[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 129
poor Peter. I hope Bella is okay
Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 129
Oh man... I really hope Bella is ok. She has not been keeping a low profile and James has proven he can get to everyone around her...
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 129
RREALLY! !!!!! JUST KILL US WHY DON'T YOU??? (lol) READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 129
Oh evil with the cliffy. So glad Peter is okay and he gave them valuable information to use against James.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 129
Go Peter. Glad he came out of it alive at least.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 129
Sorry....Cliffie......Run and hide girl....run and hide....LOL!!!!!!!!!
I hope no one has gotten to Bella, like Renee.
As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 129
oh oh. Did James get her? I'm so glad the cops now have enough evidence, but not so happy that he may have Bella now. He's delusional, but I hope that doesn't get him off with an insanity plea....
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 129
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 129
Oh my Peter is a real fighter now where is Bella and is she ok
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 128
Please update soon! Its a damn good story
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 128
I'm glad Peter got away. I'm really worried about a slow going to Orlando. I hope it isnt a trap. With Edward hiring security, I would think someone would go with her or have security waiting for her in Orlando. Can't wait til the next chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 128
Glad Peter is ok. Hope they catch a break soon in regards to that psycho
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 128
Oh my poor Bella, but Peter is ok. I just wish your chapters were longer. I adore this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 128
The fact that Peter was able to identify James should be enough to charge James with something, I would think!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 128
I have a feeling the engegement photos Peter took of E&B were used to start the blaze. So happy Peter escaped further injury.
Does Renee know Bella's in Orlando?
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 128
James is upping his evil game....
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 128
very glad Peter got away. I hope this means that Bella will be safe in Orlando
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 128
Peter was very lucky
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 128
I am so glad that you did not let Peter die in the fire. That would have been devastating to Bella. Thanks for letting Peter see James.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 128
OMG! I am freaking out! James is getting too close! *biting nails* I love this story! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 128
Oh Wow Bella is gone and Peter is attached thank goodness he is alive now what will he say about what happened
Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 128
So happy Peter is alive but this is going to mess Bella up bad.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 128
Phew so glad Peter is ok I really like him.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 128
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 127
Some very sweet loving.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 127
I love this! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 127
Oh I loved it Alice is funny and sweet but hot damn Edward and Bella are yummy together more please
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 127
That was so sweet and loving.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 127
I do agree that they needed a day to relax and have fun. I am sure Bella and alice will approach their weddings very differently. But I am sure the engagement announcement will cause more drama.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 127
thanks. i love lemons, and theirs shows vividly how much they love each other. i hope they can get past the drama soon and have some peaceful happiness together. thanks for writing this!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 127
Glad for Alice and Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 127
A moment of celebratation was exactly what everyone needed.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 127
Glad they had some fun. Loved their time together.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 127
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 126
That was so sweet. Dont let Renee be Peters new girlfriend
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 126
Sweet but too short as always.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 126
Hahaha freezing but I bet the pictures are perfect and Alice she is too funny
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 126
Nothing like a little love to warm you up on a cold day. Such a sweet photo shoot. Now there are two engagements to celebrate.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 126
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 126
Will Peter find a girlfriend by the time E&B get married? That would be a pleasant happening amongst all the stress.
Yay, Alice is engaged! More happiness to be shared.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 126
lol for freezzing
Date: 22 Mar 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 126
Glad they had fun taking their engagement pictures.
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 126
Sweet!! :D
Date: 19 Mar 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 125
This story really just keeps me coming back to see if you have updated. It is a great story with it's ups and downs. Keep it going, it is quite worth it. Great job and thank you for writing it.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 125
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 17 Mar 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 125
I love momma Esme
Date: 17 Mar 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 125
I think this is part of James's plan...to wear Bella down mentally by hitting those around her instead of just burning down her house or her office. Stay strong Bella.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 125
I'm sitting on pins and needles just like Bella waiting for another tragic event.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 125
Glad B is seeing a therapist and not just wallowing.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 125
Boohoo to those that don't like angst. (Really just kidding) I love the mystery and angst, otherwise stories can sometime be boring.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 124
Sweet Lord, she's going to have a nervous breakdown if things don't get better soon. Bella is in so much emotional agony it's scary.
I'm happy she's determined to live her life with Edward. She's so amazing.
Edward is a rock for her and so loving. I love this Peter. I wish he was real. I'd love to meet him.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 125
Excited for the next one! ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 125
I know this story is a slow burn (no pun intended), however I'm almost in as much agony and fear as Bella.
I do so hope Jasper proposes to Ali Cat soon. She so deserves it. then she can design two Wedding dresses and one each Maid and Matron of Honor dresses for each wedding.
As always, wonderful writing.
Thanks so much for this amazing story.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 125
Glad that Esme is there for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 125
Oh how sweet Bella does need the love and support they are giving her they are great now what is next
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 125
engagement party and weddingn planning! all good stuff. now if James and Renee would only be caught!.....
Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 125
Oh, wow!! Poor Bella! I know you have plans on when James gets caught. But I hope he get the poopy flu!!! Cause if anyone deserves it.... yep thats him!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 124
Are you stating that Peter is not going to be a target?
With 16 chapter to go before your HEA anyone could be at risk.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 124
I'm glad that Bella is standing up for herself now. Also that Peter is OK. Hope it stays that way! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 124
I love this! I love strong Bella! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 124
That is right James be damned and Renee to.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 124
Glad that Peter did not get hurt. Loving this story.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 124
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 124
Uh oh. Something wicked is coming. :(
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 124
Poor Bella! She has to be loosing her mind!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 124
Glad Peter is OK. Can't blame her for being anxious
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 124
I loved it she is ready now will James or her mom show up soon
Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 123
Bella will be devestated if something happens to Peter. I agree with Bella, something is going to happen. I'm worried for all of them, waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Can they do some kind of fund raising to rebuild Seth & Leah's bar? Since it was such a big hangout for so many regulars, I'm sure they could rebuild and the. Some between insurance money and fundraising. Plus, couldn't Esme get some cost savings through some of her contacts.
Can't wait for next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 123
Peter is going to be trapped in one of the buildings that were suggested as photo shoots. I fear he will be the next fatality.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 122
How will Voight and Halsted track down James and Renee. I'll bet James is using his father's private plane in and out of Jacksonville.
Do we know for sure that Phil Dwyer is directly involved?
Date: 11 Mar 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 123
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 123
Nooo not Peter we love him.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 123
I hope Peter knows what James and Bella's mother looks like. He needs security when he goes on assignments.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 123
I hope nothing happens to Peter it will hurt Bella compleatly
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 123
I suspect it was James. That call was stupid and shows me he is far too cocky and thinks he will get away with this just because he hasn't been caught so far. I hope he burns, literally, and soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 123
I hope Peter will be alright
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 123
Eeek!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 123
Oh-oh! Things don't sound good for him. Ewww!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 123
Oh my. I hope nothing happens to Peter. Bella would feel so awful if it did.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 123
Poor Bella this has to hard to deal with what will James do next
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 123
Poor Peter is going to die isnt he??
Damn them to the firest pits of hell James and Renee!!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 123
Glad she made sure Charlie and everyone has security in place. Still wondering how he got laurant to take that pill though.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 123
No Peter!! Don't go!!