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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

once a month i would make lunches and take it to skid row and pass them out. it is very depressing. my heart  goes out to the people that are there. seems alot of older people and some families. i once passed out lunches with a personal bag and stuffed animals for kids. it is all worth it when some of them say thank you and you know they mean it and it means alot to them that you took the time

well it is a shock to bella and hopefully edward is able to bring her around.

look forward to more

thank you

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

See, Bella has a heart. Grandpa will be proud.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Grandfather should have raised Bella and she should really take his advice.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella has just taken the wrong path in life because of her father. He ought to be ashamed. She is a smart girl and she will realize that in this story, I am sure.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Excellent chapter!

Really like her grandfather, and I especially liked the ending. She's smart!

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm liking this story so far.  Hopefully Bella has some redeeming qualities ...

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start hope you post soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

MORE PLZ!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading this, but not liking this Bella

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