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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:02 PM Title: Pretty With A Pistol

great story so far! Can't wait to read more! :) 

 

-Kate

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 5:10 PM Title: Pretty With A Pistol

Okay good chapter. on ward!



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you decided to start up the story again now that I has a few more chapters. I'm trying to be diligent about posting at least once a week, sometimes more. Thanks for reading and your reviews!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:58 PM Title: The Brady Bunch

Can not wait.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:48 PM Title: Meet The Swans

good chapter even with all the trouble you had worth it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:36 PM Title: Stand Off Of The Mini-Me's

Adults don't need to add to the situation with the children. He made fun of Riley, does not mean she gets to hit. She could use words instead.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:21 PM Title: Beauty On A Crotch... Rocket

I guess the Cullen's don't offer the bathroom use.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:16 PM Title: Meet The Cullens

Family.. good to have your back.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:09 PM Title: Worst Present Ever

I am starting this again. I like to read straight through to get the feeling.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 12:04 AM Title: Pretty With A Pistol

Wow they will make a great team together...and the others are matched as well...

Author's Response:

I like to think so. :)

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:10 AM Title: The Brady Bunch

I like the story, and think that you can jump POVs in the story so we the readers do not have to read two versions ov the same story. Keep updating.



Author's Response:

You make a good point. Having to read an entire other story just to get a different side of the same situation can be taxing on the reader and I'm not personally a fan of it. Perhaps I could do "double chapters" if I need a second POV added. Hm. Something to think about, for sure. Thanks! And I will definitely keep updating. :)

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: The Brady Bunch

I always like epv's but once in while u should do Nov. Either way but I like that u have in EPV every chapter.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the input and will definately at least have an EPOV every chapter, but I'm not sure what a "Nov" is?

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:34 AM Title: The Brady Bunch

Love the story can't wait to get the next update



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:38 AM Title: The Brady Bunch

I love his point of view, can not wait for more

Author's Response:

I appreciate you letting me know and thanks so much! Enjoy!

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:58 PM Title: Meet The Swans

Interesting so far.  Thank you for writing, looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much and there is plenty more coming. :)

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