Date: 26 May 2022 7:26 PM Title: Secret Santa
I really enjoyed this story Thank you
Date: 08 Sep 2021 3:00 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Great story
Date: 12 Sep 2020 1:49 PM Title: Secret Santa
Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 18 Feb 2020 3:46 AM Title: Secret Santa
Really good
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Thank you for reading!
Date: 28 Dec 2018 11:21 PM Title: Secret Santa
I absolutely adored this hilarious, HAWT, sweet read! I reviewed on the other site, but I just wanted to write something here too.
Thank you so much for always bringing a smile to my heart. This was such a great “Secret Santa” gift. Bwahahaha!
Cant wait for more. Happy New Year! May it be filled with Blessings galore of health, happiness, prosperity...and definitely plot bunnies! *winks*
I love you, my Lara! Squishing you with my {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES}!
- Dee (FangirlinGranma)
Author's Response:
Definitely plot bunnies! Lol, I have those in spades. Thank you for your love and wonderful comments!
Date: 24 Dec 2018 10:36 PM Title: Secret Santa
aww sweet story. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much!
Date: 15 Dec 2018 2:41 AM Title: Secret Santa
I liked it very sweet actually
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Thank you!
Date: 13 Dec 2018 1:12 AM Title: Secret Santa
:) loved this
Author's Response:
Thanks, Deb!
Date: 12 Dec 2018 11:06 PM Title: Secret Santa
EEp! Love this so much!
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Thank you, Alyscia!
Date: 12 Dec 2018 10:27 PM Title: Secret Santa
Awesome story. I wish my job search came with a HEA like Bella's!
Author's Response:
Lol, me too!
Date: 01 Oct 2018 8:20 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Hea
Date: 01 Oct 2018 7:05 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Long lost love
Date: 09 Feb 2018 2:56 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
So sweet! Fun read!
Date: 08 Feb 2018 5:28 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Enjoyed the first chapter!
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Awww I didn't want it to end. Loved it!!
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:28 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Wonderful end. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:15 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Only person on Jasper's side I feel sorry for is that baby. Glad Charlie got his head out of his arse.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:30 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Glad Charlie is seeing the error of his ways. Jasper sound screwed. Glad pay for all he did.
Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:00 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
The perfect ending to their perfect begining thanks so much for another great one.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 5:50 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Great story
Date: 26 Dec 2017 9:59 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Jasper got what he deserved and so glad Edward got some pay back. They are all so sweet so sad about them lossing Renee but life goes on and she wanted to make sure of that.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 7:43 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Absolutely loved this story
Date: 26 Dec 2017 6:46 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:53 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Amazing story
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Perfect ending!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
That was great!
Date: 26 Dec 2017 2:02 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I loved this so so much! It was a great little short story.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 1:52 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Love love love this chapter. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!
Date: 26 Dec 2017 12:27 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
:) loved this story
Date: 25 Dec 2017 8:36 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Fantastic story Josie well done hun
Date: 25 Dec 2017 6:52 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
A Merry Christmas indeed.
Date: 25 Dec 2017 11:54 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Sweet. Thank you
Date: 25 Dec 2017 3:01 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Jasper sure was an ass, but Alice was a piece of work too. Edward and Bella are too sweet.
Date: 25 Dec 2017 12:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
:)
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:43 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Wonderful. Thank you. Best wishes for the season.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:05 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it
Have a Merry Christmas.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 2:15 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I really needed something sweet & mushy to read! I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 4:16 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it !
Date: 24 Dec 2017 1:36 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Sounds like Jasper is going down. I just wonder what they will decide about their future.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 11:38 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
:)
Date: 23 Dec 2017 10:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I really needed something sweet & mushy to read! I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Great chapter, keep writing
Merry Christmas
Date: 23 Dec 2017 12:14 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I'm actually glad that Jasper, Alice, his father in law and all of his cronies are going away for so much more than beating up Edward and trashing his place. That is 1 thing that Edward doesn't have to have a speck of guilt over.
Bella and Edward should think of something that they would both love to do for a living together, but do it in a totally different town than Chicago, Forks, or any where in Washington. LOL
I now what you are going to do to us next.....You have a cancer patient declining chemo....... Death? Funeral? Sad letters left behind??
Bring it On!!! I'm ready!!! LOL
Date: 23 Dec 2017 9:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
It is good that Charlie has changed his ways. So sad about Renee my heart just breaks for all of them. Jasper is a stupid dick and I hope he spends a long time behind bars.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 5:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 22 Dec 2017 5:01 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Oh my goodness wow Jasper is horrible man I hope is gets his comings
Date: 20 Dec 2017 11:21 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Wow Jasper is def a douche. Who does he think he is? A mobster? What a dick. Charlie is a jerk but as you said, he's making amends.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 10:31 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Jasper is definitely a douche. I'm guessing he has to pay his mom's bills because the garage was used as collateral. Otherwise, he wouldn't be liable for them. Ah well...I'll shut up now. Happy lemon dance though.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 9:26 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I don't know how someone can be as big an asshole as Jasper was and still is. ugh......
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:54 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I was worried about what Peter was going to say.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:09 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I’m so sad for Bella with her mom but so happy that she now has Edward. Jasper sure has fucked up his life with his mean, hateful, reprehensible behavior! Well, now he’ll have to deal with the ramifications of his behavior. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 19 Dec 2017 11:29 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Love it!
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Charlie is kissing ass and he should be. Jasper just needs to take a long walk on a short dock and not come up for air ever.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:08 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it!
Date: 19 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
How could Jasper think he could get away with that?
Only one chapter left? I'm really enjoying this.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:55 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Omgosh! Jasper is such a jerk. I hope Bella pops Jasper in his face. Love the lemons.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:19 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Great chapter keep on writing
Date: 19 Dec 2017 2:54 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Very good.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 2:51 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Cabt wait to find out more about them.
Date: 18 Dec 2017 5:19 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 18 Dec 2017 10:43 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
She sees that they are ment to be but Edward does not see his worth so sad
Date: 18 Dec 2017 3:31 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Really great story so far! Keep up the great work !
Date: 17 Dec 2017 9:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Thoroughly enjoyable on all measures. Thanks
Date: 17 Dec 2017 8:17 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Nice. Lots of history to sort through. Thank you
Date: 16 Dec 2017 11:40 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:46 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Don't give up Edward
Keep on writing, good story
Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:33 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Poor Edward
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I Jasper gets what’s coming to him. Their night together was perfect. It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella. She’ll just have to prove him wrong. Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I Jasper gets what’s coming to him. Their night together was perfect. It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella. She’ll just have to prove him wrong. Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 8:10 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I can’t wait!!
Date: 16 Dec 2017 8:10 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I can’t wait!!
Date: 16 Dec 2017 7:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
No no no no no! Poor Edward - so despondent & insecure! Bella better not leave him! Silent partner??
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:20 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Dam! Jasper the douche bag has partly ruined both his sister's and Edward's life. He deserves some come upance. I think Bella and Edward should tell his ass off together. I wonder if Bella's mom is in on .the ass hatery
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I think Edward is selling himself short.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:03 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I need more!! lol
Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:27 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Poor Edward, Belle needs to kick Jasper’s ass.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 7:56 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Can’t wait to hear more about their history and what happened. Thank you for the Christmas treat!
Date: 14 Dec 2017 4:45 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Interesting storyline
Keep writing
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:12 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Love it! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2017 10:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
He will warmer her up lol
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:08 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I can't wait to see what happens to these two! I am not happy with Jasper. I can't wait for more. Thanks so much!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2017 4:07 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I like it
Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:33 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Your stories are always good.
Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:09 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
It sounds like all of Bella's family are assholes. I wouldn 't want to ge to see them either. It goes both ways too. I didn't read about any visits or attempted visits from them either.
Poor Edward seems so lonely and alone too. These 2 need to get snowed in for about a month and then disappear, it sounds like. LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2017 3:06 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
I love it! They sound so sweet together! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:11 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 Dec 2017 10:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
good start
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:04 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Love this! Can't wait for the rest !
Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:58 AM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11 Dec 2017 11:51 PM Title: Mechanics and Mistletoe
sounds like Jasper has some 'splaining to do Lucy.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 7:04 PM Title: 12 Days of Christmas
This was amazing! I love it that you ended it with a bang!! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 27 Dec 2016 7:39 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas
He is a good man and loves his wife no matter the size she is. I wish he would let Bella be the one to tell Tanya to get her ass out
Author's Response: Oh, that sounds like an excellent idea!
Date: 27 Dec 2016 7:30 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas
First thing get rid of Tanya.
Author's Response: Definitely!
Date: 24 Dec 2016 12:54 AM Title: 12 Days of Christmas
Thank you for the wonderful holiday gift I am following your writing and have enjoyed your stories. You have so much talent. Best wishes in 2017.
Author's Response: I appreciate that so much. Thank you very much.
Author's Response: I appreciate that so much. Thank you very much.