Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:49 AM Title: Epilogue
sweet little story - I've really enjoyed reading it
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved the story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Kat
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:22 PM Title: Epilogue
GREAT STORY! Thanks for sharing it with me!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: Rescue
I have really loved this story. I don't have a suggestion for the epilogue, but I have faith that whatever you choose to do with it - it will be fabulous.
Kat
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:50 AM Title: Rescue
great chapter. glad the truth is out,.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Rescue
no more hiding! good!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Forward
OH NO! Hope they're ok.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: Making Up
whoa!!! they got married... and did the nasty... SCORE!! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:35 PM Title: Forward
well damn she just has rotten luck. please don't let it last too long.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:18 AM Title: Forward
Poor Edward. Still being kept a secret and now he has to be so worried over Bella. Great chapter. Kat
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:33 AM Title: Making Up
Okay loved that.. nice surprise.. it is so lovely.. and perfect.. God I wish I didn't have everyone at my wedding and it was just me and my husband..
IF ONLY....
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:31 PM Title: Making Up
YAY! A wedding and some hot sexin'! LOVE IT!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Making Up
Beautifully written. I love the Venetian Hotel - what a perfect place for them to get married. I am so glad that they got married somewhere classy rather than one of the cheesy chapels. Kat
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 5:10 AM Title: Making Up
Great chapter. Edward's confession that he felt like something had broken inside of him because Mike's death gave him the chance to have what he wanted most was tear worthy. I'm glad that the three days they spent apart made them both finally admit their love for each other and realize that they didn't want to spend another day apart.
Fate can be a funny thing sometimes and for it to step in and give them the opportunity to get married right then and there was amazing. The proposal was beautiful and him asking her to make them a family was sooo sweet. Edward also proved the depth of his love for Bella when he was buying their rings. To buy chains to put their rings on if she still wasn't ready to tell anyone, really what man would love his wife enough to keep their marriage a secret until she was ready to make it known. I hope Bella loves him enough to tell everyone that they are married.
Awesome chapter. So wonderfully written. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:09 PM Title: Roller-coaster
Happy Birthday. I loved the chapter. Kat
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:18 PM Title: Roller-coaster
Nice one!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:50 PM Title: Roller-coaster
LOL loved your a/n!
great chapter.. I loved the whole thing.. want to smack jacob out however.. smuck that he is...
keep up the good work!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 7:30 PM Title: Roller-coaster
so glad that they got that all cleared up cant wait till Vegas!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:01 PM Title: THE First Weekend
Yay for Edward! Finally starting to get his family nights! I know there is going to be some angst at some point, but I'm glad it's not over the top just yet. Keep updating, I love your storyline. (Especially the fact that Mike isn't the bad guy in this.)
Date: 24 May 2010 9:54 PM Title: THE First Weekend
progress... that's good!
Date: 21 May 2010 5:01 PM Title: THE First Weekend
loved it
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 4:51 PM Title: A Miracle
Damn this is hot! Saw it on the library featured page and decided to give it a shot. Hmm....so how will Mike disappear and how do we get Jacob to run off?? So much fun *evil laugh* you shall have!!! The attraction is already there so the bumps in the road just need to be eradicated!
Date: 16 May 2010 11:54 PM Title: Very Merry
aww- they kiss, and talk *sigh*
Date: 15 May 2010 6:57 PM Title: One Breath
oh wow- i didn't think THAT was gonna happen.
Date: 15 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: A Miracle
aww man... so jake's the ex, mike's the present, maybe edward's the future?.... here's to hoping ;)
Date: 11 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Old and New
i loved it cant wait till the next one
Date: 08 May 2010 10:33 AM Title: Old and New
I agree.. 1st real date.. yay!!!!
really enjoying the story.. can't wait until the next chapter..
Date: 08 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Old and New
Incredible chapter. Kat
Date: 07 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Old and New
amazing chapter! Loved it! ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 6:21 AM Title: Very Merry
Ahhh thank god you told me that chapter 6 is soon.. how cruel.. to leave it like that! LOL yeah yeah I know.. and I have to say I can't talk I love cliffy's and expectations.. i just want more of this story.. great work..
until next chapter..
Date: 07 May 2010 4:28 AM Title: Moving On
hmmm nice.. like that authors note.. that is great..
Date: 07 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: End of the Beginning
and yep I am crying... STILL...
great story though.. the kids just pull your heart strings more..
Date: 07 May 2010 2:44 AM Title: One Breath
okay.. I am balling my eyes out.. I hate to cry.. I avoid tear jerkers all the time.. but then can't stop reading them if I stumble onto them and the story is brilliant..
well done.. I am going to feature it I hope you don't mind..
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it. I'd be honored if you would feature it. I'll be posting the next chapter in the morning.
Date: 07 May 2010 2:30 AM Title: A Miracle
wow this is a very exciting little story, young lady LOL I really enjoyed chapter 1.. moving on..
Date: 01 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Very Merry
aww that was awesome!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Very Merry
I am guessing Have You Ever comes next chappie. But I am already liking the story.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:23 PM Title: Very Merry
I do love it! looking forward to more of their relationship.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:05 PM Title: Very Merry
So sweet...progress. I can't wait for New Years now. Good job. Kat
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:14 AM Title: Moving On
awesome story so far! Loving it! Keep writing...can't wait till next friday :)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:01 AM Title: Moving On
I'm loving your story, it's sooo good!!!
Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:45 AM Title: Moving On
I'm excited to see what Edward has planned for Bella and Jessie :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:18 AM Title: End of the Beginning
Awesome chapter! Angela's so great.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:38 AM Title: Moving On
I love that this story isn't about the kids. I usually avoid stories that have children in them, but this one I really like. I love that the kids are factors to be considered but that the story is more about coping and the adult relationships.
Are your original fiction fnovels on the TWCS library? I need to add them to my 'want to read' list.
As always...great job. Kat
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:36 AM Title: One Breath
Wow! So well written. What an emotional chapter. I'm hooked on the story, thanks for a brilliant read!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:04 AM Title: End of the Beginning
Thanks for the update. Nice chapter. I can't wait to see how you have Edward and Bella finally cross that line and become a couple. Kat
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: One Breath
It is sad to see Mike die but I am sure it was the only way for Bella and Edward to have a chance to be together. I know it will take awhile for Bella to work through the lost of her husband but I have a feeling Edward will be there every step of the way for Bella and her kids. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:00 PM Title: One Breath
So sweet and sad. I don't like thinking of her settling for Edward just because she lost Mike (he deserves more). I'm sure that will make us see that she isn't settling and that she truly finds everything that she never knew was missing from her life, with Edward. Kat
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:24 AM Title: One Breath
So, I pretty much cried through the whole second half of the chapter. I'm really intrigued with this story and how it will play out. Sad to see mike die but this IS a bella/edward story after all.
jacob needs to go away already
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: A Miracle
thought chapter two was beautifully written brought tears to my eyes!! can't wait to read more!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 8:24 PM Title: A Miracle
Very interesting start! I want to know what's on page four!!!!
Post more soon!
Date: 03 Feb 2010 11:00 PM Title: A Miracle
I was familiar with some of your stories on FF so when I saw that you had started posting a story here...I just had to read it. I can't wait to see how this story evolves. ......... Kat
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2010 11:01 PM Title: A Miracle
oooh i really liked this beginning. I can't wait to find out what happens with mike! great chapter