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Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I'm really glad that Edward has thought about these issues now and that he makes sure that his parents will not have a say in things!
However, I think he should have informed Bella that she is to be consulted when it is about his health... anyway, I think his decisions are very wise and everybody will agree with him - plus I think that Rosalie will be impressed ;)

I think that Rose and Emmett may have some further arguments, but they will make up very soon :P

I bet that it is James (that was Bella's ex, wasn't he?^^) who's there with his new/current girl and that Edward will really have to struggle to reign himself in ;)

See you next time!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. There are several things Edward should have informed Bella about, but telling her about the living will at this point would probably upset her needlessly. Rose and Em will definitely have further arguments. But I like to call it verbal foreplay ;). Bella's ex is Riley. But you may be right about him being back. You'll know Monday.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Yes I do think that Rose is a little out of line but she is very protective of Bella. I can not wait to see what happenes with Emmett and Rose. I knew they were going to sleep together. I am very proud of Edward for stepping up and making previsions for Bella and Peanut. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Rose is very protective, but soon she'll be playing Edward's advocate. Emmett and Rose made a step they can't take back, but we'll see how that changes their behavior toward each other. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I adore Edward for taking the steps he has to protect Bella and Peanut's future.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Edward wants to protect his loved ones. Hopefully, it won't become necessary. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Love it, where is wild child located at?



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Wild Child is on FFn as well as here. Here's the link: http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=6993 See you next chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Loved it can't wait for more 😊



Author's Response: Oh no! I just saw that I never answered this review. I'm so sorry. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Rose does not need to be in the delivery room with Bella. I think she went about it all wrong. Rose should have just offered to support Bella in private, but let Bella and Edward discuss it by themselves. I'm glad Bella chose Edward.
I think Bella's ex is who is in the next chapter. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Oh no! I just saw that I never answered this review. I'm so sorry. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Great chapter! So hhppy that edward did the responsible thing. 



Author's Response: Oh no! I just saw that I never answered this review. I'm so sorry. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I had no doubt that Bella would want Edward there for labor & delivery. Very smart estate planning on Edwards end although, his father has had a lot of influence over his life this far, I'm sure he will have other devious plans if Edward doesn't meet his terms. Hopefully he can him stand up to him.  

And Rose, she is just being a good friend and looking out for Bella. And duh, it was only a matter of time for Emmitt & Rose. Lol.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you can see Rose's point. She wasn't being a bitch on purpose, only toward Emmett ;). Yeah, Carlisle isn't done yet. Two more chapters and you'll know more. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

:)



Author's Response: Thanks ;)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Edward is s responsible, you wonder how he forgot protection when they got together! I loved this chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Edward's responsible, but I think that in the heat of passion, maybe rational thoughts can jump out the window ;). And in hindsight, I think they wouldn't have met again if it wasn't for Edward forgetting about protection. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

As always happy to read and Emmet an rose make me laugh can't wait to read more



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Rose and Em are a hoot. I really love writing them. They basically write themselves. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Rose is so crossing lines here. No matter what her opinion is she went about it the wrong way. It isn't her choice. Im glad Bella grew a pair and asked Edward to be there, it is his right as the daddy. The only other person it would have been alright to have there in the room would be Renee. Glad Jasper is helping Edward with his stuff. Guessing brown eyes is Bella ex an Tory is the one he cheated with.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Rose overstepped but she meant well. The whole discussion went south when Emmett joined in. Verbal foreplay, lol. So, you think Riley will make a comeback? You'll see on Monday, or you can join the FB group where a longer teaser is up.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Shit just got real!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Glad you liked it. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Yes. How could she say no. I wonder what pull "daddy" really has.  And, what lengths he will go to get his way. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bella never actually stood a chance, lol. Carlisle will try to to get his way, come what may, but I assure you, in the end, he'll lose. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

amazing story. come on Bella you love hi9m give it a chance



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yes, she does but she's not ready to see it. See you tomorrow with the update.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Loved it can't wait for more 😊



Author's Response: Thanks! Next update tomorrow :).

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Love this story. Your very good and I like it so much l'm going to start reading your other story. Thank You for all your time put into your writing and keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I love writing it and sharing it with all of you. My other story, Puzzle of My Heart is a little different than this one, mostly because it's heavy on the lemons, lol. I hope you'll have fun reading it. See you next chapter with their Thanksgiving dinner.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

I am glad that things did not stay strange between Edward and Bella. Glad that she agreed to move in with Edward.

I am reading the story Letter From the Heartland. It is a really good story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they're back on track now. Next up will be their Thanksgiving dinner. I'm so glad you love Letter From the Heartland like I do. I was asked to write a guest review for Ficsisters about it. I'm not sure what to write yet, but the story has far too little reviews so I'll do what I can to increase that number. Reviews are what motivates us to write and I'm sure BoyzNBooksRBetter will be much more motivated to continue if more people tell her that they love the story. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

what is rose trying to make him come clean to her? YAY living together!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Rose is first and foremost Bella's friend and she wants what's best for her. Please, keep that in mind when you read the next chapter, because the first impression can be quite misleading. Rose will get a chance to redeem herself but has to wait for one more chapter. See you for their Thanksgiving dinner.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

He has her where he wants her lol.



Author's Response: Definitely ;). But I'm sure he'd rather have her in his bed than in her own bedroom, lol. Anyway, it's definitely a step in the right direction. Thanks for your review. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

When will Bella be leaving whatever planet she's on and join the here and now? It seems Bella is getting more and more naive instead of being the independant adult she should be. She's  so frustrating! (lol) Read You Soon.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I will admit that Bella will have another, lets call it set back when she finally meets Dr. Cullen. After that, I think you could say things will get better. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Hope Bella realizes E's in love with her soon.   Aww for the condo



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Bella will realize it but soon is a relative term ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

; )



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

love , love, love



Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

I'm so happy happy happy that she is moving in officially!  Yes it is fine to live off his inheritance.  It's not like she doesn't work. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you think it's okay to live off his money, although Bella will never feel that way. They'll find a way to compromise, though. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

*happy dance*

So relieved that she said yes! LOL! Now if she'll just put the pieces of the Edward puzzle together and FIGURE IT OUT!!!! AAAAAAUUUUGGGHHH! LOLOLOL! Wish Rose had went ahead and explained things, it's killing me! LOL! But hopefully that just means Edward's reveal/confession will be that much sweeter! *sigh*

xo



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm not sure, but I think if Rose had explained it to Bella, it would have made her turn down Edward's offer to permanently move in with him. Next up, they'll celebrate Thanksgiving. See you then.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

This was a great chapter. Edward is one giant step closer to making a life with Bella. Rose knows he loves her: maybe it won't be too long before Bella figures it out too!



Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review. Now finally, E and B seem to be on the right track again. The “date” will no longer be an issue. Next up, they'll celebrate Thanksgiving. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Edward is just so sweet. Bella really needs to open her eyes and see what it is he is really saying. She needs to let go of her fear, so they can enjoy life together.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Yes, Edward's sweet but Bella's not yet ready to see the obvious. See you next chapter for their Thanksgiving dinner.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

:)



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Edward has great taste, if I ever lived in Chicago that is exactly where I would want to live in Lincoln Park overlooking Lake Michigan along Lake Shore Drive.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Unfortunately, I've never been to Chicago myself but from the description, I'd like to live there myself ;). See you next chapter for their Thanksgiving dinner.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

I am glad that Edward did not go on a real date. I think the building being sold is Bella's apartment building. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You can go now and see if your guess is right ;). See you!

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! See you Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Hello again and a happy new year with all best wishes :)

Yes, Bella acts totally irrational, and yes, sheh's pregnant, but this doe NOT have to mean that Edward must hide his feelings along the way! Ok, she has convinced him to (pretend to) go on a date, but I think he should have told her the truth. If he has to hode hos feelings so long, they will probably burst one day and then Bella will be completely flashed, so I think it wouuld be better for her to know that he really only wants her. Either way, the parenting-and-friendship-thing would never work out since Edward will not accept this forever. For the time of the pregnancy, yes, but not for more years to come. Even if he was a very VERY tough guy ;-)
Maybe Bella will even be a little mad at him when she learns about his scheme...who knows!

So I assume that Bella's former home will be destroyed then? This means that she either has to get a new accomodation or give in to Edwards plan of keeping her :-P

And by the way: I also love tuna on pizza :-D

Daher: Ich bin jetzt mal deiner Gruppe beigetreten im Fratzenbuch, da es hier außerhalb der Reviews ja keine KOntaktmöglichkeit zu geben scheint, wenn ich das richtig sehe... Hast du denn noch mehr/viele deutsche Leser hier? ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review and the New Year's wishes. Bella will be flashed when she finds out, but she'll be totally out of it in that situation anyway. That's all I'm telling now ;). Go tuna! My favorite is tuna and onion. Ich hab ein paar deutsche Leser auf ffn, und alle anderen geben sich nicht zu erkenne ;). Wie ist denn Dein Name auf Facebook damit ich weiss, mit wem ich's zu tun hab? CU Monday ;).

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

; )



Author's Response: Thanks ;).

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Oh bella



Author's Response: Yeah, she's delusional. But I promise she won't send him on any more dates. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

I think Edward is the sweetest man ever and Bella is very hormanal and afraid of losing him but she cant send him on any more dates.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. She won't send him again. I think she learned her lesson. That doesn't mean she's ready to be with him, though. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Loved it can't wait for more 😊



Author's Response: Thanks! See you Monday.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Great chapter an your so right about the  crazy emotions you have when your pregnant😊your a crazy person



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It's great to hear that there are others who had crazy emotions like Bella. See you Monday.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

I was prego 3 times and I have never been as hormonal or for lack of a better term as stupid as this Bella is. I am so Team Edward here, I hope Bella comes to her senses soon or she will be the reason she loses Edward.

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Neither was I, but I received reviews from readers who say they were just as nuts as Bella, lol. And she won't lose Edward ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

It's her apartment building.  That will make Edward happy! I'm glad he didn't go on a real date.  

The next time I'm at Pizza Hut I'm going to request tuna and see what they say.  I live in Florida near Disney & we have tons of tourists around here so I'm interested to see if they get tuna requested a lot..... I'll let you know.  ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Let me know how your tuna experience turns out, lol. See you Monday with the answer to the apartment question ;).

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Oh Bella.  Let the man in would ya.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. She will, but she's not ready. They'll have a bit more to experience before that. See you Monday.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Come on belllllllaaaaa! Lol :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. She isn't there yet. But that doesn't mean their live can't be interesting ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

:) Happy New Year to you too



Author's Response: Thanks! See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

I think Edward should have been persistent and made Bella listen to him. I get what he was trying to do, but it may hurt him in the long run when she finds out he lied to her. Emmett is such a horndog. I can hardly wait for these two get on the same page.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella will find out that Edward never went on a date, but it'll happen so much later that it doesn't matter anymore. See you Monday.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Go Edward sticking it to the man



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Edward won't budge to his father's will ever again. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you Monday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Carlisle was worse than I imagined.  Tht pizza sounds disgusting!!  The commercial was pretty close to one we had a few years ago but it was with a dad & his daughter.  



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm still surprised by the reactions to the pizza. I know that the combination is weird, but many readers commented that tuna itself was disgusting on a pizza and not even available in their areas. That's so strange because in Germany, it's one of the most popular pizza toppings and I had it several times at Pizza Hut in London and Scotland as well. Interesting how national tastes seem to vary. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

I really do wish that Edward would have hit Carlisle. What will Carlisle do to Edward? Can he take his trust fund away? I hope that Carlisle does not try to hurt Bella. Thanks for the up date. Can't wait for another. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. What can Carlisle do? Well, I'll give you a few hints trying not to give too much away. Edward's trust fund was set up by his grandparents and since he got access to it some time in the past, it's his. Carlisle can't touch that. But he is quite influential in the medical world. That could become a problem. He won't physically hurt Bella, though. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

His Dad is a real jerk



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm not surprised you're seeing it like that. He really is an asshole. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

I LOVE IT MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: There will be more, on the 29th. Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Wow, Carlisle really is a first class asshole! And should he run into Bella he will hold back to tell her again what he told Edward. Hopefully she fells sure enough of Edward's support to not get shocked and leave him as a consequence! I'm really curious where Edward's train of thoughts will go and if he really changes his plans. I think he would be a lot happier with this and he must finally cut the ties to his parents.
They destroy his happiness he builds up with Bella and they still ahve the power to influence him this much. Either they learn what's really important in life or they can go and leave him. maybe it also takes an emotional outbreak of Edward's to show how unhappy he really is with them. I'm very curious what you'll make out of this!

The drunk Edward was really sweet in this chapter, he's totally harmless ;)

I also didn't realise until your A/N that you live in Germany like me ;-) Thus: Frohe Weihnachten und guten Rutsch! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for your long review. You're right with most of the things you're saying and it'll all be resolved in due time, but not now ;). Where in Germany do you live? I live near Moenchengladbach. Frohe Weihnachten und Guten Rutsch auch für Dich und Deine Familie.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Great story and wonderful chapter.

Merry Christmas!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Wowsers.  Isn't "daddy" a piece of work.   Wonder how long till he shows up at the apartment or corners her somewhere. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Carlisle sucks, and at some point he'll probably try and talk to Bella. We'll have to wait and see. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Thanks for Rec'ing Soul Quest. I've had your (this) story on fav alerts since it started, I will be starting to read it soon, I just need to first get some of the other characters out of my head. Nikky (WeeKitty1) and I really appreciate the rec for our story. THANK YOU.
Kasi (TeamAllTwilight - & AndTAT of WeeKittyAndTAT)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I just had to rec Soul Quest because it had me hooked after two chapters, and I like to share stuff like that. Don't worry about reading my story later. I hope it'll be here for a while ;). Merry Christmas to you and your family.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

"Merry Christmas"! It's so nice of you to say that. It's become quite a controversy here in the states. We're being pushed to be "politcally correct" ad use Happy Holidays instead. Home of the free, yeah right.

I'm concerned how much of an impact Carlisle will have on them. Also, I don't think Edward is helping by keeping things from Bella. If she's armed with the correct ammo she'll be better able to fight the battles.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It's so sad that everything has to be PC today. I mean, I get the idea behind it, but still, there are ways to overdo it. You're the only one commenting on Edward keeping things from Bella and being worried about it. You're not too far off with that ;). Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

When will they admit they have feelings for eachother....I feel like a two year old on Christ-mas waiting to see whats gonna happen between them.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They will admit it, but I haven't written that part yet. It's very clear in my head, though. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

I hope Edward's stronger than he appears to be because if not his father is going to chew him up & spit out the pieces. I can see how easily Carlisle can cause problems.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Edward is strong and will become stronger as time goes by. You'll see.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Can I throat punch Carlisle. He is a real piece of work. I'm proud of Edward for standing his ground, but at some point he's gonna have to make decisions for himself and what will make him happy. Kudos to Bella for making him think, and showing him she cares about what he thinks and wants.

The peek into the next chapter has me concerned about what Edward has done, or was it his mother and father?

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Over the next chapters, Edward will take a few steps to get what he wants for himself. About the teaser, well, what if it wasn't his mother or father who made him go on a date but Bella? Strange idea, right? We'll see. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

He told her some of the shit the prick father said I dont like his parents at all. I think drunk Edward is very cute.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Well, you're right, Edward only told her part of what Carlisle said. No one commented on the fact that that could become a problem at some point. Interesting. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

The older Cullen's are not through messing with their lives. If I was him I would start making the decision and plans to switch into what I wanted to do in another hospital. He and B can help each other.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I think Edward will do something like that soon. But first he has to do some research. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Loved it can't wait for more 😊



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Loved that Edward showed his father that he had a back bone



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, he stood up to him, probably for the first time. We'll see where it'll lead. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Not as bad as it sounds, if she sees him with a date and he doesn't come home what would you think and why is he going on dates.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It really isn't bad because nothing happens, trust me. Nothing even remotely resembling cheating will take place. I'll give you one hint to ease your mind. Bella's the reason it seems like Edward's on a date ;). Merry Christmas. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

I would love it if the next time Carlisle talks about the colon surname Edward would say that's okay the baby and I will take bella's name.

I also wonder how far he will go. Will he arranged for Bella to be attacked so she either loses the baby or her life.?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

:)



Author's Response: Thanks ;)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Um well damn can't wait for more 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and I'm sorry to make you wait. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Edward needs to forget his parents. He needs to be the kind of doctor he wants to be and not give his father all the power. He and Bella have their own family to put their energy into.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Edward will come to that conclusion as well. It might not be that easy but it'll all work out eventually. See you Monday.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

I don't like this Esme.  From your little teaser at the here I would nit be surprised if Edward hits his father.  Lol.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You're not supposed to like Esme, not yet anyway. See you Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Ok, there goes the "conversatoin" with Esme and the one with Carlisle is just appearing at the horizon... But I like how Edward defends Bella and Peanut and how he obviously continues to do so in the next chapter!
He shows her that he's reliable and that she can absolutely trust him with everything!

Looking foward to the next part - I love it!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. After Carlisle has his say, I'm sure you'll wish Esme back. Edward won't cave, but we'll see about the trust thing. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

I was sort of surprised by Esme's reaction. I thought for sure she'd be more understanding, but I suppose we're used to a giddy Esme when it comes to grandbabies. So wasn't rude per sa to Bella, but she was far from welcoming. I praise Edward for standing his ground with her, and reassuring Bella he wasn't ashamed of her or thier baby. 

I'm feeling bad for them when Carlisle finds out and shows up to insert his opinion of Edward having a girlfriend and a baby on the way. I'm sure he'll try to persuade Edward the baby isn't his and demand a parternity test. I hope Edward socks his father in the nose. 

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You're not very far off about Carlisle. Edward might not be that violent. Esme may get another chance but that's not sure. See you Monday.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

I hope they can keep positive and stay together through everything thats coming for them, but the pit in my stomach says the opposite.     ; )



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. They will get through everything together. There will only be short elements of angst, I promise. See you Monday.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Esme is a peice of work it would be terible to be there son so nasty.  Bella knows that Edward doesnt want her to be a secert



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. No, Edward doesn't want to keep her a secret. He'd scream it from the rooftops if she'd let him. Maybe at some later point ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Oh she is becoming mushy.  I love it!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bella will eventually cave in, but not yet. See you Monday.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Loved it can't wait for more 😊



Author's Response: Thanks! You only have to wait until Monday now. See you then.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Always get excited when I see your post I look forward to seeing what kind of part Esme will take part in their lives



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Esme's part isn't over yet. You can get excited again on Monday ;). See you then.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Loved this chapter! Edward stood up to his mom and the ending with Bella feeling the baby move for the first time when Edward touched her was sweet! AND she is thinking of them as 3!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They certainly are 3, or will be. No one is doubting that. The only unsure thing is in which capacity they'll be together. See you Monday with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

I kind of hope Edward meets with his dad without Bella being present. She doesn't need to hear the awful things I'm sure he will be spouting. Edward should go to him before he corners Bella. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I think I can ease your mind by saying that Bella won't meet Carlisle - yet. See you Monday.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Oh I'm so in love with this story!  :)

 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm feeling really flattered. See you Monday with the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Wow  Esme is a piece of work.  I knew Skankica would run her mouth.    And from your teaser, sounds like his "father" needs a punch in the mouth.   Hope he doesn't have the pull to get her fired.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sorry this reply took a while, but December's a busy month for me. About the punch, I think you're right, but Edward isn't a violent guy. We'll see Monday what happens.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Oh yes!!!  Esme is a real peach



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Sorry this took a while, but December's busy. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 8:35 PM Title: Prologue

His Mother

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, but it's not Edward's mother speaking there ;). You 'll see soon whose pov it's written in.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. See you Monday when we'll finally get to know Esme.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Loved it can't wait for more 😀



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. See you Monday.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Great kiss Great date but I can see why she is afraid she knows she needs him in her life.  When will she come around .  Thanks for the rec: Tequila sunrise great story.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Bella's scared, hormanal and her feelings and thoughts are allover the place. She will eventually come around but maybe her hormones have to get back to normal for that. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Finally a kiss but not just a simple kiss it was HOT & steamy! Thank you!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm happy you liked their kiss. It's a shame Bella cut it so short :(. Next chapter, we'll finally meet Esme. See you Monday.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Hot.



Author's Response: Thanks. That was my intention ;).

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I love amd adore this story! I am always anxious for the next update. I hate that Bella is being so stupid. I mean I understand her fear of hetting hurt again and all. But really obviously she amd Edward will not be single forever.  Would she rather someone else have him? Plus if she gets with domeobe else who os not the baby's daddy and things go bad wouldnt that be way worse??

anyway I love love love this story..  looking forwatd to next chapter.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I know you're frustrated with Bella, but She just had a bad break-up, and on top of that, her hormones and feelings are all over the place. She just hasn't reached the point where she thinks that it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. I know it's hard to believe, but she's actually rather willing to see Edward with someone else and stay his friend than to risk losing him altogether. But we'll see if it actually gets to that ;). Next chapter, we'll finally meet Esme. See you Monday.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

GOD I LOVE THIS! ID LIKE SOME ANGST,ITS HOT!     MOR PLZ  THANK YOU SO MUCH!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, there will be some angst, but nothing too heavy. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I may actually end up liking this Tanya, but Jessica is a bitch. After running into them, I'm glad Bella and Edward had a good date. I understand Bella reasonings, but she'll never know if she doesn't take a chance. In the meanwhile, friends with benefits sounds promising. They sure have chemistry.

I keep expecting Carlisle to 'drop' by Edward's apartment unannounced and find Bella moved in.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You're totally right about both, Tanya and Jessica. I'm glad you get where Bella's coming from. She just had a bad break-up, and on top of that, her hormones and feelings are all over the place. She just hasn't reached the point where she thinks that it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. Well, what if it's not Carlisle stopping by unannounced;) See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

I can hardly wait for these two to communicate more honestly about their wants, and stop being afraid of the unknown. What a wonderful surprise Edward and Rosalie gave Bella with a surprise party. I should'be known Alice would have been in on the keeping it a surprise. I enjoy seeing them pretending to be a couple, until its official, lol. 

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, they really pulled off the surprise. And Edward really put some thoughts into the presents ;).

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I love this chapter and hate the cousin. Thanks



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter. And Jess was a real bitch. See you Monday.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Edward is really putting himself out there in this relationship. I cannot wait until Bella realizes that. Esme, oh well, maybe Bella will put her in her place.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella just had a bad break-up, and on top of that, her hormones and feelings are all over the place. She just hasn't reached the point where she thinks that it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. But she will, eventually. Next chapter, we'll finally meet Esme. See you Monday.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

LOVE this story 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you love the story. I do too ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I bet Jessica told Edward's parents. Could Jessica and Tanya tell Bella was pregnant? I wish Bella would give into her feelings for Edward. I loved the kiss. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. No, they couldn't tell that she's pregnant. The dress is flowing freely and Bella isn't showing that obviously yet. Bella will give in, just not yet. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I would go for it.  Like he said nothing is the sure thing, not even friendship.  They will have their disagreements.  She would have  a fit if he dates someone else though.  He tried to date her but she won't try.  So whatever he do she won't have a say.  Do she expect him to be a saint?  I knew Jess would tell his mother.  Tanya was alright for a change.  His mother, well we expected that.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm not sure you're right about Bella's reaction to Edward dating someone else. I may or may not have written something along those lines ;). And she doesn't want him to be a saint, she's just scared to be the one to have sex with him. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

:)



Author's Response: Thanks ;)!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Glad they had a good date. I have a feeling that Esme found out from either Tanya or Jessica.  I understand Bella's reasoning but dam to turn down Edward. ....that took a lot on self control.  



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, can't say you're wrong about who told Esme. It was probably one of those two. Yeah, Bella seems to have lots of self-control, but she'll falter eventually ;). See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

Well hopefully he will tell her to piss off

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You want Edward to tell Bella to piss off or his mother? I really hope you're talking about Esme, otherwise you're reading the wrong story ;). See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

wonder how long till B gives in.   Also wonder how long till Jessica makes sure to tell E's dad what he saw



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm afraid Bella still has some fight in her, but eventually, Edward will make her cave in. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

love your story.  wld like to read "Tequila Sunrise"  what is ffn ??  have tried a couple of sites to no avail.   wld appreciate yr help.  could you pls email me a few sites.     thanks in anticipation.    Pamela Hanley

pamjhanley@gmail.com



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry, but I thought the abbreviation ffn for www.fanfiction.net was commonly known in the fandom. Shows again how little I know, lol. Anyway the link for Tequila Sunrise is https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8609638/1/Tequila-Sunrise. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

Wow, this was an amazin surprise party! Bella has deserved this and I'm glad she could enjoy it as well.
I would love to see her admit her feelings towards Edward, but obviously it's still too soon so show the real emotions :( It would make things a lot easier for all involved parties ;) But maybe the landlord really takes a long time and maybe the damage is even bigger so that Bella will have to move out completely ;-)

See you next time!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, I won't reveal a lot, just so much, as far as I've written yet, Bella hasn't returned to her apartment ;). See you Monday with the update.

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