Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
I LOVE IT,PLEASE DONT MAKE US WAIT TWO WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE YA
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm afraid I have to. I need to weeks to get a chapter written, betad and ready to post :(. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
i am glad edward and bella had a moment and it brought them together
man wasn't expecting rose and em to go at each other throats wow
love it
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts. Yeah, Em and Rose were fun, right? They get a sick kick out of fighting. See you next chapter.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
I was expecting someone to question paternity, and Jasper stepped right in that role. Alice was a bit too accepting with no knowledge of the type of girl Bella is.
I love that Rose and Emmett were battling over everything. Though, Em did come off a little harsh over the pregnancy. Edward to the rescue, I have a feeling he'll be doing that a lot soon enough.
As for the sneak peek... I'm guessing they ran into Carlisle. He's gonna be a dick, I know it.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Jasper won't be the only one to question the paternity but Edward doesn't and won't in the future, either. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. He and Rose will fight some more in the chapters to come. They really seem to enjoy it. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).
Date: 25 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Very well written! The tension and feeling of the atmosphere was detailed. HAPPY!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! My betas pay very close attention to atmosphere and detail. I'm glad readers appreciate their hard work ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Loved it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do. It's very rewarding to know that readers enjoy my work. See you next chapter.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Edward and Bella get along great with out there comic relief couple lol. Bella is meeting Mr. Cullen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reveiw. I like to give my stories a bit of comic relief every now and then and Emmett and Alice are usually the best way to do it ;). You're right, Dr. Cullen will be in the next chapter, but will Bella meet him? We'll see.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
I liked Alice and Jasper way better than Emmett. At least Jasper didn't attack anyone. I'm not liking Emmett very much. Its good that Rose took up for her. Why didn't the pill work? Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him.
I promise, they'll find out why the pill didn't work. No way of birth control is 100% effective, apart from abstinance that is, but The Bible makes me doubt that, too ;). Anyway, there's a reason why it didn't work in Bella's case, but it'll take until chapter 7 for them to find out.
See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).
Date: 25 Aug 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Love Emmet get to the point still can't wait for your next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. See you in a bit.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Has a feeling Jasper would ask those questions. I bet Daddy C will ask even more.
yey for Alice. Ugh Em and Rose are a pair aren't they. Glad E told them off a bit.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm sure as a laywer, Jasper has to be sceptical. But he'll support Edward in his descision. Carlisle for sure won't. But that's for a later chapter to tell. Yeah, Alice is her usual optimistic self. And Rose and Emmett are like polar opposites - for now. See you next chapter.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Well, I think Jasper and Alice were appropriate but I wanted Edward to punch Emmett in the face! Emmett was especially obnoxious and Rose fed off that. I think Edward and Bella should have left them there to argue.
Possibly your sneek peek if talking about Edward's father?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy that you do ;).
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I am really excited about this story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Next up is a meet and greet with Alice and Jasper, then Rose and Emmett. See you Monday.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Edward did right by Bella. It will be interesting to see what Edwards family will do.
Author's Response: It'll take a while until he'll tell his parents. But Alice and Jasper are next. See you then.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Sucks. Good to know your own path.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Edward needs to find his own way. And he will - eventually.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
So embarrassing. But, green eyes...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Those eyes... I'd love to see them for real.
Date: 15 Aug 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Strangely, I did not receive an e-mail alert that there was a new chapter, so my review is late ;-)
I'm really glad that Bella told Edward and that both of them react so responsibly! This really looks like they could hit it off! ;-)
I'm happy to learn about Emmett's next failures of good behaviour and hope that you post soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't get the email alert. But I don't mind a later review. They're always great, whenever I get them ;). Bella and Edward will definitely spend lots of time together, but we'll see how close they'll get. But remember, the prologue gave a HEA garantee. Next chapter we'll meet Alice and Jasper, and there will be fun times with Rose and Emmett. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I like that Edward was so on bord almost from the moment she told him tat she was pregnant, i really liked the chapter and cant wait for the next one.. the teaser tells me its gonna be fun ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Edward's a real sweetheart. Next chapter will be fun with Emmett, Rose, Alice and Jasper. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I LOVE IT SO MUCH, THANK YOU!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Next update will probably take two weeks :(. Hope to see you then anyway.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
well edward was quite the person and manned up good for him
well here is to getting to know each other before a mini me pops out
love it
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving your thoughts. Yeah, Edward's a very responsible guy. And he knows how bad a father can get, so he wants to do better. They'll have moths until Peanut will be added to the mix. Lots of time for interesting situations ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
riley is not worth bella's time, good ridens
wow i didn't think she would tell edward but good for her he needs to know
loving it and looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks! Riley's an ass but he loved Bella very much at some point. They weren't meant for each other and he handled the situation badly. But the good thing is, it make her meet Edward.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I love it Edward is so cool he is excited because he knows she is the one can't wait for more. Emmett is to funny
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Edward's glad Bella can't run now. They're in it for most of their lives. We'll see what they make of it. And there'll be more Emmett next chapter - and some Alice and Jasper, too. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Edward took the news better than expected, considering how it came about. I think they'll be fine, as long as Carlisle stays out of it.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks again! Edward is driven by his bad relationship with his own father. He'd do a lot to not end up like him. And I think it's clear Carlisle will try to interfere as soon as he knows. But how soon will he know? We'll see ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
oh goodness edward. seems you have quite the shoes to fill or at least daddy wants you to fill
loving it
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Carlisle has lots of expectations and Edward hasn't had the strength or a reason to stand up to him. But he will - eventually.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
oh goodness bella
she is a shy one and scares too fast. poor edward he just wanted to take her home such a gentlemen
can't wait to see what happens next love it
Author's Response: Thanks! Bella was totally out of her depth. That's why she overreacted. But she can't forget Edward ;).
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Loved it!
xo
Author's Response: Thanks! We aim to please ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Ugh em has NOOOOO filter does he. Glad E took it well and didn't go a freaky on her.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. No, Emmett doesn't have a filter. And there'll be more of that next chapter. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Really great chapter...They both handled the situation much better than I thought..I should be interesting to see how they handle getting to know each other and adding their friends and family into the mix...
Author's Response: Thanks! There will for sure be some friends and family in the next chapters. And it'll be interesting. See you then.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Post soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wish I could post faster, but I really can't. Sorry. But I'll post as soon as possible.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Wow!Quite a story you weave. It is really well done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoy it. See you next chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I can't believe how wonderful Edward was. He really could have been a jerk and treated her badly. I can only imagine how shocking that kind of news would be.
I'd hate to see his parents reaction if they didn't even like the girls he dated...
Emmett cracks me up... can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Edward's a real sweetheart. And he wants to do better than his own father. That should be a good motivation. If you like Emmett, you should love the next chapter. There will be more of him, but some Alice and Jasper, too. See you then.
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Yes that went so much better than I imagined! When Carlisle freaks out & is a complete jerk, my guess is Bella is going to be a good support system for Edward.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Carlisle won't be happy, that's for sure. But will he just be grumpy or will be pose a real problem? We'll see eventually. Until next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
EDWARD WAS SHOCKED BUT UNDERSTANDING NO SUPRISE THERE....AND BELLA SEEMS OPEN TO TRYING TO BE GOOD PARENTS "TOGETHER" I GUESS THE PROBLEM WILL BE CARLISLE SINCE HE HAS SNOOTY WANTS FOR EDWARD. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Who wouldn't have been shocked? But Edward reacted very well. Yeah, Carlisle will sure be a problem, but before that, there will be some other things to handle. See you next chapter.
Date: 11 Aug 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Sweet chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. See you next chapter.
Date: 11 Aug 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
I'm glad Edward took it well. That would be so odd to have to go through. I can't wait to see them get to know each other better. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I think, if I were Bella, I would have died a thousand deaths if I had to tell a complete stranger news like that. But he's a good guy. And the getting-to-know-each-other will be interesting. See you next chapter.
Date: 11 Aug 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Such a good story
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! You won't have to wait long. Next update tomorrow! See you then.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
I loved the comment "he isn't the brightest candle on the cake." I'm going to be using tht comment.
Riley is such a selfish douche bag! Keeping her on the side for a year while he was away screwing someone else.
I'm thinking especially after your sneak peek that Edward probably freaks out at first but then excepts it and probably has some anxiety about his dad knowing but also will enjoy pissing his dad off. I'm also guessing that his dad insists on a paternity test.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It's a German saying but I thought I could just translate it and use it because it's self-explanatory. Yeah, Riley's an ass but I want to believe that he really loved Bella once. So, you think Edward will freak and then enjoy pissing off his dad. Well, one thing's for sure, Carlisle will be pissed. But I'm not sure Edward will enjoy going against him. We'll see eventually how it'll all play out. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
This is pretty good! I think Edward will step up since itwill really piss off his father.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. About Edward's reaction, I'm not sure he'd intentionally piss of his father but he certainly will to be in the baby's life. See you next Monday with his reaction.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Well.... yeah Riley is a collasal douchebag. At least she's not tied to him in any way anymore, but especially biologically. Pretty sad when the result of a one night stand is preferable! Definitely looking forward to then next chapter. Judging by the mention of a hidden bottle of Jack coming into play, should be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Riley's an ass. And I think Bella's quite relieved that she's not having his baby. Next chapter definitely will be interesting. I had a blast writing it. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
I'LL LEAVE THE STORY TELLING TO YOU CAUSE YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB SO FAR. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's good you're leaving things to me since I've already written nine chapters. If I'd let someone else have a say now, there could be some problems ;). CU next chapter.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Re chapter 3: Edward is going to be thrilled to see Bella again...shocked at what she has to say...and then maybe thrilled again that this news means she will stay in his life? ;)
Author's Response: I almost liked your first idea better. But this one's more realistic I think. Let's see if Edward's more romantic or more realistic ;).
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Oh yeah, Riley's a nice piece of work. Who wouldn't want a man like that?
Edward was considering taking Emmett up on his blind dates. I really hope Edward is home alone when Bella gets there.
From reading Edward's thoughts, he's gonna be overwhelmed and think about what his father, Carlisle is gonna say about Bella being pregnant. I'm hoping he won't be a jerk about it, and accuse her of setting him up.
Looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can tell you that Edward won't be home alone when Bella arrives, in fact, his guest will even open the door. But who could the guest be? I think you have a good idea as to what Carlisle will think and do. But first, he has to find out, right ;)? See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
So Riley is the big idiot that I expected him to be ;) That was really heartless of him and he could as well have stayed in London directly! Moron...
BUT Bella takes up on her responsibility and does exactly the right things: She ends this shindig with Mike and will inform Edward of her situation! I like this, there are so many stories with spontaneous mistakes in these moments, but here Bella does the only right thing!
Of course Edward will be shocked, that's only natural. But I also think that the two of them will be able to talk about it and how it will affect both of their lives. They both know that neither of them has the full responsibility for the pregnancy and so far both of them reacted very mature! PLUS Edward will be over the moon for Bella standing in front of his door ;)
Looking forward to the next part!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I like your take on the chapter and the sitation in general. We'll see next chapter how much of you're guesses are right ;). See you then.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
So Edward does remember some things about their night together, and he's surmised he didn't use a condom. Carlisle is a real dick. Edward needs to grow a backbone and tell his father he's gonna live his own life, not the one Carlisle instructs. Gotta love Em.
Sherry
Author's Response: Oh no, seems like I overlooked this revie so far. Sorry, I haven't replied earlier. Thanks a lot. Edward will eventually stand up to Carlisle and make some changes in his life. But it'll take some time until then.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like the story. See you next chapter.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Looking forward to seeing how Edward takes the news...until next time :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You'll definitely learn all about Edward's reaction from the horse's mouth, so to speak since we'll be in Edward's head. See you then.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
I think Bella did well not to give Riley a well placed kick. Edward is going to be thrilled and shocked and I can't wait to read it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It's interesting that you're the only one so far who thinks Edward will be thrilled. We'll difinitely see next chapter how Bella's revelation will go. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Oh!! So excited! Can't wait to read Edward's reaction! :D LOL!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I promise, next chapter will tell you all you need to know about Edward's reaction. We'll be in his head when Bella tells him. See you then.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Riley is a creep good ridins . I am excited she is on her way to see Edward I think he is going to freak but he will man up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You're right, in the long run, Bella can be happy to be rid of Riley. So, you think Edward will freak out? Hmmm, we'll see ;).
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
OMG!!! Please update soon. I can't wait til they are back together.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I promise you'll only have to wait until next chapter for them to be at least in the same room again. See you then.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Thanks for the update! I'm dying for them to see each other again!! Great chapter...
:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You won't have to wait long for them to meet again. After all, Bella will be able to find her way back to his apartment. See you when everything will be revealed.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
OMG Riley is a huge arse. Coward. Glad she threw him out. Hmm wonder how e will react.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Riley's been a jerk. But luckily, what happened with him brought her to Edward. You'll see all about his reaction next chapter because we'll be in his head when he she tells him :). See you then.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Post soon love this story
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you love the story. Unfortunately, it'll take two weeks until the next update :(. Hope to see you then nevertheless.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I'm intrigued so much. Looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:12 PM Title: Prologue
I love the start.
Author's Response: Oh no, another one of your reviews I missed while replying. TWCS has a bad habit of switching between different views. I just figured that out and found your two older reviews. I'm so sorry! I'm glad you haven't stopped reviewing anyway. Thanks for your support.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Riley is a piece of work. I hope something bad happens to him.
I think Edward will be happy to see Bella at first, but with his daddy issues, I think he might not take it well. Carlisle will be an issue for them I'm pretty sure.
Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. As far as I've written so far, Riley won't be back. But I'm definitely thinking about having him make another guest appearance.
Edward has daddy issues for sure, but I think he's strong enough to be his own person in a situation as important as theirs. But we'll see.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Well I'll be a monkeys uncle. Riley is an ass, but at least we know how she ended up where she is now. I think Edward will be happy when he first sees her, but can't blame him for shock or pissiness after she drops her bomb.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Riley's a real sweetheart. Shock will most certainly be one of Edward's emotions, but pissiness? Wouldn't that be wrong if HE was the one who didn't use a condom? We'll see when all is revealed next chapter. See you then.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Loved it!! Of course he's going to do the honorable thing!
Author's Response: Thanks! You think he'll do the honorable thing? Maybe drop on his knee and propose? Well, we'll see ;).
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
He's going to hug her because he can't get his mind off of her. And then he'll freak out but Em and Rose will straighten him out!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Interesting thoughts. Well, I won't give too much away but Edward won't run out on her ;). See you with the revelation.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Very good, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter will finally bring them back together ;). See you then.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Thank you for the update-- I am absolutely loving this story!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. See you next chapter when we're in Bella's head again.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
That little teaser was not nice. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I know the short teaser isn't nice but I have to find a way to keep you interested, right ;). If you want a longer teaser, there will be one next weekend in the FB group. See you next chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
No it isn't ok for him to move on with blind date & one night stands so I thank you in advance for us not having to read it. ;) I love this Edward already. This Edward & Bella seem perfect for each other!
Author's Response: I promise he won't really move on. It's more like he's trying to keep himself entertained instead of moping around pining after someone he may never see again. And he won't hook up with anyone. He's a serious guy and although he happened to have a few one night stands, it's definitely not what he's after. He's only thinking about taking a girl out to dinner. Hookups is what Emmett calls them. He'll tell you all about it in his next pov. And there isn't really anything to tell ;), you'll see. But next up, we'll be in Bella's head again. See you there.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Somehow I was missing out and hadn't read this first chapter. This already has put a smile on my face! You always know how to rope us in from the very beginning! The best thing about being behind on reading chapter one is that chapter two is already waiting for me!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found the story after all, and I'm happy you like it. There's a lot more to com.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter. Really enjoyed the peek into Edward's head. And no, I don't necessarily think its wrong of him to move on per se, since he knows that the odds of finding her with so little information to go on is very slim. Even though we obviously know that he will, he has no way of knowing that, and having a date or two when a girl he barely knows the name of is nowhere in sight, nor might he ever be... nothing with that
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Edward will try to move on but I don't know how successful he can be when he's all hung up on Bella. We'll find out in chaper 4. But before that, we get a peek into Bella's head in chapter 3. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Love it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be a lot more, I promise!
Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Sounds good...like Edward is a real sweet guy.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Edward's a real sweetie. Maybe Bella will see it too when she's not in a panic ;).
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Post soon
Author's Response: I'll try, but I can't promise anything other than it won't take longer than two weeks.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
I think she is looking to see when she had her last period. At least Bella knows were to find Edward. I really don't like Carlisle. I can't wait for more!!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You may be right with your guess. Yes, since Edward tried everything in his might to find Bella, it's up to her now because she at least knows where he lives. That is if she remembers. She ran away in a panic after all ;).
I see why you don't like Carlisle. I don't either which makes it hard to write him. But sometimes a story needs a villain.
See you in Bella's head next time.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
He dad sounds like an ass so much presure on Edward. He knows that there is something so special about Bella .
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Carlisle's certainly not up for father of the year, that's for sure. And yeah, Edward sees something special in Bella. Let's see where it all goes ;).
Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Loved Edward's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next up is Bella again.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Well at least Edward isn't going door to door having women try on the bra for a match...LOL...can't wait to see how they meet up again...
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Damn, I should have come up with that idea. Who wouldn't want to have Edward Cullen try to fit them into a bra? Lol! You won't have to wait long for them to meet again. Bella will take the first steps in that direction next chapter. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
AWWW!!!!! I TRULY LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. YOUR RIGHT I FIND IT HARD TO READ EDWARD SLEEPING AROUND ON BELLA EVEN IF THEY ARE'NT TOGETHER YET. IT'S JUST WRONG!! I CERTAINLY HOPE EDWARD CARES ENOUGH FOR BELLA TO ALWAYS STAND UP TO HIS FATHER. WEAK EDWARD NOT COOL. I WISH THE CHAPTERS WERE LONGER AND MUCH MORE FREQUENT BUT THATSUP TO YOU. I JUST HAVE TO WAIT (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks! I promise, Edward won't sleep around. And yes, he'll soon find a reason to finally stand his ground with his father ;). The chapters will be longer soon. There will still be ones around 3,000 words but I just finished chapter 7 and I think it's around 6,000 words. So there are longer chapters to come for sure. See you in Bella's head next time.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Ok so Edward has tried to find Bella, but he is right that this seems rather impossible in a large city like Chicago...
It sounds really cruel how Carlisle treats his son... of course he only wants his best and bla bla, but did Edward really want to become a doctor?
So as for the teaser... Bella will probably find out that she is pregnant! I'm curious how this comes out, how she reacts to it and whether she will inform Rose immediately (but I assume this much)...
Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Edward did what he could to find Bella. Now it's up to either fate or her to bring them together again. I'm not sure if Carlisle really wants the best for his son or if it's the best for himself he has in mind. Edward will reveal more in time. All your questions will be asked next chapter when we're inside Bella's head again. See you then.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Ugh sounds like Carlisle is a real dick in this one. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Carlisle's very OOC. More in about two weeks, maybe less ;).
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
I want to tell Edward, she ran away move on. But I am all for finding your prince/princess. I kinda hate daddy Carlisle right now. Don't see that changing anytime soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. She'll find him soon enough. The only question is, will he like what she has to tell him? Yeah, Carlisle's a real dick and I don't see him changing soon, either. See you in Bella's head next time.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
LOVE IT MORE PLZ.ALSO PLZ DONT LET EDWARD BE A MANWHORE.SO SICK OF THAT!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There will be more for sure. And no, Edward's no manwhore in this story. He's a real sweet one-woman guy ;).
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Great update
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Great start :) I've a feeling this won't be the last time they see each other... Can't wait for more..
Author's Response: Thanks! They'll definitely see each other again (and then again, and again, and again...) Anyway, see you with the EPOV.
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Woohoo! Good start!
Author's Response: Thanks! That was only the start. There's so much more to some. See you with the EPOV.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Poor B. That's what alcohol will do to you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, she should have been more careful, but if you knew about Riley, you'd understand. Bella will tell you all about it in her next pov. See you with the EPOV.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Oh.. No way!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. No way what? I guess no way you'd leave him. Well, neither would I and judging from the other reviews, no one else would. We'll see if it'll do her any good. See you next chapter.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 4:35 PM Title: Prologue
Found this via FB & im adding it to my TBR. Thank you! :)
Author's Response: I just noticed I haven't answered your review to the prologue. I'm so sorry. I appreciated it very much. Hope you're still enjoying the story.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
He would actually have to enlist the help of a couple of guys in order to get me out of that bed!
Author's Response: Thanks! Lol! I wouldn't leave his bed voluntarily, either. I'd probably end up in jail for stalking him ;). Anyway, see you next chapter!
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
OMG i love it, more please ....
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be more. And you'll learn about Edward next. He has some issues. See you next chapter.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
HOLY CRAP I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! CU
Date: 02 Jul 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I think I am going to love this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you will ;). It's really fun writing it. See you with the EPOV.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
very good like it
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll like Edward's pov too. See you next chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying it. See you next chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I am absolutely in this! The first chapter really hit it off and I'm glad you won't be repeating scenes in alternating POVs. Bella is confused, understandably so, and now I am waiting to read how the thing with Riley turned out. And Edward of course, but you can guess as much ;)
I am looking forward to the next part, and don't stress yourself about it, good things take their time! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! No, I won't repeat. Mostly when the povs change, the story either continues where the other pov stopped or there's time in between. Bella will tell you about Riley in her next pov. I'm glad you understand about the updating schedule. I'll give you a new chap as often as I can. See you with the EPOV.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Great start I hope we get to see how they meet an all the good groping
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Yes, Edward will tell you how they met but it'll be some time until there's any groping. After all, he doesn't remember it all that clearly either ;). See you with the EPOV.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I am so excited to see where this story goes. I can't wait to see Edward's POV. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Next chapter will shed a little light on Edward's background and how he met Bella. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
oooooooooo, hot story, love it cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story so far. See you soon with the EPOV.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
OMG I cant wait this sounds so great she will not be able to keep his eye or his good out of her mind.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I can promise you, Bella will be reminded of him a lot. She'll never really forget him. And it won't take long until she realized he left her a very important reminder ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
TEASER NO TEASER. 10 DAYS 14 DAYS DOES/NT MATTER I'LL WAIT. (LOL) SERIOUSLY I DO LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. I'D RATHER THE CHAPTERS BE LONGER BETWEEN WAITS BUT OVERALL STILL WORTH THE WAIT. READ YOU SOON!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I promise, from chapter three on they will be longer. For now, my chapters vary between 2,500 and 5,000 words. Next chapter is about as long as this one but after that, it gets longer ;). See you then.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Love it!!! Please update ASAP! Thank you :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry, but I can't update ASAP without making you wait several weeks for an update at some point. I need about ten days to write a chapter so I can't update earlier than that :(. Hope to see you with the EPOV, anyway.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
I.would have least talked to him. Obviously if you sleep with a guy he deserves that.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, Bella is so far out of her comfort zone that she needed to get away asap. But she will eventually find her way back to his apartment and she will talk to him. Just have a little patience. See you next chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
Wow I know she is freaking out, but that was kinda harsh Bella.Can't wait to see into Edwards mind
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, Edward has a little different take on the whole situation. But, after all, he has the advantage of remembering a bit ;). Bella's totally freaked out, but I think I would be too if I found out I had sex with a man I don't even remember meeting. And knowing what lies ahead, she was totally allowed to freak out ;). See you next chapter.