[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
Loving your story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. See you next chapter then.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
I really enjoy this story but it is almost a slow burn. It's killing me....I am ready for them to revisit some sexy times! Anyway, on another note, I really appreciate the fics that you are rec'ing. I have gone looking for almost everyone of the stories if I haven't read it already.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it's a slow burn but burn it will, I promise ;). There will be some sparks next chapter but the real fire will have to wait for a bit. I'm glad you like my recs. I love getting good recs from other authors as well ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
Love this story cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next up will be something you've for sure been waiting for ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
I love Edward he is the best boyfriend even if he is not. What a great party I think he wanted to rip Mikes face off.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Edward's the best. And I'm sure he hated Mike. Maybe he'll tell us a bit about it next chapter. See you then.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked the surprise. See you next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
I CANT WAIT 2 WEEKS! LOVED IT BUT TANYA IS ALWAYS TROUBLE, I HOPE THERE IS SOME ANGST. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I promise, Tanya won't be trouble this time. But there will be a bit of trouble from someone else. See you next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
I was so hoping she would invite him to sleep in the bed with her. I think she needs to have a nightmare so he can cuddle her ;). I LOVED the gifts he got her. The Pen was an excellent idea!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Great idea about the nightmare. Maybe I'll use it ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
I live for these updates can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the surprise. See you with the next update.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
Love love love this chapter! I had to laugh at Mike. Lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Mike's always good for a little comic relief ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks ;).
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!
awww sweet surprise. Kinda was thinking that Carlisle would be in the apt to ambush them. But I'm glad it was a sweet party.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked the surprise. No Carlisle yet ;). But he'll come up soon. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Ughhh.the frustration....no next button at yhe bottom of this page. I love the story!!! Cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to read on instead of waiting for the story to be completed. The next chapter will be up on Monday and it will be a "Surprise!". See you then.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
I read the sample of your story and decided I would favorute it and wait until iy was completed to read it. So many times I start reading an incomplete story only to be disappointed when the author abandons it. Pleas dont quit writing this one. I am offically sucked in and I cannot wait to see where you will take us! I love that the the characters are not in together in the same old way...ie bella with riley....eiley with victoria amd we dont hate jake!! I love the story so far!!
Author's Response: I totally get your disappointment with the abandoned stories. I have too many of those on my alerts as well and for most of them it's a real shame. But I'm currently writing chapter 16, so I have a little buffer and I'm quite sure the worst thing that could happen here is that the interval between two chapters will be a little longer than two weeks of I can't keep up with writing. But I have the final chapter pretty clear in my head already so I definitely plan on writing it ;).
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Glad they're staying together!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Who says they're staying together? Bella's apartment could be repaired in a few days. But we'll see about that ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
I think Edward is gonna use Bella's apartment being damaged as an opportunity to get her to give them a chance as a couple.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I can't tell you if you're right or not about the couple thing because that would give too much away, but Edward will certainly do his best to keep Bella living with him. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
I love it. They need to be together. They have so much to learn about each other before the baby gets here. They also need to act on there zing for each other.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. They'll spend a lot of time together before Peanut makes his/her appearance. And they may even act on their mutual attraction. But that doesn't mean they'll be a couple any time soon. ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 7:38 PM Title: Prologue
Ok I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are ;). See you next chapter with a "Surprise!".
Date: 22 Oct 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Love the story, and don't worry so far all the stories from esmegrace have had
HEA's she does keep you in suspense
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm not really worried about DH, I just like to be on the safe side ;).
See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Loved it can't wait for more 😀
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter will be a "Surprise!". See you then.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
I am so happy she is staying with Edward he is going to take very good care of her. Did she tell him they can share the bed??? I cant wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, he'll take good care of her. No, no sharing the bed anytime soon. Sorry ;). See you next chapter with a "Surprise!".
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
They are making progress.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. They definitely are. Let's see where it leads.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
So glad they are together in the same apt. Edward turned on the extra smooshie sweetness to get her to stay.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Edward works hard to make himself indispensable. Let's see if it works ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
I am so glad these two are going to be under the same roof! Yeah!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They will be, now Edward has to find a way to get Bella to stay. We'll see how that works. See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
I'm glad that you have thrown them closer together.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Well, I felt like they needed a little push ;). See you next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Well, I felt like they needed a little push ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Loving it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do. See you next chapter with a "Surprise!".
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
:)
Author's Response: Thanks, hun.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Yay they get to spend more time together.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They will spend lots and lots of time together. Let's hope they won't grow tired of each other soon ;). See you next chapter with a "Surprise!".
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! See you next chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Yes yes yes made my week that you updated can't wAit for more
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I could make your week better. See you next chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements
Poor B. Ugh for the stupid fire. Glad she's ok. hee hee for the ruined comics.
Author's Response: Thanks for your Review. I promise, the fire will turn out to be a good thing. Next chapter will be a "Surprise!". See you then.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Glad Charlie and Renee were so accepting. Can't wait to find out what is happening in the next chapter. Hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you like the Swans since I wrote them quite OOC. See you tomorrow with the update.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. See you Monday with the update.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Oh, I love them!!!!! Wonderful story! Everything seems to be falling into place for them to be together... cannot wait!!!!!!! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Everything WILL fall into place, it'll take some time, though. See you Monday with the update.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
I really really really hope they at least kiss before leaving Washington.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Next chapter will start in Chicago again, so, sorry, no kiss in Washington :(. See you Monday with the update.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
It is very funny imagining Renee hanging all over Edward acting like a cougar. I was hoping Renee would put them in the same room.
Author's Response: Sorry, I just found this review again today. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. I liked the image of Renée all over Edward too. And they just needed to sleep in the same bed ;). CU
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Charlie and Renee's acceptance really surprised me, but I'm glad they know and are supportive. I love seeing them sharing their secret loves with each other.
I can hardly wait for Esme and Carlisle to find out.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Charlie's a little OOC in this story, but I really enjoy writing him like that. About the Cullens, you should be glad they don't know yet. It won't be pretty when they find out. See you Monday with the update.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Hehe, of course Renée had to find out about the pregnancy, but I'm really glad the she and Charlie are positive about it and welcome Edward in the family immediately!
It's really nice to see Edward and Bella grow closer and sharing deep secrets with each other and also intensify their ohysical contact. Although it's VERY slow in my view ;-) But still, I can understand Bella's hesitance, but on the other hand, why should she shy away from her own feelings towards edward? We'll just have to wait until she discovers how serious these feelings are!
I'm not quite sure what I should think of Jacob, since he calls Edward a bastard after the first 5 seconds, but since he obviously doesn't love Bella in this very way, he will probably be ok... But in my view he has to proove that he accepts Edward by her side.
As for the preview of next chapter, I assume that this is Edward receiving a call from Bella in the middle of the night? I hope that everything will be ok with little peanut!
See you soon :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful review. Yeah, everything goes very slow but I have a plan and it takes nine months to complete it ;). Bella will give you an explanation for her reluctancy a few chapters from here. And Edward will get it. About Jake, he didn't call Edward a bastard but said "Jealous motherfucker" which wasn't personal but just a colloquial expression that fits the way he talks. He's actually a nice guy, but only a small supporting character. You can rest assured that Bella and Peanut will be okay, but their circumstances might change considerably. That's all I'm saying. See you next chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Renee is certainly perceptive. Jacob sees the love already. Wonder how long it will take E&B B to figure it out. Hopefully not too long.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Renée seems to know her daughter really well. And Jake is looking right through Bella. Edward will soon know what he feels for Bella if he doesn't already. Bella will need some more time. See you next chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Was surprised about jacob.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Why were you surprised about Jake? Because he was nice and not really a threat to Edward? I really like him that way. See you next chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Such a great chapter can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had a lot of fun writing it. See you next chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
I loved this chapter. I think it's cute that everyone else can see that Edward loves Bella already. About the teaser-I am not going to speculate, because I don't want anything to be wrong. Unless Bella has to be on bedrest and Edward has to move in with her to take care of her. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Your guess about the next chapter is kind of close. I had one other reader who was that close to the truth and I rewarded her with a teaser and the title for next chapter. If you haven't disabled private messages, I'll send you the same ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Like seeing a normal Renee for a change and not a biatch or featherhead. Sounds like E's Dad is a real prick.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Renée's still kind of nuts here, I think, but for once she's an adequate mother. And Carlisle's a prick for sure. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Love your story!!! I am not much of a reviewer, but I love it when authors leave story recs at the end. I am interested in the one you posted Artual Maneuvers - planetblue...Is this a tWCS story. I can't locate by story or penname. Could you possibley put the link??
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, although you're not much of a reviewer ;). Unfortunately, Artful Maneuvers isn't here on TWCS, but it's on fanfiction.net and you don't need to be registered to read there. Here's the link to the story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10693749/1/Artful-Maneuvers I hope you'll enjoy it. I do :).
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
:):)
Author's Response: Thanks! CU
Date: 06 Oct 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Jake can see more than Bella the feelings Edward has for her. I love her parents they are so suported.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Everyone sees the attraction, just not Bella herself. But she'll come around eventually. And yes, the Swans are great! See you next chapter.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
That is so awesome how Bella's parents accepted the baby news. I can't wait to see them grow closer. I really hope nothing happens with the baby. Edward's family will not be as accepting I'll bet! I wish Bella would have got him to play the piano. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can assure you that nothing will happen with the baby. It'll be born happy and healthy. You're right, the Cullens won't be as hapyp about the pregnancy as the Swans are. And the piano thing will come up again later ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Writing this chapter was a lot of fun. I'm glad you liked it. See you next chapter.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Loved it can't wait for more 😃
Author's Response: Thanks for reading an reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Writing Renée and Charlie was so much fun. See you next chapter.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Charlie surprised me with letting Edward stay in Bella's room. I think Bella is starting to fall for Edward a little.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I think Charlie surprised everyone. And that was my intention ;). Yes, Bella is falling slowly but surely. That doesn't mean they'll be a real couple next chapter. See you then.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Carlisle is a real piece of work. Edward really has it bad for Bella.
Author's Response: Carlisle's not really dad-of-the-year material. And Edward has good reasons to keep him in the dark about the baby. And it's not because he's ashamed of Bella.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Silence is Golden is a good story.
Glad Alice was excited. Jasper' s reaction did not surprise me with him being a lawyer. Emmett reaction at the restaurant surprised me a little.
I am thinking your little teaser is when Bella meets Edward's dad. And Edward has not told his parents yet.
Author's Response: Alice is a force of nature and normally a happy person. She had to be happy about the baby. And I'm glad you agree about Jasper's reaction. Emmett has his own reasons for reaction the way he does. He's kind of a man-whore and he's scared shitless something like that could happen to him too.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
Edward took that really well. I am glad that he did not freak out.
Author's Response: Edward's thrilled, shocked but happy. Now Bella can't get away again ;).
Date: 23 Sep 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
Riley is a real ass hole. Bella handled that a lot better than I would have. I hope she does not find Edward with another woman in his apartment. Off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: No other women for Edward ;). And if Riley hadn't been an ass, there wouldn't be a story :).
Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale
Edward seems to have it bad for her already. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: He has it really bad. But he'll get his fix soon.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame
This sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It'll sure be interesting ;).
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:55 PM Title: Prologue
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
I CAN'T WAIT 2 WEEKS!!!!! LOL YEAH I CAN IF I HAVE TOO. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm afraid you'll have to. I don't have a chance to update any earlier :(. See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Can't wait for them to be together! Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! They'll be together but all in due time. See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
After weeks of trying to find the opportunity to sit down and catch up, I finally have, and now I'm all ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I need more. Hopefully I'll beable to remain caught up. Loving this story. These two are so adorable and I'm so glad Riley fucked up but that Bella is not all torn up about it either. She sees it for the dick move it was, though understandably hurt bythe betrayal. Good for her!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you found the time to read the story. And, yeah, if Riley hadn't fucked up there wouldn't be any story ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
So here we are - Forks and with it Renee and Charlie - the two are gorgeous! I like them a lot and I'm sure, if they'll ever learn about Bella's and Edward's real story, they won't mind, because Renee has seen from the first second that they will be a wonderful couple! Edward is not really hiding his attraction and willingness to be more than just Peanut's daddy, but Bella, so far, doesn't see that! I wonder when she wil start realizing that there can be more between them! But as I said before, I'm sure this will, unfortunately, take some time ;-)
Sooo, Edward will be a little uncomfortable next time, he? :-P I'm not sure if there's anything he can do about it other than jacking off in the shower, but will he do that in his future parents in law's house?? I doubt it!
Definitely looking forward to the next part - and have some relaxing vacay!
Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful review. Aren't Charlie and Renée great? I'm glad you like them. Bella will realize Edward's intentions soon, but that doesn't mean she'll jump into a relationship with him. Edward will be uncomfortable more than once next chapter, but for different reasons ;). See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
alice is a bt overwhelming
love it
Author's Response: Just noticed that I overlooked this review. I'm really sorry. Thanks for it anyway and I'm really glad you like the story. See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Love the story so far!! I do have one request though with your recs, could you please make sure to say what site they are on as Hoodfabulous is not on TWCS. I'm sure other people looked for them as well with no luck.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm sorry about the recs but so far, they've all been from ffn. I'm not sure if the stories are here too. I post on four sites and to be honest, I don't check if they're up on every one of them. Sorry. So, unless I say otherwise, the recs can be found on ffn. See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Yes Charlie and Renee are so cute and can see that Edward and Bella are meet to be. I hope Bella can see how much Edward cares for her.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, Bella will see it soon but the question is, how will she handle it? See you next chapter!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Just wait until the news of the baby comes out...
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Maybe the news will be better received than you think ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
I LOVE THIS FIC! I HAVE ALSO READ BOTH RECS,THEY ARE BOTH GREAT. LOVE YA!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it, but I'm sorry I couldn't rec anything new to you. Maybe next chapter. See you then.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Love this so far! :) Can't wait to read more.
-Kate
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story. I really enjoy writing it. See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
So far the visit is going well. Way to go Charlie...I didn't expect him to let them sleep together. I was happy to see them getting closer. Edward is so sweet. I hope Renee and Charlie don't hear her throwing up. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for your nice review. Yeah, the visit is going well. There will be a little bump next chapter, no pun intended, but a lot of sweetness, too. See you then.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Loved the chapter....so sweet!
Where can we find these story recommendations? TWCS....fan fiction...??
Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The recs are definitely on ffn, I'm not sure about TWCS, sorry. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
I'm hoping they realize they can have a relationship with each other without all the pretending for Charlie and Renee. I bet Renee figures out Bella is pregnant before they leave to return to Chicago.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving your thoughts. I'm sorry, but they won't figure out their relationship anytime soon. But Renée may have a suspicion ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
thank you.
Author's Response: You're welcome!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Wonder how long till Ma or Pa figures out the pregnancy thing. Glad he's there with B though
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I don't want to give too much away, but they'll know before Bella wants them to ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
Really loving this
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors
I loved the chapter and just want to know how long before they realize that they want a real relationship with each other?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, it'll take some time, though one of them will know much earlier than the other. See you next chapter.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:27 PM Title: Prologue
looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next update will be Sunday.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Well Alice is Alice, liked the chapter and I think Forks should be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. And yes, Forks will be interesting. See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
When the time comes for Carlisle and Esme to be told, at least Edward will have Alice and Jasper's support on the matter. Bella needs to relax a bit more. I'm looking forward to Bella introducing Edward to Renee and Charlie.
Sherry
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You still have a few chapters to go, but I just started writing the part where Dr. and Mrs. Cullen get the news and it's not pretty. Renée and Charlie will be fun. See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Loved it! Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
OH SWEETIE IT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER BUT...I TRULY HATE ANGST AND IT SEEMS TO BE LOOMING ON THE HORIZAN..... DOES'NT IT????? (JUST REMEMBER SWEETIE A HAPPY BELLA IS A HAPPY BABY HE HE HE) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I promise, there won't be much angst. I don't know if you read POMH, but if you did, considering angst, this story has nothing on it. Okay, there will be a bit of tension here and there, but I only really plan one really angsty part and that one will be quite short. Don't worry, there will be a very happy ending ;). See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Ugh his parents sound like real pieces of work. Glad He's being there for B. Em is annoying already.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, the Cullens are difficult. Just met Esme myself a few days ago and I didn't like her ;). Em is annoying but admit it, you love him anyway ;). See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Ok so Bella has not met Carlisle officially yet, seems to be the best for the moment!
Alice and Bella will warm up to eacht other and I can see that maybe Alice will have a small part in opening up bellas eyes for new love :-) I think that she will probably blame the pregnancy hormones for her feelings towards, so I think that maybe they will really take their time until after the birth to completely wrap it up ;-)
I'm glad to see that Bella and Edward can already communicate with each other without even saying a word, this is great news! Although I'm sure that Bella really does not want to see her feelings (as soon as she really develops them...)
Until next time!
P.S.: Your recs are always interesting and I might find some great stories to dive in!
Author's Response: Thanks for your great review! I'm glad you agree that Edward isn't hiding Bella because he's ashamed but because he's protecting her from his father. Things won't get easier once he knows. Some of your guesses about how Edward and Bella's relationship will go are quite close, others not so much, but I won't spoil it for you ;). I'm happy you like my recs. I love it if someone recs a good story to me, too. CU in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
His dad is an asshole dont sound like mom is anymore pleasent that him. Alice loves Bella already.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Carlisle's a jerk. I just wrote Esme's first scene a few days ago and, well, she's not the nicest person either. But Alice is great. See you next chapter in Forks.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Next up, we'll meet Renée and Charlie. CU then.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
LOVE Alice she's a hoot looking forward to how Charlie is going to react I hope he goes all cop on Edward
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You might be surprised by Charlie, though. See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Baby steps..
Author's Response: Baby steps! But they move forward. Next time, we'll see how Renée and Charlie will take the news. CU
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
:)
Author's Response: Thanks! CU
Date: 07 Sep 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Loved the update! Thanks for sharing the story with us.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoy the story. See you in Forks next chapter ;).
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
I loved this chapter! It seemed to move the relationship forward. I am looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! There relationship is constantly moving forward, it just might not be what each of them wants. See you in Forks next chapter.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps
Im happy that everything went so well with Bella meeting Alice and Jasper. Cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, it went well. Next up, we'll see how Renée and Charlie will take the news ;).
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Loving this
Author's Response: Wow! And a third review! You don't do things half-way! I'm so happy you liked my story that much!
Date: 30 Aug 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
I love a man that will take control like that! Shut up Em! Shut it Rose!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Edward's a real sweetheart. And Rose and Em love fighting. But both are on their friends' side. See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
love the story cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. But I'm afraid you'll have to wait about ten more days for the update :(. See you then.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you do. See you next chapter.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Wow there was a lot of stuff in this chapter!
I liked Alice's and Jaspers' reactions! Alice is the ever supporting sister and soon-to-be aunt and she will fully support Edward, also when or after the "secret" is revelad to their parents.
Jasper as Edward's closest friend asks the important questions but without any presumptions, just to make sure he is not running blindly into something, just like the best friend should act!
Yeah, well, Em and Rose... I assume this is a story of hatred before heated love ;-) I think they will, however, discover their affection (if not already) earlier than Bella and Edward can sort out their feelings for each other. They saw that they better behave for Edward and Bella, but as soon as they will be alone, they will fight like cats and dogs again before Emmett just kisses her :-D (my imagination os getting ahead of me again...)
So I think that in the next chapter we will learn about the first encounter of Dr. Carlisle Cullen and Bella... and this does not seem to go well although he does not know anything about her pregnancy yet...
I look forward to it and hope that it doen't take you the full two weeks for the next part ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Jasper and Alice both are supportive in their own special way. And they'll continue to do so down the road. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. Maybe you're right with your guess that Em and Rose will grow closer before Edward and Bella can. For now, they seem to enjoy riling each other up. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
Maybe the best thing is just offer to have DNA as soon as said baby is born. Then his parents and his friends will have no more questions.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Since Edward doesn't doubt her, there's no need for Bella to offer a test so far. But she will, later. I think, though, it might not be necessary if the baby bares some of Edward's particular physical traits ;). We'll see.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News
that went well.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, it did. Edward's just a great guy ;).
Date: 27 Aug 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate
She has to tell Edward. Even thought they are not together. He needs to hear this soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. She will, but you'll know that already.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
OMG-- I absolutely love this story!!! Rose and Emmett gave it a fun twist. Cannot wait until next update! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yeah, Em and Rose are fun. I loved writing that scene. And Em will continue to be obnoxious ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Support System
2 WEEKS FEELS LIKE FOREVER!! ( LOL ) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm sorry, but it takes me 2 weeks to write a chapter :(. See you Monday after next ;).