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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2022 7:26 PM Title: Secret Santa

I really enjoyed this story Thank you

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2021 3:00 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Great story 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 1:49 PM Title: Secret Santa

Love it



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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2020 3:46 AM Title: Secret Santa

Really good

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Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2018 11:21 PM Title: Secret Santa

I absolutely adored this hilarious, HAWT, sweet read! I reviewed on the other site, but I just wanted to write something here too.

Thank you so much for always bringing a smile to my heart. This was such a great “Secret Santa” gift. Bwahahaha! 

Cant wait for more. Happy New Year! May it be filled with Blessings galore of health, happiness, prosperity...and definitely plot bunnies! *winks*

I love you, my Lara! Squishing you with my {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES}!

- Dee (FangirlinGranma) 



Author's Response:

Definitely plot bunnies! Lol, I have those in spades. Thank you for your love and wonderful comments!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2018 10:36 PM Title: Secret Santa

aww sweet story.  Thanks for sharing.

ty



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Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2018 2:41 AM Title: Secret Santa

I liked it very sweet actually

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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2018 1:12 AM Title: Secret Santa

:) loved this 



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Thanks, Deb!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2018 11:06 PM Title: Secret Santa

EEp! Love this so much!



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Thank you, Alyscia!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2018 10:27 PM Title: Secret Santa

Awesome story. I wish my job search came with a HEA like Bella's!



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Lol, me too!

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2018 8:20 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Hea 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2018 7:05 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Long lost love

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2018 2:56 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

So sweet! Fun read!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 5:28 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Enjoyed the first chapter!

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Awww I didn't want it to end. Loved it!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:28 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Wonderful end. TY for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:15 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Only person on Jasper's side I feel sorry for is that baby.  Glad Charlie got his head out of his arse. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:30 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Glad Charlie is seeing the error of his ways. Jasper sound screwed. Glad  pay for all he did. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2018 7:13 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2017 6:18 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:00 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

The perfect ending to their perfect begining thanks so much for another great one.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 5:50 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Great story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 9:59 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Jasper got what he deserved and so glad Edward got some pay back.  They are all so sweet so sad about them lossing Renee but life goes on and she wanted to make sure of that.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 7:43 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Absolutely loved this story 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 6:46 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:53 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Amazing story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Perfect ending!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

That was great!

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 2:02 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I loved this so so much! It was a great little short story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 1:52 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Love love  love this chapter.  MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 12:27 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2017 8:36 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Fantastic story Josie well done hun

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2017 6:52 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

A Merry Christmas indeed.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2017 11:54 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Sweet. Thank you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2017 3:01 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Jasper sure was an ass, but Alice was a piece of work too.   Edward and Bella are too sweet.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2017 12:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

:) 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:43 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Wonderful. Thank you. Best wishes for the season.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:05 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it

Have a Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 2:15 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I really needed something sweet & mushy to read!  I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters. 

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 4:16 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it !

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 1:36 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Sounds like Jasper is going down.  I just wonder what they will decide about their future. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 11:38 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 10:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I really needed something sweet & mushy to read!  I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Great chapter, keep writing

Merry Christmas

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 12:14 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I'm actually glad that Jasper, Alice, his father in law and all of his cronies are going away for so much more than beating up Edward and trashing his place.  That is 1 thing that Edward doesn't have to have a speck of guilt over.

Bella and Edward should think of something that they would both love to do for a living together, but do it in a totally different town than Chicago, Forks, or any where in Washington.  LOL

I now what you are going to do to us next.....You have a cancer patient declining chemo.......  Death?    Funeral?    Sad letters left behind??   

Bring it On!!!  I'm ready!!!    LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 9:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

It is good that Charlie has changed his ways.  So sad about Renee my heart just breaks for all of them.  Jasper is a stupid dick and I hope he spends a long time behind bars. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 5:45 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2017 5:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2017 5:01 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Oh my goodness wow Jasper is horrible man I hope is gets his comings 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 11:21 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Wow  Jasper is def a douche.  Who does he think he is?  A mobster?  What a dick.   Charlie is a jerk but as you said, he's making amends.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 10:31 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Jasper is definitely a douche.  I'm guessing he has to pay his mom's bills because the garage was used as collateral.  Otherwise, he wouldn't be liable for them.  Ah well...I'll shut up now.  Happy lemon dance though.

dl

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 9:26 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I don't know how someone can be as big an asshole as Jasper was and still is.  ugh......   

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:54 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I was worried about what Peter was going to say. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:09 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I’m so sad for Bella with her mom but so happy that she now has Edward.  Jasper sure has fucked up his life with his mean, hateful, reprehensible behavior!   Well, now he’ll have to deal with the ramifications of his behavior.  Can’t wait for the next chapter!!  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:00 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

:) 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 11:29 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Love it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 9:47 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Charlie is kissing ass and he should be.  Jasper just needs to take a long walk on a short dock and not come up for air ever.

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:08 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

How could Jasper think he could get away with that?

Only one chapter left?  I'm really enjoying this.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:55 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Omgosh! Jasper is such a jerk. I hope Bella pops Jasper in his face. Love the lemons. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:19 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Great chapter keep on writing

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 2:54 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Very good.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 2:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Cabt wait to find out more about them. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 5:19 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 10:43 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

She sees that they are ment to be but Edward does not see his worth so sad

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 3:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Really  great  story  so  far!  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2017 9:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Thoroughly enjoyable on all measures. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2017 8:17 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Nice. Lots of history to sort through. Thank you

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 11:40 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:46 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Don't give up Edward

Keep on writing, good story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:33 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I Jasper gets what’s coming to him.  Their night together was perfect.  It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella.  She’ll just have to prove him wrong.  Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I Jasper gets what’s coming to him.  Their night together was perfect.  It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella.  She’ll just have to prove him wrong.  Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 8:10 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I can’t wait!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 8:10 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I can’t wait!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 7:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

No no no no no! Poor Edward - so despondent & insecure! Bella better not leave him! Silent partner??

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:45 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:20 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Dam!   Jasper the douche bag has partly ruined both his sister's and Edward's life.  He deserves some come upance.  I think Bella and Edward should tell his ass off together.   I wonder if Bella's mom is in on .the ass hatery

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I think Edward is selling himself short.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I need more!! lol

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:27 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Poor Edward, Belle needs to kick Jasper’s ass.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2017 7:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Can’t wait to hear more about their history and what happened.  Thank you for the Christmas treat!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2017 4:45 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Interesting storyline

Keep writing

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:12 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Love it! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 10:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

He will warmer her up lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:08 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I can't wait to see what happens to these two! I am not happy with Jasper. I can't wait for more. Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 4:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I like it

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:33 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Your stories are always good.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

It sounds like all of Bella's family are assholes.  I wouldn 't want to ge to see them either.  It goes both ways too.  I didn't read about any visits or attempted visits from them either.

Poor Edward seems so lonely and alone too.  These 2 need to get snowed in for about a month and then disappear, it sounds like.  LOL

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 3:06 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

I love it! They sound so sweet together! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:11 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 10:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

good start

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Love this!  Can't  wait  for  the  rest ! 

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:58 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2017 11:51 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe

sounds like Jasper has some 'splaining to do Lucy.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2017 7:04 PM Title: 12 Days of Christmas

This was amazing!  I love it that you ended it with a bang!! ;)



Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 7:39 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas

He is a good man and loves his wife no matter the size she is.  I wish he would let Bella be the one to tell Tanya to get her ass out



Author's Response: Oh, that sounds like an excellent idea!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 7:30 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas

First thing get rid of Tanya.



Author's Response: Definitely!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2016 12:54 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas

Thank you for the wonderful holiday gift I am following your writing and have enjoyed your stories. You have so much talent. Best wishes in 2017.

Author's Response: I appreciate that so much. Thank you very much.

Author's Response: I appreciate that so much. Thank you very much.

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