Date: 24 Sep 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am still sad Bella is so rude, that part of her is not funny. In the beginning it sounded fun but as the story changed with their lives in danger her mouth needs to silence and be glad someone is there to help her and her daughter. By the way some of us live in small towns and are Not hicks or illiterate. I think she just makes me mad with the comments.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Listen after loosing her husband she is scared of loosing her daughter. I get that but she could lighten up and at least be nice when he is trying to think of their comforts. I like strong Bella but this one is slightly off center.
I am hoping they remain safe. Maisey seems happy that makes it better for everyone.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! Loved it! Loved the way Edward was so honest with her. Love his idea for making her feel less lonely insecure. It can actually be kind of hot to have a guy shave you. Very intimate. Can't wait for the next chapter.