[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
The new changes would go easier if Bella had a better attitude. I love her daughter. She is sweet, smart and open to new experiences. She is doing great. Bella could learn from her.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the banter
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Knew E just went to the store but he should have left a note or something. It was an idiot thing to do.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward probably took her to get some food. Bella needs to calm down. She is her own worse enemy. She has such a horrible attitude. It is no wonder she can't be happy. Maisey deserves a mother who isn't so uptight. Does Bella even know how to be friendly with people? She seems to act rude toward everybody, but Maisey.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story ,can't wait till next chapter hope before you go on Vacation .If not have a wonderful time.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
This was not at all what I was expecting! can't wait for the next chapter~~have a good vacay btw.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
I bet Edward took her to get something for breakfast. He really should have told Bella first though. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 28 Sep 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
They def have a long ways to go with thier attitudes towarda each other. Maisey isn't gone, Her and E have gone to the market I'm sure. Although Maisey doesn't make me think of a cow, makes me thing of the little cartoon mouse Maisey
Date: 28 Sep 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really hoping there's a note on the table saying he took her out grocery shopping
Date: 25 Sep 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella needs to chill and trust some one for once. I think they need to try and get to know each other and stop listening to their friends. They both became their worst selfs.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella is really a pretty horrible person. What gives her the right to hurt other people just for fun. She is a bigger jerk than this Edward. She could have a wonderful evening and just say no at the end of the night.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow - didn't see that coming! Excellent chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
WOW. I'm so speechless about this chapter! When I first began the story it had an interesting pull. Then I thought it was funny, and then hilarious, and now I'm just like, "am I watching a movie?!". I'm so excited about how this story is going to pan out. Just so excited.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! love this story too, and the turn it took just incredible can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG! DIDNT SEE THAT COMING, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ I BEG OF YOU!!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow he is an undercover FBI agent...Bella needs to put her big girl pants on and listen to the fine gentleman
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
WOW! When the boss said call Tony and tell him he has moved up, I thought they were talking about Edward (middle name anthony). This threw me for a loop and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am hooked!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love your story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
good twist! Did not see that coming !
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Surprising turn of events! I can't wait to see them living together. Hopefully they don't kill each other.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE it
Date: 20 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is all Mike's fault. If he would have kept his giant flapping gums shut, Bella would have been out the window and gone. If I was Bella, I'd make sure that Mike's boss knows he's got a history of blabbermouth behavior. That's not especially desirable in an FBI agent!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving the twist!!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. Stuck with a wanker along with her daughter. hmmm why do I get the feeling that Jacob is the mole?
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice
Date: 16 Sep 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is BRILLIANT! So funny, please update soon!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ha ha! Loving this!!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella seem kind of mean. She could just turn him down. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story. Can't wait to see what you have.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jessica and Bella def need to neuter Newton. E deserves everything he gets being a self proclaimed manwhore
Date: 15 Sep 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
This Edward is such a douche that I'm still cheering Bella on. I'm also pissed off at Mike. If he thinks Edward deserved this, then he shouldn't have clued him in beforehand. Dumbass!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow - she's cra-cra!!! I kind of felt sorry for Edward!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is awesome! I can wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. Hope you can update more than once.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
You can't leave it there!!! I need more! I am loving this so far. Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 11 Sep 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to the date!! 😁
Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks good - can't wait!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
This will be so funny, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
man loved your last story
this one seems like it is going to be side splittin and i can't wait
oh my this edward is a player and it seems he will be played and i am looking forward to it
loving it
thank you
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like it's gonna be a fun one. Can't wait to hear from B.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice l hope there both smart mouths
Date: 11 Sep 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG This is looking hilarious already