Date: 12 Jul 2022 6:41 PM Title: Before I Die
Mourning the loss of a child is something you never get over, but you learn to move on and continue living. Bella and Edward need to have that talk before too much time gets in the way and it gets swept under the rug. Running Cullen Foundation could be just what Bella needs to get her groove back.
Sherry
Date: 12 Jul 2022 4:06 AM Title: Before I Die
Oh wow... Her and James cleared the air. I am glad. Not that I thought there was anything going on with them.
Esme's offer I didn't expect, but it might be a good thing.
Loved it and looking forward to more :D
Date: 12 Jul 2022 1:06 AM Title: Before I Die
I am glad Bella did ok leaving the house. Also with going to Esme's and talking to her and Alice.
Date: 11 Jul 2022 9:06 PM Title: Before I Die
Thanks for the update, can't wait for more :) !
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 6:58 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 6:55 PM Title: Before I Die
Loving this story, so glad Bella is getting better
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2022 7:03 AM Title: Before I Die
Time gives for some healing. However, the scar never goes away. Bella was SO unbelievably strong in this chapter. That Agent Perez needs to be strung up!
Date: 01 Jul 2022 4:41 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 01 Jul 2022 4:41 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 7:05 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella now knows what happen to her Mom & Charlie. Hopefully she will find out who her Father is. I hope he is not related to Edward. Hopefully he is from a friendy family to the Cullens. They don't need anymore drama..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 9:50 AM Title: Before I Die
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Jun 2022 3:46 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm glad they are talking to each other, finally. Can't wait to see who her birth father is.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 3:07 AM Title: Before I Die
Such a great story, glad they're talking and trying to come to terms with what happened.
Date: 26 Jun 2022 11:36 AM Title: Before I Die
Time heals all wounds. E/B will be okay, hopefully sooner than later. I'm anxious for her to meet her birth father.
Sherry
Date: 26 Jun 2022 7:39 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it, so glad that Bella and Edward were able to talk hopefully things will get better for them now. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter as always x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2022 6:37 AM Title: Before I Die
Wow! So much revealed and poor Bella. Perez is/was an a**hole. Bella was a pawn in her Dad & Jacob's games. They not only abused her in every way but are murderers. Not just for Renee, but also for her & Edward's sweet child. And this interrogation? It was a farce and abusive. The authorities knew it, too. Why didn't Brady shut this farce down? And (like Bella) I wonder just who are her real bio-parents? I suspect it's someone either very rich, very powerful or both. Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 26 Jun 2022 2:31 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm glad they're finally talking. Excited for more.
Date: 26 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Before I Die
Man Perez was relentless. I wonder if she was a corrupt as the rest of them?? Could she had been involved to?
Her and Edward have a ways to go.
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2022 3:21 PM Title: Before I Die
needed another tissue warning but it was well done...hurry back
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 5:13 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 10:52 PM Title: Before I Die
Poor Jessica
Author's Response:
Right but look how far shes come!
Date: 06 Jun 2022 9:52 PM Title: Before I Die
Glad Rose was able to get through to her. They will be ok. Jessica's has been through a horrible situation. I can't remember, whi was it that did this to her?
Author's Response:
Right! Rose was a lifesaver! I know poor Jess but look how far shes come! Read chp. 12 at the wedding it tells who but I guess after reading this one you now know it wasnt just him
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 12:02 PM Title: Before I Die
So glad Rose was there to facilitate them getting to a place so they could talk and Jessica helped a lot too.
Author's Response:
YES THIS!!!!
Date: 06 Jun 2022 11:21 AM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for an amazing chapter. It was well worth the wait. What a heartbreaking chapter it is tho. Poor Jessica... Poor Bella and Edward... they're starting to find their way back to each other finally. I don't think there is anything harder than losing a child. Please update again soon.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I know I could not imagine losing one. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 3:22 AM Title: Before I Die
I have loved this story and truly hope you plan on finishing it
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reviewing! I updated it last night.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2022 11:25 PM Title: Before I Die
hope you are going to finish this
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2022 8:04 PM Title: Before I Die
I have started this and I am enjoying it but notice you have not updated in a while, so do you plan to or should I find another story?
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2022 3:49 PM Title: Before I Die
good update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 04 Apr 2022 3:08 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:44 PM Title: Before I Die
Phew! I'm glad that he called Rose. That's what I was going to suggest.
Author's Response:
Right!!! ??
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:16 AM Title: Before I Die
Oh man, this chapter tore up my feels. Edward needs to stop waiting for Bella to make the first move to talk to him about things. He needs to open that line of communication. Bella needs warned and prepped for the feds.
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and reading!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 6:34 AM Title: Before I Die
This chapter is heart breaking. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
It was hard to write but theres a reason! Thank you for reading
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 1:44 AM Title: Before I Die
So sad for them both
Author's Response:
:(
Date: 01 Apr 2022 11:57 PM Title: Before I Die
Glad he called Rose. B & E need to talk to each other
Author's Response:
100%
Date: 01 Apr 2022 10:22 PM Title: Before I Die
Bella needs Edward. They both need each other. Why are they not turning to each other?????? Edward doesn't want to appear weak. He NEEDS to get over that. I hope Rosealie can help both of them.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to explain this more soon on why they were acting so stubborn. Rose was a lifesaver! Thanks for reading
Date: 01 Apr 2022 9:46 PM Title: Before I Die
Glad E called Rose to help in the end.Jesica seems like a good kid.
Author's Response:
She is! thanks for reading
Date: 01 Apr 2022 7:48 PM Title: Before I Die
Oh wow... I cannot imagine! Poor Bella and Edward!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 11:15 AM Title: Before I Die
Good story so far. Bella has a long road to recovery.
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: Before I Die
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2022 7:41 AM Title: Before I Die
I hope you are going to update soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2022 3:26 AM Title: Before I Die
OMG great chapter ! I hope Bella didn't lose her baby. Can't wait for next chapter !
Date: 20 Feb 2022 2:05 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 20 Feb 2022 12:25 AM Title: Before I Die
Jacob got what he deserved. Charlie didn't get enough. I'm hoping Bella didn't lose the baby.
Sherry
Date: 19 Feb 2022 12:41 PM Title: Before I Die
Oh wow, absolutely loved it. I hope Bella and the baby are ok though. Thank you for the update, until next time x
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 11:47 PM Title: Before I Die
Poor Bella. I hope she didn't lose her baby
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 11:38 PM Title: Before I Die
Glad they are finally dead. Pathetic excuses for the male species.... I won't call them men.
Author's Response:
Definitely not!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 6:16 PM Title: Before I Die
I'm glad Jacob and Charlie suffered. They deserved all the pain. I hope Bella and the baby are ok. I worry that Leah with never recover. Could the blood be Leah's, were she tried to kill herself????
Author's Response:
It was a long time coming wasn't it!! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: Before I Die
Good rittens, that he gave them what they deserved.
Author's Response:
Right!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..Very good chapter Jacob got what he deseved. I wish Edward could have branded him also but the carving will have to do. Charlie should have been hurt a little more but he got a good beat down. I can't wait for the next chapter but I think it's going to be hard. I don't want the bllod to be Bella's or the baby. jacob & Charlie should not win. Bella deserves better. Until you post again
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review ☺️ the dude wasn't going to get away with branding our girl. Thanks for readingm
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:49 PM Title: Before I Die
So, who are Bella's parents? And how did Renee & Charlie come to have her as a newborn? I hope that Bella doesn't lose the baby. In a way, it would mean both Jacob & Charlie won. I would hate that. I fear Leah will never be sane again. Mentally and emotionally never being able to distinquish between her nightmare and reality.
Author's Response:
Renee is her mother. Sorry if that was confusing Charlie just isn't her father. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:32 PM Title: Before I Die
Charlie and Jacob are dead... they are buring the compound to the ground. All good things..
Bella loosing the baby... I hope doesn't shove his head up his ass and is there for Bella. They both need to grieve.
Looking forward to more ...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2022 5:37 PM Title: Before I Die
OMG! I'm so invested in this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that both Bella and the baby are going to survive.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:44 AM Title: Before I Die
Oh, I hate that cliffy after everything that went done. Please update soon.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Next chapter is up if ya havent read!
Date: 08 Feb 2022 4:00 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2022 12:34 AM Title: Before I Die
I hope Bella is alright
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 Feb 2022 8:31 PM Title: Before I Die
I am glad Bella at least got to slap Jacob. I wish she could do more. I hope Bella is ok. Also the baby. Glad Edward got there before jacob had a chance to hirt Bella. I like that Jacob knows his mark has been removed from Bella's body.
Author's Response:
Right! I thought that was a great thing. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2022 7:59 PM Title: Before I Die
OMG love this chapter .But please get next one out soon lol
Author's Response:
It's out! If ya haven't read
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:25 PM Title: Before I Die
On wow, what a great chapter. I can't believe you let it on a cliffhanger. I hope you drag it out with the torture of Jacob and Charlie. Please don't let Bella loose the baby, it would kill her and Edward. Until you post the next chapter x
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:05 PM Title: Before I Die
good
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:45 PM Title: Before I Die
Wow Charlie has even more to pay for. Poor Leah. Hope B will be ok. Wonder exactly Charlie was being blackmailed with.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:24 PM Title: Before I Die
OMG, hope Bella is okay, and Edward gets revenge hurting Jacob and Charlie so they suffer.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 3:05 PM Title: Before I Die
Oh wow...
Was Bella shot? Or is she loosing the baby??
Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 1:49 PM Title: Before I Die
Love this story, please update soon
Author's Response:
It's been updated! Check it out
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2022 12:51 AM Title: Before I Die
so good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2022 9:59 PM Title: Before I Die
wow I hve had family dinners with drama but not quite that bad
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2022 8:07 PM Title: Before I Die
I don't trust Alice or Esme or Carlisle
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2022 5:40 AM Title: Before I Die
love your other story as well
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2022 4:44 AM Title: Before I Die
so good you deserve more reviews
Date: 29 Jan 2022 6:41 PM Title: Before I Die
I love your story. Hope you post more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 27 Jan 2022 6:03 PM Title: Before I Die
Please update this story. I have been waiting to see Jacob's torture. And please torture Charlie as well. Drag it out, don't kill them quickly.
Author's Response:
Chapter has been sent to Beta. Working on the next one!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2022 2:29 PM Title: Before I Die
I am so hooked
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2022 5:45 AM Title: Before I Die
so well written
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2022 11:51 PM Title: Before I Die
I am loving this
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2022 6:59 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm finally caught up and I'm needing more asap. I really want Jacob to die. I'm thinking Renee may be alive and with Marcus; and Marcus is Bella's biological father. I really hope Edward gets there in time to crash the wedding. Although I kinda want Jacob to see Bella has had his brand removed.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Soon...
Date: 24 Jan 2022 4:26 AM Title: Before I Die
I really don't like Carlisle, but he's getting to me with the way he's "changing his ways." Like Edward, I keep wondering if he'll overcome the cancer and return to being the mean SOB he was prior. Though I'm glad Edward seems to understand the way he was raised isn't the way he should raise (and/or train) his son.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jan 2022 7:18 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm iffy on Seth. He'd do just about anything he could for his sister, but how far would he go? I'm hoping James is right about him. I'm sure Esme and Alice would die if they knew Bella decorated the Don's home with Wal-Mart merchandise. Good for Jessica, getting some bravery and independence back in her life.
I meant to say last chapter... Carlisle acknowledging he messed up with Edward as a kid in his "training" was a huge step.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jan 2022 5:53 AM Title: Before I Die
Damn. The Cullen's are way past being your typical dystunctional family.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jan 2022 4:22 AM Title: Before I Die
Alice is gonna be a major bitch now. Damn, I kinda feel bad for her.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jan 2022 3:38 AM Title: Before I Die
Well, that was a typical holiday dinner with a dysfunctional family.
Sherry
Date: 23 Jan 2022 12:36 AM Title: Before I Die
Bella sure cries a lot. She needs to grow a backbone and start putting people, like Tanya, in her place. She is the Queen, after all. These two need to work on their communication. They fight way too much. Bella left Jacob because of his controlling ways, but Edward is controlling too and he's putting his hands on her. Wasn't that way she was afraid of Jacob? Edward may not be as bad, but it's still abuse, right? Gotta love a spitfire Alice.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:41 PM Title: Before I Die
Yeah, I think I may need a drink too with all the tension in the VIP room at the moment. Adding Edward to the mix is only going to multiple it.
Bella's mentioned a few times that Mike watches and it makes her uncomfortable. I'm wondeiing if he's just a creep or is he working for someone to keep taps on Edward's household and now Bella since they married.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 7:01 PM Title: Before I Die
Alec has some balls hiding in there somewhere, didn't he? Good idea keeping him alive to get info on Black's place.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 10:30 AM Title: Before I Die
Another great chapter.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:18 AM Title: Before I Die
What a way to end a Edward's night. Why the hell do the Feds have Bella for?
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 8:06 AM Title: Before I Die
Seems E & B will make some progress then it'll go to hell. Maybe they're finally on the same wavelength. I kinda thought R/E would split up, but I'm surprised Em still doesn't have a tail on her. Loved Bella putting Mrs Cope in her place.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 6:01 AM Title: Before I Die
I like how you glossed over the wedding. Reading long, drawn out ceremonies can get a little boring, so I don't mind that action at all. However, Demetri, has some balls to treat Bella and Jessica the way he did at the Cullen's reception. I'm curious how Marcus knows Renee. Is it possible that Marcus is Bella's birth father? Didn't expect to read Aro was dead, but I'm gonna guess Demetri did it to take the reigns of the Volturi Family.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 4:44 AM Title: Before I Die
Reading on... BTW, I'm loving this story.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 8:42 PM Title: Before I Die
You have my adrenaline running. I think it's Demetri.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2022 8:44 AM Title: Before I Die
A reader rec'd this story in the MafiaWard Twilight Fanfiction group on FB. I'm happy to say this first chapter has me hooked. Looking forward to reading on and catching up as time permits.
Sherry
Date: 13 Jan 2022 1:40 AM Title: Before I Die
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!