Date: 07 Feb 2016 3:54 AM Title: It's You
Okay, I'm sorry but I have to say, "way to unreal". I'm sorry, but really, if she was rapped the idea of any guy touching her in any sexual way would freak her out. I have read most of your stories but this one part is just way off. I'm sorry and don't mean to be rude but that would NEVER happen in a thousand years. She would be repulsed and to freaked out to do anything for months, if not years; sometimes counseling as well.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: It's You
really cool little story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 13 Nov 2015 5:25 PM Title: Saving Bella
great o/s thanks for sharing ;D
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2015 11:35 PM Title: Forever You
omg!!! they were all over the place ! well bella more than edward ;) i hope the sequel comes soon ;D
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2014 2:56 AM Title: With Any Luck
cute little story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: It's You
I think this story started out good, but really floored me.
I think that you should stated in the outline/summary that their is a rape scene in the story. This give the reader a choice to read or not. I myself do not, will not read a story that has rape in it because it is my choice not to read them. This story doesn't even state that their is hurt, angst or drama in the chapters, so to my surprise I was floored and pissed.
As a writer you are free to write as you see and feel. As a reader I depend on the summary to let me know if the story/book will be enjoyable for me. This story I will not finish althoughbn I would like to know what happens at the end.
Thank you for taking the time to write and posting your stories.
Author's Response:
I am very sorry that it wasn't put in the summary about the violence that happened in the story. When we started posting the story it was as a weekly work in progress and once it completed, we didn't think to update the summary. I'm very sorry thta you will not be completing the story. I hope that you will skim through the chapters and possibly read to the end. But if not thank you for reading and your review.
sher
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:14 AM Title: With Any Luck
I do so love a happy ending and this was a dandy! Cute little story and a heck of a lot of fun to read!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:15 AM Title: With Any Luck
Oh, poor little thing, she's worked too hard baking for this shindig!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:12 AM Title: With Any Luck
Hope someone is thinking enough to remember the condom!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:08 AM Title: With Any Luck
See what you can have if you wait long enough? Your every dream fulfilled, I'm thinking!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:05 AM Title: With Any Luck
Oh yay! This is such fun!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:03 AM Title: With Any Luck
OMG! Let's throw caution to the winds and just go for it! How often is this going to happen? Once in a blue moon, I'm thinking.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: With Any Luck
Who wouldn't want to hear a hot guy has had a crush on you for a long time? Pour some more champagne, Edward!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: With Any Luck
I would call that little conversation getting down to brass tacks, and then some!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:23 AM Title: With Any Luck
He really is next door to tonguetied, poor guy! I think that is so sweet!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:21 AM Title: With Any Luck
I think Alice is on the right track here, if their reaction to each other is any indication!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:48 AM Title: With Any Luck
At last, they look each other in the eye! I'm thinking this may all be a set up of Alice and perhaps Esme! Hope it works!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: With Any Luck
Come on Bella don't be such a cynic! There is a guy out there for you, have faith!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:37 AM Title: With Any Luck
I bet I know who that picture portrays! He thinks the townhouses look nice and guess who lives there? Right you are! So, now we know who he likes!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:46 PM Title: With Any Luck
I'm seeing a common theme here, between Bella and Edward. Waiting for your true love is kind of sweet, but usually doesn't work as well as actually looking!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:40 PM Title: With Any Luck
Always makes me smile when Alice can't restrain herself from trying to dress Edward. Hope he finds someone this year.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 6:29 AM Title: Forever You
is it already up for us to read
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 6:34 AM Title: Forever You
I LOVE YOUR STORY BUT IT DOESN'T FEEL FINISHED TO ME I GUESS I WAS WAITING TO FIND OUT WHAT THE BABY WAS AND EDWARD RETURNING HOME AFTER THERE TOUR. THANKS FOR THE STORY.
Author's Response:
there is a sequel.. its called on the road
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 7:20 PM Title: Forever You
YOU KNOW WHAT I FEEL SO BAD FOR EDWARD ALL THE BITCHING BELLA DOES ALL THE TIME ALWAYS SAYING SHE'S SO FAT HE DOESN'T WANT HER SHE UGLY HE WANT TOUCH HER ALL KINDS SO SHIT IT ALL BULLSHIT SHE ACTS LIKE A CRAZY PERSON AND BEING PREGNANT IS NOT A GOOD ENOUGH REASON TO ALWAYS BE TREATING EDWARD THE WAY SHE DOES HE IS DOING ALL HE CAN FOR HER AND AS FOR THE KISS WILL I'D BE PISSED ABOUT THAT TO BUT SHE DOES KEEP TELLING HIM HE CHREATS ON HIM WHEN HE DIDN'T I JUST YOUR BELLA IS A BIG BABY.HOW OLD IS SHE ANY WAYS?
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 4:51 PM Title: Forever You
IS THAT REALLY TRUE ABOUT THE MAN CUMMING IN THE WOMAN CAN MAKE HER GO INTO LABOR? I NEVER HEARD THAT BEFORE AND I HAVE BEEN PREGNANT 15 TIMES I LOSE 12 OUT OF THAT 15 BUT I DID GET THREE LIVE CHILDREN AND I ADOPTED ONE LATER IN LIFE. I'M NOW 68 AND THANK GOD ALL MY KIDS ARE STILL WITH ME I MEAN THEY LIVE NEAR ME NOT IN MY HOME WITH ME.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2013 6:58 PM Title: Forever You
I DON'T GET IT WHEN A CHILD IS KIDDNAPPED THE FBI IS ALWAYS CALLED WHY DIDN'T YOU IS IT YOU DIDN'T THINK OF IT? I KNOW CHARLIE IS A COP BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER IN CASES LIKE THIS ONE. I AM REALLY LOVING YOUR STORY.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2013 9:56 PM Title: Forever You
I'M ON BELLA'S SIDE ON THIS ONE EDWARD SHOULD HAVE PUT A STOP TO THE GIRLS BEING UP THERE AND TOUCHING HIM WAS OUT OF LINE HE STOPPED THE GIRL FROM KISSING HIM BUT IT WAS OK FOR THEM TO TOUCH HIS DICK NO WAY WAS THAT RIGHT.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2013 4:36 AM Title: Forever You
does bella need an operation on her head?
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 8:38 PM Title: Forever You
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M ALSO LOVING THE LONG CHAPTERS.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 6:24 AM Title: With Any Luck
I LOVED THIS STORY BUT IT'S A BIT SHORT
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:42 PM Title: It's You
I loved it so much. Thank you for the closure.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: It's You
Great ending to a great story thank you very much
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:57 AM Title: Saving Bella
I loved it!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:15 AM Title: It's You
How sweet! So sad it is almost over.
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: It's You
aww that was sweet now that all have the same last name...
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:06 PM Title: Forever You
This sounds like a really good story...unfortunately, it is really hard to read. You don't have quote marks where people are speaking, so it all runs together. I really liked what I could read, but I couldn't get very far, it was hard to follow. I hope you can fix this little problem, so more people can read it :) I love "Across the Lines" and am working on reading it now.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:07 PM Title: With Any Luck
The last line in this chapter is kinda sweet. I have a feeling that if will be one of my favorites for a while. :-P
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:03 PM Title: With Any Luck
*ahem* I don't really know what to say for this chapter. If is a really hot and steamy chapter that has knocked out quite a few of my brain cells... just saying.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:56 PM Title: With Any Luck
I guess long time crushes can fuel things really well. It feels like things are moving rather on the fast side, but them, who am I to judge?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:35 PM Title: With Any Luck
O.O That was a very big change from the previous chapters. An interesting chamge, that was done really well. I had to look back to see where the are st the party... I mean that was pretty steamy for a fundraiser... ;-)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:52 PM Title: With Any Luck
Where was Edward when Alice was in high school? I don't really mind the whole big age gap, but this chapter has me wondering about what their ages are.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:47 PM Title: With Any Luck
Those are some pretty good questions to ask when you are interested in someone.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:45 PM Title: With Any Luck
I'm kinda curious now, where did Edward get the picture in his desk? Sweet nosy Alice... :-P
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:43 PM Title: With Any Luck
I guess I will also have toention how Much I like Edward's perspective more most of the time. I rarely, find myself connecting with Bella's perspective as well as with Edward's.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:39 PM Title: With Any Luck
You have a way of connecting readers to your characters. The way you wrote this scene is great!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:37 PM Title: With Any Luck
I wonder what the Cullen order contains.... It is always fun, at least to me, to imagine how the food served in stories look like. Yeah I'm a little odd at times. :-P
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:33 PM Title: With Any Luck
Short but sweet chapters. I guess someone has a crush on a certain someone. ;-)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:29 PM Title: With Any Luck
A doctor and a baker!?!? Now I really can't wait to see how the story will unfold. Two of my favorite types of fox characters in one story!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: With Any Luck
Just reading this first chapter has me hooked already! I can't wait to continue to read!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: It's You
Glad you are back. I think that baby is going to be here quicker than expected. Why did they wait so long to get married?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: It's You
Hey,
great that you wrote more! Finally they're married, I'm really happy but I don't think that the baby will wait so much longer :D
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:41 PM Title: Saving Bella
I like reading stories where Bella also has some mind reading powers. It is always interesting and fun to picture their expressions when the Cullens find out about the powers. Thank you for sharing this story!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:53 AM Title: With Any Luck
Cute. Just needs one thing...maybe an epi to tell us how they fared...
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:11 PM Title: With Any Luck
They will together forever, no doubt about it!
Thank you for sharing With Any Luck with us.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: With Any Luck
.... and they embark upon a new life ..... together.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: With Any Luck
He did lock the door right?
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: With Any Luck
Guess she has finished swooning......
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:31 PM Title: With Any Luck
Trust me, she does.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:29 PM Title: With Any Luck
WoW. Once she stopped swooning they got right down to business. Well I'm sure they will figure out just how far they want to go soon as they catch their breath.
Before I forget, LOVED the first kiss. Every girl should be so lucky.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:21 PM Title: With Any Luck
Oh Edward you didn't fuck things up at all. Bella is merely twitterpated. She just needs a moment to collect her wits about her.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:18 PM Title: With Any Luck
Such a simple flirtation, so much heat.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:16 PM Title: With Any Luck
Has Bella been reduced to a puddle of goo yet?
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:15 PM Title: With Any Luck
Yes, well, while she is getting a drink I'm just going to fan myself.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: With Any Luck
How can one not smile at this sight to behold. And I don't mean his pants, lol, but rather the look in his eye as he sees her.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 12:47 PM Title: With Any Luck
Well, if she wears socks tonight she is going to have one hell of time keeping them on and that's all I have to say about that. This is going to be sooooo good.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 12:42 PM Title: With Any Luck
Oh how sweet that he has a picture of her and knows she is the one.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 12:17 PM Title: With Any Luck
Oh but he does Bella and you will meet him very soon :)
Date: 01 Jun 2012 12:16 PM Title: With Any Luck
This looks like it will be really good!
Date: 01 Jun 2012 8:37 AM Title: Saving Bella
Bella is quite the talented human in your story. Her mother and step-dad barely qualify as human. I can't believe they would chain her up and leave her that way. What a couple of morons! Thanks to Alice's visions and Edward rescuing her, Bella gets a forever love and a great family! What could be better?
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:58 AM Title: It's You
so happy he told her what was going on
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:02 AM Title: It's You
i am glad edward came through and told bella the truth. like he said they will be married soon and they should not have any secrets
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: It's You
Why do I get the feeling something is about to happen. By Edwards last few sentences, things seem to be going to good!! I hope Im wrong. Great update!!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:25 PM Title: It's You
Edward knew she would sell her child. It is so sad, but I am glad she is a crappy parent. Anthony is going to have a wonderful life now.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: It's You
well i was scared there for a minute that something was going wrong
I am glad things with Irina seem to go well. even though she is signing her rights for money i am thrilled that she is doing so.
ahhhhh anthony calling bella mom, ahhhh
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:02 AM Title: It's You
I'm really enjoying your story, overall - lots of drama keeping me interested, not too much angst, etc. but I'm finding it jarring that Bella calls Edward "McScruff" ALL the time, and rarely calls him Edward. Over the course of several updates, I've found myself jolted out of the story from it, though I think it's been the most jarring with the lovemaking scenes. (I think it jolts me because I have to remember who McScruff is, since she rarely calls him by name when speaking to him.) I try not to write nit-picky reviews, and I hope this doesn't seem like one, but I thought if I was a writer, I would want to know that it was happening.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 1:59 AM Title: It's You
okay... awesome loved the way she got 15 yrs and James got 20 not enough but very good....and rhen Anthony asking Bella is he could call her Mom was just perfect.... I really hope Irina takes the money!!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:16 PM Title: It's You
Poor Anthony has grown up too fast. Hopefully, the longer he stays with Bella and Edward the kid will come back out in Anthony. He does not need to be so stressed. I hope Tanya will sign her rights away so Bella can adopt him as well.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:01 PM Title: It's You
What a loving family I hope they get to keep it with out having to deal with the bitch.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: It's You
ahhhh anthony is blessed to be placed in their family. he deserves to be happy and loved. he will be a great big brother
Date: 13 Dec 2011 2:00 AM Title: It's You
I really hope that it is smooth sailing from here on out! They deserve to be drama free.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:41 AM Title: It's You
awhh what a heart warming chapter I'm really lving liitle Anthony!!! He's gonna make a wonderful Big Brother!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2011 6:08 PM Title: It's You
What an ass hole Edward is
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:10 PM Title: It's You
I am so happy for Edward, Bella and Anthony. They are a wonderful little family with a new one on the way. They have some legal paperwork to do, but it should all work out.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:07 AM Title: It's You
I was so excited for both babys Anthonys life will be a much better life now.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:06 AM Title: It's You
She has to be pregers????
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:50 AM Title: It's You
About damn time! Now everything else needs to fall in place........... NO more Irina and def no more James!!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:56 PM Title: It's You
Yeah, Bella for standing up to Irina. I hope they lock her up and throw away the key.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 6:55 AM Title: It's You
Ok Why is Bella so calm she jujst got rape hellooooo
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:24 PM Title: It's You
Good the wicked witch is going to jail that is a good place for her
Date: 28 Nov 2011 5:56 PM Title: It's You
Bella is over sensitive in this story. If Edward says anything that she doesn't agree with she is ready to run away from the relationship. She must not love him very much. This is a very emotional time for both of them. They might not always agree, but running away is not the answer. In this case, that is exactly what Irina wants to happen. She wants to break them up. Bella needs to be sweeter to Edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:54 AM Title: It's You
Great story, I haven't decided if Im wanting Anthony to be Edwards or if I hope he is not and they adopt him. I think with what's happened if Anthony is Edward's Bella will feel even more insecure since she lost the baby. They have had so many obstacles, it's time for happiness.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:40 AM Title: It's You
man edward you just keep getting yourself in the dog house. noone to blame but your stupid mouth.
man i am shocked you don't think first
i am surprised by all the chances bella gives you
Author's Response:
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:45 AM Title: It's You
She needed to kick him in his junk.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 2:46 AM Title: It's You
wow Holy Hell Edward control that mouth son, and Bella he did tell you about Irina... mercy at least they calmed down and stayed....... poor lttle Anthony has been through so much...He needs the stability that Bella can provide for him...still on the fence with Edward and his personality... Love the story though and am very much E x B pairing fan.... this girl has truly been through the ringer...
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Forever You
Oh boy why do I think that Edward is in for alot of fights on the road with Bella????
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :)
Date: 19 Nov 2011 2:40 AM Title: Forever You
Well I guess that Edward is having to pay for that mistake that he made.
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Nov 2011 1:47 AM Title: Forever You
Wow!! Edward really messed up didn't he? I really hope that he sees what he did was wrong and that he doens't ever try to do that again.
Author's Response: