Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is a real piece of work! I think she is high desperate and a major bitch, and extremely selfish! I'm glad Bella stood up to her. She created her own mess and she needs to clean it up. I'm hoping Edward heard about Rosalie's visit at the campus and asks Bella about, so that she can tell him everything now. A lot can happen in a week. I'm sure Edward will want security for Bella, especially after he sees the bruises on Bella from Jacob. He's getting more persistent and more aggressive in trying to get Bella back. He's a ticking time bomb! Can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, I believe Rosalie is desperate and a bitch. It's okay for her to blame Bella, who is an innocent bystander in all this, then for her to take a stand and tell her family the truth. She's gotta know that the truth is going to come out eventually. At this point, I'd rather Bella just fill Edward in on everything now and save herself any future misery.
And as for Jacob, Bella should have said something to campus security about him, instead of just letting him walk away after threatening her like he did. She needs to fill Edward in on that, too.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think Rosalie is a selfish bitch! Instead of owning up to her mistakes she wants Bella and Edward to pay the price! She doesn't deserve her famility and for that matter, except for Emmett I highly doubt her family would disown her.
Jacob is getting dangerous and I hope Bella tells Edward about it before Rosalie tries to use Jacob as a tool to break Bella and Edward up!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is only thinking of herself. She needs to lose Emmett over her having an abortion. Jacob needs someone to really hurt him before he ends up hurting Bella. Tanya, Rosalie and Jacob need to be find a way out of this story.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving your story... yes your french translation isn't the best but google will do that to any language. It needs to be updated!
So happy that Edward and Bella finally talked. Question and you might have already answered in the next chapter but ... winter in Chigago how is their flowers still in bloom? I'm guessing an oops moment.
With all of that said can't wait to press next and read more!
Date: 17 Aug 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think that Jacob is the one that tapped her on the shoulder. Due to the fact he is popping up lately.
I think Lauren wanting Edward is very predictable. I could see Tanya trying to move back in, but calling Bella a nothing, has been done over and over. And after Edward telling Lauren no, and she still throwing herself at him, and calling Bella names in the process??... smh.. move on Barbie!
Anyway, looking forward to more:D
Date: 17 Aug 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
snarky bella shows up against a cop but she couldnt say 2 words
to fight against Tanya and Rose?
just doesnt seem right.
but love this story and how edward is not afraid to show tanya and rose how
upset he is and isnt afraid to call them out loudly in front of others.
so many of other fics are about edward being such a "gentleman" and has no clue
about the underlying scheming of the ex-, ie. tanya or others and dont call them out but doing it so privately.
it is refreshing to see some real humiliation due for tanya and hopefully continue
to thwart any further meddlings by her or anyone else against bella and edward.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it! I love how badass Bella was with the scumbag police officer. What an asshole! I think things are going to be crazy for Bella as she adjusts to the paparazzi. And of course, Jacob and Tanya are going to make things ugly or try to at least. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it, of course. I have enjoyed this story from the very beginning! Now that he has declared his intention, which I suspected all along, I'm hoping the path will be swift and sure for them. But...probably not! Love that she's still untouched....for him.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was sweet, but there are so many questions to be answered. First is Rosalie and Tanya's story, then the set up with the cops and Jacob's behavior especially with Leah. If he has the sexton and a submissive girl then what is his hang up with Bella? As for going forward, there is her classes and the production and the paps. The way I see it you will be on this story for awhile. Which is a good thing because I like it so far.
Date: 19 May 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was a sweet date. Too bad the paparazzi had to show up, especially the douce that provoked Edward. What a terrible way for their evening to end. I hope he's able to get out of this mess. Hopefully Bella doesn't get too upset or blame herself. Can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 18 May 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
You did a good job of showing just how disgusting and spiteful the paparazzi can be. They do really act like that! I wonder if charges against Edward will stick when it is brought to light what he said about Bella. It was said to provoke a reaction, so Edward shouldnt be held responsible! I'm glad they are finally out together. I enjoy this story but am sorry to tell you that I won't read any Fifty Shades fan fics. There is another one out there that I am also not reading. I don't see the point about a fan fic about a fan fic. Sorry, but that's my opinion.