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Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

more please :)

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, went straight to consummate the union requires that the mark without explaining anything to Bella. I do not get anything admired her having these thoughts that is a bitch. Edward has to sit with her and explain everything together with Dr. Cullen. 

And the powers of Bella because she see beyond the aureas she sure has a power of defense against Jacob because he used and threw away the wolf. What power is this? 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

I do not know, I believe that even in need of brand drawing, Carlisle should have you planned logo instead of beating around the bush like doing. Alice should have you planned And why is playing it rather than just throw it in Edward's room. 


Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

Aaah!  Crawling!  I remember it well with my daughter!  So many places to crawl to, so much havoc to possibly reek, so little time!  Not to worry!  Speaking for myself, I more than understand!  

I love the natural chemistry here.  Something tells me we have not seen the last of the Blacks though - even with an imprinting.  Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Little ones often change our plans lol   Why did she pass out??/

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

What is with her passing out?  Did it hurt that much, or was it more of her power manifesting itself?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love at first more than sight.  they are together ;)

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

omg, Omg, OMG!!! MORE!!!!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Cool them have latent connection ...... but what about the war, will have? Or all will be forgiven by the authority once it she has power and is the mark of a Cullen? 

As I understand it all is that the force that defended the attack Bella Wolf was herself. It is her power?

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, That the Power that Bella was defended herself?

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

Somehow those Blacks and Cullens always manage to start feuding!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now he knows what it is all about ;).    The Blacks are not happy lol.

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

War???  For claiming his Imprint???  Billy needs a dose of reality.  Billy nor Jacob have a wolfy leg to stand upon.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great Beginning...can't wait for more.  Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

She knocked the shit out of Jacob and didnt even know it.  I am so excited for Edward.

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

more please!!!!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Cool, Edward feeling faint. Will Powers Bella is big and strong that he fainted Edward? Or was he feeling the mark of Bella? Or preceding two together? Thinking to myself, I believe has a part to be a huge brand and another portion that is too much under the power of Bella because he is who fainted and she just could not move!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

That is not a good reason for Jacob to be so evil he had to be evil in the first place I dont like him ;-

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I believe after the punch and take Bella gets scared, he would release the pressure, it begins to release the powers or power of Bella. The fact start to see colors confirms this. I hope she has some power to attack and defend at the same time to defend against the wolf against Blacks. And get out of this house as it has powers. Hopefully Dr. Carlisle discover their powers and do not even allow Bella to come home Blacks again. If not, what her powers to protect her and do not let the wolf or Jacob or Billy harm Bella. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

She is getting her powers.  Jacob is Evil and has a black heart

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

The Cullens know that Blacks mistreat girls? They should do away with these evils and slavery, denounce those responsible for this family who could take action to punish them ...... 

I wonder, will the Cullens take Bella this house, but do not take Nessie? And the other girls saw that for Blacks to be abused? 

Alice must find out fast how to get Bella this house legally. Bella did not really have any power? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

At least she can have hope it will change soon so glad for Alice.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

dont like the Blacks not good.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

That would be so freaky

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Okay, so Bella ended up in hell. I wonder how Jacob will handle it, it will even mark your face? Jacob will be giving yourself admiring Bella's face? 

Alice Bella was just someone who crossed the path of Black? If black is the fourth family in village power, what position is the Cullen family? It's the first? 

I liked knowing that every day we will have a little story to read.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked the bit you presented your story ..... I think I'll give you a chance and I'll read for a while , enjoying it I will follow to the end ( if there is one). I want to know the days of your upgrade and the chapters will be more extensive, because that has been presented is negligible small.

In the history understand that Bella found on the family of power an Alice, I wonder if it is the Black or a visiting family, because it predicts the future, has power and can not be a proper servant?

Reviewer: Smande02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far! I can't wait to see the plot twist! Will you be updating often? Can't wait!

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