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Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Excellent!  This story is so good.  I love it.  Thank you!

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

i wrotee in an earlier review for "Regardless"  that I wld read yr other stories.  Well, I was alreaady reading them.    I love this one.    Your storylines are so different and interesting.   Please keep up the good work.   I would love to be advised of any new stories you write.    regards Pamela Hanley

pamhanley@tpg.com.au

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love that he told her. I hope they can come to some agreement

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Can't blame him for being angry

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

beginning to wonder if they weren't all lying to Esme or drugging her somehow even before her stroke.

Like a normal Charlie/Renee relationship.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really loving Charlie & Renee.  Like Edward, I want to know why Esme did what she did

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

This was great.  Thank you!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

MORE PLZ!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love your story.Can't wait to hear the parents .

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad bella is able to talk E down a bit.   Hard to read a story where Jazz and Em are both the bad guys.   Poor Esme.   Gotta love Marcus though.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it. Marcus rocks. Looking forward to seeing Bella's parents.  Good idea to discover cause of brothers' hatred. I would guess it's because Edward is successful and they are not.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is great Ray!  Thamk you so much.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad renee is a good mom in your story.   

Reviewer: darcy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Intriguing story. Looking forward to seeing Edward and his lawyers kick some butt.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

So happy to see an update. I hope all is well with you.

Great chapter. I love that Charlie & Renee are so supportive

 

Reviewer: LGC Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Do you mean Assisted Living or Skilled Nursing Care? Hospice is end of life care, not generally long term. Enjoying the story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

so glad Carlisle was there to help him.   Wonder if we'll get to see why Esme was a such a biatch and horrible mother?

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ahhh just keep me begging for more 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

Were they sitting outside Edward's bedroom?  I can't wait until Esme can speak for herself and attempt to explain her actions

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

Glad Carlisle came over.  Dire situation.  Hope they can help Esme soon.  Wowser.  What all poisoning have the brother done to her mind.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow.  Wonder if B has a trustworthy nurse friend she went through school with to help out.   Maybe Angela and Ben?  Angela a nurse and Ben a physical therapist?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wowsers.  Can't wait for them to pay for this.  Poor Esme.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow  Poor Esme.  Wonder how they manipulated Marcus though?   Glad B went to him.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

hmmm Interesting start.  Can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: isobel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

HI YOUR STORY IS VERY INTERESTING.AND I AM WAITING FOR THE FOLLOWING CHAPTER.I WAS WONDERINH IF YOU WILL CONTINIOU YOUR OTHER STORY DANCING WITH THE DEVIL.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

More please 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

The last two chapter said it all.  It also broke my heart.  Thank you for that.  I love the concept.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

More please 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Glad Esme can still communicate.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Go Edward! 

 

 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

More please

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  Explosive chapter.  Thank you Ray!  

Suzanne

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  I love your Edward and am looking forward to seeing him destroy those people

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