Date: 12 Jul 2022 6:41 PM Title: Before I Die
Mourning the loss of a child is something you never get over, but you learn to move on and continue living. Bella and Edward need to have that talk before too much time gets in the way and it gets swept under the rug. Running Cullen Foundation could be just what Bella needs to get her groove back.
Date: 27 Jun 2022 7:05 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella now knows what happen to her Mom & Charlie. Hopefully she will find out who her Father is. I hope he is not related to Edward. Hopefully he is from a friendy family to the Cullens. They don't need anymore drama..until you post again
Date: 26 Jun 2022 6:37 AM Title: Before I Die
Wow! So much revealed and poor Bella. Perez is/was an a**hole. Bella was a pawn in her Dad & Jacob's games. They not only abused her in every way but are murderers. Not just for Renee, but also for her & Edward's sweet child. And this interrogation? It was a farce and abusive. The authorities knew it, too. Why didn't Brady shut this farce down? And (like Bella) I wonder just who are her real bio-parents? I suspect it's someone either very rich, very powerful or both. Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2022 9:52 PM Title: Before I Die
Glad Rose was able to get through to her. They will be ok. Jessica's has been through a horrible situation. I can't remember, whi was it that did this to her?
Right! Rose was a lifesaver! I know poor Jess but look how far shes come! Read chp. 12 at the wedding it tells who but I guess after reading this one you now know it wasnt just him
Date: 06 Jun 2022 11:21 AM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for an amazing chapter. It was well worth the wait. What a heartbreaking chapter it is tho. Poor Jessica... Poor Bella and Edward... they're starting to find their way back to each other finally. I don't think there is anything harder than losing a child. Please update again soon.
Thank you for your review! I know I could not imagine losing one. Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:16 AM Title: Before I Die
Oh man, this chapter tore up my feels. Edward needs to stop waiting for Bella to make the first move to talk to him about things. He needs to open that line of communication. Bella needs warned and prepped for the feds.
Thanks for the chapter.
Thanks for reviewing and reading!
Date: 01 Apr 2022 10:22 PM Title: Before I Die
Bella needs Edward. They both need each other. Why are they not turning to each other?????? Edward doesn't want to appear weak. He NEEDS to get over that. I hope Rosealie can help both of them.
I'm hoping to explain this more soon on why they were acting so stubborn. Rose was a lifesaver! Thanks for reading
Date: 18 Feb 2022 6:16 PM Title: Before I Die
I'm glad Jacob and Charlie suffered. They deserved all the pain. I hope Bella and the baby are ok. I worry that Leah with never recover. Could the blood be Leah's, were she tried to kill herself????
It was a long time coming wasn't it!! Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: Before I Die
Thank you for the update..well done..Very good chapter Jacob got what he deseved. I wish Edward could have branded him also but the carving will have to do. Charlie should have been hurt a little more but he got a good beat down. I can't wait for the next chapter but I think it's going to be hard. I don't want the bllod to be Bella's or the baby. jacob & Charlie should not win. Bella deserves better. Until you post again
Thanks for your review ☺️ the dude wasn't going to get away with branding our girl. Thanks for readingm
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:49 PM Title: Before I Die
So, who are Bella's parents? And how did Renee & Charlie come to have her as a newborn? I hope that Bella doesn't lose the baby. In a way, it would mean both Jacob & Charlie won. I would hate that. I fear Leah will never be sane again. Mentally and emotionally never being able to distinquish between her nightmare and reality.
Renee is her mother. Sorry if that was confusing Charlie just isn't her father. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:32 PM Title: Before I Die
Charlie and Jacob are dead... they are buring the compound to the ground. All good things..
Bella loosing the baby... I hope doesn't shove his head up his ass and is there for Bella. They both need to grieve.
Looking forward to more ...
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 8:31 PM Title: Before I Die
I am glad Bella at least got to slap Jacob. I wish she could do more. I hope Bella is ok. Also the baby. Glad Edward got there before jacob had a chance to hirt Bella. I like that Jacob knows his mark has been removed from Bella's body.
Right! I thought that was a great thing. Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:25 PM Title: Before I Die
On wow, what a great chapter. I can't believe you let it on a cliffhanger. I hope you drag it out with the torture of Jacob and Charlie. Please don't let Bella loose the baby, it would kill her and Edward. Until you post the next chapter x
Thanks for reading!
Date: 27 Jan 2022 6:03 PM Title: Before I Die
Please update this story. I have been waiting to see Jacob's torture. And please torture Charlie as well. Drag it out, don't kill them quickly.
Chapter has been sent to Beta. Working on the next one!
Date: 24 Jan 2022 6:59 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm finally caught up and I'm needing more asap. I really want Jacob to die. I'm thinking Renee may be alive and with Marcus; and Marcus is Bella's biological father. I really hope Edward gets there in time to crash the wedding. Although I kinda want Jacob to see Bella has had his brand removed.
Date: 24 Jan 2022 4:26 AM Title: Before I Die
I really don't like Carlisle, but he's getting to me with the way he's "changing his ways." Like Edward, I keep wondering if he'll overcome the cancer and return to being the mean SOB he was prior. Though I'm glad Edward seems to understand the way he was raised isn't the way he should raise (and/or train) his son.
Date: 23 Jan 2022 7:18 AM Title: Before I Die
I'm iffy on Seth. He'd do just about anything he could for his sister, but how far would he go? I'm hoping James is right about him. I'm sure Esme and Alice would die if they knew Bella decorated the Don's home with Wal-Mart merchandise. Good for Jessica, getting some bravery and independence back in her life.
I meant to say last chapter... Carlisle acknowledging he messed up with Edward as a kid in his "training" was a huge step.
Date: 23 Jan 2022 12:36 AM Title: Before I Die
Bella sure cries a lot. She needs to grow a backbone and start putting people, like Tanya, in her place. She is the Queen, after all. These two need to work on their communication. They fight way too much. Bella left Jacob because of his controlling ways, but Edward is controlling too and he's putting his hands on her. Wasn't that way she was afraid of Jacob? Edward may not be as bad, but it's still abuse, right? Gotta love a spitfire Alice.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:41 PM Title: Before I Die
Yeah, I think I may need a drink too with all the tension in the VIP room at the moment. Adding Edward to the mix is only going to multiple it.
Bella's mentioned a few times that Mike watches and it makes her uncomfortable. I'm wondeiing if he's just a creep or is he working for someone to keep taps on Edward's household and now Bella since they married.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 8:06 AM Title: Before I Die
Seems E & B will make some progress then it'll go to hell. Maybe they're finally on the same wavelength. I kinda thought R/E would split up, but I'm surprised Em still doesn't have a tail on her. Loved Bella putting Mrs Cope in her place.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 6:01 AM Title: Before I Die
I like how you glossed over the wedding. Reading long, drawn out ceremonies can get a little boring, so I don't mind that action at all. However, Demetri, has some balls to treat Bella and Jessica the way he did at the Cullen's reception. I'm curious how Marcus knows Renee. Is it possible that Marcus is Bella's birth father? Didn't expect to read Aro was dead, but I'm gonna guess Demetri did it to take the reigns of the Volturi Family.