Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:23 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
Something about your story caught my eye. I don't usually enjoys stories that are so different than the original book. I am glad that I did start reading this one, as it is very enjoyable. I love the way you write Bella and Alice. I hope Angela and Emmett are both allowed to accompany Bella to England.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:13 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:19 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.
Date: 26 Jul 2017 4:13 AM Title: The Practice of Love
Oh poor Emmett. Grew up wiwith two loving parents (wealth)with no death, abuse, neglect or homelessness or stage III cancer. By all means let's celebrate you as the victim. Jesus he and Rosalie deserve each other. Bravo Pixie way to serve up the truth. I'm so glad Bella called I hope Lil Bell forgives her Ewoord.so freaking cute!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:23 PM Title: The Practice of Love
Surprise surprise Rosalie is a judgemental bitch and it took Alice way to long to defend him and she did it lamely and can she disappear instead of Jake? Also hello Bella you are damaged too dear. Shit we all are right. Again love lil bell!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:48 PM Title: The Practice of Love
So much to say: first Carlisle is shit sorry who abandones their twin sisters only child after she dies. You don't see bruises so that's your excuse! A 7 year old is good at hiding things? You're a family doctor FFS you know the signs. Rosalie is just as annoying as ever. It's so rare I tolerate her anway. I love Jasper in this story so far. Edward and Bella are two broken halves of a whole who settled in life to feel something...anything. So Jake and Tanya poof be gone! And more lil bell she is he sweetest! Good writing!
Date: 21 Jul 2017 3:00 PM Title: Punch Me, Love Me, Save Me
Wow just wow, this was epic. I read it nearly straight thru another amazing story from a equally amazing author. I will someday completely read your entire catalogue of stories. Thank you for continuing to bless us all in the fandom with your talent.
Date: 10 Jul 2017 8:22 PM Title: Punch Me, Love Me, Save Me
I finally read this. It came 4 days ago and just sat in my inbox because I couldn't conceive of reading it. That would mean the end. I had mixed feelings about it ending. This story owned me for a long time. I think, if you remember my reviews as you were posting it, that you understand that. I felt every single emotion held within these pages. I related in a personal way to a lot of it. You read my rambling reviews and commented on each one. Thank you so much for expressing your wonderful talent in this story. I don't get out much anymore and live to read a good story. This one feels personal and I love it and you for writing it. Thanks are insuficient words to describe my state of mind while reading this story. Bless you.
Date: 01 Jul 2017 7:42 PM Title: Punch Me, Love Me, Save Me
Oops. I got so excited seeing you in my inbox this morning, I neglected to see that there was only one new chapter, not three. I read this on FFn and gave a raving, over the top, review that I must now shrink back from. I see that only one chapter is new and it gives us a bit of a cliffie and not the end. That's perfectly OK. It's a wonderful wedding chapter with what looks like the possibility of a pregnancy at the end and I love it. Silly me. Please forgive my over-enthusiasm.
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:23 AM Title: Return of the King
Great story. The only thing I wondered about was the agents who were killed while guarding Rose. If I was reading correctly Jacob should have been on duty. Yet there was no mention of his death.
Again, great story! Thanks!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 1:55 PM Title: Breakaway
This is freakin awesome!! I love that Carlisle isn't a DH anymore and that they are going to start their own team with his help!! I especially love the part about the team name and how it will someday be hers if he has it his way!! ;) lol I LOVE IT!! :)
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:09 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
My eyes teared up at the first words of this chapter, as I knew what was coming. What a magnificent epilogue! What more could one want that to live a long and happy life with family around. It's too bad Edward went so far ahead of her. That is really sad,but they are together now and off on endless adventures. Thank you for this lovely and moving story!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:10 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
Under what name did you publish this book, Children of Creation? It looks like something I would read....
Twins are here. A boy first is good for the monarchy, and a girl second will be daddy's little princess! I'm so glad I found this story. I have really enjoyed reading it!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:43 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
I love that Kate got the benefit of Bella's mercy. I don't think she deserved what the others got as she was blackmailed vehemently to participate. They were very generous with her. I'm so happy that Emmett was given the lands at Gloucester. I know he will do right by them and also be able to court and marry Lady Rosalie. Now comes Alice's baby....
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:55 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
I suspect we haven't heard the last of Tanya yet. No telling what she will do.. I wouldn't put it past the stupid bitch to try to kill Bella, which would seal her fate! Things are heating up for Emmett and Rosalie! Yes! I love that Edward is asserting himself as future king!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:26 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
I hope her nausa and vometing is due to her being pregnant....and I'm glad Edward is taking care of the Tanya situation, all the while knowing nothing of how insecure Bella is being about what his relationship with Tanya might be. Maybe it's her pregnancy hormones making her extra sensetive???
Date: 27 Mar 2016 6:24 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
I'm once again reading this story. I just had to start the day reading chapter 8 over again to get a taste of their lemony goodness. In this chapter, I wonder if King Charles is purposely making it seem a war is imminent for his own unknown as yet purposes of if he misreads the situation. I love that you show Bella as a strong and intelligent woman here, even if she has to disguise that intelligence by feeding clues through her brother. Bravo!