Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 122
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 122
Glad the detectives ate on their side and believe them. Also glad that Bella is not putting up walls with Edward. She may need to talk to her therapist.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 122
Wow this is so messed up but will they get him before he hurts anyone else update soon
Date: 07 Mar 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 122
At last, a break in the story! It's nice to see some comfort loving between them and to have good news from the detectives. Thanks!
Date: 07 Mar 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 122
I am so enjoying this story I love all your stories you're an awesome writer.
Date: 07 Mar 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 122
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I hope they don't have to go through to much more with James and Renee! I can't wait for more! Good news? Hmmm...yes, I am intrigued! ;)
Date: 07 Mar 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 122
OK we are getting closer... NOw they are on James' track and he knows it! So probably he has something prepared for the police pursuing him??
See you soon, I can't wait!
Date: 07 Mar 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 122
They needed that and I am so glad she is not going to fall for what James wants.
Date: 07 Mar 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 122
Loving this!!
James and Renee are evil!
Date: 07 Mar 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 122
Glad these cops are being helpful. Poor kids
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 121
James is too arrogant to worry about cameras. He thinks he is untouchable. He doesn't know Voight.
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 121
Wow. I knew Phil was dirty. But who would of thought he was that dirty. And I'm sure that was the appeal to Renee. Wouldn't put anything past that bitch. I'm sure she sold Bella to James.
Date: 03 Mar 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 121
Loved it can't wait for more a86;a039;
Date: 03 Mar 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 121
I am glad that the cops believe Bella. Can't wait to find out more about James and his plans. Did he know about the cameras or not?
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 121
Well, I guess they'll know the why shortly.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 121
Renee probably does know everything
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 121
Ugh I love Sergeant Voight!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 121
I am sure that James is too egotistical to think he will get caught. Or just too crazy. And I am sure scaring Bella is a perk. Given what Phil does, I am sure that Renee knows. She is too cold to care.
Date: 03 Mar 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 121
Oh wow, that was intense! I cannot wait for James...Phil...and Renee to all be brought down ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 121
I think Renee is behind it all and James wants to make sure that Bella knows it was him.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 121
I'm of the firm belief that Renee is the mastermind behind it all. She will be the weak link that brings down her husband's illegal businesses. She's not smart enough to cover her tracks. James is too cocky. He allowed himself to be caught on camera. He will continue to make mistakes. But not before the next target has been destroyed.
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 121
They now have enough evidence to nail James' ass!! I hope they do it promptly so nobody else has to get hurt!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 121
Oh wow how did James get him to take the pill and now that they know who will they stop them before someone else get killed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 121
well at least these two cops are acutally doing something. hmm so Phil is involved too huh?
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 121
So he fried Laurant?? I hope Renee is next!! Looking forward to more:D
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 121
WOW!! They are figuring it all out!! I am excited for more!! :)=)
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 120
I think Alice is next. I am so glad he made her talk with him and shows her how much he loves her.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 120
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 120
Awe between Edward and his family she has the support she needs and love
Date: 01 Mar 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 120
I am glad that Bella did not push Edward. Maybe they both need to go talk to her theripist.
Date: 28 Feb 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 120
Love that show!
Date: 28 Feb 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 120
Poor B. Glad E is being strong for her. Esme is a saint. Why do I get the feeling the cops are going to be unhelpful?
Date: 28 Feb 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 120
So sad for them. They don't deserve what is happening to them.
They will get through this together.
Date: 28 Feb 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 120
Hm... I'm glad Edward could get to Bella, even if I have a feeling that wasn't the last break down she'll have:(
Next? I think either Alice's store or maybe Emmett's condo - as they're the next best available people that are very close to both Bella and Edward ...
Date: 28 Feb 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 120
Oh wow, that was amazing! I hope the drama won't be too bad. Can't wait for more!
Date: 28 Feb 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 120
sorry, luv, but I just don't know what to say here anymore. it's disaster after disaster with no end in sight. I love your storytelling and I love angst but is there no relief, no joy for them any time soon? i hate to see Bella retreat into herself here so much. I hope the detectives can give them some answers and that they can give the detectives some clues...
Date: 28 Feb 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 120
These two have been through so much!! Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 120
I'm concerned Alice's shop will be next!
How will Edward sell a gutted out space?
Date: 28 Feb 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 120
As long as Bella and Edward are safe!
Date: 26 Feb 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 119
I like how your story has Bella depending on Esme realizing what a true mother is. I look forward to the next post.
Date: 25 Feb 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 119
Loving this. So glad Mama Esme has spoken!!
Looking foward to more :D
Date: 24 Feb 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 119
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 119
Poor Bella. I am so glad that Esme is there to show her a what a real mother is suppose to be like.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 119
I love Momma Esme. No one messes with her. I feel so bad for Edward and Bella, and their family and friends. I can't wait for next update.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 119
Good question how they got into a supposed secure Condo.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 119
She thinks she needs to leave them all to keep them safe that would make anyone fall apart.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 119
I'm sure it's pure agony Bella is feeling right now, and I can't even start to get an idea how Edward must be feeling!
The decision to go to his parents house was probably the best for all of them...
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 119
Oh, this one made me cry. She doesn't know how to deal with this, and I don't blame her. There has got to be a way to connect thisto James and Renee! Keep up the great work!
Date: 24 Feb 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 119
This is such a great story! I love it and am always excited for the next chapter!! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 119
I'm hoping Renee's impatience will cause her to show her true colors. Sooner than later. Exposing the plan and implicating James. The capture of his person will be the difficult thing to pull off. He has connections.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 119
Poor all of them that had to be scary
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 119
Oh my gosh! So many emotions! I loved this! Can't wait for more! Hope James and Renee are caught soon!!
Date: 23 Feb 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 118
Edward is going to have to be strong and not let Bella run. She will sacrifice herself for him.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 118
If I were Bella i'd have reacted the same. I'd hate to see my loved ones hurt because of me.
Date: 21 Feb 2015 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 118
Oh man!! Poor Bella and Edward. Hate Bellla?? She can not control James or Renee? Horrible people!!
Looking forward to more! Hope you are staying safe and warm with all the cold and snow! :D
Date: 21 Feb 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 118
great story, hope you post soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 118
They need to get them. I mean the good guys get the bad guys. Keep on writing.
Date: 21 Feb 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 118
Ok finally the police are involved in the matter and Bella has openly named the possible connection of the fires. It is best to let them do their work and hopefully the final curtain of Renee's and James' plan will not be lifted...
It is totally understandable that Bella is upset and fears for being left, but this will never be the case and I'm sure that some girl time with Esme will calm her down :)
Looking forwar to reading the next part!!
Date: 21 Feb 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 118
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 21 Feb 2015 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 118
I just hope she does not shut people out so they dont get hurt.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 118
This has to be hard on everyone but more so Edward and Bella
Date: 21 Feb 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 118
I just want to hug them both until everything is okay. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 118
Poor Bella is so hurting from all of this and it was right that his dad stopped him from going to her and let his mom do it. Sometimes a girl needs a woman or a real mom like Esme to be with her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 118
How quickly will the police find the connection that Edward and Bella already know exists?
Will Renee somehow slip up and lead them to James?
Date: 21 Feb 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 118
I'm surprised it has taken so long for this to be turned over to the police! I know, it's a slow burn story, no pun intended, but I hope they catch James and Renee soon....
Date: 21 Feb 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 118
At least they are now on the trail of James. I hope they catch him before anyone else gets hurt but somehow I don't think it will be that simple. If only this was an episode of CSI.
Date: 21 Feb 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 118
I knew she would feel quilty.
Date: 21 Feb 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 118
awww poor Bella. Why would we hate Bella? Not her fault her ex and mom are freakin psychopaths.
Date: 19 Feb 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 117
I'm glad no one else was hurt. Thank God for insurance. Stuff can be replaced. I'm glad Bella has great security. I hope it includes fire.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 117
Did Renee and James even consider the fact that they would be pushing Edward and Bella closer together with all this death and distruction surrounding them?
Date: 18 Feb 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 117
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 117
Hopefully they can get some clues that will lead them closer to James. And I think it's good they are talking about moving in together. It makes sense to me. Maybe he should talk to someone about his nightmares.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 117
I would just assume that Edward would move in with Bella. Especially to keep her safe. She could be next.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 117
So sad the thought of losing her is killing him she feels the same. How could he not think he was going to move in with her he is there most of the time anyway I know he was trying not to push himself on her. He is such a great guy.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 117
I would assume Edward would move in . They are engaged what's the big deal about moving in together.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 117
Can't really blame them for having nightmares with everyting going down
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 117
ugh. his dream was gruesome. won't them staying together make them both easier targets? i know they want to be together at all times, but that will make it easier for the arsonist to get them both at once....unless the arsonist is caught soon...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 117
Poor Edward that had to have been so scary now what will they find at his place
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 117
Wonderful! I feel so bad for Edward, but I know things will work out for the best.