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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Ok, so I cried throughout the entire chapter.  Every emotion that warred within made tears flow the entire time.

 

Thats one heck of a cliffie...

I cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Poor B..... gotta be hard to sit there and watch everyone around you die.

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Best Part:

I licked my lips, turning to Edward, his beautiful face blurred by my tears. I leaned over, pulling my mask down to my neck. I kissed him softly, brushing my fingers through his hair one last time.

 

“Please forgive me,” I whispered in his ear. “I couldn’t let it end this way.” I choked on a sob. “I love you, Edward. I always have.”

 

I couldn’t say the word. I couldn’t tell him goodbye. It just wouldn’t leave my lips.

 

So instead, I smiled wryly and said, “I’ll see you in Biology. Don’t kill me, okay?” before I kissed him once more and turned to leave.

 

I started by Carlisle, then on impulse, reached up and wrapped my arms around his neck, kissing his cheek. “Thank you,” I murmured. “Take care of him.” I felt his cold arms encircle me, patting my back gently.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Beautiful!!! 

Reviewer: Panda_Blitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

......... *Waits for you hands to uncover your ears* AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: leslieljs713 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

:)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

This is a sad chapter.  I feel like crying.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

well i hope that it all works out for the both of them! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

So damn heartbreaking.  What a way to face head on what you cannot change.  loved the chapter, even though I cried.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Have to say, the last part truly brought tears to my eyes.  Haven't reviewed in a while, and have kept up with the story!  Am now so anxiously waiting for next week!!

Keep up the GREAT work!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

This is exactly how I thought it would be.  Why would I be outraged?

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Sniff no more human Edward - getting close though.  The curiosity is killing me.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

:) way can´t Dr Carlisle turn bouth Nella and Edward?

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

soooo exciting!!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

OMG yep the angst is here.. I teared up quite a bit during this chapter.. and I am sure it is only going to get worse... Whoa.

I hope this blood transfusion works but in a way I hope it doesn't because I have a bad feeling if Edward doesn't become a vampire things we be worse for everyone and lives will be screwed up ..

I am also afraid it's too late for Mrs Masen and with the blood from Bella but who knows..

Great chapter.......as always

Is the uncle sick with this or other health problems

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

wow.....so cool

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Oh my goodness!!!! I can NOT wait until the next chapter!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better and better!!!!! I hope the transfusions work!! At least for Edward anyway ;)!!!!!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

This chapter broke my heart.  Seeing Edward suffer through losing his dad and his mother's illness was so sad.  I'm dying to see how the transfusions turned out.

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

SO sad.....but another great chapter! Glad Bella isn't giving up hope!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

duh.....I forgot about her blood being immune.....but would it be immune to that 1918 version though?

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

I hope it works.  Otherwise, Bella would have to go back in time and tell Edward to get his act together.

Reviewer: amanda4242 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

You capture the sadness and despair of the people on the ward perfectly and how awful it must have been.

I feel like this story is a train about to crash, it just keeps going faster and faster and the brakes aren't working. (In a good way, it's very exciting!) They seem to be headed to the inevitable end. I hope the transfusions work so that the inevitable doesn't happen but that seems unlikely.

I'm kind of worried about Bella now too, I know giving blood can make you tired but she seems extra tired.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Wow!!!!!  I never thought of that!  BRILLIANT!!!!

I cant wait to see the results!  :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Fate is a cruel bitch... of course Edward would still get sick .. NO!! Hopefully Bella's idea will help both Edward and Elizabeth pull through. I can't wait to see how you end this story! It's been one heck of a journey!!!! :) Super great chapter! Until next time....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

welll i hope for hher sake it worked ! if it didnt then everything she did was for nothing! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Wonderful chapter.  I love Carlisle's willinginess to innovate and concern for his patients.  Such a good doctor.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

loved it i teared up during the chapter really well written cant wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

wow just loved this.  i was so saddened that Edward's dad was lost, but I figured he wouldn't survive.  thanks for a wonderful story.  xx

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

The research you put into this is amazing!!! And very appreciated! My eyes are buuuuuring, I sobbed so much. I have NEVER cried like that reading fan fiction. Not just the emotions, but the setting of the mood around them, the affection you'd pre-established for Edward's parents. Bella was so wonderful, taking turns with her husband to stay with his mother. Now THAT is love! God, my heart was breaking for Edward, and then to see his mother's grief, and then Edward's again, and then Bella's when Edward got sick, and him saying sorry!!! Oh! Such splendid emotions! 

There was one point that I forget, but I appreciated you not patronizing us by spelling it out; it was all there in... oh. I think it had something to do with the story of the cat. How I loved that! Brilliantly heart tugging, showing us the history of their relationship! 

And then to give us a twist! You are such a wonderful storyteller. Gah! You leave us with suspense once again, wondering if the transfusions will work. I loved Carlisle's surprise, and Bella thinking that James' venom could have something to do with it too. Interesting. BRAVO! 

Whatever BT is nominated for, it should win every time, because this is one of THE best fics out there. IMO. 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

ooo... im intrigued. Thanks for the update... now i'll be thinking of vampires doing blood transfusions....hahaha. Can't wait to see what happens. 

 

Reviewer: Panda_Blitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: amanda4242 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Oh my, Alice's words "it's time" are so chilling and make me scared for what will happen.

I liked how you wrote about the epidemic, it gave a sense of how people must have felt at the time. I can't imagine reading stories about hundreds of people dying that way in cities all across the country.

Only 5 more chapters? I want them now and yet I don't all at the same time because then the story will be over. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

wow I knew this would happen.. He can't get away from his 'faith'  poor Bella being haunted by all those nightmares.. I couldn't imagine dealing with that and now there is nothing she can do to stop it.. She tried but couldn't

I just wonder once they get there if he mother will already be sick..

Loved how you finally brought some of the 'old Edward' (vampire) into this Edward with the where would i go and you're my life now... I am thinking the whole scene on the porch with Maggie then turning into Alice is going to actually happen...Edward gets sick and that's when she has to go back to future... this is getting so good.... can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Youur writing and the story are awesome - but the curiosity is killing me.  IT truly is one of the best vampire fics.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Oh my!!!! I just can't take it... I don't want this story to end, but I'm foaming at the mouth to see how you do end this amazing story... AHHH! :D

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Best Part:

 

Not to say that we still didn’t argue, because we did. In fact, I had a sneaking suspicion that Edward might have occasionally picked a fight or two once he’d learned about make-up sex.

 

I didn’t have any proof, just a gut feeling. Not that I was complaining.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

OME that was epic it was so sweet & sad poor Edward can't wait for the nxt chapter loved it amazing

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

My goodness, this was a thilling chapter.. I think I read it in record time.  I am so glad she didn't stop him from returning home.  It would NEVER have worked out for them if she had told him not to go.  BUT oh goodness... what on Earth will happen now.

 

BY THE WAY.. I got the flu shot this week, and I thought of your story.. hahaha.. See look at all the good fan fiction does for the world.  You are doing your part to rid the world of sickness.  VERY NICE. 

 

Great chapter as always.  Thanks

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

You had me crying  towards the end.  Amazing chapter as always.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

well i hope for the best but dont know what to expect cant wait till the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

:)

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

of course he would not deny them, she had to know that was coming....ahhhhhhhh..I hope there is at least some twist for us, I do not want for him to catch it and just die after all.........

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

this is so good.

 

GOOD JOB.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Ya should have known he's go back, bella.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Of course Edward would be worried about being rough with Bella.  I love how you keep him such a gentleman when he loses control like that.

Of course Bella being so modern and stubborn would not think about her having to talk with Edward the way she wants him to talk to her.  I just love how we an see where vamp Edward gets all of his behaviors and thoughts from the time he grew up.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

The past is converging with the present.  It's meant to be.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

i'm so torn.  I love human Edward Masen and he and Bella are good together but I still miss vampire Edward Cullen at times.  I'm starting to wonder if somehow Bella gets the flu and dies from it and begs Carlisle to change Edward so he'll be there for her in the future.  That could be very interesting.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

Love it!! Best on TWCS right now!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

omg i think edward will get sick too..........i love it!!!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

omg first fight i love it!!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

I can't believe this is almost over! I'm so sad ... :(

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

As always great chapter... SO the first fight as a married couple.. lol.

I am surprised he didn't go out looking for her...

Okay so one question answered his parents are coming for a visit and that's when theya are going to try to get them to stay. got it... but Edward wants her to continue to pretend she is still pregnant?

Anyways everything seems to be working good... but we all know it's coming.. (listening for shoe to fall) ... Um when does Edward start school again??

Love hot sexy Edward in the kitchen .. omg i could read that all day long yum

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Loved it.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

:)

Reviewer: CullenGirl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Hehe I want to have make up sex with Edward too! That was amazingly HOT!  Kitchen sex, make up sex, *fans self*

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Amazing as always :D

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

aww that was great!  I loved the making up at the end...and the kitchen sex! great chapter...and as much as I can't wait to see how this ends...I will be sad when it's finally over!  xxx

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

I love the story and this E/B.  They are a lovable couple and much healthier than Meyer's and just as in love.    I am dying of curiosity though - where is Bella.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Loved it amazing they had there first fight & made up so cute can't wait for the nxt chapter.....I read the story u recommended couple chapters back At the Deep End by naelany & it was amazing thx for suggesting it

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

Best Parts:

After our nooner, I’d even taken to carrying it around in a little cloth bag in my pocket so I could insert it at a moment’s notice.

 

Seriously, I was like a pessary ninja – inhumanly fast.

 

“Now, how can I help you with dinner?”

 

I looked at him in shock. “You want to help me cook?”


Edward looked indignant. “I’m not completely useless in the kitchen, you know.”

 

I couldn’t resist smirking at him. “I’m well aware of your expertise in the kitchen. I didn’t realize it actually extended to cooking, though.”

Reviewer: Belindella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

I'm reading here just to mix things up a bit and make it interesting. ;-) The happy newly weds they certainly make, and they fight like any other couple, making them very normal. But is this a future Bella gets to keep? Ahhhh!

B. xx

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

It's all good in the end...  I wonder how they'll fix the timeline.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

well i hope that everythign shes trying to do is going to work out for them both ! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

aww  their first married fight

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the real life Edward and Bella, yes we all love and fight and make up................You make it all so real and so sweet!!!!!!!!!!Love it!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Love the story

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

Love the story!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Love it!!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Loved it amazing the story is really well written it's just really awesome & sweet & funni I can't way for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

Loved it awesome the wedding was amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 26: Of Tombs and Tea Parties

Loved it amazing & funny

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

Loved it loved Carlisle he is so sweet

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

:)

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

OME epic ending epic chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

OME that was amazing & so sweet loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

OME epic loved it they are such sweethearts

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Loved it awesome love Edward he is so much lyk twilight Edward it's awesome

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Oh i loved it. . the bathtub... so sexy but where's Kelly lol.. maybe that's why Edward's hand was under the water a lot lol..The goodbyes to friends was sad I don't know how she does it  god that has to be hard leaving all these people behind knowing you may never see them again.. I wondered if she was going to 'warn ' someone should have known it was Maggie.. Now I thought Edward was going to try to talk to his parents about leaving? Did i miss that part?

gotta love a horny newly weds.. lol

Glad Carlisle came and said goodbye and I am so glad that he gave her his phone number and address... i am so worried she is going to be needed that.

Great chapter as always.  i know i am forgetting stuff but this headache.. ugh.. can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

i love it!!!! i wonder wat will happen will edward get sick? is this a dream of bellas?



Author's Response:

Can't really answer that question without giving the end away... but it will be answered eventually.

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

So, I'm curious.  Will Edward still get sick and will Bella have to be the one to go to Carlisle to save him?  Will she tell Edward the truth and have him make the choice to be changed and wait for her to be reunited with him in the future?



Author's Response:

Oh, all good questions.. but I can't really answer them without giving away the ending. they will be answered eventually, though. ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

this is so wonderful! i hope that maggie gets the letter and survives...and that Bella and Edward survive and get back to their friends.  xx



Author's Response:

That's Bella's hope too... we'll see how it goes.

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Lovely as always :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

So you're no longer a cockblocker wow they really know how to get it on **wiggles eyebrows** this was a pretty perfect chapt i cnt wait for more update soon oh btw tell Dr. Daddy i'm so serious about the stalking he's sexy and all but that shit just an'it cool



Author's Response:

Nope, my cockblocking days are over! LoL! So glad you liked the chapter - thanks for R&R bb! :-)

Reviewer: amanda4242 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

I feel like this chapter is the calm before the storm.

Author's Response:

I think you might be right...

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

he he he.  I like Edward's solution to Bella's bed problem.  Too perfect.  So how much longer until Bella returns to her time?  Not rushing, just curious please.



Author's Response:

That's assuming Bella will return to her time... don't know that that's gonna happen. :-)

Looks like the story will be 34 chapters, plus an epilogue, if that helps.

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

hmmmm yummy chapter. Hope maggie is ok in the end.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it... I hope she'll be okay too... :-)

Reviewer: mmichelle97219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

well i must say her birth control devise has got its wrk cut out for it. good chapter

michelle



Author's Response:

Yes... definitely! And she may not say it, but she's using it every time! :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Yay!  So glad for the update.  I am sooooo curious as to how the rest of this story is going to turn out.  I honestly don't know what to expect!  Like is Bella ever going to get back to the present time or is she going to be in that era forever!  I love this story.  Thanks for the update!  Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Well, all of your questions will be answered eventually. :-) So glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!



Author's Response:

Well, all of your questions will be answered eventually. :-) So glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

I hope it goes well.  I am dying of curiosity abotu where Bella actually is.



Author's Response:

Chicago, in 1918, of course... ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Wonderful chapter! It was sad reading about everyones goodbyes. Her goodbye with Carlisle was touching. I hope she'll see him again.

I'm curious as to what's going on in the present. I know this story is Bella's, but will we have a peek as to what's going on in the present with Edward and everyone? I wonder if Carlisle has memories of Bella from the past.

Great story, I love this so much. This is truly my favorite!! :) Until next time...



Author's Response:

Carlisle is going to be keeping in touch with Bella to let her know what's happening with the epidemic, so he'll be around to some extent.

Your questions will be answered eventually... all of them. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

Bella telling everyone about the flu...  That's a tabboo.  She's changing the past.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's worried about that, but she just couldn't leave without saying anything. She's following her instincts, which Alice told her she should do... we'll just have to see how it goes.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

well i hope that shes making the right decision! i cant wati till the next chapter to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

I hope so too... we'll have to wait and see. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

Loved it awesome

Author's Response: Thank you - so glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

Well, I read this right after you posted it and then got distracted and didn't review.  So sorry, hun.

I LOVED THE WEDDING AND THE WEDDING NIGHT!!!!  OMG, that was so good.  Awesome job with this one :)



Author's Response:

Awww... thanks bb! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :-)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

What time of day was the wedding?

I'm just curious, also a little worried about Carlise.

I'm sure you wrote it somewhere, i just forgot.

Great chapter.  How many more chapters do you reckon, again i'm just curious.

Anyway ;)



Author's Response:

The wedding was in early afternoon. :-) I don't think I ever wrote the exact time, but when Edward and Bella were at the Couch Tomb in Chapter 26 it was June 29th and Edward had a little countdown going. ;-)

It looks like the story will be 34 chapters, plus an epilogue.

Glad you enjoyed the chap - thanks for reading!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

omg whoa............i love it!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

Oh such a good chapter.. i laughed a little,, got a little teary eyed at the wedding and loved the ending......

Edward was hands down the most sexest in this chapter (with all his flirting and whispering in her ear) than in any of the other chapters..

I am so happy she got to wed Edward and I am so happy they got to make love in case something happens and she can't save him (he gets turned) or she goes back to her time.. Now if she did go back and he was there they'd be married......omg .. i just thought of that.. she'd still be married to Edward but he would just be Edward Cullen now vampire...

Love it..



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! So glad you enjoyed the chapter and Edward's sexy side... there's more of that to come (so to speak! LoL!)

Interesting thoughts... ;-) We'll just have to wait and see. (I sure write that a lot! LoL!)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

And they're married!  :-)



Author's Response:

Yes... finally! LoL!

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