[Report This]Date: 17 May 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Rev Jenks, what a despicable man, how could someone like this become a man of the cloth. Loved Mr McCarty apologising before he clobbered him!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately there are people like this and have been around in any religion. Glad you liked Mr. McCarty. Thank you for reviewing. I really do appreciate it.
Date: 10 May 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm so curious to see how this all pulls together. Very intriguing.
Author's Response:
Think of film noir type movies. Double Indemnity, The Maltese Falcon or Laura. They are oldies but goodies. The plot does come together, I promise. Thank you so much for taking the time to read.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Carlisle, no one believes him.
Go Rose!
Author's Response:
It would be frustrating to have no one believe you. Let's hope Rose gets her questions answered! Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome Rose. So Newton gets Sam to take on Edward's case. Poor Jasper, of all the people to be chained to, James.
Author's Response:
Glad you like Rose - I like her too. Let's hope Sam does a good job. Yes, Jasper has all the luck. All bad! Thank you for the review. I really appreciate them.
Date: 03 May 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Heavy. Lots if history. Enjoying so far.
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Date: 02 May 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting story. I am enjoying getting to know all the characters. Should Be fun to see how they all come together.
Author's Response:
All the characters are definately from different walks of life and have individual crosses to bear. I hope it will continue to hold your interest.
Thank you so much for giving it a try.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
John Ashley, King of the Everglades, swamp bandit and pirate. You made him a loveable rogue.
Author's Response:
John Ashley was a real life person. I liked his history. Glad I did him justice. Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting, I'll take the ride.
Author's Response:
I hope I will be able to keep you interested. Thank you so much for giving this a shot. I really do appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love me some Jasper. Pity about the wicked witch, Maria.
Author's Response:
Pity? As in you wanted them together or it's her loss.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Found you, lol, ditto with ffg's words. xxx
Author's Response:
LOL - The Agency must be on high alert!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you decided to post here, too. FFN is so untrustworthy.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you are a part of this story. :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope that I will keep you attention.
Take care.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
INTERESTING!
Author's Response: