Date: 14 Nov 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
all i can say is WOW! incredible! loved it
Date: 14 Nov 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY!!! I am on the verge of crying, this is such a beautiful love story. Wow thank you so much for giving this to us your readers. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YYYYEEEEEAAAAAAAAAH (SCREAMING N CLAPING)! I LOVED IT! GO GURL! IT WAS SOOOO WORTH THE WAIT! BEST STORY EVER. N IT WAS DEEP. NOT TO MUCH ANGST WHERE I DONT WANT TO READ THE STORY ANYMORE. IT HAD JUST ENOUGH OF ANGST. IT STARTED OFF SLOW BUT WHEN BELLA MET EDWARD. LIKE THEY SAY THE REST WAS HISTORY. I JUST COULDNT GET ENOUGH. THIS LOVE STORY HAD GOOD TIMES N BAD TIMES LIKE ALL RELATIONSHIPS SO IT WAS BELIEVABLE. WASNT TO SAPPY EITHER. AND THE DRAMA HAD ME LAUGHING ROLLING AND WORRIED. I ONLY GOT GOOD THINGS TO SAY ABOUT THIS STORY. IT DESERVINGLY DESERVES A 11. (FOR FANFICTION)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
I love this story it is fesh and new. In so many ways it is the epitomy of a timeless love. The characters are so much warmer than Meyer's. Bella and Edward were overly likeable in Meyer's story. I truly enjoyed reading it. I loved the way it ended - though I must admit I am glad to know how it ends - I was intensely curious. This is one of the best fanficts out there.
Wil there be pack related issues or Victoria?
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
kewl chapter. glad no baby never really like that part of the story line except for jake leaving her alone.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
*gasps* Oh...*hiccup*My... *snorts*Gawd...*sobs uncontrollably*
I am so happy!! *cries loudly*
Love it!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Great chapter! I adore this story!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
This is one of my all-time favorites. I hope you get published some day!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Ahhh...am sad to see this end, but am SOOOO glad it worked out. Loved your explanation to Edward and Bella. Loved the humor with everyone! This is now one of my favorite stories. Can't wait for the epiloge!
Read your Sex Tips and Star Trek one shot and absolutely LOVED IT!!! Keep up the great writing work--you have some definite talent!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
omg awwwwwwwwwwwww i love it!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Loved it so sweet loved Edward he is such a sweetheart can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
LOVELY!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
The one thing I don't understand is Rose. Carlisle knew about Bella so why is Rose there? He didn't change her as a potential mate for Edward.
Bella told him that he would have a family but forgot to mention that Rose hates being a vampire? Does Rose now hate Bella for not reminding Carlisle to let her die human? Is Emmett thankful that Bella didn't try to change that?
Best Parts:
When I walked through the door into the familiar living room, I felt my stomach erupt into butterflies. Carlisle stood across the room, and suddenly I was overwhelmed by all that had happened over the past few months. I saw him standing there, looking exactly as I remembered that day in the hospital – with compassion glowing in his eyes – and a choked cry burst through my lips. Without conscious thought I ran to him, throwing my arms around his neck as I burst into tears.
“Thank you,” I finally managed to sob out. No matter what else had happened, he had saved Edward...for me.
My lips curled in a watery smile. “Yeah. So…how’ve you been?” I joked wryly.
Carlisle laughed with a slight shrug. “Can’t complain. You know, the usual – world wars, technological advances, birth of rock and roll…same old, same old.”
I snickered, and suddenly became aware of the six pairs of eyes watching us warily.
“What?” I asked defensively. “It’s been over ninety years. We have a lot of catching up to do.”
“As for Edward. I could only imagine the truth would hurt him. I knew he would meet you someday. You told him that before you left the hospital,” he pointed out.
“I’ll see you in Biology. Don’t kill me, okay?” I murmured, remembering. Emmett guffawed at that, and even Edward smiled.
I knew what she was asking. I’d left behind my husband, the man I loved and had hoped to build a future with. I’d come back to a man who didn’t even remember that part of our lives. I felt a lot like I did when I first met Edward in 1918 – like I was betraying one love for another, one Edward for another – when in fact they were the same man. It was overwhelming. I flipped open my locket, still amazed at the thought that Carlisle had kept if for me all these years. I ran a finger lightly over the lock of hair tied by a faded yellow ribbon. A tiny remnant of the man I’d lost.
I blinked back tears as I answered Alice. “I fell in love with him all over again, Alice. And he doesn’t remember it. He doesn’t remember how we argued all of the time when we first met. He doesn’t remember laughing together…falling in love…how he proposed to me and how I fought him on getting married. He doesn’t remember dancing at our wedding…the little cottage where we lived. So yeah, I miss that. I miss the part of him that went through all of that with me.”
Alice’s cold arm went around my shoulders, squeezing gently. “He’s still here, Bella. He’s different, but he’s still here, and he loves you…he loves you with all of his heart.”
“You’re wrong, you know,” he said with soft intensity. “I do remember, at least in a way.”
I may not remember the details…the conversations…the things that we did together. But a part of me remembered you…it always had, although I didn’t realize it at the time.
“I thought it was your blood that called to me,” he explained. “And it did, but there was more to it than that. I couldn’t understand why I felt this undeniable draw to you…a grinding need to protect you, to have you near me. I guess now it makes a little more sense.
“I’ve always thought that once I became what I am, I lost what made me human…that I had no soul. But this…” He rubbed my upper arms gently, tracing his fingers down over the back of my hands. At the familiar pull, the recognizable electricity that shot through me at his touch, I turned my hands, lacing my fingers with his. His eyes were topaz, not green, yet they still swam with a passion and love that I knew. This was Edward…no matter what, he was my Edward.
“This makes me doubt my beliefs,” Edward continued, “because part of me stayed connected to you over all of these years, even if I wasn’t aware of it. It makes me wonder if maybe I do have a soul, after all. And if I do…I know it’s yours.”
I nodded, trailing a finger across his chest as I walked by and reveling just a little at his sharp intake of breath.
That’s right, Edward. I might have learned a thing or two from being married to you. Watch out.
Edward was still looking at the picture in the book. He reached out to touch the spot where we sat on the porch steps, Edward’s fingers tangled in the ends of my hair, his lips pressed to my temple.
“It wasn’t that I didn’t believe it,” he murmured. “It’s just seeing this…” His words trailed off.
“I know,” I said, leaning my head on his shoulder. “It makes it real.”
He kissed my head softly. “Yeah.”
Mr. & Mrs. Emmett McCarty, Sr., with Emmett McCarty, Jr.
My eyes rose slowly to see Emmett watching me with a wide grin.
“No way!” I exclaimed.
“Way!” he said with a laugh.
“Liza was your…”
“…Stepmother,” he finished. “Actually, the only mother I remember. Small world, huh?”
“You marched in a suffrage rally?” Edward asked admiringly. “Impressive.”
I choked slightly and Carlisle covered a smirk.
“Yeah, well, you didn’t think so at the time,” I told him.
“Really?” Edward looked shocked, then he nodded slightly. “I’d imagine it would be kind of dangerous. I wouldn’t want you to get hurt.”
Carlisle laughed and I elbowed him lightly.
“What’s so funny?” Edward asked.
“Not a thing,” I replied
“Now I understand,” Edward said quietly, stroking my arm as he pressed a soft kiss on my shoulder. “I know why I could never be with another. Why the mere thought was abhorrent to me.
“All this time, I’ve been waiting for you,” he said, rolling onto his back and pulling me against his side. “I’ve been waiting for you to come back to me.”
“Don’t get me wrong,” I said, trailing my fingers over his chest, “I’m not complaining. But you’ve always seemed reluctant to be with me this way. Why the change of heart?”
Edward chuckled lightly. “Well, in the first place, we’re already married. Technically, although it’s been a while, we’ve already done this a few times.”
I smirked against his skin. “More than a few.”
Edward laughed again. “I’d like to hear more about that,” he joked. “My other concern was your safety, of course, but once I learned it was physically possible, and Carlisle told me how to protect you, well, that was that.”
“And since we’re already married…’til death do us part and all…” I prodded.
“But Edward, no choice is without consequences,” I pointed out. “And to have you…to have forever with you? It is worth any consequence…any sacrifice. This – us – this is what I am here for. I know that now.”
Edward searched my eyes, then leaned down to kiss me softly…adoringly. “So I guess it’s you and me then.”
I smiled up at him, nodding in agreement, my heart full of joy and hope. Somehow, through it all, we’d survived…our love had survived. A vampire and a human from two different centuries.
Go figure.
Author's Response:
Remember the conversation Bella had with Rose about how Rose hated being a vampire was in Eclipse... this is alt-New Moon, so that conversation never happened. Bella didn't know how Rose felt about it when she told Carlisle he would change Rose, so Rose couldn't really hold that against her. Although Carlisle didn't change Rose FOR Edward, Bella did tell Carlisle that she was intended to be part of his family, so he was looking out for her.
Hope that clears it up! Thanks for reading! :-)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Awesome but I tell you that after every chapter :)
I love this story soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :D
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
The big reveal was definitely not a disappointment. My heart melted when Carlisle pulled out the scrapbook for Bella. I couldn't help but laugh at Alice's disappointment that Alistair didn't mention her in his book. You did a great job tying up all the loose ends from 1918. I even loved how you brought Emmett into the mix. I ca'n't wait to see what you've got planned to wrap this up with in the epilogue.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
well im happy they are together and happy!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Lovely job!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Wow- that was beautiful and emotional! Really have to continue reading- therefore, the review is rather short ^^
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
Aww what an excellent way to almost finish can't wait for the epilogue
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
You couldn't have given them a photo from their wedding? otherwise this chapter is perfect you bought everything together beautifully xx
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
So good! I love the explanation--especially the butterfly effect.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments
LOL I love the interaction between Bella and Carlisle in the present. It's cute! I adore how Alice still loves chocolate chip cookies. Now i have to go re-read the Carlisle/Bella interaction they mentioned about Forks. can't wait for the epilogue! Thanks for the update
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
You know.....I've read alot of fanfics, and I thinks I can say without a doubt, yours is the most innovative, captivating, and moving story I have every read!! I feel you have a very beautiful talent and I would read anything you wrote!!! I can't wait to read the ending to this story, though I am remorseful that it will be the ending of the "Beyond Time" journey...
Date: 06 Nov 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I love how this all ties together... I can't wait to hear what Carlisle has to say. This was an amazing chapter!! :) I love the twists of the time travelling. It's brilliant... your brilliant!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Oh loved this . got a insight of how Edward find out and a little of what he has been doing. So glad the dummy finally listened to his message..
SO I assume now everything is going to be explained in the next chapter...
I just can't wait to read what happens next... but I don't want it to end either .. So good
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Awsome as always and I am already sad to see this story ending :(
An amazing piece of work, my dear :)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Loved it amazing as always can't wait for the nxt chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
oh my god........I had wondered how this would end......but this is perfect.....what a great full length story.....and the best thing is-still a chapter to go! You are bringing it to the finish so well, unlike so many other fanfics I have read that have great beginnings but just cannot pull it all together in the end...
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
oh! lovely chapter to tie all the loose ends. i loved edwards pov in this...his pain...his anguish. simply brilliant tale...it deserves to win the award! xx
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
can you send me a link as to where to vote? This is by far my favorite Twilight story
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
YEYYYYY!!!! Can't wait for the talk. YOu are the best!!!! Thank you for this lovely story : )
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
well i cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming !
Date: 06 Nov 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
You are killing me woman! I get the lovely update email only to find I still have to wait for the talk. Ok, my ranting is done. Thanks for giving us this chapter. It filled in a lot of blanks. I know it was a necessary evil it was just frustrating to realize I still have to wait for the talk. You did a great job clearing up a lot of questions I had regarding Carlisle. I guess I will try and wait patiently for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Perfect!!!!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
I love this chapter! I love how you so perfectly explained why Edward feels so strongly for Bella. That it's not just her blood but her whole person. Can't wait to read more, once it's complete I think I will have to reread the whole thing.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
awe i love it edward is back i wonder wat they will talk about
Date: 05 Nov 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Best Part:
Carlisle’s revelations had shaken me to the core. I knew Bella. Before she came to Forks…before I’d become what I was, I knew her.
I loved her.
Dear God, I’d married her.
How could I not remember?
But, as I thought the words, I realized that I did remember…at least part of me did.
She was the reason I was never able to connect with another woman. Somehow, deep inside, I knew what I wanted…who I wanted.
Somehow, all this time, I’d been waiting for her…waiting to find her…waiting for her to come back to me. And when she did, my body responded, even though my mind didn’t understand what was happening.
It craved her. It needed her.
I’d thought it was because of her blood…and to a certain extent it was…but I now understood it was more.
It was everything.
And I’d thought I could leave her. The thought almost made me laugh out loud. How could I leave her? She was part of me.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
As always you have done a great job with this chapter. I look forward to every chapter alert and don't like that this story is nearing it's end. Selfish I know! Pfft. Whatever. I can't wait to see what other great stories your imagination can create.
Pixie
Date: 05 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
ahh. come on!..
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
That was so good i felt like i was there with bella .wow, and jake and the giant dick i haven't laughed that hard in so long love this story
Date: 05 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
hmmmm wonder how Carlisle managed to keep everything from him all that time, esp in the beginning
Date: 05 Nov 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Separating from Bella was a joke. Edward shouldn't have done that.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
YEAH, so excited to get this update! Also glad with how Edward did not remember!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Do we get to find out how mad Edward was w/ Carlisle? Would be very interested in "hearing" about that part of the story!
Great Job, and looking forward to the next update!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
GAH~!!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!
Loved the update, will be on pins and needles till I see what happens next.
Where are Bella's rings?!?!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Love how you pieced it all togther!!! Can't wait for more! I love your attention to details!! So, so Good!!!!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
suck a great story can't express how great it is! Do you think there will be a sequel?
Date: 05 Nov 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust
Awesome chapter and story. I am sorry the story is ending but I am so happy to finally know how it ends. It has been delighjtful
Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
I absolutely love this concept. I've forgotten the exact date of Edward's turning, but since Carlisle changed Edward 1st, Bella would be able to shed so much light into his future as well.
Can't wait to continue this terrific story.
D.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
I was feeling Bella's heartache and despair. It killed me to see her so lost and frantic trying to find Edward and Carlisle. I assume Maggie saw Bella losing the locket in front of Carlisle's house and that was significant.
I was waiting for Edward to show up. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Did Edward get a ton of memories from Bella's trip back in time out of the blue? This next chapter should be very interesting. I can't wait.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
oh u got me crying at the end there.. and i haven't quite stopped.... well okay not crying but the tears are running down my face....so good i don't even know what to say .. i so pictured everything playing out in my mind as it was happening.. the running to the hospital then back to Carlisle...her going home walking up to see Jake being home with Charlie , ,then Edward everything.. But edward can't remember Carlisle must have told him everything and where did her wedding ring gone? If she got the locket back why not the wedding ring? Ugh .. can't wait for the next chapter......sorry so behind but with everything going on right now i am so behind on my updates......and my story
Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
arggg.....please update soon :)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
WOW! So glad you let them reunite before the next chapter. I was thinking my heart couldn't take it! LOL. Your writing if FABULOUS. Great job and thanks for the wonderful story. I can't wait for next Friday!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
What if she endeed up pregnant from her trip back in time?
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! I love this story!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Great chapter!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
OME loved it like there's no tomorrow lol but seriously I squeal in excitement when edwaard came back & when he gave her the locket so fucking epic it's amazing can't waitfor the nxt chapter
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
AHH! Ma'am, you are officially the cliffy queen! I'm on the edge of my seat, anticipating what Edward is going to say to Bella. I mean, I doubt he's gonna be THAT pissed that she essentially toyed with his human life, knowing how his life should have played out. Especially considering that if he was mad, all he would have to do is not go back to her. I'm more wondering if her altering his future, yet maintaining the timeline, does it change all his memories? or does he have memories of both timelines? And if he remembers both timelines, how does he feel about going from remembering never having touched a woman to suddenly remembering giving himself to Bella as her human husband? EH! I SERIOUSLY cannot wait for the next chapter!!! HURRY!
Oh, and I am absolutely in love with your writing. It's so wonderfully descriptive, and you obviously really did your research and did an amazing job at keeping the people in Edward's time true to the times. Love love LOVE it!
~<3~
Kitty
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
I loved this chapter. I can not wait to see how you incorporate the time travel past and the before ending leaving past together.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
I am crying my eyes out.. That was the sweetest most wonderful chapter ending ever. Thank you for that.. Thank you so much.. sniff sniff.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
AWWK!! OMG. She did, really wow.. really... and *squee* Edwards back!
Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
OML!!!! This is sooo exciting!!!
Sad that it winding down though! I'll miss this story terribly!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Wow. I think at this point that is all I can say. Was it all real and if not then where did the pendant come from? So many questions I'm hoping they are answered soon. ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Wow! How exciting that she is back in the present. I can't wait to read the next chapter and hear what Edward has to say.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
oh!!!! i absolutely loved this chapter!! your story has taken me on the most wonderful journey...and now Edward's back with the locket!! lovel it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
omg!!! i love it!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! amazing!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Love it as always :)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
WOW wasnt expecting her to get the watch back. Guess Carlisle gave it to him when they left?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
that was the best thanks, and although i dont want this to end....please update soon..
Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
wow she was just sent back to give him some life experiences that he didnt get before he died! cant wait till the next chater !
Date: 29 Oct 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I have no words... :D :D :D :D :D :D :D okay maybe one... brilliant!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
wow just wow!!!!! You had my heart just a thumping away!!! Can not wait for more!!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
OMG - I love it - was it real was it real. Oooooo I love it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
OMG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
My chest in clenching in anticipation and giddiness. OMG what is going on!!
Where is his watch?
Where are their wedding rings?
I eagerly await your next update!!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Well? Now what? Are you going to give us an update or what?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Awww, love it!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
YAHOOOOOO!!! I am so excited....sadly now we have to wait!!! I am sitting here with a silly grin on my face---you would think I was an actual witness to this reunion!!
GREAT JOB!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
HOLYYY SHIT!!! So are they already married? WOW! I still can't believe all that really happend to them... I can't wait for the next chater!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
So, Carlilse finally told Edward the truth? Or did Bella's going back change the future?
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Yea! I've been wairing for this chapter!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality
Gosh! It really did happen.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
OH thank you god.. I mean don't get me wrong I hated that the parents had to die 'again' i hate that Edward got sick but I am sooo glad she decided it is better to have vampire Edward then no Edward.. (which i figured you wouldn't do that to us) Now I am dying to know when she wakes up if she will be back in her time.. ugh . so good. can't wait.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
so wats going to happen nxt? ur r a wonderful writer! cant wait for the nxt update. hope its soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
omg im startin to cry!!! this is sooo sad i love it though i cannot wait for the next one,........
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life
omg..........i really hope everythin will be ok
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
You've got me in tears again. I cried for Elizabeth dying and I cried for Bella having to watch Edward slowly die and beg Carlisle to save him. Bella telling Edward she'd see him and Biology and asking him not to kill her was the best quote from this chapter. Obviously Carlisle heard her. I wonder what was going through his mind when she said that. OMG, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Awesome :) Just plain awesome ...
Sooooo beautiful :)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
omg
cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 23 Oct 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Loved it amazing I did tear up though but still amazing chapter can't wait for the nxt one
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Can you blame her she has lost him again. She tried to prevent it. I can only imagine her grief.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Oh my, can you write faster pretty please? I love, love, love this story.
Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
ahhhhhhh! this cannot be how it goes? Why did she come back at all?
Date: 23 Oct 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
what a powerful chapter! Bella's despair crept up on her...and as much as she knew it was something she was trying to avoid, she gave Carlisle the green light to change him. i can't wait for the next chapter!!! Brilliant story!!! xx
Date: 22 Oct 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
oh my... i cant wait for an update. that was a tear jerker.
keep up the great writting
Date: 22 Oct 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
GAH! Please please PLEASE you must do everything in your power to get us a quick update!!! I loved it. thanks
Date: 22 Oct 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
OMG!!! *tears.....* update again soon
May
Date: 22 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
I am proud of her.. I mean, it would have been harder in Dr. C if she had stayed. I am just sad that she thinks they won't see each other until Biology. Will he remember her? This is so sweet.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Oh man. I was really hoping she would be able to beat fate and have a real life with Edward. One that she would never have in the future due to the choices Edward made. This has been an awesome story. Looking forward to how you decide to end it.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose
Goosebumps..... that's what I've been reduced to. That was an amazing chapter!!! I had a feeling this was going to happen. I just.. I have no more words... it was beautiful. I loved when Bella told Carlisle that Edward was the first member of his family and I seriously had tears when Bella told Edward she would see him in biology.
Heartbreaking, but absolutely amazing! :D