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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 47

Boy, they really are never off duty, that's for sure! Hope the guys will all be okay! A train derailment is awful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 46

His dad read the signs and decided that he already loves Bella! Probably! Jasper must be looking out for Bella, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 45

Looks like Edward's parents are thrilled to meet Bella! Good way to start out , and I'm sure the sweets she brought didn't hurt, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 44

I love that Bella bought a silver Range Rover, what a neat vehicl! The deal with the two salesmen was hilarious!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 43

Not a bad way to end a wonderful first/second date! Can't wait for Sunday dinner with the parents!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 42

He made sure this date was romantic, to the nth degree!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 41

I would love to see the view from up there! Seems they are truly enjoying this date, and it isn't over yet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

Love this date and how well they are getting along!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 39

I'm looking forward to this date although probably not as much as they are!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 38

People really are stupid, sometimes! At least the barbeque was salvaged and the guys got to clean up and eat when they got back!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 37

Ah yes, the life of a firefighter, never a dull moment, sometimes at least!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 36

Now that he knows the reasons for the behavior, I'm sure Emmett will be on Bella's side!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 35

Pretty brave of her to tell Emmett her sad story, I don't blame her one bit for crying and being harsh with him! It was nice that Edward came over to give her a hug!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 34

Now I'm curious as to if and how Bella will tell Emmett her history? It's good that she and Edward are going to go slowly on their way to being a couple. It will be the right way for them both.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 33

That pretty much clears the air between them and I now hope that they will move forward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

I so hope that Bella's grams is watching over her and seeing how hard she's trying!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 31

Why on earth would anyone hate the woman for getting the help she sp desperately needed? I'll even bet Edward doesn't hate her either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

I can understand hurt feelings, but thought Emmett's attitude was a bit uncalled for! I hope they catch whoever it was that set the garge fire, but almost hope it is James. At least he has a reason to hate her! If it was someone random, that would be almost scarier! I'm so glad she wants to talk to Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor sad messed up woman! Hell, I want to hug her and tell her it will be better one day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 28

If all it took was one drunken asshole, Bella needs some help, someone to talk to! Good thing there are so many medical people in her life now!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 27

Too bad for Leah, but Bella doesn't swing that way! Besides, I'm sure Edward would fight for her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

I wondered if something like this would happen since Edward is a firefighter, among other things. At least he and Bella had fun and she agreed to coming along with Alice to Clear Waters!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

All this description of fabulous cheeseburgers is making me hungry!  Sounds like Bella's mind isn't dwelling on sad stuff today!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 24

Both the saddest and yet sweetest thing, when Bella kissed the ultrsound of her little gorl! Made me cry! I hope she gets payback with that miserable son-of-a-bitch some day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Lordy! Could this man be any sweeter?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

Now I don't want Edward to leave Bella's side until someone kills James! There aren't enough hideous things to torture that monster with! What kind of animal treats a woman that way? Throw in her uber bitch of a mother and you have the duo from Hell! No wonder she wants Edward to stay with her for a while!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 21

You keep saying things like that, but it's okay, we all know you're lyingabout being held by Fireward! This next chapter sounds like it's going to upset everyone, Bella as she tells them and them as they hearit!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 20

This caused a big lump in my throat, just from what little she divulged! Now I want to strangle her mother and hide the body!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

It's great that Emmett is wise to what a bitch Rose is and isn't too upset with her stomping out of dinner. Now, on to what was thrown and what happened to Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

Her gram's recipe sounds sinfully delicious! Edward sure seemed to be an instant fan! I like that they agreed to be friends, that's the best way to start!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh great! Rose is going to be a bitch to him because his ex is her friend! She needs a better class of friend, maybe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

He's probably right about his sister wanting to set him up with her new friend! Just as he's probably right about her not being ready for a relationship. I think he's made the right choice about just being her friend , for now!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

As with Alice's injury, it was real handy for Bella to hurt herself where Edward was there to help her home!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad they met up again, even though Bella had to hurt herself to do so!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

That really is pretty sad when the offer of a listening ear causes tears! Who is this person that hates most in the world?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wouldn't like a text like that, without a hint as to who it's from! The girls had a good time, though! Too bad Bella doesn't know how hungover Alice will be!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well, at least she said she would tell, just not now!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Don't know what kind of a time Bella had, but Alice obviously had a really good time! Handy that she has an emt brother to help her ankle sprain, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

Emmett is usually the comic relief, just because he's so good at it! His prediction is going to come true I'm thinking.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, what a coincidence, and they don't even realize they are talking about the very same woman! Okay, probably no more of a coincidence that Alice and Edward are most likely related!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Tanya just never wants to let Edward get away from her, does she? Sounds like a well trained, smooth functioning unit!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Gee, poor Edward, that would be a sight you might have to bleach out of your brain! He doesn't sound any more anxious to get another girlfriend than Bella does to date again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

The guys sure appreciated the gesture and it's a damn shame Bella didn't feel she could just accept Edward's offer of dinner! I sense a lot of pain and perhaps heartache there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

How very nice, of him for reaching the top shelf, and of her for buying the groceries for the fire station!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Looks like they will be friends and Alice's clothing designs are made for Bella's style!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

The new home sounds great and her career sounds fascinating. I get the feeling there are a few things we have yet to learn about Bella and I look forward to it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that Bella has been left all this money by her grandmother! She is usually written as not having much and this is a pleasant difference. The adversarial relationship with her mother is more normal, but living in Chicago will be a change!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 4:46 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow what an incredible story. Enjoyed reading it all weekend long. So very sorry about your loss. I lost my mother and father 2 years this coming December. I still talk to her while driving to work. :-). Always enjoy your writing. Thanks meg.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh I so loved it that was awesome beautiful fun sweet silly and amazing thank you 

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:00 PM Title: Epilogue

So sad this is over but it was ended perfectly! Loved every bit of it!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 4:13 AM Title: Epilogue

Thanks for a great ride.. so worth it.

Til next time
E/k

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:50 PM Title: Epilogue

What a great story thanks so.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 174

What a happy family love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 173

It was perfect

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 12:26 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 1:40 AM Title: Epilogue

I'm so pleased with how you chose to end this story.
Leah was such a blessing to them.
I would like to think she found her HEA in giving birth to her sister's children.
The firehouse family is a very tight knit community.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story, maybe a sequel some day?

Author's Response:

No sequel but there will be at least ONE future-take. It will be posted on December 27th, revolving around the birth of their third child. 

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 12:49 PM Title: Epilogue

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!! I loved this story.  I am sad to see it end but glad that it was a happy ending....  Your writing is awesome!!!!!!!!  Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful story along with all of your other stories!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:49 PM Title: Epilogue

Once again you created a beautiful story around an amazing idea! Thank you so mucg for sharing it with all of us:)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:29 PM Title: Epilogue

very nice ending! thanks for all you give to your readers!

Reviewer: dragonfly81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:41 PM Title: Epilogue

At some point in the middle I already waited for James to be caught and thought about quitting. But I'm glad I stuck through to the end. 

Thank you for your lovely story.

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:01 PM Title: Epilogue

fantastic story

loved it all

well done

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 1:37 PM Title: Epilogue

I absolutely love this story! I am so happy they got the HEA! I am sad I am not going to receive any more updates! lol

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 12:33 PM Title: Epilogue

Aww. Great conclusion. Thanks for sharing! :-)~ Jamie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:48 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved,  loved,  LOVED it!

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 7:09 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved everything about this story! Bravo!!

Reviewer: Nrbl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:50 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it all!!!   

Thank you for sharing it with us

Nance 

Xo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:59 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Awesome story. Merci!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:20 AM Title: Epilogue

good ending. thanks for sharing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:39 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful end to a wonderful story.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:15 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story!

 

Thank you for sharing! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 3:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it 😍

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:40 AM Title: Epilogue

Love love love this chapter.  I hate that Garrett got hurt and pushed away from everyone but it is understandable. Proud of Emmett with his son and his job. 

I am sorry that this story is ending.  I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:39 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story and the epi was great. So sad about Rose and Em feeling so depressed and guilty over it.   Going to miss this story. 

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:25 AM Title: Epilogue

Please do a one-shot of the new baby that Leah is carrying for Edward and Bella

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 174

Thanks for giving us this story. I enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 174

I really appreciate the visual aids you attach to your stories.
Harold is the perfect imperfect sidekick to Edward's new phase of life. I'm sure he will be around well into their future careers.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 174

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 174

Lol, at Harold calling Edward the morning after his wedding. Perfect honeymoon. I am sad that this story is coming to an end. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 174

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 174

I love this story! These characters! Although, Harold drives me nuts! I can't believe there is only an epi left! WOW! I am excited to see how you wrap things up!! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 174

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 174

Wonderful times for our kiddos.   Been kinda worried that Harold was a bad omen but guessing he's just a nerdy guy with little people skills. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 173

Such a beautiful wedding for a wonderful couple.  They deserve nothing but happiness after their last year. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 170

You caused me to tsar up at work again. Amazing chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 173

Love this chapter.  It is PERFECT 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 173

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 173

My favorite chapter, so far! They made it! They're married and finally overcame all the odds! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 173

Wonderful Wedding day and night.  :-)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 173

Their abstinence increased the desire and hieghted the climax!
Peter and Charlotte are next. Haha

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 173

Very good :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 173

Oh I loved it that was beautiful and fun 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 173

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 173

good

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 173

Loved it! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 173

Lovely wedding and wedding night for them.  So happy that they have finally have what they wanted, to be married.  So sad the story is winding down, I'm going to so miss it.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 173

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 173

Sweet!!   Loved the wedding :D 

 

Loved the pics on your blog!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 173

That was amazing!  Their wedding was absolutely gorgeous!  I loved the pics on your Tumblr!  Cannot wait to see how you wrap it all up :)

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