Date: 30 Aug 2016 8:15 AM Title: Sequel Chapter 9
The plot is that Eddie is coming with Vicky and a bunch of new born vamps because she wants to kill Bella and Eddie wants to gather his so called pet which is Bella.he also thinks he can kill Jasper and grab Alice so he can use her gift.also he probably want to kill most or all of the Cullens because for what ever reason he believes he is the leader of the coven and they have defide him.so there you are now don't leave use hanging.you probably have maybe two or three chapters left then this story will be finished.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 7:39 AM Title: Sequel Chapter 6
Well the gangs all here.did the little faggot even think past his arrogance and ego that they would gather a group of veteran fighters to go up against a bunch of newborns and a insane bitch and a child that can't fight????
Date: 30 Aug 2016 6:49 AM Title: Sequel Chapter 2
I guess she won't be sucking down Bambi anytime soon? i enjoyed her little speech she gave Carlisle.
so who will Peter be calling?i would guess the girls will probably like to join the fight especially Kate since i don't think there is any love lost between her and Eddie .
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Would have liked to hear more fromthe other side of the curtain once in a while until she was finished and drawn back to her time. so she has been a whitlock for a hundered and thirty some years and didn't even remember.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
After reading that i am surprised that Esme didn't drop a match on Eddi's worthless ass.of course they would send him to be baby sat by the Denalis instead of just shoving his parts in a box and sticking him in the basement until Bella finished changing soshe could take care of him.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am so curious to see how the rest of this story plays out,hopefully you don't keep your loyal readers hanging.i cannot wait to read how things are going back in her time with the Cullens while they wait for her to finish turning.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Don't stop keep writing. Not for me or for someone else do it because you hear their voices and they are telling you their story. I am not telling you what to write only Please finish it.
Some where down that long road of this story Edward finds out that Bella does not love Him anymore. That is all I ask. He needs to feel left behind because of his actions.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
ha, love that she gets to see all Jasper's family! When whatever happened to her is over at least she can share more with him about his family he forgot during the change. I'm really curious about what's actually happening. Is she reliving a paSt life or really get sucked back in time. Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
well moving along.
I can do without the Ch-dad. HE is Charlie or Dad and she knows the difference, she is smart enough. You might do that for a short time but not for an extended time. IMO
She had to correct herself, she normally calls Charlie- well Charlie in her time but it would seem improper to call her father Charlie, hence the Ch-Dad, she had to remind herself.