Date: 23 May 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
(I meant to add this to my ch 15 review) I'd love to read an EPOV from when he received the file upload through the takedown if you felt like writing one, whether it was in the sequel or an outtake. Did he know that it was Bella that killed them? Did she leave the videos of her or delete them. Did she shut down the feed from the playroom when she killed Carlisle or was she caught on camera? When did Edward teach her how to hack? Not to be pushy or anything, just curious : )
Date: 22 May 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle certainly was a bastard, I got a bit squeamish at parts, but I can't say you didn't warn us. I can't wait for the sequel. I want more Edward and Bella. I just read the last three chapters, my mouth dropped open when Bella jumped Carlisle. That was awesome, and I wasn't expecting it to end that soon, but I was very happy that she got her revenge. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 May 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished this story and I loved your writing. It was dark and full of angst and I've never hated Charlie so much. I typically don't read anything thats not E/B but I'm glad I did. Bella surprised me in the end, can't wait for the sequel.
Date: 20 May 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
This was a very welcomed read. I was feeling stagnant. I couldn't find anything worth investing my time in. I became intrigued by the comments on fb & decided to see what all the excitement was about. I was wonderfully surprised.
Date: 20 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad you continued also. I'm an angst wimp so I'm surprised I started this and had no idea where it was headed. Idk what you have in mind for the sequel but I'm there. Excellent writing and story. Thank you for sharing
Date: 20 May 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella acted as an avenging her Bella, more Alice, Leah and all other women and girls taken against their will and forced the life of torture and rape. I confess I did not think Bella having stomach to kill his father's monster, I thought she spoke to Leah do this, but Leah was too weakened from mistreatment.
Bella still shared their resources helped Jasper, Leah and Seth because they were not many resources to go far. I wonder if she'll meet with Aro as planned or will follow other way alone, I barely can wait for its sequel, congratulations for the good work. X
Date: 20 May 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad that she got to hurt him. But I would have thought that she would have done all the sexual stuff to him that he had done to her and then tortured him like she did. He deserved to be taken in the ass.
Date: 20 May 2015 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Some people can't handle the reality of evil. Yes, in real life there are people who are evil and target the innocent to inflict almost unimaginable horrific acts upon. They prefer to keep their rose-colored glasses on. They don't want to think that people they might know have a horrible secret, that they prey on men, women and children and do unspeakable harm just for shits and giggles. I wish that it was true, that those things don't happen~~
Date: 20 May 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love it!! Thank heaven you didn't give up! This was wonderful and just when we thought we understood it all, WHAM, you blew us in a whole different direction. Terrific! I look forward to the sequal to this. Personally though, I don't think Bella needs. A lot of redemption. Unless she had other motives for what she did, Bella suffered through hell and in the end stopped a whole lot of hurt that was caused by other people. Wonderful! Thank you not only for this story, but for the pleasure of knowing I have another one to look forward to!
Date: 20 May 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Excellently handled! The question now is : how much of the darkness we now see was there before Carlisle added to it significantly? Yes, he messed with her mind, but I somehow have a feeling that some of the darkness was already there. The question is from what? This one came out of the blue, that's for sure! Carlisle wasn't the only one Bella took by surprise! Wonderful chapter! Thank you!
Date: 20 May 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
As tough as this was to read...I enjoyed it. Yes it is not for the faint of heart but sadlly it is a subject that is happening all over. Human trafficing happens even here in the US sadly as well as all over the world. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 20 May 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
I was following this story on the other "site" and lost it when it disappeared. I'm really glad I though to look here. This was a tough story to read and it makes me sick to think much of what you wrote is probably very real for some people. I had no idea where this story was going, so the twist with Bella was a very welcome surprise!
I look forward to the sequel. Thanks
Date: 19 May 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew she wanted to kill him, but I could never imagine that she would have the blood cold all to do the revenge of refinement as this. He deserved everything he received and more, but I think now Bella is completely unbalanced and when this is over if she left alive needs to make a huge therapy and take care of your mind if do not do it will be a moving danger to anyone.
Well, now is wait to see how she will release Leah and Alice, as she will be the executioner of Charlie, Esme and his cronies, the tattoo artist, Eliazer and all involved.
PS: I'm pleased and happy to continue the stories here despite FF hypocritical bastards.
Date: 19 May 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy Fuck Yeah Baby That Was AMAZING !!
Eat A Dick Carlisle !! Oooh Wait He Did ;)
Yes Yes Yes ! I Was Chanting !
Whilst I Wanted Carlisle To Be Redeemable I Knew He Couldn't Be !!
Was Bella Waiting For The Perfect Opportunity To Get Him Or Did She Just Take The First Opening She Could ??
Cannot Wait For More !!
Date: 19 May 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!! I'd like to think she didn't really do that or maybe it makes me feel sick because I think she did great and gave him what he deserved. I only wished she left him to die slower.
Can't wait to see what she does to Esme, Charlie and the rest of the pigs. Hopefully Edward comes in helpes her save the rest of the day. But, who will save/heal her.