Date: 02 Apr 2016 3:02 AM Title: Awakening
Oh my! Can't say I was expecting that. Seems wrong that Wdward didn't morn her after all this time. Disappointing turn in the story.
Sorry to read you are disappointed. Hope you stick around for the rest and perhaps I can restore your faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Awakening
When Demetri took the heart from Bella's body, he took it right out of Edward and me, too! How can their be anymore love story , with Bella dead and Edward and Jacob bent on revenge? I hate this twist, it makes me very sad!
Every great love story has to have a tradegy in it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Awakening
I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the way you take canon characters and start to make them your own. Edward, in canon, puts up such feeble arguments they are easy to pull apart. For instance, and this is taken from the book or movie as well, where he asks Bella if she is ready for 'never changing, never moving forward'. And then he questions her about changing her mind about children. If she doesn't want them before her change, why would she want them after it? There are so many holes in the original works I want to drive a B Double through them. Loved the touching moment between Edward and his sire. I am really looking forward to your version of how it should have been. Thank you.
I did try to stay true to the orignal characters as much as possible. Glad you like it so far.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:45 PM Title: Awakening
Sounds pretty normal to me, just like any other well-off family planning a wedding. The women are totally involved and the guys are laying low, trying to stay out of trouble! See you next time!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wanted the wedding to seem as normal as possible, job done. LOL
Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:15 PM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Oh Edward, be so very careful what you wish for! Keep in mind, also, the straw that broke the camel's back! The three stories in Edward's POV I've read so far have been so good, I look forward to Awakenings!
Glad you like them. Hope the last book doesn't disappoint.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:01 AM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Grudging, but at least they will work as a team, to vanquish the enemy. I wish Edward felt he could tell Bella what Jake was thinking. I'ts not fair that he can torment at will and Edward just takes it, feeling he owes the dog!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Lunar Eclipse
I understand how much he wants to save her and keep her safe, but I could just scream when he decides to do so without taking her wishes into consideration. How he can be so smart and so stupid at the same time, blows my mind!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:47 AM Title: Midnight Sun Continued
When it comes to blockheads, Charlie Brown has nothing on Edward Cullen! He just won't grant the love of his life the courtesy of believing what she tells him, and I find that incredibly insulting! I'm reading Lunar Eclipse next, as I have read Dark Moon already.
Thanks for reading and reviewing all the chapters. It's nice to hear what others think of the stories.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:54 AM Title: Midnight Sun Continued
As each new day brings reassurance that he can control his thirst and his strength, I fail to see why Edward doesn't give himself more credit! Guess he can't quit overthinking, especially the negative parts!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 10:23 PM Title: Midnight Sun Continued
Even a supernatural creature such as he is, has to weary of constantly beating up himself! Not to mention I want to smack him every time he thinks Bella's life will go down the path of his choosing, with no input from her at all!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:03 PM Title: Midnight Sun Continued
Inside his head is as fascinating as inside hers!
I always thought he was way more interesting and Mrs. Meyers got it wrong writing from her point of view. LOL. Thus being the reason for these fanfics I suppose. Hope you enjoy the series. Good to hear from you. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:09 AM Title: Dark Moon
This was kind of fun to read, too bad you never finished the rest of the books from Edard's POV!
Back at it. This time I hope to finish. I put the first chapter of Awakening up, that's Breaking Dawn my version. I hope you check it out.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:05 AM Title: Dark Moon
I always smile when I read about Bella calling for a vote at the dining room table! It makes Edward so furious to have his family thwart him like that! He should just remember how stubborn his girl is!
I loved that scene too. Just a little note to let you know I've posted the rest of the Lunar Eclipse. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If you're still around, I hope you enjoy.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 11:13 PM Title: Dark Moon
It's not like him to have no idea that Elizabeth had some powerful gift, one that made him do things he didn't want to. She was some sort of siren, I guess. Good thing he thought of Bella and broke away or he may have been raped!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:27 AM Title: Dark Moon
why bother Edward he is shaking up with Elizabeth.. Oh he forgot to tell you..
It has been forever, but I finally finished posting all the chapters for Lunar Eclipse. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If your still around, enjoy. Thank you for all your comments they didn't go unnoticed, I enjoyed them all.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:24 AM Title: Dark Moon
See there he is jumping in with another woman. He does not love Bella. She is just some symbel to him not love the type where you can't leave that person you must be with them. He will next chapter be jumping into the sack with Elizabeth.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:12 AM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Missed this a lot. I really need to reread the series. Merry Christmas.
I know it's been forever, but I have finally posted the last chapters of this novel. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If you're still around I hope you enjoy.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:46 PM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Will you be finishing this story?
I know it's been forever, but yes the final chapters to this story are posted and I've also posted chapter 1 of my last story called 'Awakening', which is my version of Breaking Dawn. Hope you're still around and will enjoy.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:42 AM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Excellent chapter. Liked the interaction between his brothers and Carlisle during the hunting trip. Edward is still angsty but it will be a revelation to him when it is jealousy that he is feeling and needs to deal with it. Writing really makes the difference because it makes it so easy to read. Thanks for posting as often as you do which is another bonus for the story.
I glad you are enjoying the book. I look writing about the Cullens. I find them fascinating. I post as often as I can, but I'm posting here and over a twilighted, that is why sometimes it gets delayed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 22 May 2011 5:28 AM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Wonderful chapter as well as the previous one. I know Edward is bent on protection of Bella, but doesn't he realize that skipping a class when the principal just witnessed his little altercation with Jacob could mean trouble or atleast warrant a call to one of his parents just to relate a "dangerous situation" (hint, hint). You know schools can't be too careful when the safety of our favorite vampire children are concerned.
The writing is so terrific and makes for a great companion piece to the book. You capture Edward's thinking so well and the rendition of the safety thing with the crashing plane was funny all over again. I got the mental picture of Bella rolling her eyes at him and just shaking her head at how stupid he sounds. Maybe it was always a good thing he couldn't read her mind.
The anticipation grows as I can't wait for more Cullen interaction because I am sure Carlisle's patience and understanding for Edward's feelings, jealousies and so forth will really be stretched. No matter what happens next, I know it will be great. Thanks for posting such awesome chapters!
Thank you for such wonderful words. It's always nice to know that someone is enjoying the story. I love Edward and he is so easy to write which is odd really becasue he is so complex, but I suppose that's what makes him fun. Continue to enjoy we still have a long way to go and he will suffer many twist and turns in this book.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:21 PM Title: Lunar Eclipse
Seeing this from Edward's POV is going to be thrilling. There is so much potential to this story and you are off to a great start. This is my favorite book so to have a chance to read it from this perspective is an opportunity not to be missed. After the other two renditions, I believe you are knowing how Edward thinks, how he acts, how he lets his over protectiveness and later on jealousy interfere with his relationships not only with Bella but with his family. I really believe you will do an awesome job 'cause you were meant to tell his side of the story. Your writing is most excellent! I'm hopeful that you will bring out more of the family dynamics, relationships, etc as things progress in future chapters. Thank you for all the continued hard work in bringing a new dimension to the rest of the story. I for one can't wait for more!
Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind wonderful words. When I began this book I was surprised how much of it was not from Eclipse. You'll be happy to know that alot of it deals with the Cullen's. There was sooo much going on that Bella had no idea of. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks again for your continued support.