Date: 28 Dec 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
God, Edward! Get over yourself! How long was Carlisle alone before he found somebody? Jesus H. Christ.
Oh wait. There happens to be a teeny bopper downstairs ...
And the teeny boppers have met!
Interesting pairing.
'Bout time somebody got hold of Victoria. Damn Cullens and their stupid treaty. How many people died because the wolves were assholes about it?
I guess Jasper broke the treaty, though. the wolves may chase them all the way through Forks and to the Cullens'.
Jerks.
Peter will have to give 'em hell.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
"You were the biggest bad-ass on the planet and now you're the biggest pussy."
Holy crap!
Peter has a point.
Jeez! For Peter it was damn near a century. For Bella? What? A couple/few months? Good Lord. After a while, Peter would have thought she was dead. He was supposed to stay "pure" for a dead woman?
Allegedly dead, but still.
Hoo boy. Charlotte's going to be trouble.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
lol for Char and Edward. But at least they'll hopefully leave B and Peter alone then. Buh Bye Victoria et al.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
Go Bella. Keep that man of yours in line. Hope V dies soon. Hope Char behaves as well.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ohh I simply can't get enough
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loving it! Can't wait to see what happens next.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 17 Dec 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I can see how Charlotte would love Peter and worhsip him like a hero, but if he never returned her affections after all those years ...
Ah, Peter seeking solace in other women's arms. It had been a long time and he was thinking he'd never see Bella again. After a few decades, he had to figure she was dead.
They'll work through it.
Wolves!?! And Charlie brought them? What the hell!
Date: 15 Dec 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hope charlotte doesn't cause too much trouble. Uh oh wolves
Date: 15 Dec 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
- More more more more
Date: 15 Dec 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it. Keep the chapters coming, I'm addicted.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
This is getting really good! I can't wait to see the reactions of the family and Charlotte to seeing baby Holden!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't get to leave many reviews, because of health issues, but I have to say that I just adore this story (just as I have absolutely loved every other story you have blessed us with to read), and I swear I have been checking my email like crazy over the last week or so for this update! Such a cliffhanger you left us with last time, and now ANOTHER! I knew Charlotte was going to be a problem, but I really hope we get to see a confident and hopefully possessive Bella in action as she deals with Charlotte and with Edward! Can't wait until the next chapter, and thanks for the new chapter! Loved it that Pete didn't miss his son's birth, but I really doubted you would allow that to occur regardless of our panic that he wasn't going to make it lol. Take care until next time!
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
I swear, when I had my first baby, I had been told "you'll feel a mild urge to push."
OMG, that "mild urge" was completely overwhelming! I had no control over it. My body said it was time to push, so it did! I don't care what anybody said, there was no way I couldn't.
Carlisle is cracking me up, telling Bella to "push gently."
Men have no freakin' clue.
Edward is being a dick.
So everybody is standing around, gaping at Bella's messy lady parts? The *boy* shouldn't have been in there to begin with.
Don't blame Peter in the least for not wanting to leave Bella. He doesn't trust Jasper and Edward is still lurking. Peter should stay right next to her and the baby.
Oh, now Edward wants answers? Well, let's get all huffy and shit.
Fantastical story? I guess Edward assumes Bella went and got knocked up after he left. I'm sure he's insulted and feeling put upon.
Wise of Jasper to leave the room.
Glad Carlisle put Edward in his place and good to see Carlisle showing some balls.
Just great! Charlotte's in love with Peter.
If she doesn't cooperate with Carlisle, he can always kick her out of his house.
Quite eager to see how Peter handles mentioning Charlotte to Bella.
You know, I can't really blame him. He was taken from Bella a l-o-n-g time ago. He thought he could never see her again. He got on with the life he had. He probably figured Bella had died a long time before.
If you can't be with the one you love
Love the one you're with
To quote an old song.
That's a long time to be alone. Should be interesting to see how he chases off Charlotte.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
More more more....
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for more. I'm totally addicted to this story. Love the characters and their interactions. I hope Charlotte turns out to be Edward's mate.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
hmm Charlotte and E both are going to be trouble I bet.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
This should get interesting!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hmm wonder how e is gonna take the news that he's been replaced
Date: 06 Dec 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Um wow more more more more please
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loving it! Such an amazing story. I'm loving every single chapter and find myself rooting for or booing the characters.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Being a bashful sort myself when it comes to being nekkid, I know how Bella feels. But then I had kids. After a while in labor, I didn't give a shit who was poking around down there. The pain is a little distracting.
Edward Fucking Cullen
Except, I wouldn't want Edward there.
Good answer, Rose. Glad she and Emmett don't seem so ready to put up with Edward's bullshit.
The best thing any of them can do is keep him the hell away from her.
Oh. Right. Let's all walk on eggshells around the Little Prince, shall we?
Fuck you, Alice.
Charlie was a bit of a sissy.
Edward! Asshole.
Oh! And they let him walk right in while she's in labor! Are they morons?
He's such a self-centered idiot, God knows what he'll do.
Peter made it!
Good! Now he can kill Edward as soon as Edward says something really stupid!
Glad he made it! He gets to see his son born. And then maybe we'll find out about Charlotte.
Good update, Hon!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
It can't end there!!!! Edward and Pete and the delivery of young master Whitlock! Jeepers! Such a brilliant chapter, I d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039; this story, it's fab! Can't wait for more x
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes! Peter is in the house...unfortunately, so is Edward. Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah. What's up with Charlotte?
All the shit going on put her in labor.
Jasper deserved that pain in that handshake and everything else.
So! Jim was Jasper's younger brother! Peter's his nephew!
Looks like a baby is on the way!
Eager for your next update, Hon. Enjoying your story.
(Even if Jasper is a dick, I still get upset if he's killed.)
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Damn! Poor Charlie!
I can't imagine his shock at seeing Bella 10 months older and 8 months pregnant!
I'm a little surprised she didn't flick a Bic at Jasper.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh! She's still pregnant!
"Well, you see Jacob, when a man and a woman are attracted to each other..."
LOL
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwwwwww.
I still hope she doesn't lose the baby.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh, no! Peter had a feeling and Bella didn't listen to it!
Jasper got him.
I hope she doesn't lose the baby.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Pregnant!?! That didn't take long. Peter must be putting out some power surges.
Of course, Jasper's going to come back and fuck it all up.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit. Jasper found her.
Her shield worked really well! Pissed Jasper right the hell off.
Awww. Peter and Bella's first fight. Glad they worked it out.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
She finally gets some and ow.
She had to be blowing Peter's mind.
Outhouse! *ug*
And Jasper just happened to be hanging around out back.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Very interesting way to propose to a girl!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jasper in the alley.
With his vampire memory, he'll never forget what Bella looks like.
Maybe he'll even be after her next.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Saved!
And looks like she got one over Peter.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Damn! Trouble.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Already, there's a letch. Or a wolf among the sheep.
Let's have her get a look at Peter!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jacob is trying too hard. Boy needs to give up.
Then Bella disappears and he can't reach her!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah. Snap out of it, Bella!
Maybe Renee didn't like her mother because they were too much alike?
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
More more more please
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to see if the baby is a boy or a girl! Now, I am impatient to hear from Peter. I miss him!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh Charlotte is gonna be an issue I'm afraid. She's not gonna wanna give up "her" man.
Date: 03 Dec 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
hopefully his next words are Peter is alive (sorta) and well. oh no....he's not with Charlotte is he?
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I literally screamed at the screen when I reached the end of the chapter! No! I don't want the chapter to be over! Can't wait for more!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
This has easily become one of my favorite stories, and your definitely one of my favorite authors
Date: 03 Dec 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loving her being back...This is such an amazing story! Can't wait for more!
-Kate
Date: 02 Dec 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
More more more please
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Way to go with the handshake, Bella!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella! Poor Charlie! But of a shock for him, his daughter going to bed one night then getting up the next morning to find her 8months pregnant! I hope she gets her revenge on Jasper without causing herself too many problems. I can't wait to see Pete again and I hope he and Bella get together and raise the baby! Amazing update!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! I did not see that coming! Peter is Jaspers brother isn't he? So Bella's pregnant with Japers niece/nephew? OMG! You are totally spoiling us with the daily updates! I love love love this story!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh, goodness! This will get interesting!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! I am so glad that Bella spoke to Peter. I hope that the baby will be okay.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I had just finished reading the WHOLE story that I stumbled on this morning and was beyond delighted to see the update this evening! I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wonder how long till B wakes up and tries to kill Jasper. hee hee.
Date: 01 Dec 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I did not see this coming. Very excited
Date: 01 Dec 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
More more mire please
Date: 01 Dec 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am so ready for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love this! I caught up last night and lo and behold a new chapter today! Poor Bella! I can't wait to see where this is going!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor B. Hope she can get back to her time.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really hate Jasper!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
oooh I sure hope Bella Zaps him in the arse when they meet up again in the future. Poor B. Bet she's gonna go into labor early now.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic! Loved it! Squeee!
Date: 26 Nov 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Um where are you going with thus one very interesting to see where it leads
Date: 26 Nov 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
awwww B's got a bun in the oven!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving your story and can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved the lemon! I dread that Jasper is lurking in the shadows.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. :-)
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper is just a pain in Bella's side.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad that Peter and Bella are engaged. I wonder what is happening in Forks with Charlie since Bella's disappearance.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder how Jasper will fit into this adventure.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is going to be a real shock in this town.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella's adventure is not turning out well.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
The boarding house owner seems sweet, she has a wicked sense of humor.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! So, stalker Jake is getting a shock! I wonder where Bella went.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the idea of Bella being a witch.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see what is in the box!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
~Spudz
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
oooh Evil Jasper..... not a good thing. Cool new shield thing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hurts my heart to write an evil Jasper, but it's how I imagine he was back then. I console myself with the fact that he won't stay that way. ;-)
~Spudz
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loving it! More please!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Woo hoo for marriage and lemony times
Ack for Jasper showing up.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
good once. thank you.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
good story.. faster..
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww they are in wuv!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah Jasper doesn't remember her.....yet. Interesting. Naughty girl for making Peter work so hard.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is one stubborn chickie
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sadly Sleezeballs are the same in every century.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Evil cackle indeeed. hmmm Granny wanted her to go back to remember Peter in the future maybe?
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad she set Jake straight. Hated him forcing himself on her in the books.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh I was right. Witchy B here we come. Wonder why Jasper let E think B was his mate if he knew it wasn't. Hmmm
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm now what could be in that box. Was Granny a witch perhaps? Can't wait to see.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm interesting start. Peter huh? Lets see where this goes.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
great story so far! Hopefully Peter is out and about and can help her :)
-Kate