[Report This]Date: 19 May 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG, I thought I couldn't read anymore, but this was for a lack of better words, her saving grace. She did it!!!!
Date: 19 May 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Way to go Bella! Redemption is sweet.
Date: 19 May 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
GO BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope Charlie gets what's coming to him too.
Date: 19 May 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
So did not see that ... that was great
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
YES!!!!! Take that MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 May 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow amazing chapter go bella
Date: 18 May 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit! I knew she would eventually kill him. But, to do that? Nope, never thought she would. But, deep down, he deserved that and more.
Can't wait to see how she gets Leah and Alice out.
Thanks!
Sally
PS: I'm so glad you are continuing to post this story here and not letting the FFN assholes get to you.
Date: 18 May 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
WOW just WOW! Payback is a bitch named Bella! Thanks for writing.
Date: 18 May 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
NICE. Was super excited when this got updated
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you thank you thank you.
Date: 18 May 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bravo bravo astounding betty
Date: 18 May 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!! I have been reading this story and OMG I this was and AMAZING chapter!!! LOVE IT!! MORE! MORE!!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
YEEEEEEAASSS, FUCKING FINALLY !!!!!
Date: 18 May 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Finally, he got what was coming to him. This Carlisle was just too evil to be redeemed. Look forward to the final chapters.
Date: 18 May 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank god!! I'm so glad she got justice altho I don't think this will be over for her :( Thanks for updating here. Happy to see you writin again!
Date: 18 May 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hot DAMN! I trust you'll make sure Bella doesn't serve any jail time for this
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
omg i love what you do to him update soon please please
Date: 18 May 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well now, I'm sure a lot of people would say that was wrong, sick etc. I say he didn't suffer enough first. We all know the so called Justice system would never make him suffer as he made so many others do...so many innocent girls he brutalized and caused to be brutalized or killed. Bella would have had to sit in court as his high priced lawyers did their best to get him off or obtain sentencing to some country club prison where after a few years he would walk out a free man. He'd have sat there and smiled, thinking about what he had done, and know no one could ever do to him what he had done to others, not like that anyway. Yeah, you go Bella! He had it coming to him....
Date: 18 May 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Whooooop go bella
Date: 18 May 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow!! Haha the stupid bastard. He said she would need her strength, guess he wasn't kidding!! Te he he ;D
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
If you ask me she was too merciful but I am so happy she cut his bits off before killing him. :D
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh sweet, sweet twisted revenge. I would have made his eat his balls first, though. Yeah, I don't even know. LOL
Thanks for the update. What's going to happen next?!?!?
xoxo
Mina
Date: 18 May 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! That's all I got.
Date: 12 May 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well that was interedting I was certainly not expecting that, I truly hope bella can survive this with he sanity intact.
Date: 09 May 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Didn't expect this. Awesome twist
Date: 09 May 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow what a change in plot. Wonderful to know that she has people on her side. Not sure I could go back to that. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 09 May 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
Please update soon!! :) That was awesome! I hope she kills them all!! Tee he he he ;) Carlisle's death should be especially painful! ;D
Date: 09 May 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
What's entirely sickening about this is that it is all too true; there ARE people who get off on inflicting pain on others including innocent children and babies, as well as men and women, girls and boys. If there is no such thing as Hell, there ought to be, just for people like that. I have hope that there is such a thing as Karma, but no illusions. My own dear old Dad didn't receive the punishment he deserved in this life, instead people thought he was a charming old man who was an upstanding citizen and that I was a terrible daughter. They still do. Fuck them. They didn't know him. At all.
Date: 09 May 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
It was so good to hear Edward's name! Now how will they die? I hope excruciatingly slow & painfully!
Date: 09 May 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
never saw that coming that was awesome😆
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait intil she does and i hope it's painful update soon please
Date: 08 May 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fucking amazing
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope she cuts off his bits and then kills him. Awesome chapter.
Date: 08 May 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
CCarlisle is in deep. Hope she gets him and all his guys.
Date: 08 May 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Woah, didn't see that coming, its all been a ruse!!!! never expected that!!!!!
Date: 07 May 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
WTH??? What is going on? please post soon
Date: 07 May 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
WTF???? :) can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Date: 07 May 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
For a bit there I could almost feel Bella giving up and giving in to fate. The end? Clever! Clever and stunning! I almost feel like I've been hit by a door! If Bella has been looking for Alice for Aro, what does that mean for her? Why would she go so far to find someone? Is she a friend? Is Bella Aro's employee? What a cliffhanger! Kudos! Extremely well done!
Date: 07 May 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
amazing turn around
Date: 07 May 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it, I knew there had to be twist all I gotta say is thank God!!!!!
Date: 07 May 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Alice? Aro? I'm confused.😳😳
Date: 07 May 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
What???????? Oh boy I hope the next chapter comes soon, I need to read more please!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 May 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wtf ???? Alice???
oh my gosh can't wait for the next update!
Date: 07 May 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
What us going on? I take it that Bella and Aro know each other and they are looking for Alice. What is the deal? Very interesting. Can't wait to see how this is going to turn out.
Date: 07 May 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
What the heck.....I am confused but I think I am going to like this twist to the story.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Are you shitting me? You are EVIL!!! Love you any way.
Date: 07 May 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
So confused love it please post soon
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
She's gonna kill him.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
confused is not the word for it lol
Date: 07 May 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Cannot wait for the next chapter!! Update ASAP so juicing for the next one!
Date: 05 May 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Welcome back as always a great chapter
Date: 04 May 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Bella gets to pay back
Date: 04 May 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope she gets a gun & kills them all
Date: 03 May 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow.betty.I'm.stunned where r u going with.this.one hun
Date: 03 May 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Until Bella asked him a question it seemed almost as if he was being...gentle????
Yes please make a sequel! It is defintely needed!!!
Date: 03 May 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Carlisle is sick.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
i hope she kills them all. there all sick as fuck
Date: 02 May 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah he will because he is a sadistic bastard. And A is Alice right?
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Carlisle is one sick motherfuker. Charlie is too.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Carlisle had Charlie fucked by all those men. How dare Charlie make a deal like that for his daughter. That is just wrong.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
OOMGosh! !!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Who did Carlisle call? What had Charlie set in motion?
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh! !! I am a little speechless with Charlie.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Carlisle real is a bastard. Wow. is Carlisle right, does Charlie secretly like sucking Carlisle's cock????
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle is awful. I though once he met Bella he would change.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can not believe that she took that so well. I would have been screaming and yelling at Charlie. I probably would have ran.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is definitely a different Carlisle. Can't wait to see what you do with this story.
Date: 31 Jan 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, so juicy. Love the naughty tone, I'm looking forward to the rest.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Seriously what the hell is wrong with Bella? She agrees to stay even after knowing her father sold her to him and knowing exactly what he was going to do to her and then knowing how sick and depraved her father is refused to whip him. She wouldn't have had to do any of this if she had just left when she had the chance and let her father deal with his mess.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think a great twist would throw Edward into the mix
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
i fell so bad for bella
Date: 30 Jan 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella should have used that whip on Charlie. She's too honorable.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
can you update soon? You are a really good writer and i enjoy your stories
Date: 29 Sep 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank goodness Charlie is being severely punished!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
He's reached
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
is it ok that i all those men sick s.o.b.s
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Does Carlisle ever stop being a monster
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
can't wait for more
Date: 12 Sep 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
If I'm right, and Charlie is on drugs, then yes, he will. As far as A goes, my guess is Alice. Carlisle certainly is a twisted devil, isn't he?! Nicely done.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next c hapter
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm thinking A is Alice? I definately think Charlie will have sex Bella. I can't even fathom how much worse the next chapter is going to be. If there is ever a contest for shock factor, no one will ever be able to compete with you!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hory fu*&ing mackrel, the way you've twisted these characters is quite amazing!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Every chapter is just crazy you have me hooked
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
i think all the guys in this story is sick s.o.b
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm interested to know where you are going with this story.
If it's a story simply about abuse, sadism and revenge - then I would prefer to know now.
If it's a story that will end up with Bella being 'saved' or finding a way out either through another character like Edward or Carlisle coming good, changing his ways and being different to Bella, then I'm more likely to stick around.
Would really appreciate it if you could let me know. Feel free to private message me - I won't give anything away that you'd like to keep private.
I can deal with a bit of sick and twisted but can't deal with it if that's all there is.
Will be be interested to hear from you! Thanks!
Author's Response:
As I stated in my A/n at the start of chapter four, this will not be a feel-good story where Carlisle suddenly grows a heart and starts to care. He's insane, and heartless, a true sexual sadiest. Yes, Bella will get her revenge, but she will have to endure a lot first. Most likely, Edeard will not be making an appearance in this fic, still not sure about the Em, J, A, or R, and there will be a sequel.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm afraid of what Carlisle has planned for Charlie, but he deserves to suffer for having given his daughter ...
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle is a sick bastard, Bella should make Charlie pay for their mistakes!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm also obsessed with this fic.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy! I can only imagine what is going to happen next.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh I'm so sick I absolutely live this
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Does he ever treat Bella better and do we ever find out why he hates women so much? Is the whole story just him being an ass and Bella dying at the end?