Date: 19 Oct 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yay, they are having a little one.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
So glad they worked things out
Date: 19 Oct 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
It was brief, but cute!. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 19 Oct 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great first one short sweet and to the point . I cant wait for your next one to see what you have learned along the way.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Alice is a good friend
Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
So will Edward tell Bella of this conversation? ?
Author's Response:
Hi,
I've been terribly tardy but hope to make up for it as I'm posting the final two chapters tonight. I hope they will answer most of your questions.
warm regards
ld
Date: 16 Oct 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait to see what Edward tells her his feelings.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait to see what Edward tells her. How he explains Tanya.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella. Can't wait to see what you meant by Jacob and Tanya being in a lot of trouble.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Light bulb finally went off!!!!!!!!! Duh Edward.
Date: 10 Oct 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nice! You moved the story forward well and also managed to make Isabella's father seem less " a villain". He is not p,saying with his daughter's life for the money, he truly wants her safe and loved foremost. Nicely done!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
I fail to see the benefit of telling this story out of order like this. Makes each chapter seem very disjointed and awkward.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
He had good intentions so did Charlie they both love her.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
She wants to believe him smart girl
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jacob is running with his tail between his legs. Bella is happy to see Edward came after her
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is going to fixs things I'm so happy
Date: 29 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ah, Edward. Maybe you should have announced your engagement and attended the gala with your new fiance. Ya think?
Author's Response:
Undoubtably, but more of this is explained in Ch14 which has just been put up, thankfully. Edward and Bella have a long way to go to become the couple we expect them to be.
Thanks for your review
LD
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
He better fix this mess good thing Jasper clued him in
Author's Response:
He must be up for a payrise or bonus come Christmas time, lol.
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor edw. He does not know what he is going to walk into. Lol
Author's Response:
No, the poor thing. Can't you just see it. Maybe he'll head over to my place and I could consol him, while wiping snotty noses and teaching my 2yr old to toilet train.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, Edward, ignorance is bliss...for a while.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
And I had not even read this chapter somehow when I wrote the last review. I imagine tis was a misunderstanding but still they are extremely dysfunctional.
Author's Response:
I think you've hit the nail on the head with your insight. Thank you for bringing your thoughts to my attention. So much is gained through constructive reviews and I thank you for yours.
Edward is continuing with his pov in the next chapter so let's see if he can simplify this complicated situation.
LD
Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
I feel like we aren't being given the whole story. They are antagonistic toward each other, but inwardly Edward adores her and she is in lust with him. Have they ever sat down and talked to each other? And why would Edward go to a gala alone is they are engaged?
Author's Response:
Hi Rachael,
I hope the last few chapters have answered some of your questions. To say they are having the communication issues is an understatment.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
LD
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Isn't it. I admit it was a surprising turn of events, me included. But more information follows that will help sort everything out. Hope you will stick with it.
LD
Author's Response:
Huh, I've written myself a review? I think that must have been a reply for someone else. If you're missing a response, the above might fit.
I am obviously a bit of a technophobe.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
He only wishes she is thinking he just used her he will have to convincer of his feelings.
Author's Response:
Yes it's a bit tricky isn't it. Here's to hoping I can get him out of it!
LD
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH SHIT this will not be good Bella is going to freak out. What was he thinking taking Tanya and not Bella to this. He better hold on to his balls because he is about to have them ripped off.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
She will not be happy waking up alone after giving him her inocence .
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
He knows how to push her buttons ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
What the hell??????? Did Edward really go to get with Tanya or did she just sink her claws into him once she got there.
Author's Response:
All is ok. Promise.
thanks for the excellent reviews and for following despite edward being difficult.
LD
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
So Edward is not as hard of a man as he wants Bella to believe he is.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well Edward gets right down to business. Lol
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
That's not good, not good at all.
althought there has to be an explanation, I hope Edward gets his behind kicked. ;)
Author's Response:
IF you've got to ch 10 you will have read the explanation. I hope everyone hasn't left me in droves!
Thanks for the review
Ld
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, my. Edward is such hot, hot water.
Author's Response:
Isn't he. Well I will be touching on that in the next few chapters as I try to weasel him out of the very big hole he's in. Should be a big job.
LD
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bad move, Edward. You can't sneak out, not matter how good it was!
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
That's a good start for a marriage!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter
Author's Response:
I feel really guilty now that I've been tardy with the updates here. The reviews on twcs are much more mature than some of the guest reviews I've been unlucky enough to receive elsewhere. Thank you for that.
LD
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks Kathmart for your reviews.
More is coming very soon.
LD
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love how you portray the characters
Author's Response:
That is a truly lovely thing to say. I admire one of my favourite ff authors for the same thing.
I don't like bullying in any form and I try to apply that to characters aswell. Nastiness just isn't necessary.
i hope you continue to enjoy what I conjour up.
LD
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait
Author's Response:
I am going to be a busy girl tomorrow trying to get a bit of a back up going. But I am intending for edward to continue his story. Let's see if it works out that way.
thanks for following and reviewing, it really does mean a lot to me that people bother to post.
LD
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow!!!!!! Can't wait for you to update again. I am glad that I found this story.
Author's Response:
What a wonderful thing to say, thank you!
i hope you still feel that way now the next few chapters are up. Edward has upset quite a few :(
LD
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well well well. Did Bella over hear that conversation? ????? If so I can see why she would be a little upset.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
What did Bella over hear when Edward and her father was talking? What is in the letter and how does Edward know what is in there?
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok for some reason I do not trust William Black. I am thinking he wants Jacob to weasel he way into Bella's life so he can get her estate.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
The the 1st chapter it sounded like Bella did not care much for Edward. Can't wait to find out more about that.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
That last statement makes you want to Smack him an like him all at the same time
Author's Response:
He is not an easy man is he, lol. I loved your statement. Thanks for letting me know what you thought and please continue to do so.
LD
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love a good period romance. Hope to see an update soon.
Author's Response:
Finally I am home and updates I hope have appeased you all, even if I am getting to the reviews a bit late.
Glad you are enjoying it. Edward has been a bit misunderstood by all, but that is men for you.
LD
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Hi KBB,
I hope you enjoyed the updates I have finally managed to post. Now onto reviews! It may take some time as I am really behind but am making the effort to get to everyone.
kind regards
LD
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
She is so hot for him why is he an ass to her or is she just taking his flurting the wrong way.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the tardiness in reviews. I have been away this week and I don't get email updates from twcs.
Yes they have a real communication problem don't they. But atleast for us things will soon become clearer.
thanks for following the story and I love reviews
LD
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie was straight and to the point lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciate readers taking the time to give me some feedback.
i can totally see Charlie deciding just to go for it, if you've got to say it then I think he'd jump right in. He is a character I really like and I didn't want to portray him unsympathetically.
This week sees the beginning of the citrus. Yay! Let's hope I get it right.
many thanks,
LD
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
He already worked this out with her dad wtf
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is making his claim?
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Alice is so good to her and takes care of her but can she help her with Edward
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like this so far. Interested to see where you go with it. Looking forward to lemonade!
Author's Response:
Hi LesieE,
Lemonade in abundance soon.
Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review.
LD
Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to see what Bella thinks of this idea her dad had
Author's Response:
It'll be interesting wont it. I guess I will find out with the rest of you as atm it's pretty much writing itself.
Thankfully I have a plan, now I just need the characters to play nice and follow it,lol.
LD
Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love it so far.. I love edward as a Mr.Darcy character. Cannot wait to see how it proceeds. I'm imagining Jacob and edward duelling at 20 paces. Great job so far.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Hi Jukie,
Thanks for the review.
I am so excited to post this coming weeks chapters as Edward starts to become much more prominant in the story line. Whether Jacob will play a small or larger role I am unsure of as I really am writing off the cuff with only a vague sketch to follow. It will all come out though as it's meant to, rather like the surprising and unplanned detour the character take in ch 7. They were a little impatient to get there!
LD
Date: 19 Sep 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hope to see more of this story soon. :)
Author's Response:
Hi Bootsnall,
Thank you for the lovely review. I had posted the first chapter last night but hadn't realise it had been approved and posted.
I will be posting up to chapter 5 tonight to catch twcs up to fanfiction, then I will be breaking over the weekend.
I'd love to know what you think of my Bella as we learn more about her going forward. Edward is hard not to love in any form I find, lol, but Bella's are a bit trickier. Probably as we tend to see her as us.
Hope you enjoy the follwing chapters,
LD
Date: 18 Sep 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh oh can't wait to see why our dear Edward bothers her so
Author's Response:
Hi PetralouiseSahriSahri,
I love a cliffy, don't you. All will be revealed and sparks will (fingers crossed) fly.
I will be posting up to ch5 tonight before breaking over the weekend.
Thanks for the review.
LD
Date: 18 Sep 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks Fonzie,
More posts are coming don't worry. I am having way too much fun to stop now.
Feel free to let me know what you think of the charcters and why. Everyone sees a story from a different view point and that can be really interesting.
Hope you enjoy where I take them next,
LD