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Reviewer: LadyEKenningCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2021 8:57 PM Title: Stalling

Oh my goodness! I love this - please complete it.  I'd love to hear how the rest of the books are received and how things are done differently. 

Reviewer: LadyEKenningCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2021 8:57 PM Title: Stalling

Oh my goodness! I love this - please complete it.  I'd love to hear how the rest of the books are received and how things are done differently. 

Reviewer: nub682 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 2:30 AM Title: Moving

Anxiously awaiting more chapters. I love stories where they read the books before the events occur. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: nub682 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 10:43 AM Title: Moving

Anxiously awaiting more chapters. I love stories where they read the books before the events occur. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: Jenablur Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 12:14 PM Title: Stalling

Curious to read more!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 12:52 AM Title: Stalling

Sorry you are swamped by real life and work, but it sure does happen, huh? I'm going to hang in there until you get some more writing time, and I can't be the only one! Looking forward to the next ones. My email said there were three more chapters, but that must have been a glitch!

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:15 PM Title: History Lesson

Loved it I really hope you update soon 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2014 10:45 PM Title: History Lesson

Love it update soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 8:33 PM Title: History Lesson

Truly a fascinating time in our history, but so brutal, agonizing and terrible a time, also! I sometimes still can't believe we did that to ourselves! Like to never recovered from it, too. I wonder who Bella will spend time with next? Good to see you back, by the way! 'Til next time!

Reviewer: tiny122 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 6:51 AM Title: Eternal Boredom

love it

Reviewer: Arroyo4ver Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 4:59 PM Title: Moving

 

love this story can hardly wait for more

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:52 AM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

Good chapter, what with telling the bitch brigade to buzz off and mind their own business! The time with Esme was lovely, except for the sadness of her history as a human. Bella is doing the exact right thing, getting to know her new family as individuals. I look forward to seeing your next chapter soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews i have enjoyed them immensely! The next update is coming soon be sure to favorite the story to get the notifications!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:31 AM Title: Everything's Out in the Open

Well hallelujah for Charlie, he actually got through to Harry Clearwater as well as Billy Black! I guess there's hope for everyone if those two can change their minds!



Author's Response:

Yep! I don't want anyone dying so that he can have a companion.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:20 AM Title: Action Plan

That was hilarious when Rose threatened Edward if he ever hurt Bella, talk about a reversal of opinion! I did think of one possible snag, Charlie. It will be a lot for him to swallow, them nmarrying, let alone having a child!



Author's Response:

Trust me! What i have planned Charlie will be just as happy if not more so then he was in the books

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:11 AM Title: The Meadow

That has to be the perfect picnic in the meadow scene! Trust Bella to figure out about vampire/human babies! Sure thrilled Edward to imagine it!



Author's Response:

Yeah he is more informed as well so decisions are being made with little resistance.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:56 AM Title: Game Time

I would have to say that was a rather successful session with Emmett since Bella managed to even win some games over him! It made her happy to know Edward was getting turned on, so itwas very nice of Jasper to point that out! Even Rose was happy because her Emmett was!



Author's Response:

Keep the reviews coming I'm loving them! That's the plan

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:49 AM Title: Oh no he didn't!

What a conceited twit Mike Newton is! Served him right for Bella to vervally slap him down! Hope Emmett doesn't get excited and accidentally hurt Bella somehow! He forgets his own strength sometimes.



Author's Response:

Yeah mike can be a twit and Emmett will be gentle.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:43 AM Title: Their Thoughts

Looks like every member of the family is pretty much thrilled with Bella Swan, even Rosalie!



Author's Response:

Yeah i think things are easier with everything on one accord

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:36 AM Title: Dreaming or Dead?

In the books, in the movies, you name it, Bella Swan is like the glue that holds the Cullen family together and makes them stronger. She's an amazing person, it's no wonder why Edward loves her so much!



Author's Response:

Precisely my point!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:06 AM Title: Edward's Vow

Finally convinced Mr. Unchanging that Bella is every bit as commited to the bond as he is! That must have been a big revelation for Edward, even though he is so impressed with a wonderful person Bella is!



Author's Response:

Yeah he didn't think a human was capable of such emotions

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:59 AM Title: Look Who's Talking

Lordy, how that man loves his daughter! I was so touched by Charlie's thoughts on the whole situation, including how to save his friend from an early death, and perhaps becoming a vampire himself!



Author's Response:

Oh it gets better!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:53 AM Title: All About Edward

I think maybe Charlie is getting the picture that Bella and Edward have a bond unlike anything the chief has ever seen before! Wait until tomorrow night, when Alice reads the end of New Moon, Charlie is going to have a cow!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:43 AM Title: Common Ground

Good for Charlie Swan, he loves his daughter enough to let her decide who and what makes her happy, just as long as he can be in her life! That decision should make both their lives a lot easier.



Author's Response:

Oh trust me it will i plan to make several changes for this

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:39 AM Title: Jacob Black's a Werewolf?!

Charlie may have to adjust his thinking a bit, now he knows what Jacob is. He also better brace himself when Alice gets to the part about going to Italy, he definitely will hate that !



Author's Response:

Yeah that part comes a little later but yeah Jacob is no longer the golden one after that.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:32 AM Title: The Rez

Poor Charlie, he sure was hoping for some sign there was a spark between Bella and Jacob. Guess he just doesn't want to admit that Edward is the one for Bella, and vice versa. I think it was wise for the Swans to not mention being around the Cullens so much. No sense upsetting Billy that way.



Author's Response:

Yeah things heat up later anyway....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:22 AM Title: Esme's Stance

Hopefully Alice is right and Charlie comes around when they convince him they won't take away his little girl. Totally loved Esme laying down the law that they stay and she gets to mother Bella!



Author's Response:

Charlie eventually comes around and i absolutely love Esme in this chapter.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:16 AM Title: You're Leaving?

This knowing ahead of time sure makes most things easier, like avoiding any flirtation with Jacob and preventing Edward from being block-headed and leaving!



Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:06 AM Title: Sneaky

I'm thinking it would be difficult to try and put one over on Bella Swan. She is, after all, her father's daughter! The chat she and Esme had was just right and told Bella a lot she needed to know.



Author's Response:

I felt that conversation was necessary for her to have with all the new emotions and changes going on in her life

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:57 AM Title: Surprised

My estimation of Rose just went up several points! She came clean and admitted she was wrong and kind of welcomed Bella at the same time, good for her! As for Bella's night getting better, who can say?



Author's Response:

Yeah i loved that part...!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:51 AM Title: I Danced?!

Bella usually is nicer to Rose than Rose is to her, and I see you haven't changed that trait , only made Bella more assertive where Mrs. McCarty is concerned. I appreciated Bella telling Edward not to try tricking her into attending prom. Wonder if he pays her heed?



Author's Response:

Yeah he will but she's going to go willingly as to make her mate happy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:42 AM Title: Accepting

An admission up front that he wants eternity with Bella, just as she wants it with him! Will wonders never cease? Reading the books has had a very positive effect on Edward, amomg others!



Author's Response:

His only issue was that she would hate him for changing her so he was trying to avoid that and plus he comes from a time where women opinions means almost nothing

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:32 AM Title: Act of Love

I'm pretty sure Edward can't hide his true feelings for Bella from Jasper or Alice. Then there's always a mother's intuition, so Esme may be onto him also!



Author's Response:

Yeah all three of them know it's just the rest having difficulty putting it together. Rosalie knew but she just wanted to be the center of everyone universe.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:16 AM Title: The Hunt

Bella sure has a much more equal relationship with Rosalie and doesn't mind a bit telling her a few home truths! I whole-heartedly agree with Charlie that Bella needn't be so self-sacrificing, just a little more open about her plans to meet deadly vampires!



Author's Response:

I definitely wanted to give her a backbone where Rosalie is concerned.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:07 AM Title: Meeting the Cullens

Okay, now the rubber hits the road and stuff gets real serious! I was impressed, but not surprised, at how Bella figured out Jasper's burden, plus it endeared her even more to Alice!



Author's Response:

Yep I felt as though her and Jasper had no relationship and hers and Alice was stained at best so i gave them something to bond over.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:00 AM Title: My Mate?

Here's hoping Edward holds onto that thought about leaving being final, he has no clue where that might go! Loved Alice putting Rosalie straight on choices.



Author's Response:

Yeah i felt like Alice didn't butt heads with her enough so yeah i had to add that in....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:51 AM Title: Bling Bling

Now I'm feeling a bit psychic! Maybe now that Charlie knows about what could be, he may be more alert in case of vampire invasion, through Bella's window anyway! It was good for Emmett's brashness, for Bella to call him out on his book self voting to kill her. She shouldn't have been surprised by the decision since he always goes along with his Rose!



Author's Response:

Yeah that one hurt her. Emmett decision was rash in the books cause he didn't have all the facts he just wanted to keep his mate happy but here with everything laid out in front of him he was able to make more informed decisions.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:41 AM Title: Just Another Day

Now there's an interesting thought! Will Bella tell her dad all the really embarassing parts of the books, or the dangerous stuff, or will she hide some of it? Bella is pretty honest but we all like to keep a few things to ourselves, especially if those things could give a father a heart attack!



Author's Response:

She will be telling him the important things she will not hide major life altering and threatening things in this story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:31 AM Title: Jealousy

And you should love your mom, Edward, she's one smart lady, besides being so darn nice! Having the books to tell the future, sort of, sure helps correct possible mistakes. Wish I had  had a set of books like that sixty years ago, they sure would have come in handy! I don't think I would change a single thing, it just would be a help to be prepared for some things!



Author's Response:

I agree....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:16 AM Title: You what?

Alice shouldn't be surprised that Bella figured out her ability since it took her no time at to guess what they were and what Edward can do. I'm thinking Charlies is taking all this so well because he can't see them hurting his girl, so will just bide his time until circumstances change! I always have thought Charlie was a pretty great guy!



Author's Response:

I agree but Charlie does lose sight of things for a minute.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:08 AM Title: Startling Revelations

There it is, and Charlie is very grateful for Edward's intervention and saving of Bella! So they know of his ability and I'm sure Alice's will soon be found and then Jasper's, so all the talents are known. As for sarcasm, a little snark is good for you!



Author's Response:

I've always felt like Charlie should have known everything so that's why i included him in the reading.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:03 AM Title: Unbelievable

Quite the family council! I'm sure glad they voted not to kill the Swans, especially since it would kind of put a crimp in the story! I want to get to the part where Charlie want's to shoot Edward!



Author's Response:

Lol that part was hilarious in the story....

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:56 AM Title: New Lunch Dates

Just pay attention to your book self, Bella, because you're absolutely correct about things getting worse before they are better! Tell Charlie to brace himself, it's going to be a bumpy ride!



Author's Response:

Exactly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:48 AM Title: First Beach

I'm thinking Charlie really feels like he's stepped through the looking glass now. Since Bella figured out what the Cullens are and that she's in love with Edward, she is way ahead of Charlie, if his stunned reaction is any indication! Smart girl that she is, she knew Edward would have to acclimate himself to her scent.



Author's Response:

Yes Charlie will have a bit of a time trying to absorb it all but he gets better later.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:38 AM Title: Is there a doctor in the house?

Alice is reading fairly fast I think, since Jasper asked about Bella's problem with smelling blood. Of course they haven't gone to Port Angeles yet, so maybe it's my imagination. Can't wait for Charlie to hear about that encounter!



Author's Response:

The scene in biology happens before port Angeles remember she still didn't know at that time what they were.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:32 AM Title: Embarrassment Overload

Emmett just says whatever comes into his mind, no matter who is listening. It wouldn't occur to him to spare Charlie's feelings, or Bella's for that matter. He kind of earns all those headslaps from Rose, I think.



Author's Response:

I most certainly agree!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:20 AM Title: Near Death Experience

Hang on for the big reveal, folks, it's coming up fast! I am having so much fun reading this amazing idea of yours!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really getting a big kick out of reading your reviews keep them coming they're even more entertaining than my little take on this story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:17 AM Title: Open Book

Curiouser and curiouser! It tickled me when Alice told her brother that he could have been courteous and apologized to Bella for his rudeness in biology! No fair for her to pick on him, she was the one who should have warned Edward what was coming, so she ought to apologize to one of them!



Author's Response:

Yeah it's true she should have but she was too busy watching out for jaspers future to really pay any attention to Edward but she apologizes to Edward after the fact.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:09 AM Title: First Sight

Boy, this is just whizzing by at a fast clip! It's strange for everyone to read what's actually happening, and makes me wonder where they will stop , in the book, I mean.



Author's Response:

They're going to read all the books. I will not be taking any action away from the story though i will be adding some and making the Cullens more kick-ass!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:06 AM Title: Beginning of the Begining

As would be expected, Charlie isn't too thrilled by the news that his only child may die, in the near future!



Author's Response:

Yeah Charlie gets pretty nasty about the whole thing for a while

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:57 AM Title: Confusion

We all just fell down the rabbithole along with Alice in Wonderland, right? Maybe, maybe not!



Author's Response:

Lol!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:53 AM Title: Well That's Weird

What's weird to me is why there is no signature on the note. Weirdness aside, I like this!



Author's Response:

I really like your reviews and yes i note the sarcasm in some of them... keep them coming!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:51 AM Title: Eternal Boredom

Two extra people sitting in the Cullen livingroom, reading. Hmm, wonder who that could be? Why has Alice told Edward he must postpone his trip out of town?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review...

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:45 AM Title: Inhumanly Beautiful

Wonder what's in the package and who sent it? Glad Bella survived the first day of school!



Author's Response:

The sender of the package is a complete mystery as in no one sent it perse it just mystically appeared...

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:42 AM Title: The Long Road Home

Good to see you're not going to overwhelm us with long chapters. I like this inner monologue of Bella's, by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks i always thought her inner monologue was a little too old for her age in the original story. Sorry but the chapters do get longer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:39 AM Title: Moving

Nice of Bella to suck it up and allow her mom some honeymoon time with her new husband. So a couple of sarcastic remarks are no big deal, right?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And yes sarcasm is highly recommended!

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:16 AM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

I really like how Bella is spending time with each Cullen one on one.  Really getting to know them on a more personal level.  Something the books never really did.

 

I hope Harry does go in to see a 'real' doctor and gets the right medication and all for his heart.  With Seth and possiblely Leah phasing they really needed thier dad to guide them more than really Sam.

 

I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I absolutely love your response! This is the kind of response we amateur writers hope to see. Don't get me wrong the others are highly appreciated but ideas and what the readers really want to read is what we really look forward to. Thank thou do much for the awesome review!

Reviewer: yerkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 9:22 PM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

:)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:17 AM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

Thank you for the fast updates. Love your story.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:10 AM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

TY. :). 



Author's Response:

You're welcome and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 10:30 PM Title: Mother/Daughter Day

Update ASAFP.



Author's Response:

Lol!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 7:20 AM Title: Everything's Out in the Open

Yay TY.  And in the immortal words of Oliver Twist "please sir, can I have some more" :) 



Author's Response:

Lol! Love your review and an update should be posted in a few hours!

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 11:03 PM Title: Everything's Out in the Open

Update ASAFP.



Author's Response:

Working on it! Lol...

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 11:15 AM Title: Action Plan

More, pleeeeese :). TY



Author's Response:

Thanks! Updating soon!

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:03 AM Title: Action Plan

Love it update soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying my take on the story...update coming soon!

Reviewer: yerkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 1:03 AM Title: Moving

I hope you have better luck on this site than FP. Looking forward to reading more!



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Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:03 AM Title: Game Time

Hilarious truly



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Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:57 PM Title: Dreaming or Dead?

Roll on the date



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Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:54 PM Title: All About Edward

BringBob breaking dawn



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Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:51 PM Title: Jacob Black's a Werewolf?!

Delightful story



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Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:11 PM Title: The Meadow

More please :D.  Xxx



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Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:43 PM Title: The Meadow

Trully wonderfull and Im glad Edward seems more open to children even before they get to that point in the book, I like the way they are more open with eachother



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Reviewer: Terass Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:31 AM Title: Jacob Black's a Werewolf?!

Love the story so far and I really hope Charlie gets his head out of his ass



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