[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
The fighting is getting old, can they stop alteady
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2019 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel that there is a previous story, in this storyline. If so can you let me know the name of that story? Thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2019 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel that there is a previous story, in this storyline. If so can you let me know the name of that story? Thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2019 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel that there is a previous story, in this storyline. If so can you let me know the name of that story? Thanks
Date: 19 Nov 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
Amei mui!!parabens!💕
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
it was wonderful
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
spur of the moment type of gal
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
never stop loving her
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
cannot wait to hit next but this deserves more reviews
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
over react much
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Esme the perfect mom
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
they both have to bend a little
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
is there a signifigance in Oxford I may have forgot
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
she needs to learn bravery
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow starting to ger into it
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG!!! WOW!!! thanks so much for completing this sequel ;) i wish they had bio kids aswell though ;D
Date: 18 Sep 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yea..found the sequel
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
Very beautiful. I loved it
Date: 08 Jul 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks loved it and I'm waiting for loathing you to update with baited breath
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
:) loved this story
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yes please go back to loathing you I'm really missing that story the GOT chapter was awesome
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Amazing story! I love how crazy and neurotic the characters are.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
NOOOOO! I hope the Epi is HEA for these two together, Please!!!!!!!! Great chapter tho.
Date: 02 Jun 2015 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh ok, this is going to be an interesting conversation I think :-D Is he there to find her or did the just stumble across each other? In case of the first, what is he going to tell her?
Please post the next chapter soon ;-)
Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
omg I am crying
she is so sad
I completely get her reasoning for moving to Italy
She is slightly neurotic and impulsive but my god
you made me cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, I can't wait for more. Edward is here. "squeal"
Date: 07 May 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
With Bella it is either all or nothing.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope she doesn't regret this
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is a real dirt ball...he knew that bella was going to be there and then brings another girl with him. I think he is an ass and is destorying whatever selfworth if any she has left. if he really ever loved her he would leave her alone so that she can heal and make herself better. Not rub in her face that he brought a new "friend" back with him. And Angela may have put most of the planning in for the event but it was on Bella's behalf and he knew he shouldn't have been there. I think edward needs a pitchfork in his ass...shit or get off the pot, edward. (rant over) Thank you for the chapter can't wait for the next one..
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for Bella & Edward to get back together.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
That's horrible that Edward wasn't alone, but I guess Bella needs a wake up call.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
when are we going to hear from edwards point of view
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope he wouldn't be so cruel
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh!!!! Cliffhanger!!! Please update soon, the suspense is quite painful. I so want it to work between them!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ok so let's see who Edward has brought to the event! But I can imagine that Bella, once again, see's the situation not as what it exactly is... I think she still needs a lot of time to sort everything through and I really hope that she will be surprised about the effect of a therapist once she has been there...
See you soon!
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Really? Edward comes at the end ugh I'm starting to not like this story
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really hoping that whoever is with Edward isn't a girl. Like I am praying that he is not with a girl!!!!! But Bella definitely needs to get her shit together and work towards getting back together with Edward!!!! Happily ever after please!!!!! By the way I love The Governness!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to run to the therapist asap. She is clueless. I am actually glad that Edward left. She never appreciated him. She is selfish. She had one accomplishment and she ruined it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Maybe Bella will Redeem herself yet.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
I so love Angelia. She is so kind and thoughtful.
Yes, Micheal definitelay has a devious mind.
I'm so glad he's using it get Bella to see she really cares about and wants the best for those who have little to nothing.
I'm glad Bella is beginning to see she is a good person.
Is Edward out of the picture for good? I really want him to comeback to her soon.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Mike is an awesome and very sneaky brother!
For some reason, I really loved this chapter! I'm so sad about what Edward did to her and I'm still not quite
understanding what's going on right now. I pray she fixes the charity funding issue, gives Angela her position back and uses her money and to help others. I
really hope she finds her way, doesn't defile all the work she's done to become the woan she is today and she goes back to college to finish her degree.
Okay, I'm off my soap box. Looking
forward to the next installment.
Thanks.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
suddenly she has a wake up call. to bad she is so slow. i wonder what are edwards thoghts on all the things that happened we havened read something from him the last chapters
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Let's hope this knocks some sense into her
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Are they going to have a HEA. I know she needs to grow up.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well, Bella only has her self to blame. She needs to pick herself up & stop being pathetic.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
So that sucked...
Date: 02 Mar 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Bella enjoys a lonely unfulfilled life. She can't do anything on her own. Her parents psychologically crippled Bella and she chooses to stay that way. Edward is way to good for her unfortunately he loves her.
Date: 27 Feb 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sometimes you have to be very careful what you wish for as you just might get it.
Date: 26 Feb 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad we got to hear from Cherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully absence will make the heart grow fonder
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, that was what Bella wanted after all, it serves her right.
Date: 26 Feb 2015 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Don't know what you've got, til it's gone...
Date: 26 Feb 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
My favorite chapter so far! Maybe Cherry can talk some sense into her!
Date: 26 Feb 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella really seems to be a spoiled brat. She thinks she is the only person to ever lose someone or have problems. She really needs to see a therapist and get over herself. She really should be trying to get Edward back.
Date: 23 Feb 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is a dumb ass. She needs to have a 72 hour hold to help her realize how stupid she is acting.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
This chapter was a trip and a rollercoaster ride. I hope she finds her brains, common sense and heart soon.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
It is a well written Chapter. You pictured and explained Bella's hurt anger and frustration beautifully. It was also very, very sad for Edward and Bella. His controlling nature and inflexibility have driven her away and her lack of self esteem has made her believe she's not good enough for him and must let him go to find someone worthy of him. It's all very convoluted and sad!
Date: 22 Feb 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope you let us hear Cherry's reaction to her story
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is a psycho dumb @ss, I regally don't like her but at least she's not a weak Bella in this story.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella needs to be committed. She has lost it. I feel so bad for Edward.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is acting so stupid. Who cares who her biological father was. She is the same person as before. She is choosing to be miserable.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ugh i just want to shake bella until she sees the light. Great writing as always
Date: 05 Jan 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is so stupid.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Go Edward. Bella is such a b*tch & I can't stand her & her whiny @ss bratty attitude. & her Bio father's list is kind of Lame. Anyway, I really hope this story is HEA for Bella & Edward together. But maybe he should give that b*tch time. Ugh! She grades on my nerve.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is a spoiled brat & I don't like her. She needs to get her act together & a swift kick in the butt.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope Edward leaves her! Planning a NYE date with this Colin guy. She's a huge bi#%£ and doesn't deserve Edward. Rude. Selfish. Childish. She's right. She's sooooo wrong for him. He deserves to be happy with someone who REALLY loves him. Not her BS!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
You can't end the chapter there!!! Ugh I just may die! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, I hope they get back together soon & that Edward fights for her.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Bella really stands up for herself and does the thing that I deem necessary in this very moment. She is right about Edward - he gets sensitive about almost everything and this makes it very hard. She does not say that she does not want to work for this relationship, but Edward doesn't make it a lot easier for her. It is understandable that she feel inferior to him and so I'm curious to see if she really travels to Scotland on her own and when the two will see each other again.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella needs to grow up
Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella can be so clueless. She doesn't realize how much she hurts Edward with her weirdness. He loves her with all her faults, but she doesn't seem to love herself or him that way.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
It's so sad that Bella's is struggling but it's totaly justifiable I wish she could set edward in his place even more ! Anyway I love sit as usually and forever waiting for the next update :)
Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
This Bella cracks me up with the way her mind works and her verbal banter.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella needs to realize that doing the things on someone elses list will not help her learn more about herself or her biological father. It just makes her look crazy. She needs to look deep inside herself. She needs to learn about her own wants and wishes, then make her own list. I think she is scared to be truly happy.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I bet what is on the list will be at Oxford "wink" Can't wait.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is definitely making a progress here! (I mean of course this is what you intended to show us, but anyways...) The decision to meet Elise was wise and she learned a lot from it, even if she was ery upset before, but this is only natural I think.
Edward seems to be rather unset, sometimes he is so kind and in the next moment he gets in rage! I wonder when he will finally be able to settle down a bit, mentally. Maybe if they are married? In any case I agree with Bella that she should relax a bit...
"The List" is a good thing fr both Bella and Edward, because it challenges their relationship in a completely new way. I think that, in the end, Edward will support Bella in all activities, and then there are number 9 and 10 still :-D I think if she decides to make marriage number 9, he will be happy (at least partly ;-) ), but we still do not know about number 10, or number 1, originally..
So I'm curious for the next chapter :-)
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella isn't ready to be a parent. She is hardly ready to be an adult. I am glad that she realizes that Edward is the best thing in her life. Does she not realize that you can get engaged and not get married right away? Then you can be a couple for a few years. This would give her time to grow up and finish school. She could be close to 30 by the time she has children. I think she should make her own list.