Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Soo Tanya is in love with Edward and he is not in love with her or anyone.
Author's Response:
Edward lived a lonely life as a vampire. Poor Tanya always tried to make him like her but no.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
:-) this is rather funny with Bella's reactions.
Author's Response:
It was like a rollercoaster for her :)
Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
Date: 05 Nov 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
the Rabbit Hole. :-)
Author's Response:
That was all Emmett.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh Victoria was with them, perhaps that was his GF.
Author's Response:
I wanted them to have another sister, so Victoria is the other Cullen.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
hmm interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
i hesitated to start this until you finished. I hope you post often.
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm glad to see you commenting on this fic.
Now that I finished Twilight cliff, I'm trying to post twice a week.
Thank
May
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hmmm will he ever back off and will he take a better look at Charlie update soon
Author's Response:
What can I say? Jacob has a very thick skull ;)
Thanks.
May
Date: 03 Nov 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Boy, Jacob is bull-headed as he can be! Bella is going to have to watch him like a hawk, because he won't give up this notion that he is the one for her!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's stubborn like a mule ;) but Bella isn't alone. You'll see.
May
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully what has been imprisoned in that bunker for twenty-five years won't hurt anyone when they let it out! Different for Jake to transform into a bear and not a wolf. That must make Emmett so happy!
Author's Response:
Emmett is delighted. Finally a bear who can keep up with him! ;)
May
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well they have more information and more questions but when they open to door what will they find update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you.
May
Date: 26 Oct 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
I wish Charlie would quit trying so hard to push Bella and Jacob together! He has to be up to no good! I'm glad Carlisle showed up to warn them about Jacob phasing! That could have been pretty dangerous for Bella, if she had been close to him when it happened! See you next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I think you'll like the next chapter.
May
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow Jacob is changing and I think Charlie knew it would happen too what does this mean for them
Author's Response:
Hi!
The next chapter will answer part of your questions, you'll see ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting.
May
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow so they made it but will Edward get Charlie to think of what he is really doing and will they save their love ones and who is Edward picking up their mind
Author's Response:
Edward will have to be crafty to make them think what he wants. :)
May
Date: 17 Oct 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad Edward is there for Bella, because she sure can't count on anyone else in this motley crew! The magical meadow was cool, I wonder what else it hides? Oh yes, who's "voice" is Edward hearing?
Author's Response:
He' s the best partner for her in this crazy journey. The voice issue is going to be tricky.
May
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Tanya was very gracious, I thought, ceding Edward to Bella's care. Like she had a chance with him anyway! This should get tricky from here on in! See you next time!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I feel bad for her. See ya!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like Stefan found some sort of black magic that went bad and backfired on him! Lucky Bella, off to a camping trip in the Olympic National Forest!
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was the twist, Stefan made bad things.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it makes me very happy.
May
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe there's a chance the family will get their little sister back? I now know why everyone has shown up at this precise time!
Author's Response:
There's always hope! :)
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I guess technology is catching up to the Cullens, if the FBI has found all this evidence of them in the past! I thought they were supposed to keep the secret above all?
Author's Response:
Hmm, they had a few mishaps, but their existence to the general public is well hidden.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, that sure was a twist, to have Victoria be a Cullen, even though she is probably gone now! Bet I know what was in the thermos Rosalie gave Edward!
Author's Response:
Well, some bad guys are going to be good, and viceversa.
Ahh the thermos...
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Surprise, Bella! They're vampires! I wonder why Alice told her not to trust Charlie?
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm so glad you're reading this little fic. Charlie isn't going to be a good guy, sorry. But later you'll see why he's like that.
Thanks!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
The golden eyes are somewhat of a giveaway. Charlie going berserk is certainly out of character, can't see him tasering a guy for no reason! Wonder what this picture Bella's supposed to rescue shows?
Author's Response:
He tasered Edward to test Edward's limits, you'll see Charlie isn't a nice person in this one.
May
Date: 09 Oct 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is sounding like a really weird cold case, with supernatural touches. Big question would be, who is the surviving Cullen, and why would they arrest whoever?
Author's Response:
Bella is up to a whole new wolrd of adventure.
May
Date: 09 Oct 2014 8:10 PM Title: Prologue
What in the world was going on there? Nothing good, from the sounds of it!
Author's Response:
Hi!
You're absolutely right, nothing good.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
May
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well she is ok and they have a plan will it work and will they get the information they need to get Vicy and Harry back update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. The action is coming soon ;)
May
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow I think she is on information overload will they stop whatever is trying to come and get Vicky and Henry back update soon
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor Bella needs to rest a bit to understand all they are throwing to her.
Thanks for reviewing.
May
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow I really like this one very different and mysterious please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter, I'll try to post it soon.
:) May
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome, can't wait until the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm working on it.
:) May
Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
I guess Jacob has started to phase?
Author's Response:
Hi! Yes, he's starting; but he's not a Quileutte so he's not aware of the change; and he won't change into a wolf.
Thanks for reviewing, I love to hear your comment.
May
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope they don't get any interruptions. edward has a lot to tell.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I can tell you he won't drop the whole story on her immediately because probably she will think he's crazy, but the next chapter will reveal lots of information. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
:) May
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Who will Bella tell about her strange meeting? Or will she keep it to herself.
Author's Response:
She only has one friend she really trust. ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
So many secrets,mso many odd things. Bella trusts her boss, that's clear. As for Charlie, she has her doubts. It's interesting that she didn't disagree or say anything to her boss about how they're keeping Jacob in the hospital.
Author's Response:
Hi! She didn't disagree because she felt guilty for breaking his nose, and she really can't stand him.
Thanks for reading. :) May
Date: 02 Sep 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
This could probably be an interesting story; the premise is good. But please proofread better or get a beta--the grammatical errors and misused words make thestory hard to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving me your opinion. I'm really trying, and I hope you'll notice the difference in the next chapters. I don't like to make excuses but please, consider english it's not my first language and the girl who promised to beta for me just dropped me before giving me her input. I'll look for another one.
:) May
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, you and your cliffee! Update!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm working on it. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:29 AM Title: Prologue
Intriqued!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Eager to see where you go with this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
You'll see *insert evil laugh*:)