Date: 14 Sep 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
Officially one of my ALL time favorites. Thank you!!
Date: 14 Sep 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
FFS this is THE BEST shit I have read in ages. Bloody brilliant!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 36
well done mystery with great twists and turns. The romance was nice, a definite subplot that helped move the story.
Thanks for Sharing,
~ Sibyl
Date: 24 Sep 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 36
i LOVED!!! this ;) thanks so much for sharing on here ;D
Date: 24 Mar 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 36
I very much enjoyed this fic. Thanks for sharing :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, another awesome story and it is nothing like I've ever read which I love. Can't wait to see if there's another story of yours that I haven't read. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Melissa
Date: 17 Jul 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks for the great story! I really enjoyed all the twists and turns.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
Fantastic story. Loved every chapter. Thanks for writing.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
*claps* Bravo! Fantastic!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 36
I loved it wow they were made to be they survived and now have built a good life now their daughter is just like her momma thank you I loved every bit of it
Date: 02 Jul 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
I think u did a great job. I have always thought suspense/murder mysteries are the hardest to write because they needvto be complex to be any good, with twist and turns. Good job! I also love how this chapter ended.
Date: 02 Jul 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 35
*squee* Wow! What an ending! Woot woot!
Of course she's going to say yes! LOL! ;)
Bravo!
Date: 02 Jul 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved the proposal!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
I think the wolf is my favorite character. I hope they adopt him and make him furry and healthy and rub his belly. :)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 35
Holy snap the wolf saved the day thank goodness Ben is dead and now they are free so what will Bella say to his question hmmmm update soon
Date: 28 Jun 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAckkkkkkkk!!!!!! Holeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
Holy snap will they stop ben before he can bury them will they be ok update soon like now I need to know
Date: 25 Jun 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Holy snap what happened did she project herself but if yes why did she scream what will happen update soon
Date: 25 Jun 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow! I love the action!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh snap will they save her only to be faced with Ben at her cabin will tbey put a stop to him once and for all update soon
Date: 17 Jun 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
Ben Chaney huh. I was thinking Marc. Well Okay now find Charlie and Kill Ben.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
This is still a page turner!
Date: 17 Jun 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
Holy snap they know now who he is but will they find Charlie and Bree will tbey stop him update soon
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
Girl I am sitting on this chair and I need to walk, but heck no I just keep reading.. Great story
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yes that is why so many write love stories and copy and paste lemons. A mystery takes a good brain. Congrats I can not stop reading.. I love mysteries.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well he first killed Renee. Why kill the innocent? That I don't get they did not harm him Renee did it all. I guess Jealousy.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie will not know about this guy that Renee hurt. A Brother that Bella would have loved, now he is beyond help.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
I remember that.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
I told you he must be related to Bella. A brother that was some how left behind.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
yep he has Alice
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Maybe Alice? I hope not.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
good all the way around.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh don't put yourself out as bait Edward. This really would kill her.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
so he is after a judges daughter. Well someone related to Charlie and might have been before this judge..
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Maybe he is her twin seperated at birth. Twins always have a connection.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
hmm brown eyes in another city. hmm he has a sister. Did Bella have a brother? Did Renee never tell her or better yet was it Charlie that fooled around and some guy is out there hating her for her closeness to his Daddy?
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
he just keeps messing up.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
well at least she can shoot the shot gun.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is really good, but it is really sad
Date: 13 Jun 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor B she has had a rotten life for a long time.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have to say. This is rather sad. I mean this poor woman is experiencing this over and over. Once would be bad enough. Then you have Edward loosing his sister Rose to that same killer and almost dieing himself. Really sad.
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
that last comment has me wondering. What kind of statement is that, Easy?
Date: 12 Jun 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
she found him. good.. Now how did she know where to look?
Date: 12 Jun 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
A murder mystery.. Oh I love them. I wonder if you will kill of Ed or Bella?
Date: 10 Jun 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh snap Charlie knows him and is friendly with him will Charlie be safe will they get a good look at him update fast please
Date: 06 Jun 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh wow will the clues Bella figured out help will they get a name soon and is the new girl really taken by a copycat update soon
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh wow poor Bella to have to live like this and have no control over it now will they find his name and soon before he takes another update soon
Date: 03 Jun 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh snap what the hell happened is she ok will she be update soon
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
It probably is hard because for it to be a good mystery, there has to be so many layers of unknown that eventually work together. Readers need to be in the dark for a while because it is no fun when you know what to expect from the beginning. But you are doing an excellent job on writing this mystery. Keep up the good work!
Date: 30 May 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Now we're getting some answers! Can't wait for more, hun! xoxo
Date: 30 May 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
That was a big chapter! A lot of pieces of the puzzle came together.
Date: 29 May 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow so they are figuring out the why and who but how did this man figure out who his mom was update soon
Date: 28 May 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
nice twist, i did not see that coming.
Date: 27 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh! My! Gawd!
Wow!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
This story is so good. Its scary but intense, keeps me on the edge of my seat.
Date: 27 May 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh snap will they find the brother will the get his name and is the woman her mom update soon
Date: 24 May 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
If Charlie hasn't put this together yet, he is in severe denial. If he has put it together but hasn't said anything, how is Bella going to forgive him?
Date: 24 May 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow will Alice be ok will she wake up and will Bella figure out who it is who her brother is update soon
Date: 23 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh snap they got to her will they be able to get her breathing again and what will Bella say to everyone hmmm update soon
Date: 23 May 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. Bella's head is a confusing place.
Date: 23 May 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh snap now is it a trap will tbey get to Alice in time will Bella be ok update now please I need to know
Date: 23 May 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
*gasp* Oh no! He's got Alice!! :'(
Date: 21 May 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Damn, this is good. More!
Date: 21 May 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
This is a really good romantic suspense.
Date: 20 May 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
LOVE IT!!! LOVE YOU!
Date: 18 May 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
I just read all the chapters at once. This is a real page turner! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 May 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE IT! THANK YOU!
Date: 16 May 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is a great story so far! You are doinga wonderful job.
Date: 16 May 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
I LOVE IT! MORE PLZ! YOUR ONE OF MY FAVORITE AUTHORS ON FF, LOVE YA!
Date: 14 May 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hooked!
Love the whole concept. Your writings fantastic.
Will eagerly be awaiting the next chapter :D