[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 172
Charlie's presence as Bella's only family is significant. But, Esme filled out the mother position perfectly.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 171
I'm curious as to why Charlie's conversation with Bella turned into the awkward pre-teen sex chat? They are attempting to build an emotional attachment not the father daughter teachable moment kind.
Everything is finally falling into place.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 172
Wonderful chapter. Sounds like a wonderful family time
Date: 27 Jul 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 171
Glad everyone is doing well. Aww what a nice present from Charlie
Date: 26 Jul 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 172
Alice is a idiot!! That was kind of cruel to say on a wedding day...
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 26 Jul 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 172
Almost. Beautiful work, very enjoyable to read! Thank you.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 172
She is so emotional so much has happened so fast
Date: 26 Jul 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 172
Aww, loved this! I also love the pictures you have to go with this chapter (and the others related to the wedding, too).
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 172
Everything was perfect! I was all smiles but I can understand not personally but as a woman it has to be devastating to lose some of your womanhood. : ( READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 172
Loved it can't wait for more 😍.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 172
Live love love this chapter! !!!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 171
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 25 Jul 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 171
Time for the good things to come back into their lifes;)
Date: 25 Jul 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 171
I love them! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 171
Love what Charlie did. That was sweet .
Date: 25 Jul 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 171
Wow it is going to happen love it
Date: 25 Jul 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 171
Nice long chapter. Lol. Sad to know it's coming to an end.
Date: 25 Jul 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 170
Love this chapter. Love how they honored Edward. That was so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 171
Well things are going great so far and how sweet is Charlie
Date: 24 Jul 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 170
very nice and touching chapter!
Date: 24 Jul 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 170
Wonderful chapter. Glad they did that for him. Ah so Harold has a girlfriend huh? interesting
Date: 24 Jul 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 170
This is completely awesome! Harold is kind or making me nervous. Man he is clingy. lol :P
Date: 24 Jul 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 170
Wow he will be looking forward to seeing that now
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 64
Ahhhh so sweet
Date: 24 Jul 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 170
I figured Bella did! I loved this chapter! Great closure!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 170
I love the idea of tattoos for the fire-family. Including the females.
I wonder if Bella's tattoo is of her very own super hero? ;)
Retiring Edward's uniform is a huge honor.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 170
Oh I loved it they are an amazing family to be apart of
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 169
Yay, Edward and Emmett will get their chance to clear the air renewing their familial bond.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 168
Bella and Edward still have so much emotional healing to cover.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 170
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 167
It takes guys a while to catch on!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 165
Ha-ha, gas indeed!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 164
Such a traumatic entry into the world!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 170
Great chapter keep writing
Date: 24 Jul 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 170
Thats why she didnt want him to look to close :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 37
Sexy fireman edward
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
How sad that happen to Bella if I get hold of james I'll beat his ass up
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love the story especially Edward fireman
Date: 23 Jul 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 169
GOD Edward and Emmett worked things out. Hope he has a good visit at the firehouse.
Date: 23 Jul 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 169
Emmett is so cute and just so Emmett love him
Date: 23 Jul 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 169
Glad things are okay again between Edward and Emmett
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 169
Oh thank goodness they made up and Edward is doing great in school now what is next
Date: 23 Jul 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 169
Thats good. Maybe he does need closure.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 23 Jul 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 169
Sweet seeinig edward and bella settling in with marie. Wondering about harold though. Maybe they need to set him up with someone. He seems lonely
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 168
Love Edward's presents. Hope Edward and Emmett get things worked out.
Date: 22 Jul 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 168
Oh, I can't wait for their conversation! Love this story! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 168
I loved it they had a great night and she had a really nice birthday but what will Emmett have to say
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
He is so sweet
Date: 22 Jul 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 168
loved it cant wait to read more!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 168
aww sweet birthday. Their honeymoon plans sound really nice
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 168
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 167
They both need therapy. E for anger/temper and B for guilt and her physical stuff too
Date: 21 Jul 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 167
Bella didn't know she could have Marie. She was a miracle. She needs to enjoy her. She is not ready for another baby even if she could get pregnant.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 167
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 167
Well now he understands and he can be there for her like she is with him I loved it
Date: 21 Jul 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 167
Lots going on they will get it
Date: 21 Jul 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 167
loved it, cant wait to read more
Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 167
Thanks goodness for Garrett explaining it to Edward.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 167
They both have some healing to do
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 166
Great now Bella is worried about her body. Edward loves her. She needs to remember that fact.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 165
Cute little family.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 166
Life is becoming normal crazy but normal and they get to make mad hot monkey love again
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 166
I suppose that Bella has some doubts regarding her scars from the C-section... but I'm confident that Edward will be able to get her off this train of thhought ;-)
Baby Marie is doing fine and I'm very happy to see this!
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 166
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 166
loved it, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 166
I loved it he is in school and on the mend but what was wrong with Bella is she still heartbroken about her hysterectomy
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 166
Maybe once you have completed this story you can " PICK UP THE PIECES " READ YOU SOON ♥
Author's Response:
I'm going to finish Surviving the Teenage Dream since I've got two chapters left to write, one of which I'm writing right now.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 166
She is feeling weird cause she still has her baby belly...
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 166
I am thinking Bella is insecure about her body. It just hit her that Edward would see her make for the first time since Marie's birth.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 166
She's nervous about making love with Edward again, I think.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 166
Glad E is doing so much better. Maybe B thinks she fat or something?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 165
Awe so very sweet
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 165
Glad Marie was ok. Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella are at being parents. Lol
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 165
So fantastic! :)