[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
:) Just adding more questions, bring them on.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
they were all affected by her dissappearence.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
yeah, but he hasn't seen HER boobs, has he? seen one, seen 'em all? really? I think not.....why did she have to leave? who forced her? I know....I'll keep reading to find out...
Date: 21 Jul 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
But jasper help her get away so he let her take his truck well it is good Bella is getting better.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
okay so i believe renee called letting bella know she was dying and she just up and left her life---wow
something happen after that and she got herself in a pickle and jasper was able to come to her aide and help her get out---of what not sure
loving it and wanting more
thank you
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
edward is with someone
but then again bella has been gone 10 years
so of course he has moved on
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
ahhhh love esme the natural mom and peace keeper
look forward to bella and charlie coming together again and hearing her reasons for leaving
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
how sad. migranes are not to be messed with
i am glad they found her
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
no i really think and hope that she is having an attack of some sort
Date: 20 Jul 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
maybe there is more to her leaving then he knows, maybe her mother forced her
Date: 20 Jul 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well Bella was probably married to Riley and has a child by him whether he is good or not is to be determined.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh yes, I remember that now....think I'll continue to read on TWCS...thanks and yes I continue to enjoy it very much.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
so chapter 10 here is chapter 11 on ffn...I'd rather read here. why the discrepancy?
Author's Response:
Hi, judyblue95
There is an extra 'chapter' on FFN because someone left me a review under a 'guest' account and I couldn't respond to it. Instead, I replied to them via a chapter. There is no difference in the actual story. I just didn't want to put up my reply over here on this site because the review came from FFN only.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story <3
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Renee I knew she had to be involved her evil plot I am sure good thing jasper was there to help.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
So much could of happened to her I does not seem good at all but I am sure you will slowly unravel into a brilliant revelation.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh good Tia not Tanya but it still going to be hard on them. I can't wait to see where she has been.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no not Tanya he is with Tanya I guess he moved on what will it mean now that Bella is back.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Interesting twists.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Boooooo. I know it was unrealistic to think Edward wouldn't be in a relationship after 10 years but having a live in girlfriend, fiancé or being married.......worried about my HEA!
Great story!
Date: 15 Jul 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think she was kidnapped and just escaped!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
*gasp* Oh my!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my goodness. This is crazy. Poor Charlie is going to pull all of his hair out.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looks like she found what she was running to.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
This slow unraveling is killing me, LOL! ;)
xo
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Will Alice and Esme attempt to take the baby so social services isn't involved?
Then again Charlie is the next of kin so the child has a place to go.
Wouldn't Bella's drivers license have an address on it from the state she was living in?
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I had no idea how crippling an attack from a Hemiplegic Migraine could be. And the fact that birth control is a huge NO is also a shocker.
I hope you and your doctor have everything well under control to lead a relaxed and enjoyable life.
I think Reese will be getting a medical briefing from anyone and everyone associated with the Chief.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Fine, you have changed my mind about several thoughts.
Isabella has been drugged by someone and she was trying to run away with the infant. But who's child is it?
Angela will know the social history immediately of Isabella.
Reese is the new cop. HM, didn't figure that one.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, Jasper must be the new cop. Or maybe Emmett.
Edward is a doctor like his father.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is Edward the new cop?
Bella's married to Riley?
Can Alic still have children?
Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well at least she is in good hand now and will get the proper treatment. Esmeralda is a force to be reckoned with.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
where has Bella been all this time for everyone to be so unaware
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well thank God Edward knew what to do! Geez!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have silent migraine, it makes me loose partial sight in both eyes, can't see first 3 letters of any word or the front wheel of a car can see the rest. Was very scary until I was diagnosed. Good story so far, intriguing.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
What was she thinking taking the pill. My sister gets them bad her whole right side will just go numb and she will fall to the ground. It will make her so sick. Now we know what her problem is. Now to get her better.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Reece should be afraid
Date: 05 Jul 2014 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very good, very, very good. Liking this more and more.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh that does not sound good. Happy 4th be safe and have fun.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love the British term cuppa my pastor is from Manchester and his will say grab yourself a cuppa.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't think she's drunk
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting new little story here. I am sure I will love it.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
i am hoping she wasn't driving drunk with a child in the car but maybe sick diabetes or i do not know something that makes you act drunk but you are not
if she is shame on her the child should be taken
Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow a drunk Bella with an infant in the car...
Date: 29 Jun 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to whas to come
Date: 29 Jun 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Alice! Not all doctors are smart!!
So is Bella drunk or has something happened to her?
How will she and Edwad meet?
Is that her baby in the back seat?
I need answers!! :)
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Isabella Biers??!! Oh! Woot woot! hee hee hee
So happy you're back, bb!
xo