Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a bad feeling about 10pm tonight. I have a feeling he will be showing all 3 of them off & Charlie the sicko that he is will have it the worst or at least I hope he does. What r Bella's lesson's & who is teaching them?
Date: 02 Sep 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie's going to break Bella before Carlisle does! I keep wondering when she will hit her breaking point. Should be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
i say let her dad work it off
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
You have me so hooked I still hope you bring Edward in that would be hot
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my, unfortunately this is just too intriguing to not read it
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Its like a train wreck, I don't like the subject, the brutality but I can't stop reading, I have to know what happens next!!!!!! I know you want Carlisile to stay the way he is but he is brutal.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Holey fu€king sh!t
Didn't think this Charlie had it in him! Knew he had some 'hatred' towards Bella but that was insane, Carlisle didn't really surprise me was expecting it.
Another riviting chapter and interesting character development.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
there both sick s.o.b. s to use women like that
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes crazy characters make for a crazy story. What is going to happen next?
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
You continue to shock me! Putting Bella in a dog cage definately takes it up a level and then Charlie with Leah, WOW! He is as sick & depraved as Carlisle! I think he does enjoy Carlilse too.
I hope by th end of this story Bella gets her hands on a shot gun & catches Charlie & Carlisle in the act together & blows both their heads off! Granted I look forward to lots of sick & perverse chapters before that can happen. ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope Bella does not fall in love with him... i hope she tries to run away... this story is just loads of cray
Date: 20 Aug 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Netty uU never fail to impress me
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Charlie is such an idiot! Carlisle is really wretched but he doesn't lie. Tells them straight up how bad it will be & 100 % follows thru.
Date: 20 Aug 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is just awful
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
i'm sorry to say i wood kill him and then me i can't and wont let any man or women hit me ever but great ch
Date: 20 Aug 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Both Charlie and bella are morons. Charlie for selling his daughter and bella for agreeing, father or not she should've told him to fuck off.
Date: 20 Aug 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Will u do a Carlisle pov?
I think that would be rather interesting.
The depravity of Carlisle has me hooked, usually I cant stand these type of stories but so far this has been hard to read but like a train wreck, you just have to look.
The quick updates have been good other wise I think it would be too overwhelming to have to wait more then a couple of days for an update.
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nope. Buh-bye...
Date: 19 Aug 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep still here
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know if I can do this, Betty too much for me.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope this is not going to be cruel. I get he owes him money but she is jail bait and smart. Not smart enough to run like hell when he told her.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sorry, I can't read this. No reflection on your writing. I will stay on your alert for other stories. Thx
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
i say find a knife when he is a sleep and cut it off
Date: 18 Aug 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! He is very much into giving out pain! I didn't expect that and just the simple detail of having her dry made the whole experience so much worse. I can't even fathom what you have planned for the next day. Hopefully Bella gets a clue & finds some oil or something for her bum or she won't be able to walk after tomorrow. How will she know when she has worked off the debt? Or does he just plan on eventually killing her?
Date: 17 Aug 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE hating Carlisle in this story Are you going to bring Edward ? in to save her or is this a story of Carlisle growing a heart?
Date: 17 Aug 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Fascinating concept! They might just be an interesting twosome. I look forward to the journey!
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I was so happy to see this quick update! Poor Bella sad that she doesn't even argue with her dad because she is just so used to him doing the wrong thing & being lousy!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
omg update soon please
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great twist
Date: 16 Aug 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Will this be a HEA story?
Author's Response:
I honestly don't know yet.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aaaarrrrrrhhhh I'm addicted already can't wait fir the next chapter and to see how Carlisle responds to her feelings resignation at being there.
To me it feels like she doesnt really have any feelings at being firced I to this, she hust sighs and saysok even though she's filled with despair.
You've got me wondering if Carlisle will be disappointed that shes not showing any fear (yet) or if he will be impressed (isnt really the right word) or more like 'huh I dont get you shouldn't you be scared?? Or more like tge tough barstard mob man and be like, 'notmuch but you'll do'.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
cant wait to read more
Date: 16 Aug 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.....looking forward to reading more :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I likey..... update soon !
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh the plot thickens
Date: 16 Aug 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interested in seeing this one play out :)
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see how evil you make Carlisle! An evil Carlisle is even better that an evil Edward! I'm sooo looking forward to the next update!
Date: 16 Aug 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
well this deff sounds interesting.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
cant wait to read more
Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hhhm, cannot wait for more
Date: 15 Aug 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. I can't wait to see how Bella manages to handle all of this.