Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:39 AM Title: Epilogue II
Loved it so much!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2015 7:13 PM Title: Epilogue II
cool little story but the end was a bit confusing ;) thanks for haring on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for reading. If there's anything you want to ask me, feel free to do so. My mail is maymay74star@gmail.com
May :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good one...
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your comments.
Thank you :)
May
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Like the way this story is laid out.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Going to enjoy this.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:18 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks. i hope you like it.
May
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue II
:) Loved this story
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 25 Feb 2015 6:50 PM Title: Epilogue II
Thanks for a little different Twilight story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for joining me in this journey.
May :)
Date: 25 Feb 2015 10:49 AM Title: Epilogue II
Great way to end the story!!!
What did I think of Rosalie?Rosalie has a lot of anger and pain that she held in sometime,then her angry come out in full force.Think some people see her as a cold hearted bitch,who doesn't see what she has like a wonderful husband in Emmett,a family that love her.Think Rosalie past made her into a different person,who past still haunted her in many ways,I think her angry hide how she really feels.
Emmett who wouldn't love having him for a brother,who make joke's,but is a scared looking man,and has a good heart.
Esme is a good mom,wonderful person,love to cook,and take care of her family even bella.Wish we get see mom bear claws come out which would have been more fun.
IT too bad we don't get to knew all the characters in the books,make you feel something is missing in a lot of area.There more to the story then we know about.
1 Did you think Emily should had more time in the books?
2 Did you like a good edward or a bad boy edward?
3 Who did you think could understand edward and bella bond?
4 Did you think edward vampire side would have been more open to bella about how he felt?
5 Did you think Renee should have had more time in the books?
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm glad you liked it :)
1 Yeah, Emily is another character with an interesting story. How did she feel about Leah? After all they were cousins
2 Depends, I'm a sucker for mobward, but because I'm a nerd I love cute nerdwards. So I think it depends of my mood. And you?
3 Marcus without a doubt.
4 Yeah, Edward was so used to bottle everything inside, they had terrible communications problems.
5 Maybe. I feel defensive of Renee because she ends as the bad parent in many fics and i think Charlie was a worst parent. At least Renee tried to give her best for Bella.
I've been reading my favorite fics, and I'm looking for new ones to read. What are you favorites?
May
Date: 25 Feb 2015 3:46 AM Title: Epilogue II
Enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing your talent!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for taking the time to read it :)
May
Date: 25 Feb 2015 2:10 AM Title: Epilogue II
I really enjoyed this story!!! :)=)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my story :)
May
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2015 1:38 AM Title: Epilogue II
Oh I loved it that is a great exsistance
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm really glad you were with me in this journey.
Virtual hugs to you!
May
Date: 20 Feb 2015 10:33 AM Title: Epilogue I
Sounds like everyone is pretty happy with life now, even that slut Jessica!
Author's Response:
Hi!
I thought to give everyone a HEA just for once ;)
Thanks
May
Date: 20 Feb 2015 5:19 AM Title: Epilogue I
Love the first ending,can't wait for the next one.
Get my answers
1 Who did think should have his or her asses kicked?Charlie,Jacob,Billy,Mike,Jessica,Lauren,Alice,and the La Push Pack.
2 Who I would write chew out speeches for?Lauren,Mike,and Jessica would be first because they won't bella friend's.Second Alice for trying to control thing's.Third the La Push Pack,and finally Charlie,Billy,and Jacob because they need to mind there own business quit worrying about bella moving away,having her own boyfriend,or a life of her own.
1 What would have changed about the books?
2 Which book don't you like the most and which book is your very favorite?
3 Did you think jacob transformed too young into a wolf?
Author's Response:
Hi!
Now that we've discussing the book, I'm rethinking some of my old ideas.
1 I've been thinking and maybe I wouldn't made Edward leave and I think I would brought the Denali clan sooner. To even a bit the number of vampires VS wolf pack. Oh and that tent scene. That's my biggest no no.
2 My favorite in the saga is the bit of midnight sun, that's what mademe love Edward. Breaking dawn is the one I could do without, Renesmee and a third part narrated by Jacob, no.
3 No, I think part of the temperament of the wolves in general, depended on thier raging hormones. See Paul, he phased always. I think it was to make the elders teach them how to control their temper, though the elders didn't take their job so seriously.
What do you think about Rosalie? And Emmett? And poor Esme who only has like three lines in the whole saga but is a very important character.
May
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2015 4:27 AM Title: Epilogue I
Oh I loved it heheheheh
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope you'll like the next one.
May
Date: 20 Feb 2015 4:01 AM Title: Epilogue I
I am sad that it is almost over! I am very happy that there is another part coming this weekend!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm also sad, I'm going to miss this bunch. Hope you'll like what I write for them.
May
Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
Nice of Marcus to stop by and offer to help. Stefan and his evil is gone for good and Vicky is back with her family, as is Harry. Guess we can't ask for better than that. As long as Bella's transformation isn't hideously painful, Edward will be happy. See you for the epilogue!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun.
May
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
Look like jacob got revenge on Stefan,because of him jacob injured bella.
Can't wait to see what happens with edward and bella.I'm a little curious about what your going to did with jacob.I hope he apologies to bella about what happen even if it wasn't some of his fought.
It's less you showed how jacob thought with his brain,not be dumb to listen to the voice over and over again.I'm glad you did jacob trying to make amends for his action,unlike some other authors who always make bella forgive jacob too soon.But sometimes it took time to forgive people like jacob for their actions,hell it even takes year's sometimes to heal.
I think that was always the problem with the twilight saga was bella being too forgiving about jacob action,I think if jacob cared about bella feelings he wouldn't have fight too hard for her,but then again maybe bella wasn't helping any either cause more problems then need.
What did you think did you believe some things bella shouldn't have been to forgiving about?
I think jacob when too far one time,when he telled bella he wishes she was dead,just because she wanted to be with edward.But did you think there was more to his word's?
Would you had called Renee after jacob force kiss,Charlie taking jacob side over his daughter?
Also should bella had stop seen jacob sooner,then later?
Think jacob and bella both had different point of view in eclipse,remember when bella said what might have been and jacob saying what could have been.I don't think there would have been a future for them because of the imprinting thing that just keep happening.Maybe jacob just doesn't get it,I think that why all the imprinted wolves tried to tell him it better to just let them go then to break their hearts.
Charlie was on team jacob too much,don't you just when yell at him or slap him?
Just wish that edward and his family kick wolves butt sometime?
I was happy when edward in the breaking dawn movie got to hurt jacob,one though keep going in my head it about time.
IT too bad edward don't get to did that in eclipse book.Would you have love to seen that?
What would you have done to change about books or characters themselves?
Which characters did you wish had getting there ass kick more,more importantly who should help those characters give the ass kicking to?
Which characters would you write chew out speeches for,and what would you say to each of them? If it were me I say let your angry out and go for it,say what you been die to say to them?
While had fun talk to you about this.
And also IT my mom 49th birthday today.
While can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I hope you'll like what I'm doing to Jacob on the epilogue (hint: he won't have any interaction with Bella ;)
I think the problem with Bella being too forgiving with Jacob, is that she never truly understood is how much she hurt Edward and even Jacob. She needed to think what was to be on Edward's place, just to understand how does it feel. And to Jacob, because he was like a little child. She should had put an end to his tantrums. Jacob telling her she was better off dead, it was an epic tantrum.
Also she was too forgiving with Charlie. The forced kiss, she broke her hand, the time he spent fishing instead of talking to her... I think he would rather had Jacob as a son, than Bella.
I think they kicked the wolves butt in a figurative way. The Cullen showed how closeminded the tribe was. But maybe a more physicall proof was necesary ;)
I would have made different... Renesmee. Ok, E&B have a baby, but why that name? and the imprint... noooo! And obviously that tent scene in Eclipse, it's wrong in so many ways. Oh, I would had made Alice less annoying.
Obviusly Jacob needed an ass kicking. Not necessarily by Edward, maybe Emmett or Jasper. (Who would you want to have his or her ass kicked?)
Honestly, my 'chew out' speech would go for Bella, but then, the story would had ended too quickly ;) Then Edward, to ask him to be more explicit about his feelings and to not leave.
To whom would you make it?
I also have fun talking to you. Sorry for taking so long; hope you and your mother had a wonderful evening on her birthday.
See you soon. (Maybe tomorrow, if work lets me)
May
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh I loved it thank goodness it is fix and everyone is where they should be
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for joining me on this journey.
May
Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
Can't wait to see what sort of help Marcus will offer. Hope it has to do with ridding the world of Stefan, the troublemaker! Bella's change is already sounding different, so that should be really interesting also. See you Friday!
Author's Response:
HI!
Yeah, Marcus has some interesting things to say. And sure Stefan's days are numbered.
Thanks hun. See ya on Friday.
May
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yeah bella becoming a vampire.Jacob better feel sorry for what he did,it's all his fault.
What did I think about the volturi? There kind of creepy and scary,but maybe it just for look.
Is it possible to find redemption for them?For some of them yes,the other half not really.
Yes,I believe Marcus is the only one who has shown respect.Even if he quit most of the time.The only time he spoke was when he saw bella and edward bond and the half-human,half-vampire children were there.
Do you believe that Marcus saw how strong of a love bond bella and edward and what would it look like?
Did you think that if Marcus saw the bond between bella and jacob,what did think he would see?
Which Volturi one did you not trust?
Author's Response:
Hi! Well, this time I'm goping to give Jacob a chance to redeemed himself. I hope you'll like what I'm doing to him ;)
About Marcus, I think he noticed E&B bond, but he was so 'anethezised' that he really couldn't do a thing. I pictured the bond like some colored 'aura' around people, the stronger the bond, the neater the color.
I did not trust Aro, because he was always scheming, Caius was always angry, so we knew what to expect from him. But Aro had a very twisted mind.
Thanks hun.
May
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow so much going on what will they do to Stefan update soon
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, they got the family back, but now the have to find a way to get rid of Stefan. Maybe Marcus has an idea ;)
Thanks.
May
Date: 09 Feb 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
Glad Tanya killed Angela she shouldn't have hurt Felix.
Thank You!!!For answer my questions.
What would I have changed about the books?
Twilight-Made edward about nineteen or twenty years old.Keep bella looks the same,have made her stand up for herself,she would be stronger,tougher,conflicted,no insecurities,and who took no one bull shit.Wouldn't have made bella friend's with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,and Lauren Mallory.Made sure bella and edward had more alone time and made a stronger love bond between them.
New Moon-Edward would have stayed.No friendship with the quileute tribe.Have bella moved out of Charlie house after her eighteen birthday.Bella and Edward riding a motorcycle together,giving bella and edward there own place to live.Have some drama with the Jacob,Billy,and Charlie.Always have people on the edge of there sit.
Eclipse-Bella and Edward going to their meadow.If Jacob tried to kiss bella against her will,I will have Edward,Emmett,Jasper broke his jaw,nose,leg,and arm hell I'll even let Rosalie kick him in the balls for fun. The Cullen's wouldn't be asking the wolves for help against the newborn fight.Don't mind bella and edward sleeping in a tent as long as there in a sleeping bag together.Then if jacob show up,only telling bella to choice him again,bella would say to him "How many time most I tell you.There will never be an US, I don't love you and never will.Get it through your thick skull.I have a mate and real man in edward he wonderful and loving plus we have a lot of sex over and over again.Don't getting your ass kick make a good enough point.Your here bitching and whiney about yourself being the better man.Please I knew that one day you will imprint leave forget all about me." She pause for a minute "I don't like Forks,Washington I hate the rain and cold.I love the heat and Sun,the only realizing I stayed here was because of edward I only stay for him and him only.You'll never be my man because your nothing to me only reason I got stuck with you was because of Charlie.Will never be lover's.Who want to be stuck in one place forever,I don't oh and by the way go head and get yourself killed then I'll know who the real jacob black is nothing but a coward,who could not match up to the man I love and if you die,who gives a shit!!!because I won't." Then make the engagement more romantic.
Breaking Dawn-Have bella and edward plan there own wedding,no Alice planning the wedding.No Jacob,Billy,Sue,and Charlie invited to the wedding,only Seth and Leah,only a small wedding.Honeymoon the same,I'll have bella get pregnant with twins with a boy and girl.I would name the boy Alex Scott Masen Cullen and Elizabeth Anne Masen Cullen.Have the Cullen's move after the wedding.Have bella and edward get their own place for them and their children.The family can visit them.And if jacob show up I'll have vampire bella kicked his ass.
That some of the things I would change. What speech would have given to Jacob,Billy,and Charlie?
Author's Response:
I agree with your changes.
I think her speech to Jacob would had been something along this 'Listen, I don't see you like boyfriend material; so if you want something more, you'll have to search in other place. Bye!' And probably would have made her stay away from him to get the idea really sink on him.
To Billy just a picture of her with the Cullens. No words are necessary.
And Charlie, I would had turned Renee to him. Maybe Esme to make him feel bad. Because I think he never took Bella seriously, maybe others stating how neglectful he was would have a better effect on him.
Sorry for taking my time to answer. I was a bit behind in my laundry (really) and other homely duties, so yesterday I was cleanign, washing, ironing...
I try to post the next chapter tomorrow, because I want to post the first chapter of the other fic too.
I really like to talk with you. Thanks for your patience.
May
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow they got their family back will Jacob be ok and what are the going to do with the evil one update soon
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, Vicky and Harry are back, too bad they brought Stefan with them.
I'll try to post tomorrow, though with other sites failings (that's where I store the chapter while I write it) I'll have to hurry to get it ready.
Thanks.
May
Date: 08 Feb 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Looks like you are almost done with this story. Good for you, though I will miss it! Edward now will have his Bella forever and Tanya has Felix, the Cullens have Vicky back after all these years and the rest can be dealt with. See you next time!
Author's Response:
Yeah, this is almost over. We still have a few things to wrap up... Stefan's fate, Laurent and James, oh let's not forget what will happen to Jacob.
Thanks for always reading and commenting.
May
Date: 08 Feb 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bella transforming into a vampire.Jacob really mess-up I hope bella kick his ass for what he did.CAN'T wait for the next chapter.
At less bella got a real man in edward,not a childish jacob who hurt her.
Then again who are we kidding jacob always find ways to hurt bella physical,emotionally and mentally.
I always like bella in the fanfiction because she can stand up for herself better then the book.
Jacob also like manipulative thing he always have the La Push tribe on his side no matter what he did wrong,seriously people get a life.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, we have Bella and Felix changing at the moment, though by now, I think even Jacob realized Bella will never be with him.
I know we're both part of the 'Jacob is a jerk' team. Hope you will like what I'm going to do with him ;)
May
Date: 06 Feb 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 29
I LOVE THIS!! SO EXCITED!!! :)=)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Sorry for being late. Hope you like it.
May
Date: 06 Feb 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
Serves Angela right! I'm glad Tanya destroyed her for shooting Felix! See you Saturday, to find out what happened to Jacob and Bella. Hope Felix doesn't have too bad a transformation.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Sorry for being late. Hope you like what I posted.
Thanks.
May
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh snap oh snap I need the next chapter Saturday can't come fast enough
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer reviews.
I appreciate the effort and it always makes me smile.
Hope you liked the chapter.
May
Date: 05 Feb 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 28
OMG! This is great! I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't like the idea of leaving you with that particular cliffy, so I'm going to post the next chapter in a few hours.
May
Date: 05 Feb 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward will be having a vampire fit if Bella gets stuck in Zafrina's mind! Stupid telephone, ringing at just the wrong time! Bella as a medium sounds good, but so does Jasper with a broken heart! I'd like to vote for both, but will stick with Bella the medium first, then Jasper on Eclipse Island!
Author's Response:
Hi!
Edward would get an ulcer if he wasn't a vampire. Things are going to move quickly onthe next chapter, which I'm goign to post later at night. I didn't want to leave you on that particular cliffy.
Thanks for letting me your opinion on the next story :)
May
Date: 05 Feb 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
More to come in the next chapter. I go with let talk about bree.
What did I think about Tanya? I think she lonely sometime she doesn't have a mate to keep company. Just her family.
Do I hate her? No not really! Just don't know her that while,see why people used her for a bad person maybe it her beauty.
What characters did I dislike?
Charlie because he isn't a real father to bella.I can't picture Charlie ever leaving forks,Washington for another state,because I believe he stay in forks because he someone down there with the people.He doesn't fight for his daughter which he should have done from the start, I think he only love his job,fishing, sport's,food,beer,not having to clean-up the house,not cooking any meals,Sue,Seth,Leah,his friends,Billy and Jacob Black.
Mike Newton is a black sheep how more of follow the crowd,manwhore.I think he more dog then man.
Jessica Stanley backstabbing bitch,whore,more in to me then other people.
Tyler Crowley trying to get laid,go after the popular girl's.
Eric Yorkie too helpful,full of shit,and anything to be popular.
Lauren Mallory biggest bitch on the planet,backstabbing bitch,I believe she been with how knew how many guy's.
Most of the La Push Pack there too prejudiced thinking they know everything when you don't know.Ok we get it your hotter in body temperature and can go without a shirt we know what your trying to say we're all hot and shit,ok whatever.you don't know all about the vampire world,the only place you been in is the Washington state's not around the world.Think your going to win against all the vampire wrong you would only get the other killed.
Sue Clearwater don't trust her or the tribe.She don't help her daughter after her break-up with Sam. Sure she was there for Emily but not her daughter,I think she been in love with Charlie before being married.I think she doesn't like bella at all.
Billy Black he goes around telling bella how to live her life,your not bella father it none of his business.You and Charlie pick bella as jacob bride what happen when he imprint leave her just like Sam left Leah for Emily.He and his tribe are selfish assholes.Think he love Jacob more then his twin daughters.
Jacob Black your selfish,jerk,childish,and immature brat.You always say edward a monster,maybe you should look in the mirror.Grew-up your nothing but a man child in the body of a man.Just too much in himself believe he the better man when he not,must have one thick skull.
The only characters I like are edward,bella,carlisle,esme,Renee',Emmett,Alice,Angela,Ben,Leah,and Seth. I'm not sure about Rosalie and Jasper.
Have some questions too.
1 What would you have change about bella character or her personality?
2 did think bella was missing a backbone?
3 did you think bella was way too forgiving about jacob action?
4 would have bella question about her acting about edward and jacob sooner then later?
5 should bella have moved out of her father house after the force kiss?
6 would you have made the pregnancy less painful?
7 would have made the wedding for important people in bella live or have the whole town with the Wolves invited?
8 would you have let jacob imprint on bella and edward daughter?
9 should the Cullen's have moved out of town after the wedding?
10 should Charlie,Billy,and Jacob work for bella forgiveness?
I think the book author made bella into a cold hearted person, author love jacob more then bella and edward. Plus she was too busy giving jacob a happily after that forget about her star cross lovers and don't let them fix there problem,how does giving jacob a soulmate in the form of bella and edward daughter doesn't solved anything at all. IT just too mess he was chasing after bella then have him kiss bella later her daughter in the future that just wrong in so many ways.
Author's Response:
Hi!
You have a great point on Sue Clearwater! I never stopped to think about it, but you're right. She never helped her daughter with her heartbreak. With the others, I think the same.
1 I would had made Bella feel some empathy with Edward; I insist he needed to bring Tanya to make her see how does it feel.
2 She missed her backbone with Alice (I dislike her, I think of her like 'I'll be your best friend because you're going to let me do whatever I want to you'), and with Jacob.
3 Yes, she was too forgiving. And she never saw her actions as 'leading him on'. Which she did.
4 She should had asked herself what would I do if I was in ___ place. I think her attitude toward both men would be so different.
5 Maybe not moved, but a few days staying with the Cullens and maybe telling Renee what happened so she would had ripped Charlie a new hole...
6 Hmm, no, that part of the pregnancy it's fine for me.
7 Because Bella had zero backbone and allowed Alice to do whatever she wanted, the wedding was fine (and I like how she rubbed her wedding to Jessica and Mike) though when se danced with Jacob and said that her day was finally 'complete' I wanted to slap her. how does she think Edward felt?
8 No. That was so wrong. For me Jacob was a capricious boy, he really didn'tdeserve to be close to Bella. He deserved to end alone.
9 Yeah, I think moving to any place would had been better. Start new and Bella watching the process.
10 Yeah. Though Bella feeling she 'failed' them and almost asking for their forgiveness almost make me cry in anger.
Yeah, the author looooves Jacob, and I really dislike him. The whole 'imprinting on the baby' was no wrong. I really love the books, but Breaking dawn in Jacob's POV and the imprinting... :( And to make it worst naming the baby Renesmee...
That's why I love fanfiction. I never read a story that ends with Jacob and Bella together. That's a big no no in my book.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh wow what is happening what does she mean all hell broke loose update fast please
and the first one it sounds intreging
Author's Response:
Hi!
Bella said that because now thing are going to happen. Sorry, I don't want to spoil you the story, but I'm going to post the next chapter later at night.
Thanks for answering.
May
Date: 29 Jan 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
Charlie judgement day coming for you. I love your stories about bella and edward and some other people too, they show how edward and bella can grow together as a couple, more then the books I felt that some things were rush or don't get worked on. And that Charlie keep pushing for bella and jacob to be together ever minute. I wish bella knew early on that holding on to jacob was wrong, because you can't give everyone what they want, because that make them think in there head there hope when there not. Then again jacob,Charlie,and Billy won't much help either you can't plan someone future think there perfect for each other what happen if the other doesn't feel that way it could blow up in your face. I believe that Destiny find you or you make your own. I like bella better in fanfiction because there her and edward are so much stronger. I did love twilight but some thing I don't. What was some of your favorite twilight parts and ones you don't like. I will always be a team edward fan. Oh Charlie, Jacob, and Billy here one for you get a life outside of Forks,Washington no one like living in one place sometimes.
Author's Response:
Hi! You're so right, I got so desperate with Bella allowing Jacob to push her to be with him. Honestly, I was team Edward but I just liked his character, but when I read 'Midnight sun' I fall in love Edward. I love that the Cullens really act like a family, like Edward and Rosalie aren't best friends but they're loyal to each other no matter what.
Things that I don't like: I don't think Charlie was a good father, he just took care of Bella's basic needs, but he was never there for her, and don't let me start with the infamous kiss Jacob stole from Bella! What kind of father doesn't defend his daughter? I really dislike Jacob, he's a whiny, manipulative jerk. (I think you can notice it in my stories, he is the bad one or an idiot).
And that obsesion to keep Bella in Forks... I think Charlie loved Bella as long as she never messed with his routine. The same goes for Jacob and Billy.
I owe you an apology, I said that I would post the next chapter from my other story. Honestly, I'm stuck in the recap. I promise to work in it this long weekend. (This monday is a rest day here in Mexico).
I'm so glad to have the chance to talk to you. If you want to talk more with me, this is my email mayrame@hotmail.com
May
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh wow will it work will they give their family back will they all get out
Author's Response:
I'm just gonna say I believe in HEA ;)
Thanks
May
Date: 29 Jan 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm so glad Charlie is about to pay for the harm he has caused and planned! I think Zafrina's brother is about to take care of him!
Author's Response:
He caused so many problems.
Thanks
May
Date: 29 Jan 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
LOVE! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
May :)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
It's pretty clear to me that everyone needs to find a way to exchange bubbles and retrieve their people. If that means Stefan doesn't make it back in one piece, too bad, he will only get what's coming to him! He caused all this pain and misery, after all!
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yes, Zafrina will help them to do that change, and you're right about Stefan.
Thanks
May
Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait for the next chapter. Having bella there help a lot they got answer to some of there questions,love the way zafrina tell jacob off, because she right bella will never love jacob ever. He so childish, hard head, asshole.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Zafrina doesn't have any kind of patience for Jacob ;) I'm so glad you'reon the same team as me, the 'Boo Jacob' team :)
Thanks
May
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow so many things went wrong that day it never would have worked now how do they fix it
Author's Response:
Hi! You're absolutely right, it never would have worked out. What happens next? Well, Zafrina also wants to go back to her home, so she's going to help.
Thanks.
May
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh boy they found the voice now will she tell them what they need to know
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yes, the voice will answer totheir questions. She's very nice once you get to know her ;)
Thanks.
May
Date: 21 Jan 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
I guess I can let out that breath I was holding! So far, nothing has tried to hurt them, but still no clues as to what happened to Vicky!Lead on, MacDuff!
Author's Response:
Hi!
I just posted the next chapter, and you will get lots of answers *wink wink*
Thanks.
May
Date: 21 Jan 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm guessing these most be the person voice they been hearing. Now will get to find out why bella need to be there as while.
Author's Response:
Hi! I just posted the chapter, and yes, you wil get the answers ;)
Thanks.
May
Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really don't like that voice in her head putting Bella in some sort of trance! It's giving me goosebumps to think about what may be waiting for them behind the last doors! See you soon!
Author's Response:
Hi!
We're getting there, I promise to update really soon.
May
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh snap who is talking to Bella and why do they want the Edward and Jacob to fight over Bella what will that do update soon
Author's Response:
You'll get the answers in the next chapter *insert evil laughing*
But I promise to update really soon
May
Date: 16 Jan 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG! I need more!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I'm working on the next chapter, I hope to post it on Saturday.
May
Date: 15 Jan 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
We're getting close to the truth. Jacob is too far gone he still has it in his mind bella is going to be his, I think he listened to Charlie way too much.
Author's Response:
Yeah! They're almost there.
Jacob was delusional by himself, but now with two voices imagine how crazy he will get!
Thanks!
May
Date: 14 Jan 2015 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so glad all the Cullens are finally out of hiding. Between Charlie and his agenda and who knows what supernatural danger may lie ahead, Bella may need all the help she can get! See you Thursday!
Author's Response:
Hi!
You're absolutely right! Charlie turned into the worst kind of coward, but now he has lots of eyes on him.
Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and being patient.
May
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
Why does Charlie keep running back does he know what's there or is he just looking for the money update soon
Author's Response:
Hi!
Charlie wants to get to the security room to see if he can find Stefan's office (which he thinks has the money) and also is a 'secure' room and he want the others to face the danger. He's the worst kind of coward.
Thanks for reviewing.
May
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Having esme there help a lot. Charlie sure is a scared cat, jacob is a dumbass bella never lead him on it Charlie get a brain stupid.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Esme and the others will help lots ;) Charlie is terrified but his greed pushes him to continue and Jacob... I consider him a waste of space an oxigen
Thanks hun ;)
May
Date: 01 Jan 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Happy New Year to you also! We are nearly to the secretnow, aren't we? I really want to know why Bella is so important to finding out what happened to Vicky! See you next time!
Author's Response:
Hi!
We are getting there, chapter 24 will answer a lot ;) just wait
Thanks
May
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh boy how will they get out of this and what does Angela have to do with all this and why is it waiting for Bella
Author's Response:
Hi! Chapter 24 will answer a lot ;)
Thank you for being patient
May
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love hearing the different pov from bella and alice. Charlie sure showing his true colors in front of them guess were getting close to the answers in underground bunker. Edward and his whole family are unhappy about what happen to Vicky inside there. P.S. happy new year to you too.
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer, having the whole family here at home got me really busy :(
Hope you like this chapter.
May
Date: 26 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
LOVE!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
May
Date: 25 Dec 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks much for the update, and the good wishes! Same bak to you! This is a fascinating peek into the stupidity of Stefan, and I can hardly wait to see what else they find!
Author's Response:
I'd like to think that he was a very desperate man, terrified of dying; but he turned out stupid and cruel with time ;)
May
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow so something got out but it was looking for something now what was it update soon
Author's Response:
Hi!
Sorry for taking so long to answer (and to update), this vacations turned zero free time. But I promise to post the next chapter tomorrow night.
Hope you'll like it.
May
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Now we know what happen to Vicky and Harry that night. But still have to wait on questions about why bella there.
Author's Response:
Hi! Yeah, we saw what happened to them, and a few secrets will come to light ;)
Thank you.
May
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow the are getting closer and they heard the voice when will they find out who it is and how they got trapped
Author's Response:
They're really close. Soon they'll find the voice, and she will explain a lot of this mess.
Thanks
May
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!! I am so excited I can barely stand the wait!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm working on the next chapter, hopefully you'll like it.
Thanks.
May
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is getting better by the minute. Can't wait to see the next chapter. We will see why bella need to be there.
Author's Response:
Thanks. You'll see why, and I hope you like the next chapter.
May
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love that Emmett is moving Charlie's "breadcrumbs" and the bomb is diarmed. That little voice that only Bella and Edward can hear is back so they must be getting closer!
Author's Response:
I really like Emmett, he's very playful. And you're absolutely right, they're getting closer.
May
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG!! I am hooked!! I am all caught up and so excited for more!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi! I'll be posting the next chapter in maybe six hours (as soon as I leave work and get home)
Thanks.
May
Date: 08 Dec 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Don't much blame Bella for being angry at Charlie, since he obviously cares nothing for what happens to anyone but himself! How awful to plan on blowing the doors and sealing them all in, possibly forever! He has no idea that the Cullens are on to him! Hope Laurent makes it through without having another heart attack!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Charlie really doesn't want to leave witnesses. And I'm glad someone appreciates Laurent enough to worry for his health.
Thanks
May
Date: 08 Dec 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella trying to figure out the mystery of why she the missing puzzle piece a long with edward and jacob. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, they'll find out soon.
May
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow so Bella is a part of it too but what and when will we find out
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon ;)
Thanks
May
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was funny what James said to jacob black about him acting like a coward. Jacob sure act like a tough guy but is still a child which everyone see.
Author's Response:
Yeah, everyone can see it.
May
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh snap who is calling them and why did the floor shake when Jacob step in
Author's Response:
I'm not giving anything on the plot saying that it's the same voice that used Bella's, otherwise known as the entity. They're getting close ;)
May
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Whoever belongs to that small, sweet voice seems to be on the level below where they are. Hope they can find her soon
Author's Response:
They'll do... in time. Remember there are three floors. ;)
Thanks!
May
Date: 27 Nov 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob sure doesn't give up does he. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving
May
Date: 26 Nov 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm excited that they are nearly to their goal! Can't wait to see if Bella is right about what she told Edward. That creepy James , ugh! See you this weekend!
Author's Response:
The next chapter will answer that question. Thanks.
See you this weekend!
May
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well will they get their family back will all of them make it out and who is talking to Edward will she be helpful
Author's Response:
I can't answer that without an spoiler, just trust me. I love HEA. The next chapter will show the mysterious voice.
May
Date: 21 Nov 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella surprised Edward with how quickly she agreed to be changed, I think! I don't know why he would bem she wants to be with him forever, just as he wants to be with her! I'd like to know who trashed Bella's place and why!
Author's Response:
I wanted this Edward to 'seize' their time together. He has a different perspective because of the loss of Vicky, so he wants to take all that Bella wants to give :) Her apartment is another thing.
May
Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
Things are adding up. Jacob dad kidnapped a teenage girl just for have a son,that mess-up. Jacob think he owns someone just because he think it his right. Wrong that not how it works,then again it all in his thick skull head of his. Stupid arrogant bastard.
Author's Response:
Yes, this shows us why Jacob is a jerk :)
Thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well I think they are on to something but why go through Bella's place what were they looking for and are they right about Charlie and William update soon
Author's Response:
Hi! Well, there's a reason for the mess with Bella's apartment... it will come to light soon ;) William's part is bigger than what we know now, after all his son is in the middle of this mess.
Thanks
Date: 15 Nov 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, I would have hit him, too. Harder.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I want to thank you for your patience, I owe you the answer to another review :( But about this chapter, well the line to kick Jacob's ass is on the left :)
May
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow it is getting crazy but will it all work out and will they stop what ever evil from getting out update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! Things are going to get crazier.
rnMay
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Charlie seems to know emotional energy will be needed to open the portal and thinks he can stir up some between Jacob and Edward. He keeps forgetting how independent Bella is! The idea of Jake beating on Edward is pretty funny!
Author's Response:
Charlie is determined to make them hate each other (not that he needed to help with that)
rnJake is delusional to think he could take Edward on.
rnThanks
rnMay
Date: 13 Nov 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder why the entity chose Bella to communicate with the Cullens? Maybe it had something to do with the shield that keeps Edward from hearing her thoughts! Now that they are so close to finding answers, I'm getting nervous!
Author's Response:
Maybe that's why it chose her ;)
rnThanks
rnMay
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jacob sure bitches a lot for a man or is that what we want call him. Bella the badassbella hitting jacob with a big stick funny, I'm sure jacob Hasn't giving up yet,he is most stupidest person on the planet, if a woman doesn't want you then get over it. Can't wait to see bella and edward talking on there walk.
Author's Response:
Yeah, even Charlie who is his supporter told him to stop whining :)
And yeah, there will be a good talk.
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hmm well they are finding out more and more I hope this will help them and what is the blue liquid he saw
Author's Response:
Soon you'll find out.
Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.
May
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now thing are adding up some want money,lust,and power.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad to see you again. I hope things are going well with you and your mother.
May
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jacob still acting like a child stupid fool.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's very immature
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Jacob may love bella but she doesn't love him back. He too blind to see that for what it is which is the truth.
Author's Response:
He's kinda obssessed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jacob think he has a claim on bella. As they always say never fuck with Destiny. Because I think karma is a bitch it will bit jacob in the butt.
Author's Response:
That probably will happen
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
It was funny jacob tried again with bella, but jacob boy I think bella like a real man like edward in her life not a stupid mind child man like you. While he did act that way in eclipse book.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I always thought he acted like a spolied child in Eclipse, only this time Bella is always saying no.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jacob is dumb sure he may look like a man but he still act like a teenager not a grew man. Jacob is selfish jerk and poor exercise for man how need a reality check. No women in her right mind would go for a guy like jacob how act all possessive of a girl like a piece of property. But that just jacob for you.
Author's Response:
*insert crowd clapping*
No wonder why he's single.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
While that explains some of the story. Jacob could be dangerous with his mind and violence temper I watch my back if I were bella. Because jacob never think of the consequence before acting like a big asshole with any brain in his head.
Author's Response:
Yeah, they'll have to keep an eye on him
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow lot of information took in but glad everyone on the same page.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't blame bella for being scared of jacob. Jacob is an asshole how think of one thing himself, never care about anything other then what he wants. Sorry never been jacob fan in my life. I'm more of a team edward girl. But the only wolf I like is Seth.
Author's Response:
I'm with you, Seth is nice.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now all pieces of the puzzle are coming together. Jacob will be more of a problem then usually, will I like your bella,and edward most really like her by now.
Author's Response:
Edward likes her a lot ;)
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yay Alice has arrived. But I agree with her I wouldn't put my faith in Charlie for second at all there more to ever story and I think bella will find out the truth.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 09 Nov 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh bella looks like everyone has secrets to protect. But I wouldn't trusts jacob black either he always been a jerk or Charlie he hiding something or know more then he telling.
Author's Response:
You're absolutely right. You'll see.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
this chapter was slightly confusing.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, I know. The next chapter, which also be on Edward's perspective will explain a lot.
Thanks :)
May
Date: 09 Nov 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was good see jacob get punch noise GOOD for you.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm not a fan of Jacob.
May
Date: 09 Nov 2014 7:44 AM Title: Prologue
Sound like a mystery to be solved.
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm so glad to see you here. Yes, there will be mistery and a supernatural/sci fi twist.
May
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Jacob started out nice then went right back into his nasty personna.
Author's Response:
I tried to write him as a victim, but he didn't let me.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
May
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
The pictures are from Reneseme? Hmm who knows but you? LOL Good story
Author's Response:
Hmm, thanks. The name will remain a mystery until later ;)
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
not ensemble.. assemble the verb.
The appearing part is interesting and so very vampire like.
Author's Response:
Thanks, already corrected.
The meadow... well, that was the reason why nobody could access the bunker. It was really closed.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
good one
Author's Response:
Thanks :)