Date: 28 Dec 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
God, Edward! Get over yourself! How long was Carlisle alone before he found somebody? Jesus H. Christ.
Oh wait. There happens to be a teeny bopper downstairs ...
And the teeny boppers have met!
'Bout time somebody got hold of Victoria. Damn Cullens and their stupid treaty. How many people died because the wolves were assholes about it?
I guess Jasper broke the treaty, though. the wolves may chase them all the way through Forks and to the Cullens'.
Peter will have to give 'em hell.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
"You were the biggest bad-ass on the planet and now you're the biggest pussy."
Peter has a point.
Jeez! For Peter it was damn near a century. For Bella? What? A couple/few months? Good Lord. After a while, Peter would have thought she was dead. He was supposed to stay "pure" for a dead woman?
Allegedly dead, but still.
Hoo boy. Charlotte's going to be trouble.
Date: 17 Dec 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I can see how Charlotte would love Peter and worhsip him like a hero, but if he never returned her affections after all those years ...
Ah, Peter seeking solace in other women's arms. It had been a long time and he was thinking he'd never see Bella again. After a few decades, he had to figure she was dead.
They'll work through it.
Wolves!?! And Charlie brought them? What the hell!
Date: 11 Dec 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't get to leave many reviews, because of health issues, but I have to say that I just adore this story (just as I have absolutely loved every other story you have blessed us with to read), and I swear I have been checking my email like crazy over the last week or so for this update! Such a cliffhanger you left us with last time, and now ANOTHER! I knew Charlotte was going to be a problem, but I really hope we get to see a confident and hopefully possessive Bella in action as she deals with Charlotte and with Edward! Can't wait until the next chapter, and thanks for the new chapter! Loved it that Pete didn't miss his son's birth, but I really doubted you would allow that to occur regardless of our panic that he wasn't going to make it lol. Take care until next time!
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
I swear, when I had my first baby, I had been told "you'll feel a mild urge to push."
OMG, that "mild urge" was completely overwhelming! I had no control over it. My body said it was time to push, so it did! I don't care what anybody said, there was no way I couldn't.
Carlisle is cracking me up, telling Bella to "push gently."
Men have no freakin' clue.
Edward is being a dick.
So everybody is standing around, gaping at Bella's messy lady parts? The *boy* shouldn't have been in there to begin with.
Don't blame Peter in the least for not wanting to leave Bella. He doesn't trust Jasper and Edward is still lurking. Peter should stay right next to her and the baby.
Oh, now Edward wants answers? Well, let's get all huffy and shit.
Fantastical story? I guess Edward assumes Bella went and got knocked up after he left. I'm sure he's insulted and feeling put upon.
Wise of Jasper to leave the room.
Glad Carlisle put Edward in his place and good to see Carlisle showing some balls.
Just great! Charlotte's in love with Peter.
If she doesn't cooperate with Carlisle, he can always kick her out of his house.
Quite eager to see how Peter handles mentioning Charlotte to Bella.
You know, I can't really blame him. He was taken from Bella a l-o-n-g time ago. He thought he could never see her again. He got on with the life he had. He probably figured Bella had died a long time before.
If you can't be with the one you love
Love the one you're with
To quote an old song.
That's a long time to be alone. Should be interesting to see how he chases off Charlotte.
Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Being a bashful sort myself when it comes to being nekkid, I know how Bella feels. But then I had kids. After a while in labor, I didn't give a shit who was poking around down there. The pain is a little distracting.
Edward Fucking Cullen
Except, I wouldn't want Edward there.
Good answer, Rose. Glad she and Emmett don't seem so ready to put up with Edward's bullshit.
The best thing any of them can do is keep him the hell away from her.
Oh. Right. Let's all walk on eggshells around the Little Prince, shall we?
Fuck you, Alice.
Charlie was a bit of a sissy.
Oh! And they let him walk right in while she's in labor! Are they morons?
He's such a self-centered idiot, God knows what he'll do.
Peter made it!
Good! Now he can kill Edward as soon as Edward says something really stupid!
Glad he made it! He gets to see his son born. And then maybe we'll find out about Charlotte.
Good update, Hon!
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah. What's up with Charlotte?
All the shit going on put her in labor.
Jasper deserved that pain in that handshake and everything else.
So! Jim was Jasper's younger brother! Peter's his nephew!
Looks like a baby is on the way!
Eager for your next update, Hon. Enjoying your story.
(Even if Jasper is a dick, I still get upset if he's killed.)
Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella! Poor Charlie! But of a shock for him, his daughter going to bed one night then getting up the next morning to find her 8months pregnant! I hope she gets her revenge on Jasper without causing herself too many problems. I can't wait to see Pete again and I hope he and Bella get together and raise the baby! Amazing update!
Date: 02 Dec 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I had just finished reading the WHOLE story that I stumbled on this morning and was beyond delighted to see the update this evening! I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
oooh Evil Jasper..... not a good thing. Cool new shield thing.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hurts my heart to write an evil Jasper, but it's how I imagine he was back then. I console myself with the fact that he won't stay that way. ;-)