I absolutely LOVED this story! So glad that I got to read it! 

I laughed,  cried,  was hurt and angry, educated and even a little vindicated! 

Great story!!!!!!!

Sad to see this story is over but I completely enjoyed it

This story is amazing. It had me giggle snorting and bawling and everything in between. Such a fantastic story! So well written I was totally engrossed from the get go. Thank you for sharing this with us.

XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin

Bella is so silly. She is her own worst enemy. I can't believe she asked Carlisle that question. I loved this story. Thanks for sharing.

I really like this last chapter and you wrapped it up really well! That Bella has chosen Angela for the charity is a very good idea and she has truly made her and her kids happy! That the others used the occasion to talk to her was also just what the doctor orderd! 

Edward's dictionary action was totally edwardish and sweet and ultimately led to their reunion - even if it was Bella's anger the brought her to Horizons. But she saw the one important thing: That she would regret it for the rest of her life if she did'nt give Edward another chance to make this right. And he will do so, I'm sure! They both know that a relationship is not just fluff all over and this is very vital in my opinion!

I really look forward to reading the short sequel, because I want to find out if Bella has the chance to get to know her biological father and clear her backgrounds! Maybe there is another part of her family that will welcome her, I mean we don't know what her mother has told the people, do we?

So thank you for this story, it is really just wonderful and shows, how people can, with the right influence and amount of love, change their ways and see what's important in life!

I'll go check on your new story once it's posted!

Ahhhhh I absolutely love the ending down to the last sentence! So happy to have stuck with this story the end result was more than what I could have asked for. So a big thank you from a cyber fan.

Loved it , hope we can get an epilogue of their first time as a real in love couple like Edward wanted .

Awesome. Loved the ending, very comical!!!  Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

hell of a ride

i am glad i was on aboard. love that they all found out more about themselves along the way

love that she forgave edward and was able to learn the lesson and make her self and grandfather proud of her

thank youit

love 

Update soon, please

I have been looking forward to this update for a while. Brilliant as always can't wait for more.

I love the way These two interact and a sequal would be awesome if the story were fun and exciting.

edward

loved edward speech. proud of bella. charles swan you are a piece of work

it seems like bella has a good plan and i look forward to what she does

love it

Great chapter during Edwards speech you had me choke up a little looking forward to seeing what you have in-store next

Amazing!! I always hate waiting for the next chapter!! I just want to know NOW lol. Seriously though love the story!!

Loved both speeches

Oh boy...Can't wait for more!

Ok so Bella has (hopefully) really made up her mind about the future of this company and I'm quite sure that it will NOT involve charles :-D
Michael and Bella get along really well I would say - he treats her like his sister and this is what she currently needs. He is somber and can give good advice so I hope that the faith Bella now puts in Edward will be rewarded!

It really is a surprise seeing him there, standing up and wanting to say something. But I really do not have any idea of what he is about to say (and this is making me a bit crazy right now...)! 

As for the end of the story or a possible sequel: What I wish for os that Edward and Bella are happy and content with theis lives. May it be together or seperated, but they should be able to close the past with having processed it. No "what if"'s or something like that - I hope that Bella finds her way into a college and studies that she likes so that she can lead the life that she wants. And for Edward I wish that he can forgive himself what he did, because Bella will do taht at some point as well. This does not necessarily need a sequel but maybe a small jump in time. No, they do not have to have children and be married and so on, but only a small perspective of their future, as a couple or not. But I also think that as soon as both of them have forgiven what has happened, they may be able to start over and see where it takes them!

So to make it short: I'm lookong forward to the next chapter and only hope for a HEA for both individual people. :-)

I'm liking that Edward will redeem himself. And, Bella will stand up for herself against Charles. I would like to possibly see a sequal. We know almost nothing about the Cullen's. It would be intriguing to see B & E mix their real worlds up.

I don't know about a sequel. All of the sequels I have read played out too long & boring & some were just forgotten. Sequels just never do the originals justice, just like in movies, never did originals justice. Just my opinion tho.

Can she forgive Edward?  Can he forgive himself? Was it really because of jealousy that he wrote the article? Really.... Wouldn't he have had time to think about his action before he submitted???

i think there's a lot left to figure out, hope it's not going to end soon.

Wow! So that's why her father treated her differently! :( 

Gosh, so heartbreaking to lose someone you're so close to. It's nice that he was ready, mentally. And what a surprise to all! Good for grandpa! LMAO!

I'm sure Bella will eventually forgive Edward. Her grandpa had excellent advice!

Great chapter!

xo

I loved this chapter and cried a lot, so,sad it's ending soon and hope we get the next one soon.

Epic!! Very sad about the death of her grandfather, but maybe this will help give her some perspective. What a twist about her father!!! Look forward to the next update!

wow i wasn't expected this just like bella

bella has alot to think about and come to terms with

i hope she makes the right decision

wow

Wow. Poor Bella. What an ass Charles was. Looking forward to seeing how she turns herself around.

Wow! What a mess. Please don't keep us in suspense too long. I really love this story and look forward to each update. All the chapters are a ten!

Okay, so I really didn't see that coming! Grandfather has colon cancer? Aargh! Was Edward there to see him?

This is a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

poor Bella

Great chapter. Very proud of Michael

wow bella's dad is a piece of work

i hope bella comes through this stronger. i hope she doesn't end up still leaving off of daddy. she does need to work for the things she wants and to be the person she wants to be

the start is to be there for her grandfather

baby steps. glad her brother came around

love it

Good chapter until it stopped...abruptly.

Holy shit! No you didn't Edward Cullen!

Wow! I am really curious how Edward will redeem himself after this. He let his jealousy and anger taint his entire article. He knows that there is more to her than that shallow girl she shows. There is somehing to be said for having someone lay out all your faults in black and white and Edward did that litterally for Bella. I hope she just leaves, gets herself together and proves them all wrong. I don't see how stabbing her in the back is going to encourage her to change. Having her self worth destroyed by someone she loved is how she became how she is. I don't know how Edward doesn't see that considering the conversation he has had with Bella's grandfather. Really hope he can explain himself.

Noooooooo!!!!

This was brilliant! I'm so sad for Bella though, trying to have a tough shell and not seeing people as they truly are. I'll be interested to see how Edward manages to come back from this one, of at all.

An amazing chapter can't wait to see how she reacts and how he is going to say sorry as he has misrepresented her. Monday can't come soon enough keep up the brilliant writing love all you stories. 

Wow. Edward, you certainly were hurt and pissed when you wrote that. How the fuck are you gonna revover this when it goes public? You used her and her fathers name.  I see more articles will need to be written to fix this...if that's even possible.

Nicky written.

 His words were Harsh but I love how you pulled everything together

Would have been a good endingnif he said he love's her:(

Your wrapping the story up?  Hmmmm well I think........its hard to stay with a story for so long with Edward and Bella at each others necks just for it to end quickly. 

Even if they make up, for most of the story to be them fighting....it is hard to read.  I would have hoped for them to make up and THEN to actually build a relationship and make a difference in the world.

This is turning out to be a beautiful story.  I'm new to your work but am enjoying it. Very different and incredibly funny at times.

What the hell I didn't see that coming at all

Post soon

Oh my...!! Edward has really done some work here! Why does he never explain what he said to Bella that morning? I still haven't understood why he constantly names that a "mistake". He seems to have feelings for Bella but then he writes an obviously mean article about Bella and does not even try to really explain everything to her. Now she will start to try to close with this situation and I am not sure how long it will take for both of them to see that they are good for each other - even if it takes some work for BOTH of them to get over their own mistakes. Bella is right in some points - he should look into said mirror for once and really accept that he has done some great shit with Bella and that she will not forgive him that easily.

But maybe Bella will realise that she can in fact do what she dreams of and maybe she will attend college, eventually. 

I hope you update again soon!!!

Could Edward screw up any more?

That is so sad.

I am crying with Bella.