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Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 150

Oh poor Bella I knew she wouldn't take the news about James now Edward is getting better and the are doing well what's next

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 150

Glad Edward is getting better. I hate Bella had a panic attack when she found out about James. Can't wait till we know something about James. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 150

Fantastic!!! I love that they are going to have their own little Marie! That is so sweet!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 150

I love that you named her after your Mom! What a great tribute.

 

 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 150

Ahhhhh a baby girl. Keep on writing

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 150

Love this chapter with the exception of the panic attack, but I'm sure that was needed for future plot. A great story, thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 150

That is so sweet I love the healing that is going on but I am freaking out with Bella where the hell is James??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 150

:)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 150

Aww at least they are both coming along beautifully. Now if only we can get James!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 150

Love you picking a normal name for the baby.   Glad that E is doing better.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 149

OH WOW!  So much bad news...cannot wait for some good news for these two!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 149

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 149

Oh dear, not that I blame the reaction Bella may have, I think Edward needs to tell

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 149

Sheesh, this couple needs a break.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 149

That's the spirit!  Fight hard,  Edward! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 149

good

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 149

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 149

Kinda figured they would medically retire him.   I wouldn't want to be the one to tell her either. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 149

Poor Edward

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 149

Nobody should tell her yet! Not if there's a chance it will make her lose the baby!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 149

: )    Everyday it will get easier to smile  and it won't hurt as much. Thank you for the update.  READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 149

I feel for both of them how will this end who will end up 6 feet in the ground 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 149

she has to find out im freaking out

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 149

I thought she already knew for some reason.  Couldn't Edward have a desk job with the fire department? 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 149

Wow.. they have been through hell and back, and it still isnt over.

 

Love this.

 

Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 148

Sorry for your loss. And you are right- no more pain!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 148

They are going to give him his walking papers. It happens and it is so sad.

Reviewer: katstooldforthis Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 148

so sorry about your mom. I too have lost my mom and it is a hard thing to go through. prayers coming your way.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 148

; )

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 148

I am so sorry to hear of your loss.
I hope sometime soon you will be able to smile at the beautiful memories you have of your mom.
Remember, you are her greatest legacy!
Will the trauma and recovery time of Edward's encounter cause the fire chief to remove him from his position indefinitely?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 147

I'm getting caught up with my reading! At least I don't have to wait for the next chapter. Haha
I'm happy that Edward knows he is going to be a daddy.
Both E&B now have emotional and physical scars to deal with together.

Reviewer: Imu-icu2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 148

Condolence to you and your family. Love and prayers go out to you.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 148

aw im so sorry for your loss! take any time that you need!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 148

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 148

OMG!! I am freaking out here!!I love this story and these characters! I can't wait to find out what Garrett has to say. I am so nervous! :P

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 148

good chapter.

sorry to hear about your mom. hope you and your family are doing ok

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 148

Thanks for the update.  My sincere condolences about the loss of your mother.  It is hard to watch them suffer, but it is still hard losing a parent. God be with you and your family.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 148

Holy Crap.  What is the brass trying to do?  Medically retire him maybe?  

 

Sorry about your mom hun

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 148

Sorry to hear about your mom. Great chapter Edward is a bad patient. Lol Bella bribing the guys with food. 

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 148

My thoughts and heart are with you at your time of need. There are more important things than posting to this story. Take care.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 148

I hate this for you!  I lost my father almost 13 years ago.  He was sick. ..cancer. thinking of you and you are in my prayers.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 148

I'm so sorry for your loss, dear.  Please accept my sincere condolences!  Take all the time you need.

Reviewer: megawill Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 148

You are in my prayers. I know what it is like to lose a parent and it is never easy. Take your time and take care of yourself. We will still be here when you return.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 148

I am so sorry for your loss. My own mother passed away 35 years ago this month. It hurts: you never get over losing your mother, but it does get easier in time. 

Reviewer: rocker9113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 148

Don't worry about the update frequency, just take your time to grieve. Also remember her how she was at her happiest times.

On another note great chapter. I hope James gets caught without mayor problems.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 148

I'm sorry for you lose. Garrett does not have good news

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 148

I'm so sorry for your loss...

 

I cant come up with something other, than that James made it look like Edward was behind the fires, but how could heget that done? Or they had a good lead but lost him again to the unknown again...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 148

I'm so sorry for your loss.  You and your family must come first at this time

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 148

Oh my the both are wound tight but what does his boos have to say

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 148

 SWEETIE...THE PAIN IS GONE!!! YOUR MOM IS PAIN FREE. SHE WILL FOR EVER MORE BE IN YOUR HEART SO TAKE SOME TIME FOR YOU!!!! TO CRY, TO REMEMBER, TO FINALLY SMILE AND KNOW YOU DID YOUR BEST.  I WILL ALWAYS BE HERE IF YOU NEED SOMEONE.  : )   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 148

I am sorry about your  mother.  

Glad Edward is out of the hospital.  Where is James? What is Garret  going to tell Edward?  They surely can't  be letting him go from the fire department.  He was hurt on the job.  They could put him on extended leave of absence.  But if theyey him go he could she them.  Can't wait for more. But definitely understand if it is going to be awhile. Take time for yourself.  Again,  I am sorry about your mother. 

Reviewer: AngelicFront5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 148

I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I am glad your mom has found peace and is no longee in pain. My sincerest thoughts to you and your family

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 148

Praying for you and your family. Even in times of crisis, you are an amazing writer . Do the things that bring you comfort

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 148

Im sorry for you loss.

Thinking the brass won't/aren't letting Edward resume his firefighter job.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 147

Edward has to work hard on healing and getting strong, so he can  marry Bella and hold his baby.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 147

; )

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 147

where is James? did he escape?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 147

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 147

I am glad that Bella could clam Edward down.  I knew he would be happy about the baby.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 147

Boy... Girl ? I'll leave it up to you to decide. As for names... how about something like,,,,, " HEAVENLY ANGEL CULLEN"  READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 147

I'm glad that Edward knows about Peanut, know they can also tell everybody else! I only hope that the news doesn't spread to James! He would be furious and would want to kill the baby...

I will go for a girl! Let's trust Bella's intuition ;-) No name so far...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 147

Awwwwww!!!  I am so happy he's awake! :D

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 147

I love it I think he found out at just the right moment 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 147

She has givin him the best thing to recover for so excited to be a daddy.

Reviewer: Nrbl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 147

We want a boy!!    How about Kyle??

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 147

YAY, he now knows, so glad.

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 147

It should be a boy! His name should something like Carson or Stephan 😁

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 147

Yay - she got to share the good news:)

I'm glad that Edward took it all so positive because they've been through so much....

 

 

 

 

Bella seems to hope for another girl, but I would hope for a boy in this case. Because that way - hopefully - she wont have to compare what she lost before to what she now got...

 

 

Names are hard to choose, but I like them with a strong meaning 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 147

I love this story!! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 147

that went well

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 147

A boy, I think...  Adam McKinley  (that isnt one I have heard!)

 

Glad things are starting to look up :D

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 147

yey for her finally telling him.  

Reviewer: sanchez1385 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 147

Please, please, please a girl!!! 

Love you story, wish you the best.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 147

:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 146

Well that explains James' escape. Someone still had to tend his wounds though.
They'll have the talk about her running away and hopefully end it with the wonderful surprise news of her pregnancy. Edward will be ecstatic!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 146

Glad e is awake.   Hope he gets better soon 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 146

He's going to be ecstatic about the baby and get overly protective

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 146

; )

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 146

Great chapter! Loved the subconscious conversation 😃

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 146

I loved the talk he had in his head with Bella even in his head she was protecting her tummy.  I cant wait for his reaction he will be over the moon happy.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 146

: )I really liked the longer chapter always a treat. THANK YOU!  A little sad that he's struggling with  his trust for hher but hopefully all will be forgiven once he finds out about the baby.  YEAH!!!! Can't wait. .. well yeah I can (lol) READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 146

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 146

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 146

good

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 146

Ahh.. poor Edward and Bella..

 

I hope James bleeds out somewhere!

Love it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 146

Loving the longer chapters! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 146

Oh wow, that was amazing and intense!  I cannot wait to see what happens next for these two (or make that three...or more ;), hehe) :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 146

I am excited for more of this story! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 146

Love the conversation  that Edward  had on his head. a86;

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 145

BYE Renee!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 145

Yeah Edward is awake. Now comes the hard work.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 145

So glad that Edward is awake  and does not seem to have to much  wrong with him except some burns. Can't wait to find out his reaction to Bella being  pregnant.  Also can't wait to find out what happened to James. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 145

Will Edward ask Bella for a replay of the past three weeks or wait to grill one of his fire buddies upon arrival?
I think Garrett needs to visit Edward and let him know the firehouse situation.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 145

It would be nice if they found james dead in an alley, but sadly i doubt thats what will happen   ; )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 145

Poor guy he is in shock now he has been out for weeks.  Will he be able to go back to being a fire fighter

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 145

good

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 145

Okay, Bella has some explaining to do! First about what happened to Edward and then what happens in her belly ;-) He'll be over the moon when he learns about peanut!!

Seriously, I still think that James is alive, but hopefully not in a good condition! Maybe he would have already come back for Bella if he was alright...

Thanks for this long chapter - it was wonderful to see Edward finally wake up! My aunt has recently been in a medically induced coma as well, so I know about waiting until someone wakes up after they cancelled the medication...!

See you next time :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 145

:)

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 145

: ) I'm so looking forward to Bella finally telling Edward about Peanut. (remember to smile today) b25;  READ YOU SOON. 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 145

Yay!  He's back!  And so are you!  Welcome.  Hope things are doing better for you now.  Love this story.

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