Date: 25 Oct 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
Gah!!! I have to wait for updates now! Love this story and am so glad I gave it a chance!
Date: 11 Jun 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bella has had a stressful life for 10 years. Now she needs to enjoy life. Get her GED. Go to college. What ever she wants.
Date: 08 Jun 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
Still loving this story!
Date: 07 Jun 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 33
I have forgotten this story. I'll have to catch up later. I;ll save it for then...
Date: 06 Jun 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad to see you updating. Real life gets in the way sometimes but with all you do for people we appreciate you taking time out of your busy schedule for is. Your worth the wait. Hope things are getting better and less crazy.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
Is Jasper in need of any assistance? He didn't receive anything from his brother's will but Bella could help him out as well.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
So happy to see update thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good story, keep on writing
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
OK all caught up and this is so good. Bella is so lost on what to do she needs to just take small steps.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
That was a great date they will work it out. Love the rings and so happy some of the family is there.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love Grandma and Grandpa they are so cute
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think Bella and the baby should take the money and put it to good use unstead of using it to be mean like he did.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 28
It means the baby gets it all Ha Ha.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good by to Peter I am sad that Jasper had to do it but glad he is gone.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
I like the saying you can pick you butt pick your nose but you cant pick your family lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Poor girl could not even enjoy her birthday
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
She will not be able to get away from Edward now
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jasper is going to take his brother down and Edward is going to take Bella on a trip?
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad the Tia and Edward knew it was not going anywhere between them but Tia knows that Edward loves Bella more than anything.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is seeing a future she thought she would never have a chance at and now she wants it bad.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
He cant get Bella off his mind ever
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is getting to know her again and finding out how much he still loves her.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Is Edward going to go on the run with her and the baby
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Charlie the adult napper lol
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Tia is not going to be around for long other than just a friend.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love how they all want to protect her and love her
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
She is starting to talk that is great
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Emmett just put everything out there did Bella know about Tia
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella so scared for so long. I hope Jasper want to get back at his brother take him down.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Now they know that it was not her chose to leave. Riley is connected to Renee
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Renee tricked her
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
They have to get her to talk.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think they are going to be real upset with they find out what happened to her.
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no he is with Tanya
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
So Bella was kidnapped??
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
We have adoped all of our kids it take more than just an egg and sperm to make parents
. Has Bella been being abused?
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have had a few migraines nothing like these but they are not pleasent I would never want to experance anything like this.
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
No I think it is medical and I think Angela knows her to
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
He has a great family
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella's reluctance makes perfect sense. She was nothing more than a way to make money then she became property to an abusive couple, finding out she was to be used as a breeding machine to fix their problem of a lack of an heir.
Will Jasper's lack of remorse for his brother cause any red flags for his involvement?
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
Jasper is smart and patient. He will help Bella figure out what is best for Eloise. She doesn't have to be in control of the money. Jasper could until Eloise is old enough.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is a excellent mother and Edward is a wonderful father to that beautiful baby girl so it is understandable that they worry. Poor jasper having to deal with Emmett being all protective big brother. Wonderful chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm still not sure that Jasper is completely what he seems to be. Is he truly on Bella's side? I hope so! I know he loves his niece, but what about his brother? I know that Peter was not a nice person, to put it mildly, but was there no loyalty at all? I hope all is as it seems and that Bella can now start to heal....
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
just because people have money doesn't mean they do not have problems
they have a different set of problems but just a little more security
bella has alot to think about
loving it
Date: 07 Oct 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great story.
- Please backup your stories even if they're only saved on a memory stick. My son recently had seemingly minor problems with his laptop, next thing it wouldn't turn on and we found out that his hard drive was fried and a lot of GCSE coursework was lost.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 31
Did they come to retrieve Edward and Bella?
Nervous energy from both E&B helped them realize they want the same things out of life.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
IDK why are they there? and why did B and E have to put on wedding rings? Sorry but I'm still missing something here. My fault, not yours.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
love it
thank you
Date: 29 Sep 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
Maybe it was a good thing he just stole a few kisses and cuddled I don't think they are ready for more.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
Really loving this story and looking forward to Lights,Camera, Interaction.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow Bella saw him naked she has great willpower I would have attacked him in the shower. I love the grandparents advice and was nice of them to take the baby for the night.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ok, I guess I need to get back to Facebook occasionally. That is awesome news regarding LCI, WooHoo! Can't wait. I'm a card carrying member!
Grammy was a delight and her words if wisdom fit any couples situation. But the comparison of Edward to gramps was hilarious. Especially with how it grossed out Bella. Haha
Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yea about time (sorry just glad he's gone.) Great story.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
I like that she won't keep Peter's money, that she will use it for charities.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awww that is sweet always thinking of others
Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
thrilled that bella can use the money for good qnd help others
love it
awesome
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Are the police watching Jasper closely?
Will Bella tell the police the truth about her life of servitude once she was sold by Phil? How Charlotte needed a baby to inherit and that she was used as the incubator for Peter's offspring.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
seems bella might still need to be careful if eloise gets everything
but then again maybe that is why jasper that seed
loving it all
thank you
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
Jasper knew what he was doing. Charlotte has no legal recourse to claim any of the Whitlock fortune. Eloise, on the other hand, was born into that inheritance. Was there any of the fortune intended to go Jasper's way?
Date: 15 Sep 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 28
well, now, does that mean that Eloise inherits from Peter? Jasper is one crafty dude. Not that I approve of murder, but Peter needed to be gone....is Charlotte still a threat or is Jasper embellishing that too?
Date: 15 Sep 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh I did not even think about the will. Oh gosh I love jasper he is so sly.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
it mean Charlotte gets nothing and Eloise gets everything
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
Woohoo peter is dead and the evil wife is penniless. I love that they went to the grandparents house and they are free.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
That is sad that peter was raised that way and I think it is good that Marcus did not treat jasper that way so he is not jaded and has a good heart.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Finally got a chance to read. Oh this is making me nervous. But I love Edward and his pacing wanting everything to be perfect.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
wow go jasper go
i am glad he had the will power to pull the trigger and peter your gone and eloise gets it all hot damn
thank you jasper
Date: 10 Sep 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
what about Charlotte? won't she be any kind of a threat?