[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
The reporter deserved that
Date: 18 May 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMGosh! Poor Bella and Edward. All they wanted was a nice day together. As always, can't wait for more. I am going to have to check out your new story.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
i love love this edward who isnt such a gentleman that he cant call his ex out like he is, as well as his sister.
i certainly hope you also make bella be strong and not so insecure and stand up for herself against tanya and anyone else.
i enjoy stories where tanya tries her best to break up edward and bella but she is constantly thwarted by both edward and bella.
can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if all of jacob's friends are into boys & if so does Jacob entertain them?
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm happy for the couple. Maybe the 2 selfish exes should get together. Rose needs to have a new attitude adjustment. Carlisle and Esme need to have a long talk with her.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
You just know there is trouble ahead.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
It doesn't matter what her reasons are for her behavior. She's an adult and is responsible for her actions and choices.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very good! I have to wonder if T really does have something on Rose to make her keep acting like that. Look forward to nex t chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loving it! Such a great story.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 24 Mar 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hmmmm...I wonder what is really going on with Tanya and Rose? I am excited to find out! :)
Date: 23 Mar 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I really wish you would update more often. With so long between chapters, it becomes difficult to remember where we are in the story.
I do love reading it, though, so I will make notes so I that I can remember, as I do with some other stories. I love that Edward has finally acted on his feelings for Bella. I guess their path won't be smooth yes, as you have indicated this is only the beginning of the drama. I don't understand how Rose can keep choosing Tanya over her family. Maybe Edward is right in thinking Tanya has been blackmailing her. We shall see! Thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow wtf does tan have over rose that she's more worried about tan than her brother?
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Tanya is like a bad smell that wont leave. Still wondering what her and Jacob are up to??
Does she have something on Rose?? If so why doesnt Rose tell Edward. Keeping her brother would be better than losing him wouldnt it??
Looking forward to mroe :D
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it. I am glad they're going to spend the day together. I think Edward is onto something about Tanya having something in Rose!! I'm positive we haven't seen the last if Tanya but it was awesome having Edward call her out on her bullshit and even better when he was talking to himself about thinking with wrong head. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens on their outing!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to read the conversation between Edward and Bella. I am so glad that Edward put both Rose and Tanya in their place. But something tells me that Tanya is not going to be quite. I started reading the story you recommended. Very interesting.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
loved it cannot wait to see more read more I know tanya is going to be a problem later on but what is up with Rose why wouldn't she be happy that her brother is happy and we still haven't heard from Jacob yet oh sure and you'll be fireworks down the road
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it. Now they can move on. Oh I know that you have a lot of fall out planned, but at least they are moving in the right direction!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
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[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Go Edward! I have a feeling that Rose doesn't really hate Bella and that it is true that Tanya has something on her! What and the hell did Rose do that has her so afraid of Tanya?
I hope Tanya goes away but we all know that she isn't going to go away quietly!
Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow Fi...I did not expect that...I wanna know how everyone reacts!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Omg,love it can not wait for more.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so happy she told Jacob off. What a total douche. I'm glad Edward was there for her. She deserves to have someone there for her. In the short amount of time they've known each other, Bella has shown Edward that she really listened to what he was saying and got how important the watch was to him. Best thank you ever, a hot kiss that makes your toes curl!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so happy for them. Yes, it was a quick switch, but neither was happy for quite awhile in their previous relationship. When you know, you know.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Edward was there for her. I'm a little surprised that he just up and kissed her like that in front of his family. Oh by the way, the dream was really hot.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Whoot whoot happy holiday kisses are awesome!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved Bella and Edward's gifts to each other. And I am so happy that Bella finally broke up with Jacob once and for all. Tanya is history, Rose is out of there and Jacob has been kicked to the curb... now we can concentrate on Edward and Bella. Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
What an ending! Please don't let that be another dream!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it! His dream was hot and I want it to become real, but they both need to heal from their losses first. Or maybe not, judging by the heat coming from that kiss, in front of everyone, that they shared after he opened his gift from her....it's been a while for this chapter coming but well worth it! Thanks for this lovely story!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved this chapter! So glad she got rid of Jacob and not just let it slide and.take him back. Oh and I would love to see a sneak peak
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Seriously awesome story! Love that Edward finally manned up about Tanya and sent her packing, along with a bitchy Rose. But more importantly, that he finally owned up to his feelings for Bella and the overwhelming desire he has for her. Love that he kissed her in front of his family! Can't wait for the next chapters! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Something tells me we haven't seen the last of Tanya or Jacob.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved it! So glad Bella told Jake to go to hell! Loved that kiss can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
great update
yes they love each other
finally rid of tanya and the dog with a bit of luck
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow rude rose. I am glad edward was holding bella. I do however feel for her for jacob calling and doing that to her on the phone.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah Carlisle and Esme, send your nasty child away. She has lost all the manners I know she was taught. It is probably from hanging out with the French skank.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow what is roses deal?
Date: 19 Feb 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 19 Feb 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
Good riddance to the Ho's: Tanya, Rose and Jacob!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Okay, after all that, I"m really hoping the Bella just breaks up with Jacob and ends things with him for good. Drunk or not, not to mention the horrible way he's treated her lately, hooking up with Leah would definitely be the deal breaker. And Rosalie, I'm thrilled that Esme kicked her out. She and Tanya deserve each other. And now that she's gone, the rest of them can have a nice relaxing holiday!
On a side note, I'm very sorry to hear about your grandfather. You are in my thoughts and prayers during this difficult time.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter
well done
Date: 18 Feb 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Regardless of age, the loss of a loved one is always hard on us. You and your family have my sincere condolences.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it, hope you will post again soon.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the shout out.
I am so sorry about your grandfather. 101 is an accomplishment, but it hurts to lose someone no matter how old they are.
I am dying to know what is behind Rose's attitude- it's so extreme. Our couple seem to be getting closer quickly now. Can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it....I would like to see a preview of the next chapter..
Date: 18 Feb 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh! I can't believe that Jacob called her drunk and was with Leah too. That is just wrong. I was a little surprised when Alice slapped Rose in her own house. I will say that Rose deserved it.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
That's both Tanya and Rose put in their place! So sorry to hear about your granddad.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this chapter!!!! Tanya and Rose both got what's coming to them. Go Alice!! I love that Esme and Carlisle stood up for Bella. Jacob is such an asshole! Jealousy makes people do stupid things but he certainly pushed Bella right into Edward's arms. Hopefully Jacob will be the one with a thousand STDs after being with Leah. Esme is so sweet. I love that she is comforting Bella. It's so sad that Bella never felt that kind of mother's love.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yes! I hope Rose goes bye bye!!! Love this story!
I hope Jake gets a nice STD and his dick falls off!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad you are back with what I hope is the first of many more new chapters! I would love to be a fly on the wall of Tanya's hotel room! I bet she is not so much heartbroken as angry that she is losing her meal ticket! Rose needs to choose carefully here! Jacob is an idiot and doesn't deserve Bella. I love how you are slowly inching Bella and Edward toward each other....
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
love love love tanya's humiliation.
hope this continues and she never gets the upper hand...
but if i know these stories, somewhere along the way she will
cause trouble and doubts b/t bella and edward.
i love stories where tanya may make her attempts to cause
trouble, but they result in nada, zilch since edward catches everything
early on and squelches them giving no doubt to who his heart really
belongs to...
just glad she was thrown out by edward...now on to jake being thrown out by bella...
...to be continued... am waiting for the updates...
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
OMGosh!!!! I can not believe that Tanya said all of that in front of Esme. Boy she has some nerve. I do not blame Esme for throwing her out. Glad that Edward said he was done with her.
Boy he already has it bad for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Go Esme!! Thank God Edward saw the light bevoke he was tied to her legally.
Date: 15 Jan 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay Esme!!!!! Good riddance Tanya! Loved the showdown. Too bad Bella didn't get a chance to say anything back to Tanya. I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love the way Edward threw out the trash, Tanya!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Whoa...she was awful....glad she's gping! Yeah Esme!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for adding the English translation in the sentence. I made my reading comprehension easier.
If Tanya and Jacob ever get together and compare notes, look out.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
I just don't understand why some people like to get into others personal lives.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
I suppose talking like that could be a real turn on if the couple were alone or knew that no one else could understand them. Tanya knew Esme would understand. Who talks like that in front of parents? Is this how she'd speak in front of her own parents?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Finally..... I love Esme
Date: 14 Jan 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad that proper action was taken and he saw her for who she was. I was losing hope there for awhile when he forgave her for doing drugs. So I think I will sing: Ding Dong the witch is dead (for now), Ding Dong the witch is dead (for now), and hopefully for life!!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
OUCH!!! He needed to toss Rose too, cause there is no way she is going to be nothing but a bit*h to Bella!
Loving Esme though! YOU GO MOM!!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
First of all, I love the English translation of the French put in brackets right afterward. It helps me understand the flow of the story better than having to stop reading and go to my phone to type in a long phrase for translation. Thanks for that.
Tanya has got to be the phoniest, worst skank in history. Good for Edward for finally kicking her to the curb! Rosalie is loyal to her friend, which is admirable, if it weren't for the fact that Tanya is dragging her down and away from her family. Rose can only lose here if she continues to act like this! Kudos to Bella for speaking up to Tanya and asking for her to speak in a a language she can understand. I'm loving this and hope for more soon! Thanks for the shout out again! I can't believe I'm hitting the numbers so often!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Tanya brought that on all by herself - and way to go, Esme for telling her like it is and Edward for finally kicking her to the curb. I'm so hoping the next one to catch Esme's wrath will be Rosalie. I think that would be even more exciting than Tanya's grand exit!!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
YESSSSSSSSSSS, Ding Dong the Witch is gone
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it your story is great can not wait for more.Tanya got what she deserve ,any one call me a whore would have any hair left on there head (lol),just wish Bella beat her down next ,rose too.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
omg love it bye bye tanya lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Freaking love this story and wish you would post more often
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
YES!!!!!!! That was AWESOME and worth the wait. Although I have a feeling that isn't the last we will hear from Tanya.
Great chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very good, both Esme and Bella should have bitch slapped her
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
ESME IS THE GREATEST!! I freakin love this!! I love the way way Edward went about tossing her out!! lol :)=)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hot damn way to go Esme and Edward!!! Rose is going to have a fit but after the way that bitch just talked to everyone in front of her mother, knowing full well she understands French, then if she picks Tanya's side I say kick her ass out too!!! I sure hope Rose comes around for the families sake though!
I sure hope Tanya doesn't have a key to Edwards place because that girl is vindictive enough to go set Edwards place on fire!
Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
That break up was way more than I expected! Go, Esme!
Date: 13 Jan 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
Rose has some nerve. I am glad that she was caught yelling at Bella. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope Edward talks to his parents. They need to know, so they can prepare for the exodus and why it's happening.
Date: 06 Jan 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yes--go back to LA unless Mom is going to get involved and put a muzzle on Rose.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! Rose is even more of a conniving bitch than I expected! Poor Bella! How awful to be treated like that when all she did was work her ass off to earn the internship and agree to go with them for Christmas. I'm really looking forward to Esme giving Rose a good ass chewing and kicking Tonya out on her French ass! Jacob is ridiculously annoying and I'm waiting for Bella to seriously kick him to the curb. I was so excited to see that you had posted a new chapter. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Date: 04 Jan 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
YOU KNOW ROSE WANT TO STOP SHE IS FOR TANYA BELLA NEED A BACK BONE TO TELL ROSE AND TANYA WERE TO GO :D
Date: 04 Jan 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think that Rosalie liked the idea of him and Tanya together because she would have an in to all the best fashion and most popular celebrities by association. If they break up she will have lost that for good. Although selfish, I think she really believes that Bella is causing trouble. However, her high school insecurities are the ones causing most of it. Tanya needs to go anyway, she is unpredictible when doing drugs.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well I wouldn't stay in that house, her and Alice can get a motel room....because Tanya and Rose will still be there glaring
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
What a bitch!!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
They should go back to LA..Rose is up to no good.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why is he with Tanya at all? Seriously! She is just as bad as Rosalie!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Rose is being a big ol bitch!! What is her problem? What will happen next? I believe that Tanya has sort of brainwashed Rose, at least I hope Rose isn't that big of a bitch! Please update soon!