Date: 13 Oct 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well, she should tell Jacob to piss off.
Great update
Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hoping for a longer chapter :( But I'm greedy!! :D
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
I like this strong B.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm hoping that once Edward explains to Bella why he didn't want her to know about him previously that she'll lighten up on him a bit and give him a second chance.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
ohhh tanya
you are mine
she is going to be trouble
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, I am glad Bella called him on getting Alice to lie to her. What's is Rose's problem? How is our couple going to get together without screwing up? Inquiring minds want to know.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well at least Bella was not starstruck. What has gotten into Tanya? Why pick a fight right as he is walking out the door. Can't wait to read Bella's POV. Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it! love the tension of dislike at first sight, even with the sparks evident! Tanya is history, I predict, and so is Jacob! Maybe they should get together?
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Fantastic story. The characters are so realistic even if some of them are idiots. Loving it heaps.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved the chapter. Jake was a jerk and Bella can do better. I hope she stays strong.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG!I love your story can not wait for next chapter love love it.wonderful writing.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmmm jake is delusional...
Date: 02 Sep 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I don't agree with Alice that Bella should hear Jacob out, especially with how he acted in the dress shop. That gift of flowers was meant to manipulate and was given with the expectation she would cave, so good for her for giving them away. I think she is wearing the perfect dress in which to meet Edward, so I hope they do meet at Marcus' party. Love reading your story!
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jacob is a real asshole. Leave him to Leah.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Jacob is being a real jerk.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so glad that Bella is going to the party and letting Jake just go to the restaraunt by himself. Hopefully, this will be the end of the two of them...
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 02 Sep 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Never like Jake it was his way or nothing and to wish she died should his true feelings in the book.....love the story now lets see Bella and Edward meet and what about Tanya the love of his life.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love it and wished you posted more often.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, Jake just sealed his own fate. The boy has a lot to learn about women.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very good, please hurry with the next update
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm relieved Bella seems to have a backbone & is sticking to her guns.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Jake is a serious idiot! If I was Bella I would tell his ass that We Are OVER!!! Is he freaking delusional? I have a feeling that he is going to cause problems!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
I am all for anything that keeps Bella from Jacob. She needs to be available to Edward. Now we need Tanya to do something to break up.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
What has to hurt the worse is that jake did tell Leah what he was feeling!! And she threw it in both there faces. Bet this isn't the last time jake goes crying to Leah!!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
Can't wait for them to meet!!!!!!!!!
:)
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
Well, Happy Thanksgiving. Seriously, I'd be even more ticked off that I slaved over dinner that the little twit Leah ruined! Jacob dug himself a really big hole.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
OMG you have got to be kidding me!! Love this story and wished you could updated more often.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
It sounds like the cracks are beginning between B & J but through no fault from B. Jake's insecurities will be his own downfall.
Leah is Leah.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
bye bye Jakey poo.....Hello Hot Stuff
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Shelia or Angela?
Author's Response:
Hi.
Thank you for pointing that out. I have now corrected that mistake. It is of course Shelia. Shelly for short
fiona
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
I'm glad that both Sue and Charlie didn't put up with the trash that came out of Leah's disrespecting mouth! Jacob going and confiding in her? If that doesn't put an end to Bella and Jacob, I don't know what it will take to do it. After she prepared that nice dinner for all of them? Then again, won't that be playing right into Leah's hands? If Bella kicks Jacob to the curb, I'm sure Leah will be right there to help him up. That bit about RP and EC being twins? Clever....!
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
OMGosh! I can not believe Leah talked like that in front of the adults. I also can't believe that Jacob went to Leah and talked about Bella to her. Boy he has some nerve. Hope you update soon. Really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
Love Charlie
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2
I would have bitch slapped her. Great update
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm sure there is more to Jacob's reaction than meets the eye. I think Jake has been meeting other girls and been lonely with Bella wtudying so much. Not positive that's he's cheated, but I positive the thoughts have been there. I'm also sure that if the situation was reversed and Jacob won an internship Bella would be completely supportive! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have not really been invested in the Jake and Bella relationship, but he is being a jerk. Which is probably what most teenage boys would be if their girlfriend was going to be working with a Hollywood heart throb for months! That's a situation that would breed insecurity.
Thanks for the shout!
Date: 14 Aug 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
You are killing me! How long are we going to have wait until B&E meet. I know I need to have patience but I just want them to meet and dump Tanya and Jacob. I got a feeling that something is up with Jacob and I don't trust Tanya either. Keep up the good work.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
For some reason I feel like Jacob is cheating on Bella. I wondered that in the other chapter where he did not come to school with her. I know he "said he had to be out there early but I don't know. Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, Jacobs actions are very jerk-like. I wonder if he has an ulterior motive here, like maybe he's seeing another woman. Cheaters always act weird like that. I enjoy this story a lot! If Bella only knew that Edward has already seen her picture, knows about her, and is mildly obsessing. Is he really a man whore or is that just paparazzi BS? I guess I'll read to find out!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think it's just normal insecurities on his side coming through but I reserve the right to change my mind in the future.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Jacob isn"t very supportive--very jealous!! Can" wait until they finallly meet!!
Date: 11 Aug 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
well well well so our Edward was attracted to the picture of our Isabella! Can't wait to see what happens when they meet!
Date: 11 Aug 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is going to be in T-R-O-U-B-L-E!!!!!!!!!!!! He is already taken with Bella, just from seeing her picture. When he meets her he is really going to have a hard time getting her out of his head. Lol. Since Rose is Tanya ' s best friend I have a feeling she is going to be a real bitch to Bella. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
It seems like E is tempted easily or his love isn't as strong as he believes.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Supposedly these two people are so in Love with their significant other, how in the world are Bella and Edward to fall in Love or Lust..
Date: 10 Aug 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
I will be happy when they meet. Wonder if the attraction will be instant for Bella. Something not right about Tanya. Update soon.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like that he is so taken with just her picture.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking both Tonya and Jacob are not faithful on their ends.... Maybe?
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I'll bite. Let's see where this goes.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well, Bellas seems to have made a good impression on the Professor.... Those other two girls don't stand a chance at that internship.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have no problem with them being with other people as long as they end up together. I am just wondering how they are going to get together since they seem to care so much for their current mates. Especially Edward. I can't wait to see where you are taking this. You definitely have me hooked.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella meet. Will they dislike each other at first or will they be taken with each other?
Date: 06 Aug 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
[b]Bells, you have as much chance of getting this opportunity as anyone else. Remember, no matter what I am so proud of you. No matter what, you will always be my girl," he said kissing my cheek.[/b]
I bet he will regret saying tht
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
thanks for the shout out. I am honored! This story has really great potential to be an epic one. I'm glad that there will be no non-E/B sex here. Very glad! I very much look forward to E and Bs first meeting! I'm sure he will be an epic ass and she will take him down a peg or two. Am I right? Don't tell me, I'm just thinking out loud. Thanks for giving us this lovely story!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I enjoy B & E stories but not when they're those overly sappy, love-at-first-sight ones. Is this one of those?
B/J & E/T seem to have loving, solid relationships & I can't see them just drop it at the drop of a hat. I hope there's at least some build up?
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it. Can't wait for E&B to meet. Hope Tanya is not skanky or cheating on Edward. Wonder how things are going to workout for E&B considering they appear to care for their other halfs
Date: 04 Aug 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 04 Aug 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
It sounds like Edward is really in love with Tanya. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well he sounds like a lovely sort of person...NOT! Ah the vanity of actors....Can't wait until he meets Bella!
Date: 04 Aug 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice to see Edwards POV
Date: 04 Aug 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
hi there! this looked like a good storyline to me so I decided to read it. So far, so good.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. My 13 yr old daughter and I spent a week at UCLA in June for camp, I was a chaperone. We stayed in Dykstra room 820. Very pretty campus but very hilly.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start to the story and looking forward to seeing it continue.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm looking forward to see where this goes.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes. I love this Charlie already. I feel bad he is lonely, but I guess every parents goes through this. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is this a Bella and Jacob story or Bella and Edward...
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I thought I made it clear in the summary that this was a Bella and Edward story.
It will start off with Edward and Bella been with other partners, for instant, Bella is with Jacob and Edward is with Tanya but Bella and Edward will be getting together further down the line and remember, I believe in a happily ever after.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
A good story so far. I can't wait for more.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is off to good start. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 31 Jul 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Sounds interesting that Jacob is at UCLA too. I assumed that he would be back in Forks from the description. Anyhow, I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes and meeting Edward and geting his backstory.