr. Cullen interrupts, "Yes, Edward. Please tell us how you came to marry Miss Issa here when we weren't even made aware that you two were datin'. It seems we have a lot of catchin' up to do."
Edward frowns at his dad. "Well, I was tryin' to tell ya how I came to marry Bella,"-he makes sure to stress my real name-"before ya interrupted."
"By all means, please continue then," Mr. Cullen says as he makes a go ahead motion with his hand.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 Big Changes
please post the next chapter soon. I read this the other night, and can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. We won't make y'all wait long. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for your review. Here is a little teaser for the next chapter. ;) XOXO
Lissa
"Do we needa call a doctor?" I ask him.
"Nah, she just fainted." He turns to look at me. "What were you thinkin'?"
"What do you mean what was I thinkin'?" I ask, because seriously, they're the ones showing up at my hotel room in the middle of the night.
He stands up and to his full height. "I mean, what were you thinkin' announcin' somethin' like that without no warnin'? I'm disappointed in you, son."
Before I can respond there's another knock at the door. I glance over to Bella and she motions that she's got it.
I look back to my dad. "What do ya mean, warnin'? You're the one showin' up at my hotel door, on my wedding night no less, without any warnin'!" I done raised my voice a little toward the end there. But this is crap. He's lucky I answered at all.
"Your wedding night?" Emmett asks. I glance over and the whole crew's standing there looking a little dumbfounded.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 Big Changes
YESSSSSSSSS
Author's Response:
I know! *Squee* This is the chapter that started it all so we have been so excited to post it. Now we get to see how everyone handles it. Thanks so much for reading and for your review. Here's a little teaser for chapter 15. ;) XOXO
Lissa
“Do we needa call a doctor?” I ask him.
“Nah, she just fainted.” He turns to look at me. “What were you thinkin’?”
“What do you mean what was I thinkin’?” I ask, because seriously, they’re the ones showing up at my hotel room in the middle of the night.
He stands up and to his full height. “I mean, what were you thinkin’ announcin’ somethin’ like that without no warnin’? I’m disappointed in you, son.”
Before I can respond there’s another knock at the door. I glance over to Bella and she motions that she’s got it.
I look back to my dad. “What do ya mean, warnin’? You’re the one showin’ up at my hotel door, on my wedding night no less, without any warnin’!” I done raised my voice a little toward the end there. But this is crap. He’s lucky I answered at all.
“Your wedding night?” Emmett asks. I glance over and the whole crew’s standing there looking a little dumbfounded.
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
Love love love this story!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yayyy so glad you liked their little sneaky marriage. next chapter coming soon, keep your eyes on the look-out. Thanks so much for sharing your thughts with us, we love knowing people are reading and enjoying what we wrote. It means the world to us :)
Fyre
Date: 30 Nov 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
Even better than a public proposal
Author's Response:
Yayyyy!! I am so glad to hear you liked it, although a public proposal would have been great too. No they have to get through tonight and then face the friends and family they left out. Stay tuned to see how that turns out :) Thanks so much for leaving us your thoughts, e love reading every single one.
Fyre
Date: 30 Nov 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
LOVE it love it post soon
Author's Response:
I promise we will bring you the next 2 in the same time as it usually takes for 1. So glad to hear you are loving it :) Thanks so much for revieing, we love reading them so much!!
Fyre
Date: 30 Nov 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved
Yes they are MARRIED!
Author's Response:
They are!!! Time to face everybody else soon ;) Next two chapters will be coming soon!! Thanks so much for leaving us a review, we love reading every single one!
Fyre
Date: 27 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 She's a Virgin?
Poor Jasper , Alice is going to be pissed at this.
Author's Response:
Alice still has a long road ahead of her. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and for the review! If you celebrate, I hope you're having a wonderful Thanksgiving. <3 XOXO
Lissa
Date: 25 Nov 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes
Little bit of a tear jerker
Author's Response:
We were just told we should have issued a tissue warning. Sorry. :( We tried to balance it with some humor which I hope made things a little better. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. If you celebrate it, I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Here is a small teaser for the next chapter. XOXO, Lissa
After a long, slow kiss, I drag her over to my bed and push her down to take a seat.
“So …” I start. “I was, uh, thinkin’ …” I’m a bumbling mess. Scared to just go on and spit out what I wanna say. “I was thinkin’.”
“Yeah? About what?” she asks.
“Well I was thinking weshouldgetmarriedinAtlanta,” I say, too fast for her to possibly understand me. But I got it out once, maybe the second time I can actually say it so she can hear me.
“Huh?”
I force myself to slow it down and say sincerely, “Bella, I want us to get married in Atlanta … next week.”
Date: 25 Nov 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes
I think Edward should propose on stage at the end of the last performance
Author's Response:
Hmmm... that would have been super sweet. Hopefully you will enjoy the way things go. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. If you celebrate it, I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Here is a small teaser for the next chapter. XOXO, Lissa
After a long, slow kiss, I drag her over to my bed and push her down to take a seat.
“So …” I start. “I was, uh, thinkin’ …” I’m a bumbling mess. Scared to just go on and spit out what I wanna say. “I was thinkin’.”
“Yeah? About what?” she asks.
“Well I was thinking weshouldgetmarriedinAtlanta,” I say, too fast for her to possibly understand me. But I got it out once, maybe the second time I can actually say it so she can hear me.
“Huh?”
I force myself to slow it down and say sincerely, “Bella, I want us to get married in Atlanta … next week.”
Date: 20 Nov 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves
excellent chapter can't wait to read more about this too and the rest
Author's Response:
Thanks! Time to pick up the pace and get to what you're waiting for, it's coming soon :)Thanks so much for reviewing, we cherish every single one :)
Fyre
This has Alice and Rose written all over it.
I get up and head down the hall yelling at them both to get their a*** up. Of course Jasper and Edward get up with the noise, too.
"What have you done?" I say through gritted teeth, looking at Alice.
"What?" she asks, trying to look innocent.
"It seems one of the girls ..."
"Jessica," Jake supplies.
"Jessica ... has received a card directing her to the nearest clinic to get tested for an STD," I say, giving her a raised brow.
She just smirks.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves
LOVE It
Author's Response:
Yayyyy, so glad to hear that. Thaks so much!!! Thanks so much for reviewing, we cherish every single one :)
Fyre
This has Alice and Rose written all over it.
I get up and head down the hall yelling at them both to get their a*** up. Of course Jasper and Edward get up with the noise, too.
"What have you done?" I say through gritted teeth, looking at Alice.
"What?" she asks, trying to look innocent.
"It seems one of the girls ..."
"Jessica," Jake supplies.
"Jessica ... has received a card directing her to the nearest clinic to get tested for an STD," I say, giving her a raised brow.
She just smirks.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves
Can't wait to reach the point in time of the O/S.
"But I made a promise and she'll thank me for it when we're finally able to take that step." The type of boy/man who can keep that sort of promise when they don't really know what they're promising not to do is the type of man who will keep his marriage vows. It shows character. And Edward's right...they'll both value it in the future.
Good chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response:
It;s coming ... Soon!!! They will value it. I'm so glad to hear theses characters are stepping up and fulflling expectations. Thanks so much for reviewing, we cherish every single one :)
Fyre
This has Alice and Rose written all over it.
I get up and head down the hall yelling at them both to get their a*** up. Of course Jasper and Edward get up with the noise, too.
"What have you done?" I say through gritted teeth, looking at Alice.
"What?" she asks, trying to look innocent.
"It seems one of the girls ..."
"Jessica," Jake supplies.
"Jessica ... has received a card directing her to the nearest clinic to get tested for an STD," I say, giving her a raised brow.
She just smirks.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
OMG! I Love your story can not wait for Jess throw down (LOL) .
Author's Response:
Awww thanks! We're so glad you're enjoying it. Payback for Jessica is coming... though I'm not sure she will ever learn. Lol. Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa
I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.
"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.
"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.
"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"
I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
Please post the next chapter soon
Author's Response:
It definitely helps that we are impatient. Lol. Plus you guys are awesome so you may see another chapter sooner rather than later. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa
I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.
"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.
"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.
"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"
I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
Jessica called Edward Bella's boyfriend..So there going to elope and not have sex or tell anyone till the tour is over.
Author's Response:
Edward definitely plans to stick to his vow... but just how long can he keep it and Bella honor it without something happening. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa
I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.
"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.
"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.
"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"
I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Beginning
What a surprise. Thanks for the early update. Great chapter, I'm addicted to these characters.
Author's Response:
I'm so thrilled you like the story. I love these characters, but I know I'm biased. Lol. Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa
I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.
"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.
"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.
"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"
I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello
Such a great chapter. I can't wait for karma to catch up with Mike and Lauren/ Jessica.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Karma might get a helping hand at some point. ;) Thanks so much for continuing this journey with us and Edward and Bella. And thank you for reviewing! The support means the world. Here is a teaser for next week's chapter. XOXO
Lissa
"Edward, what did your parents say? I mean, you had to tell them, right?"
He rubs the back of his neck and looks down. I know then I'm not going to like what he's going to tell me.
"I, uh, I didn't tell 'em what I was doin'," he says quietly, but I definitely hear him.
"Where do they think you are? Surely they asked where you were going."
He's still looking down. Apparently he finds my table very interesting. "Uh, I may have told 'em I had some stuff to do in Atlanta."
I get up and grab the plates. "Are you, um, are you embarrassed to tell them about me?"
Date: 13 Nov 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello
I love them, Carlisle is judgmental and he doesn't even know Bella
Author's Response:
Carlisle definitely doesn't seem to be practicing what he preaches, but hopefully he will come around. Thanks so much for continuing this journey with us and Edward and Bella. And thank you for reviewing! Here is a teaser for next week's chapter. XOXO
Lissa
"Edward, what did your parents say? I mean, you had to tell them, right?"
He rubs the back of his neck and looks down. I know then I'm not going to like what he's going to tell me.
"I, uh, I didn't tell 'em what I was doin'," he says quietly, but I definitely hear him.
"Where do they think you are? Surely they asked where you were going."
He's still looking down. Apparently he finds my table very interesting. "Uh, I may have told 'em I had some stuff to do in Atlanta."
I get up and grab the plates. "Are you, um, are you embarrassed to tell them about me?"
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 Skinned Knees and Kisses
I so love your story and it the best I read ibwhile. It really draws u in and keeps you wanting more. Wonderf jobs and will be adding you girls to my favorite authors!
Author's Response:
Awww thanks so much! You no idea how much we appreciate that. All the support we are getting for our first story has been amazing. We are beyond grateful. XOXO
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8 Skinned Knees and Kisses
Another great chapter. Bella's label suck, I hope karma shows up somewhere.
Author's Response:
They really do. We may have plans for some of the people who haven't treated Bella that well. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 She's a Virgin?
:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! :D
XOXO, Lissa
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
Bella needs to leave her parents house and never go back. It just makes her more depressed about her life. It would be better to spend time alone in a hotel for a couple of days. Hopefully next break she can go home with the Cullens. She needs to see what real family love it about.
Author's Response:
It is pretty sad that going home to her parent's isn't good for her. Visiting your childhood home should be somewhere you always feel loved and safe. I'm sure having Edward in her life is going to bring lots of positive things. ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
:-)
Author's Response:
Hopefully you love both Edward and Bella now and found that they have redeemed themselves... especially Bella. We value every review and appreciate that you are continuing to read. XOXO
Lissa
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 Edward and the Teeny Weeny
:-)
Author's Response:
We appreciate your support. Thanks so much for continuing to read and review.
Lissa
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:46 AM Title: Bella Meet Edward
Aren't they all the BEST Brad Pitt?
Author's Response:
Good point. Lol. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:03 AM Title: Edward Meet Bella
Although Edward was a judgemental jerk it seemed to me that Bella was more of one.
I found this story when I was checking out the most recent updates on this site.
Author's Response:
That's definitely a different perspective LOL. There were people still as of chapter 6 mad at him and he has been nothing but nice since. I'm so glad you found it and hope to hear your comments all the way through. Looks like 27 chapters total including epis. Thanks again for giving us a chance.
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:25 AM Title: Bella
Now that I've read both POV's I can say you both seem like great writers and the story is gonna be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your kind words. I hope we continue to keep you entertained as the fic continues. We love hearing your thoughts and predictions along the way. Business picks up in chapter 3 ;)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:52 AM Title: Edward
I think the bands will be a good mix. Just like you guys writing together. Best of both worlds.
Author's Response:
I think so too ;) Maybe a little speed bump on the way but sometimes things come in unexpected packages. Thank you so much for giving our fic a try and even more for leaving your thoughts. It means everything to hhear people comment along the way :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
This story is really good. I wish Edward would have invited her home for thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
I know. It was tough not to have him do that, but they aren't quite there yet. At least they stayed in contact. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful
Wow her parents are out there, they should always support their daughter...Atleast she is out there making a living and not being a bum.
Author's Response:
Her paresnts are terrible. I can't imagine as a parent myself ever acting like that. Sadly it isn't as rare as one would think. Some people should never have had children. Thankfully Bella has great friends and now a sweet country boy in her corner. Thank you so much for staying with us and for reviewing. We appreciate it so much! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 20 Oct 2014 12:16 AM Title: Edward
Great start enjoying it a lot this is story that I have not seen written in this way
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! We are so glad you found our story and decided to read it, Reviewing makes our day every time we recieve one :) I hope it lives up to your expectations. We'll be [posting ecery Friday, look forward to hearing from you!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 Edward and the Teeny Weeny
Just read the whole story so far and I have to say that I absolutely love it. I can't wait for more of it.
Author's Response:
Yay! We love to hear that. Thank you so much!!! XOXO
Lissa
Date: 17 Oct 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 Edward and the Teeny Weeny
Jessica and Lauren will never learn....can not wait to see what happens when they go home for Thanksgiving
Author's Response:
They really won't. Lol. I'm so thrilled that you're excited. Hopefully you'll be pleased. *mwah*
Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:32 AM Title: Bella Meet Edward
Yes, and she is pure of heart....why is she putting herself down, she is doing something that she loves and why can't she be with Edward she is still a virgin....I don't know about Alice and Rose since they are not virgins....It would go against the vow Jasper and Emmett made so I can not wait to see where you take them for those couples to get together.
Author's Response:
She is pure of heart and Edward sees that. Thank you so much for reviewing all the chapters. We hope you continue to enjoy the story and where we take these characters. Hopefully we will see you Saturday. :)
Lissa