Date: 09 Sep 2021 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 25 Jul 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Been following your story for a while and came across it in my favorites and read it again seen you haven’t updated in a while hope everything is ok with you and your loved ones
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
yumminess abounding. Dancing lemon time!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
so Sorry to hear of your losses. Hope things get better for you. Woot woot for your degree. Isn't that the best feeling?
Dayum. That was a Hawt Chapter!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
those two are just too cute together.
The C word is something no one wants to hear. Hope your family pulls through.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved her standing up to Rose. Peter's secret is worrying me.....
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
lol those two love to push each others lust buttons. Ah so Em and Rose did say goodbye at least. Never sat well with me that no one did in books
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
glad she was able to get her story out. ohh so Charlie and Sue were already married. Wonder how the mate conversation is going to go. nail biter there
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Glad she said the things she did to him. Ah Em and Rose huh. Can't wait to see her and Rose go at it verbally that is.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad he told her everything; the good, the bad, and the ugly.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
yea she's gonna get burnt with all the teasing. LOL.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
Those two are going to explode when they finally do it. Yummy.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
oooh she took the first kiss. Niiiiccee. Well that was a hell of an ending cliffy. Glad I got the next chapter to go to. LOL
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
lol for getting them all to help clean up the bar. Glad she asked him to come home with her.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the more secure in herself Bella. Gotta love Major mode.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love Garrett too. I guessed Garrett at beginning of this chapter. Glad I was right. hmmm is G warning them about Maria and her minions I'm guessing?
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
I thought the same as Spaz but now I'm wondering if it was Charlotte. Love the sibling banter with J and C. LOVE the images of J in sexy western wear.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
I remember my time in Wichita Falls (Air Force). Cool place for her to stop. Guessing its Peter since she would have said Jasper if it were him. Glad the pack was there for her though.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love Peter for being there for him.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
How in the world have I missed this B/J story?!?!?!. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
this is an awesome story, sorry about your family I hope you can find peace in all you do
Date: 23 Aug 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well I was really enjoying this story I hope you get the chance to finish it! I hope Bella gets turned before all hell breaks lose and that she is a badass,with kick ass powers! Again Good Luck!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Lovin this story. .update soon :)
Date: 01 Aug 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
So glad to read your work again! I more than understand about prioritizing time when loved ones are ill! I went through that with both my parents. Our priorities shift and change for a while. I'm glad the new treatment seems to be working. I'll keep those prayers going, just the same!
I really enjoyed these chapters. Bella and Jasper are so comfortable and trusting with one. Another here. Emmett, Rose, Charlotte, Peter and Garrett just round out the family. I look forward to your updates - whenever they may be!!! Think of it this way, the time between was a perfect excuse to reread the whole story whenI saw the new chapters there! Thank you for he lovely gift of your work and yourself!
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
vamp her cowboy
Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
This is an awesome story. I hope you kill off Edward and Alice. I hope your family member gets better. Cannot wait for the next chappie. Great job
Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
I enjoyed the story so far. With care, I think it shows real promise. You've set it up well and now you need to redefine the characters. For instance, there is a world of differance between Jasper and the Major. He must sound and behave like the Major now. Please keep writing. I'd like to see where this story takes us! Thanks for all the hard work!