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Reviewer: Romantichix Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 1:01 AM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Well done. 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you took the time to read this story. Thank you so much for your kind response.

Reviewer: andiec Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2017 9:26 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Omg what an amazing story I laughed I cried I loved and hated...amazing this so look needs to be made into a film or series 

Amazing writing.



Author's Response:

WOW! I am surprised that people are still reading this. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. You made my day. It is people like you that that get a writer excited to continue on with story ideas. That is the best thank you I can give.

Reviewer: indygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2016 9:01 AM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Hi.I'm trying to write what to say for this story,I mean I don't have words to say how great story is this.  I just finished it and I have tears in my eyes.I love Edward and all twilight gang and this story made me fall in love with them again. thanks for this story.  It is beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Awww, I am so grateful for your words. They are perfect and actually brought a tear to my eyes. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and letting me know your thoughts. You have made my week!  

Reviewer: WilliamHanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Author's Response:

Dear reviewer, I am afraid that you must of clicked the wrong button. Yes, the website is wonderful and attractive. Unfortunately, I had nothing to do with it. Try the admin section on the home page. Have a great day.

Reviewer: lndadew21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 7:07 AM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

I am way late to the game, but this has been the best story I've read to date! I absolutely loved it. I hope you don't stop writing. Truly, I loved your writing. Not many fan fiction writers are as capable as you.



Author's Response:

Wow! I am surprised and delighted that you found this story. I figured it was buried deep in the bowels of TWCS. Thank you so much for your amazing words. You have made my week. I have not stopped writing. Just lack time. I will get there and I hope you enjoy the next as much as this one. Thank you again, so much!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

WOW!!! AWESOME!!!! AMAZING!!! ;) thanks so much for comleting this EPIC!!! story on here for us ;D



Author's Response:

Aww.. You are so sweet. Thank you for taking the time to read this beast! You have absolutely made my day. Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 46

an amazing story and you are an amazing writer



Author's Response:

Aww! I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. Your comments have made me smile, worked my happy dance and now my eyes are a bit teary. Thank you so so much for reading and your time. I could hug you. Just, thank you! 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 41

hope she is right



Author's Response:

Oh, she is right! Finally, all the connections are made and now the rest will be resolved. Thank you so much for your comments and your time. I appreciate them so much.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 37

wonderful adventure



Author's Response:

I'm doing a happy dance with your comment! I'm so thrilled you are continuing the journey with the new Whitlock/Masen Gang. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 30

put him on a chain gang



Author's Response:

LOL! You are not the only one who thought that. Trust me, I had worse ideas to make him pay. Thank you so much for continuing with this story. I appreciate your time and comments. 

Reviewer: Leighanne33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

Just found your story. This is amazing and I had to force myself to stop reading so that I could leave you a review. :)

Incredibly well written with a plot line that has me hooked. Great job!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow - What an amazing review. I'm thrilled the story has held your attention. I hope it continues to do so. :) Thank you so much for your comments and time. I appreciate both. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

so so good



Author's Response:

You express so much with little effort. Thank you for making my day! Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

fantastic



Author's Response:

Yes! Edward and Jasper meet Alice and Billy! Poor Edward is confused though. :)  Thank you again!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

diserves more readers and reviews



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm happy you are enjoying the story so far and I hope it continues to hold your interest. :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

great plot development



Author's Response:

Aww, I so glad you are enjoying how everyone's movements are leading them to Alabama. This is such a welcome sight after the close of my work week. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

so very good



Author's Response:

You are so cool! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

PLEASE NO



Author's Response:

Umm, yes, life is about to change for Mr. Masen. I do appreicate your time and comments. I hope you will be able to continue. Thank you so much for letting me know that you are out there.  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

THIS IS SO GOOD



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:02 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Wonderful ending. Standing ovation.



Author's Response:

Aww, so sweet! I can't thank you enough for all your time and comments. They encouraged me to write the best story I possibly could. Take care. 

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 9:36 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Wonderful story!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate the time you spent reading this story. Take care. 

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

What a great ending! I know I've said it before, but I just want to tell you one last time that you are a wonderful story teller.  Most people wouldn't  have gone that far into the future. You even make me wish I could really see this movie.  :)  I really hope you write another one. Do you post on FF or FictionPad? That way we can get a notice if and when you do post something else. Anyway, I will miss this story. I always looked forward to the updates.

Thanks again,  Maria



Author's Response:

I'm so thrilled that you liked the ending! I realized it does span over a quarter of a century, but I wanted to write about how the chain gang was revived and luckily, it didn't last long. Oh, and just to let you know, even though the other Maria was spoken about, I did give you a special shoutout as the wife to the grandson's POV. :) It was a way to thank you for your time and lovely reviews. I am on FF. If and or when I have another story written, I will be posting it on both sites. Thank you again, so much! Take care, Carrie

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:52 PM Title: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

This is such a fabulous story...J can truly see it as a movie or mini series!  It was great and I am glad I found it.  I have passed it on to my friends also.  Thanks for your hard work - Xanath



Author's Response:

Wow! I can't tell you how much your comment means to me. I have to admit, I did fantacized about it as a mini series as I wrote it. :) And thank you for passing the word. I appreciate the time you invested and thank you for your lovely words. Take care, Carrie 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:58 PM Title: Epilogue - Part 2 of 3

You mentioned this was bittersweet, you were right. Renee, Charlie and Sam are gone and the rest of the original gang are all elderly. But they have a many offspring to carry on the Whitlock/Masen Gang.



Author's Response:

The Whitlock/Masen Gang will live on in their prodogy.  The family ties are strong. :) Thank you so much for your time and comments. I appreciate them very much.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 6:34 PM Title: Epilogue - Part 2 of 3

I so wish it wasn't ending. This chapter was beyond beautiful. I was so happy to hear from Jasper and Alice. I loved everyone's reflections. Simply put, amazing story and written with better grammar than Fifty shades of Grey.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear you thought the 'chapter was beyond beautiful.' Such a wonderful comment. The nice thing was Alice finally being able to look to the future with no ghosts haunting her while Jasper keeps alive reminders of the past. The perfect ying and yang. Plus most of the loose ends are tied up.

I did get a good laugh at the grammer comment of Fifty. She didn't have Ficfangirl or Lilith backing her. :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Take care, Carrie 

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 4:21 PM Title: Epilogue - Part 2 of 3

Once again, you did not disappoint! Great chapter.  Thanks again for such a great story.

I hope that you decide to write another story. You are very good and I'm positive that your other readers would agree that we would definitely read anything you write.

Thanks again, Maria

 



Author's Response:

Whew, I so happy that you enjoyed the continued theme of the reunions. The last chapter will still have the reunions involved but with a twist. I hope you like it as well.

Wow, what a great compliment. I do have various plotlines I'm working on. Two are historical and one is more current dealing with the music industry. One historical I've already written needs to be edited better before I place it here.

Thank you so much for your kind words and for giving this story a try. I appreciate it so much. Take care, Carrie 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 9:46 PM Title: Epilogue - Part 1 of 3

I, Edward, take you Billy, Angela, Tanya and Bella, to be my chameleon wife, to have and to hold a rifle by my side, from this day forward.

"From this War Room forward, for better or trade her in for a horse, for richer, for temper.

Peter - you gotta luv him!



Author's Response:

LOL! That was one of my favorite sections to write. Yes, you've got to love Peter. He definity brought laughter to the wedding. :)

Thank you so much for all your time and comments. Take care.

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 1:37 PM Title: Epilogue - Part 1 of 3

This was a great chapter! I really loved the idea that they all get together every year. And you got to love Peter. He is hilarious. You know they say God never gives you more than you can handle. Sometimes I'm not sure that is true, but in this story, when Edward was to the point that he was going to give up, I think God realised it and sent him Bella. And then everyone else. With that kind of love and support, a man can get through anything. Thanks for your wonderful story telling. I'm sad to see this story coming to a close but I look forward to reading the next one. 

Maria



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you loved the idea of the reunions. Every year they do get together, just moving the time period in five year increments. There is a reason for it that you will understand in the final epi. There are so many loose ends that needed to be tied up and this was the best way I could figure out how to do it. Peter was awesome. I loved writing what he did for Edward and Bella. They already had one unconventional wedding. They needed another one. :) Edward and Bella talked about that very subject. She was sent to him. She was his angel as Angela. His awaking to confussion as Billy and his true love as Bella. There was a method to the madness or in all of their cases a higher power intervention. Just because you turn your back on religion, doesn't mean you turn your back on God, whatever you preceive him to be.

Thank you so much for your comments and time. I truly appreciate it.   

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 46

Such a great story that I'm sad to see come to an end. But oh what an end it was! Everything turned out as it should. I'm even glad Yorkie will eventually be released. Let's hope he stays on the straight and narrow. I think my favorite part was Edward's ability to feel God's presence. Although he can not fully forgive Him for what he has gone through, he still did not turn his back on God. That would have been so unlike Edward. I look forward to reading the epi. I can't wait to see what happens to everyone. 

Thanks, Maria



Author's Response:

What lovely comments! I'm glad you liked how Yorkie redeemed himself. I honestly wasn't sure how that would be viewed. You made my day with that alone. You will learn how things went for him in the epi. I can't tell you how thrilled that you agreed that Edward wouldn't be able to turn his back completely on God. His teachings were too ingrained. But to finally be able to feel his presence, yes, that was a major turning point for him. I wish you could understand how much your thoughts mean to me. *eyes filling again* Thank you so much for your time and your words. Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU! 

Reviewer: tickledpinkstamper Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 46

I have so many thoughts on this wonderful story, just to many to share. I have waited every week for you to put me out of my misery. I think I have bitten every nail off at one time or another. I have shed uncontrollable tears and have been racked with gut wrenching fear. And now I am truly sad to see that we have come to the end of this wonderful story. Thank you, thank you for creating this life changing journey.



Author's Response:

Oh my Gosh! What an incredible review. *Here go the waterworks* Wow - just wow! I'm really sorry you and your nails suffered, but I hope it was in a good way. I'm incredibly overjoyed that you liked the where it ends. There are so many strings to tie up and I fingured it would be best served in the epi's. You will hear from almost everyone, learn about their HEA's, those who caused problems and those who were redeemed. Then the last epi will have another twist. It's how I roll. :)

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking this journey with me. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your time and thoughts. It means the world to me. Take care.   

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 46

And the story finishes on a huge bang! Well it did for Apep, lol! Herbie Ellis, the master of drama and suspence assisted by the gang. Brilliant.



Author's Response:

It's true, Apep did go out with a bang. lol  Herbie is a one of a kind character. I'm happy he seems to have found a place in your heart. Thank you for taking the time to read and letting me know your thoughts. I greatly appreciate it.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 45

What a build up to Banner's Judgment Day. An intriguing chapter which contains a lemon, an engagement and an elaborate plot to take down Biers/Banner. Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Wow - What a perfect summary for what takes place. I never looked at it that way. Edward is starting to live the life of an average person. He's matured in ways that his previous calling would have stunted this growth and he could never have imagined. Now he wants it all! :) 

Thank you for your insight and for your time. I dearly value both of them. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh geez, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be good. Lol

I liked how Edward had the near panic attack in the courtroom. You don't miss any detail, nice. The banter between them all is great. I loved the quotes "To new beginnings" and "To our Independence Day." Both so fitting. 

I eagerly await the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for noticing the small details. To me it would be hard to return to where I was judged and condemned. I think it's uncanny that you mentioned 'To new beginnings' and 'To our Independence Day.' Those words play into the next chapter story line and the epilogues. Do I know you? Have you hijacked my computer? lol

I hope the last chapter gives you a good closure. The epilogues should tie up the loose ends. Thank you for your time and your comments. I appreciate you and them so much.

 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 45

And then there was one!  But not for long.  Next chapter is gonna be a cracker!



Author's Response:

lol - not sure what a cracker is, in the story it was James' prison name, but I hope it lives up to it. Thank you for your time and comments.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 44

For what ever reason ffn wouldn't let me "review" for the last 36 hrs.  Just kept getting error messages. :(

It was sickening hearing Apep.  Not sure why he gave up so easily and spilled, but glad he did. if I were Edward I'm not sure I wouldn't have pulled the trigger, maybe even  just to be sure he could never kill again.  Ok, one more bad gut to go... 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

My thoughts when I wrote this was, since it finally registered Victoria would never be his and he saw Stefan behind her, the game was over. Then finding out Banner next and Yorkie had already spilled, why not just let it all out. He knows what awaits him. I honestly don't think you would have pulled the trigger if you were Edward. lol You seem much to level headed!

Thank you so much for continuing to read and comment. It makes my day.  

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

Another one bites the dust. One more left to sort out.



Author's Response:

And sort out they will!  lol  Thank you so much for sticking with this story and me. I appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 43

"I may, or may not, have broken into Banner's office." Yeah, and with good reason. Go Rose!



Author's Response:

lol - Rose hasn't always played by the book, but it was fun to have her admit to breaking and entering. It was a shout out to SM when Rose spoke about facing Royce King. I always liked that part of the story. Thank you so much for your time and thoughts.   

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 42

Newton got off lightly. But at least Edward didn't give him the forgiveness he wanted.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 42

Wow. Edward got his chance to say his peace. Very elegantly said and from the gut. I also appreciate he got in a few punches.  You made his character so realistic believable and human.  So perfect!!  Of the 5 years I've been reading Fan Fic, this is in my top 5.  I just love it. Complex, well thought out, great plot, wonderful characters, historical,  family, friends and love. Just splendid.  I hate that it's coming to an end.

i hope you consider writing more.



Author's Response:

I have tears in my eyes, so humbled by your response. *Blowing out deep breathes - trying not to hyperventilate*  Wow - your top five. That is so incredibly amazing. Thank you so much for taking a chance on this story. Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!

I do have other ideas for stories I'm currently fleshing out. However, I'm not a quick writer and I hope Lilith and Ficfangirl will be on board again. They honestly helped make this story so much better.  Again, thank you and I hope you enjoy how this story ends. It's different. :) 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

Peter and his war room! Charlie finally meets the gang and reconnects with Bella.



Author's Response:

I do like Peter's reasoning for the 'War Room.' I think every household should have one. And yes, the long awaited reunion for Charlie and Bella finally takes place. Thank you so much for your time and comments. I appreciate both very much.

 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

Sister Erica, lol! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the image. Thank you for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 40

I am still amazed at the complexity of this story. Captivating and very well written. 

Min eager to see what else you write once this is complete.



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a wonderful compliment. Now you know how convolited my mind is. hahaha I have written one other story and it's posted on another site. I might put it up after I edit the beginning a bit more. I didn't have Ficfangirl in the beginning or Lilith. Thank you, again. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 39

Clothes pegs please for all those dealing with Yorkie!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 39

Lots coming together now.  Looking forward to Bella being reunited 

with her parents and finding out who killed the girl.  

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 38

Maria is finally dealt with and hopefully with John and Laura involved she will not be RIP.  You have to love John and Laura; John is now the garbage man!

On to the next one then, Eric Yorkie.  What he has to say should be interesting since he is involved with not only Jasper's imprisonment, but Edward's and also Victoria's troubles. 



Author's Response:

You are funny! Maria is out of the way now and you will hear from Erid Yorkie in the next chapter. He talks. He talks a lot. hehehehe I'll be curious as to your thoughts on what he has to say. Thank you so much for your time and reviews. I so appreciate both.

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 38

I love this story.



Author's Response:

Welcome and thank you for your kind words. We are getting close to the end and I hope it continues to hold your attention.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 38

"Before Judgment Day, I feared the fires of Hell - After Judgment Day, I set the blazes and watch them burn"



How fitting!!



Author's Response:

OMG! I didn't think anyone was paying attention to my headings. Thank YOU!  LOL

I wanted you to know that I have tried to figure out how to send you a personal message to thank you for all the reviews you have left. Alas, I still can't figure it out. I hope you recieve notification of this note. I appreciate your time and comments so much. It has been a joy seeing you back each week. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

Good to know we're movin on. I feel like this story has been a epic tail. So involved with so many characters. Very well thought out. 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 37

Eric Yorkie, another one who needs eliminating. Nice to see John and Laura back.

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 36

Newton - taab. At the opposite end of the scale - Rose is awesome. Now we have Victoria added into the mix. Apep has now been added to the s**t list. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

The plot keeps unfolding nicely.  Lots of answers coming.  I hope Riose and Victoria will be safe. Although I believe Rose could kick some serious ass. It would be great if James was alive and we had another happily reunited couple.

Happy Holidays!

 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 36

another grea chapter...Thanks Xanath



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them so much. And your time is so valuable. The story is will be ending soon and I hope it continues to hold your interest. Thank you again.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

Aww, too fucking sweet and innocent. Nice!

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 35

So Edward can shoot - rifles, and er, loads!! lol

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

whew!  hahahhaha

that was hot!



Author's Response:

Whew! I'm glad you appreciated my attempt at these lemons. They are daunting. I don't see how it's so easy for so many writers. 

Thank you for your kind words and your time. I very much appreciate it. 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

Charlie took it well. Looks like they are all gonna end up in New Orleans.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved the bank robbery. 

Niw it's all coming together. 

Ok, now we need B & E to get intimate. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 33

Aaww, that was freakin sweet. Nice!!!  Now I can't wait for E & B and E & R.

 

 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 33

Peter might still figure it out! lmao x

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 32

Ahh, Newton is Riley. 

So glad Charlie & Renee are back. 

Excellent chapter. Emmit & Rose are great!!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 31

I see more justice coming their way. Still eager to find out where Renee & Charlie are.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

Go Warden. A just reward well earned. Hope the guy he shot is OK. So glad to see things movin on. Anxious to see where Charlie & Renee come back onto play.

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 30

Black finally loses it and gets arrested, poetic justice.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

So glad they are on to healing and finding justice. If we all had such a loyal group of friends.

great chapt. Loved how Edward and Emmitt state their intentions. And, the innocence between E & B is so sweet.

 

 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

A bit of history for us women. To think that Margaret Sanger was arrested for trying to advise women about contraception and her pamphlet banned.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank god. And, very sweet end of chapter.



Author's Response:

And now begins part two of this story. Thank you for reviewing. 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

So they shared a first kiss and now he knows her real name.



Author's Response:

They are moving fast aren't they? :)

I hope you enjoy the second half of this story. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love it!  I am addicted.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words and coming along for the ride.

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

Another one gets his come-uppance, the not so reverand, Jenks. PM saw his angel again and Alice passed Ace a note. Hopefully Ace and the morphine can keep PM going until the trap is sprung. 



Author's Response:

Let's hope you are right in your summation. :)

Thank you so much to taking the time to read and review. I sincerely appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

So nice to see some goodness. Way to go Charlie.  I love the way you are bringing all these characters together. Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Times are changing and the abuse is at an end. That's not to say everything will suddenly be rainbows and unicorns. There is much to do and I hope you like where I'm going to take this story.

I'm happy you liked Charlie's contribution for righting a wrong. One down and a few more to deal with. More connections will be made soon.

Thank you so much for reading and I hope I can keep your interest.

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Date: 13 Sep 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

One down - Fly, two to go - Lahote and Black.  Not forgetting whoever set PM and Ace up.  Now the gang just have to get them out.

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Date: 13 Sep 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23

How much can one person take before giving up?  Rescue cannot come soon enough.

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Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh no. He needs out! Well, he never should have been in the first place.



Author's Response:

Agreed on counts. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 

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Date: 07 Sep 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

There are several people who need to die. Surprisingly Crowley is not one of them. Black, Fly, Lahote, who will be next on the list? It seems as quickly as PM puts one situation behind him another just as cruel, or worse, turns up.



Author's Response:

You are out for blood! :)  Thank you for your review and for reading.

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Date: 06 Sep 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

Don't let him give up. It was a very good chapter.

Author's Response:

Hold onto your seat. Times are difficult for Preacher Man at the moment. There is hope on the horizon. Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your time.

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Date: 31 Aug 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

Cruel. It makes you wonder why god allows it.  How can man be so evil.



Author's Response:

The travesty is - I sugar coated how these men were treated. The reality is - it is a part of American history that has been glossed over or hushed up. We are the land of the free and most people would never think such barbarism could happen here. If you think about it, this was happening less than 100 years ago. That's not ancient history.

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Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Relieved they survived and are back at the prison.



Author's Response:

They aren't out of the woods yet. Thank you so much for all your support with this story.  

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Go Bella. Lol. Now, let's get back and save the boys.

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

Alice and Peter pacing, priceless!

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

The plantation is worse than the prison.

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Date: 18 Aug 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

This story makes me so sad and angry. I hope and pray for a happy ending and the real bad guys get what's coming to them.



Author's Response:

I have tried several different ways in order to thank you for your time and reading. I still can't figure out a way to send a private note, but wanted you to know I appreciate your thoughts. This is an HEA story. :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow. The treatment really sucks. I hope they run soon. I feel bad things coming.

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Even though you know it happens, it's still hard to imagine people being so crule just because they can.

I hope Emmitt, leading by example, will show the other guards how respecting the prisoners will in turn allow them to return the respect.

srill trying to put the pieces together. Why frame Edward? Is the judge the murderer? Is it a family member???

 

Oh, and where is Charlie???

Lovin your story



Author's Response:

I agree with you at how crule people can be. Unfortunately, it still exists today.

Emmett is a fair man and seeks to right the wrong. Luckily, there are more people like him and you never know, sometimes even the most harden person can change their views.

You will be hearing about Edward's backstory in the next chapter. Some parts are based on a true family incident. You can decide if family had anything to do with his predicament. 

Charlie is not forgotten. He will be up in chapter after. 

Thank you so much for continuing to read. I appreciate very much!

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 18

Em and Rose finally meet and then on the second meeting they get up close and personal. Good for Rose, sad that she won't see Em for some time.



Author's Response:

Well Emmett will be gone for a month and Rose needs to continue working on the case. I agree with the good for Rose. She was rather bold. 

Thank you for all your reviews. I so appreciate it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, very intense story. Now caught up and will review regularly.

There is still more we don't know. What is the relationship between Newton & Banner? That is the missing piece?  What foes Newton have over Banner? 

It's been fun watching how you brought all these characters together. I love Billy/Bella/Tonya. 

 



Author's Response:

Welcome back! 

Hmm, Newton and Banner. Is that the connection or is it something entirely different? I'd love to answer you, but that might ruin the plot.

I'm thrilled that you are enjoying and story and Bella's various personas.

Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it so much. 

Reviewer: tickledpinkstamper Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh My Gosh, please hurry with the next chapter! I hope Bella /Billy/Tanya will be safe from Warden Black!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your interest and enthusiasm in this little story. There are rough times a head for some of the characters and I hope it keeps your interest. Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate it so much.

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Rose and Em finally meet!  Em did really well tricking Black and now he and Ace will be able to watch out for Preacher Man.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Leah is worried for Rose, but I think there is probably more danger from Banner finding out she has been nosing around asking questions, than Newton.

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Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Can't believe they had to go back.

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

They meet at last and the guys are out of prison, but sadly, on the run. 

Peter needs to keep his cool, but at least he knows what happened now.

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Em saves the day again. Poor Rose has more questions than answers and somebody has Victoria running scared.

Crowley is despicable, someone needs to put a hole in his head.

Stanley and Newton, liars who seem to have more to hide than just an affair.

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Date: 28 Jun 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank goodness Em intervened and saved the day. Although I do think Ace could have taken Jewels down, but no doubt the missing guards would have turned up and he would have ended up in solitary.

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

Can't believe Edward actually thought Crowley had enough decency in him to deserve an apology. Edward sure is a bad judge of character, he just doesn't have any experience with bad people, just thinks everyone has morals and respect for others, which clearly most of those around him, other than his cell mates and Emmett don't.

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Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Come on Rose, don't give up, you need to find the truth to free Edward and maybe also help Jasper get a letter to Peter and Charlotte.

Bella as Tanya singing in a club.  And this line was telling from Seth - "Tanya happened".  Who knows what kind of strife this has put Emmett in with his boss.

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

All of the major players are dropping into place. Em, Jasper and Edward are at the prison and the connection is made between Jasper and Edward. 

Hopefully, with the help of Jasper, Blue and Tiny Edward will manage to stay strong.



Author's Response:

Prison life in the early 1900's was brutal. Men on the chain gang were treated worse than animals.

Connections are being made and more are to follow. Thank you so much for reading. I sincerely appreciate it. 

Reviewer: hathor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

So Esme and Carlisle are off to Alabama as well. Charlie may find Renee in Florida but not Bella.



Author's Response:

LOL - All of the above is true. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Very much enjoying the complexity of this story. Really starting to get an idea how it all comes together. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your patience in the beginning of this story. I promise that from here on out you will be hearing from Edward and Jasper more. I just needed to get the characters who have a part to play in position. As someone said, 'All roads lead to Alabama.' Until next Saturday, have a great week. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank god for modern day forensics. I wonder which one of the cops or judge is guilty of this crime. There gas to be a reason for seeing him convicted.

Now, let's see Esme, Carlisle and Rose break Edward free and flee to meet up with the rest if the gang. 

 



Author's Response:

Oh the choices are endless as to who the culprit is. I wish getting Edward out would have been as easy as that. Had I thought of it first that is. Alas, my poor brain didn't go there. :)  

Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it very much!

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Date: 26 May 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Banner wanted Edward found guilty real bad. Rose has smelt a rat and won't let this rest until she finds out the truth.  Hope Edward can survive his hard labour sentence long enough for Sam and Rose to get him free.



Author's Response:

It would seem to be the case with Banner. I take it you like Rose. I like her too! 

Thank you very much for reviewing. I so appreciate it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

poor kids



Author's Response:

They did have a rough go of life. I hope you enjoy how their friendship develops. Thank you for reading. You made my day!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

good thinking.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story.

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