Date: 17 May 2022 4:11 PM Title: Outtake 1
Such a good story. I really wish it was finished.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 10:21 AM Title: Outtake 1
I really hope you update soon so we can see what happens.
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:17 AM Title: Authors note
i cant wait for you to finish this story i am enjoying it very much
Date: 08 Mar 2017 9:46 PM Title: Authors note
I hope you will post soon, it is a great story
Date: 07 Oct 2016 3:17 AM Title: Authors note
can't wait for more. I am really enjoying the story.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 5:02 AM Title: Authors note
Please update
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:47 PM Title: Authors note
Thank you, Happy New year to you and I'm glad to hear it will be finished as it is a favourite of mine.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 4:01 AM Title: Authors note
Sorry to hear about your laptop. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter, after you get your new laptop. Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a safe and Happy New Year!
Date: 10 Dec 2015 3:39 PM Title: Authors note
Hope you get a good deal on a new one soon.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:29 PM Title: Authors note
Please post when you can.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:38 AM Title: Authors note
I will be patiently waiting for your comeback. Have a very merry Christmas and may the new year be full of good surprises. All the love from Chile.
Date: 09 Dec 2015 8:58 PM Title: Authors note
Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you too. Looking forward to reading more
Date: 09 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Authors note
Thank you for the update. I am sad about your old computer, but very happy that you took the time to let us know what is happening and that you will finish the story. Happy Holidays to you and yours!
Date: 09 Dec 2015 5:39 PM Title: Authors note
Hurry back - good luck computer hunting.
Date: 09 Dec 2015 5:17 PM Title: Authors note
Miss this story. Thanks for letting us know. Return when you can.
Date: 09 Dec 2015 5:05 PM Title: Authors note
Ok. See you in the new year.
Date: 14 Nov 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 04 Nov 2015 7:16 PM Title: Outtake 1
Those two skanks are a match made in hell! They deserve each other, scheming losers that they are.This was a deliciously entertaining chapter!
Date: 03 Nov 2015 6:53 PM Title: Outtake 1
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 4:47 PM Title: Outtake 1
They are both delusional
Date: 03 Nov 2015 3:04 PM Title: Outtake 1
Loving it but jeez Tanya and Jacob are delusional.
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 03 Nov 2015 2:58 PM Title: Outtake 1
Thanks for telling us how Jacob and Tanya got together. They,are going to be trouble.
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rose is Rose. She is selfish to the extreme. I don't blame Bella for telling her to come clean herself or Bella will do it for her. Tch, tch.
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is a real piece of work! I think she is high desperate and a major bitch, and extremely selfish! I'm glad Bella stood up to her. She created her own mess and she needs to clean it up. I'm hoping Edward heard about Rosalie's visit at the campus and asks Bella about, so that she can tell him everything now. A lot can happen in a week. I'm sure Edward will want security for Bella, especially after he sees the bruises on Bella from Jacob. He's getting more persistent and more aggressive in trying to get Bella back. He's a ticking time bomb! Can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story.
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
She's a bitch. Not fooled at all. Glad you'really back!
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good so far, keep writing
Date: 28 Oct 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is so selfish. Bella better be careful and tell Edward about Jacob. She now has 3 enemies. She needs some help for her safety.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think that Rose is a manipulator.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Rose is just a bitch since she only thinks of herself. Great chapter can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, I believe Rosalie is desperate and a bitch. It's okay for her to blame Bella, who is an innocent bystander in all this, then for her to take a stand and tell her family the truth. She's gotta know that the truth is going to come out eventually. At this point, I'd rather Bella just fill Edward in on everything now and save herself any future misery.
And as for Jacob, Bella should have said something to campus security about him, instead of just letting him walk away after threatening her like he did. She needs to fill Edward in on that, too.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
What is the deal with Jacob? He was the one screwing around 1st with Leah. Rose is all about herself. Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
WOOHOOO SO glad you came back to this story.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
WOW!! I LOVE THIS!! Rosalie was at the top of my list...she is definitely a desperate bitch! ;) Edward is absolutely adorable! I am so excited for more!! :)
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Damn I thought Rosalie was going to be on Bella's side then BAM the bitch true colors come out..
Date: 26 Oct 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
Is Rose setting Bella up? I don't think Bella should tell Rose's story, unless wonders aloud in her presence what Tanya has on Rose. I think Edward suspected Tanya had a hold on her a while back.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie showed her true colors! She isn't sorry and hasn't changed! Love the end. More, please?
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think Rosalie is a selfish bitch! Instead of owning up to her mistakes she wants Bella and Edward to pay the price! She doesn't deserve her famility and for that matter, except for Emmett I highly doubt her family would disown her.
Jacob is getting dangerous and I hope Bella tells Edward about it before Rosalie tries to use Jacob as a tool to break Bella and Edward up!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is selfish
Date: 26 Oct 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awww too short for the long wait but I understand RL always comes first. READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 26 Oct 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Rosalie is only thinking of herself. She needs to lose Emmett over her having an abortion. Jacob needs someone to really hurt him before he ends up hurting Bella. Tanya, Rosalie and Jacob need to be find a way out of this story.
Date: 14 Oct 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is an awesome story
Date: 24 Aug 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm thinking the tap on the shoulder is from Jacob. That guy is quickly becoming a stalker, which is not a good thing at all, just annoying
Date: 23 Aug 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loving this story. I am so glad that Bella is standing up to Lauren. I am thinking it is Jacob tapping on her shoulder.
Date: 23 Aug 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
I really hope u finish these story's ,I was just starting to really get into them n then there over. Lol
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this feisty Bella. They are going to have to fight for this relationship, but it is worth it to be happy.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
nice to see you back. they seemed to settle into work /school fine. i think it must be her ex. the no good dog!
merrily
Kat
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wonder when / if Lauren will take the hint?! Who might it be Jake, maybe.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving your story... yes your french translation isn't the best but google will do that to any language. It needs to be updated!
So happy that Edward and Bella finally talked. Question and you might have already answered in the next chapter but ... winter in Chigago how is their flowers still in bloom? I'm guessing an oops moment.
With all of that said can't wait to press next and read more!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
So somehow Tanya is on campus to bother her...great update fi!!
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad your back! Great update...I hope it's not Jake. I think it'll be Tanya, she's been way too quiet. Thanks.
Date: 18 Aug 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
: / ummm .... mmmmmmm READ YOU SOON
Date: 18 Aug 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter. I'm glad bella is standing up for herself. These characters really don't like when people tell them no. Lol
Date: 17 Aug 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Aug 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love how fiesty Bella is. It's awesome! I really love this story. I think it's Tanya that's there to see Bella! looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
so nice to get a new chapter! I love how she told Lauren off! Good for her. I see Edward liked it too! I haven't a clue who tapped he on the shoulder of the way out of the coffee shop at the end. Jacob?
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG! I can't wait!! I need more!! Please!! I love this! :) My guess is Rosalie? Because really why would it be. lol
Date: 17 Aug 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think that Jacob is the one that tapped her on the shoulder. Due to the fact he is popping up lately.
I think Lauren wanting Edward is very predictable. I could see Tanya trying to move back in, but calling Bella a nothing, has been done over and over. And after Edward telling Lauren no, and she still throwing herself at him, and calling Bella names in the process??... smh.. move on Barbie!
Anyway, looking forward to more:D
Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no! Could it be Tanya? I actually hope it isn't.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter and glad she put her in her place.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
snarky bella shows up against a cop but she couldnt say 2 words
to fight against Tanya and Rose?
just doesnt seem right.
but love this story and how edward is not afraid to show tanya and rose how
upset he is and isnt afraid to call them out loudly in front of others.
so many of other fics are about edward being such a "gentleman" and has no clue
about the underlying scheming of the ex-, ie. tanya or others and dont call them out but doing it so privately.
it is refreshing to see some real humiliation due for tanya and hopefully continue
to thwart any further meddlings by her or anyone else against bella and edward.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am thinking that it is not jacob. And that it may be Tanya
Date: 17 Aug 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
I suppose Jacob would be too obvious
Date: 17 Aug 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it.... leah?
Date: 17 Aug 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh hell who is it? Tanya, Rose or Lauren? Or is it the ass hole Jake? Can't wait to find out!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 06 Jun 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving this story
Date: 05 Jun 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it! I love how badass Bella was with the scumbag police officer. What an asshole! I think things are going to be crazy for Bella as she adjusts to the paparazzi. And of course, Jacob and Tanya are going to make things ugly or try to at least. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
Absolutely loving it. I just can't get enough.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it
Date: 03 Jun 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Good chapter. I am glad he got their status settled before dealing with the others. Good job bella for sticking up for herself and edward too!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it, of course. I have enjoyed this story from the very beginning! Now that he has declared his intention, which I suspected all along, I'm hoping the path will be swift and sure for them. But...probably not! Love that she's still untouched....for him.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it, can not wait till they make a press release...
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
So she is a virgin! Good. I hate Jacob!
What did the cop have againist Edward?
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love it, keep it coming
Date: 03 Jun 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Another wonderful chapter!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was sweet, but there are so many questions to be answered. First is Rosalie and Tanya's story, then the set up with the cops and Jacob's behavior especially with Leah. If he has the sexton and a submissive girl then what is his hang up with Bella? As for going forward, there is her classes and the production and the paps. The way I see it you will be on this story for awhile. Which is a good thing because I like it so far.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE IT!! He is so sweet! :)
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Cant wait for more loved it
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! I really loved it. I always love it when a guy admits his feelings instead of fighting them.
Date: 23 May 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow a duh ed...jail?
Date: 21 May 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward was provoked.
Date: 19 May 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was so staged.
Date: 19 May 2015 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Considering that the cops were there so fast, I'm guessing Tanya had a hand in the setup.
Date: 19 May 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Once again I must wait for another chapter... but wait I shall. (lol) Poor Edward... I have a feeling Tanya had a hand in what happend. Please update as soon as you can. ♥ READ YOU SOON.
Date: 19 May 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was a sweet date. Too bad the paparazzi had to show up, especially the douce that provoked Edward. What a terrible way for their evening to end. I hope he's able to get out of this mess. Hopefully Bella doesn't get too upset or blame herself. Can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 18 May 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Will the first date did not go all that well, I hope Bella can be a strong one thru this shit storm that is about to happen.
Date: 18 May 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, that was a check of an ending to their date- winding up in jail. Now at least the whole world will know at once. Thanks for the update!
Date: 18 May 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 18 May 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
You did a good job of showing just how disgusting and spiteful the paparazzi can be. They do really act like that! I wonder if charges against Edward will stick when it is brought to light what he said about Bella. It was said to provoke a reaction, so Edward shouldnt be held responsible! I'm glad they are finally out together. I enjoy this story but am sorry to tell you that I won't read any Fifty Shades fan fics. There is another one out there that I am also not reading. I don't see the point about a fan fic about a fan fic. Sorry, but that's my opinion.