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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

to each his own...however, me thinks edward is enjoying this way too much.

it has to be difficult to come back to the "norm" from all of this...

however, if bella wants to be the only one, she should not stay.

unless of course, she is very happy with this arrangement.

 

Reviewer: Alicat12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more but hoping bella leaves edward and wanna see what edwards gona do.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

When are going to update.  Can't wait for more.  Want see what Bella will do.

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

i love that you put the pictue in

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

You were correct.  I am horny now!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really confusing but willing to give it a go i think you need to sort out a beta

Reviewer: ToAshes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't quite understand how a story like this can have a happy ending which does not consist of a castrated Edward and dead Tanya ( I particularly hate Tanya in nearly all fic's) if Bella is pregnant then bringing a child up in that environment is not good for a child. I however will keep reading, because curiosity killed the cat and I will want to know the ending. I would suggest getting a beta, because you're not writing in the correct tense and a few words are missing, confused at times between events in the past and present. I also would be interested to know if the story is already written as implied, in which case how often do you intend to update? That being said, I am intrigued as to how this will work out, will Edward wise up, will Bella leave him? Will Bella get her own back on Edward with Jacob? Because claiming you love your wife whilst cheating on her but then being exceedingly jealous when she works with an old flame and then telling her he doesn't love her? I not sure how this will fall out, with all parties in tact.( obviously not including Tanya because she doesn't really matter, preferably she will not be able intact at the end of this, literally!)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes I would kick both their Asses out of my house

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