[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2022 2:19 AM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
This story as with all is a total blast!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2022 6:16 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I like the Bella very much. Well written
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2022 5:26 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Such I great chapter. I understand Edward had to be put back together, spitting venom was a neat trick and Edward made light of it, Emmett's reply " Good God he can't thrust!" Lord you had me on the floor , also using your quote- He's got eighty-six years of stress hormones clogging up his innards," Jasper frowned.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2022 4:31 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
OMG! Ok mike the boobie stalker ! Edward won't get his head outta his ass, the crash !!!!!, jazz with his voodoo, the inner an outer verbal ramblings of Edward, You had me laughing crying, I don't know if you will ever read this and why there is not more reviews but BAM you are a awesome writer.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Poor Edward. Would love to see Bella's point of view.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 4:23 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Poor Edward.Very well written
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 3:55 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I love how Edwards mind works , it's inner dialog, you had me laughing till I about peed with the inner workings of all the others minds, I think the way you had Edward get acclimated to Bella's scent was also great, and the vivid explanation of what Bella's home looked like almost had me there.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 3:06 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I'm so in love with this story, the connection between your characters are wonderful and makes me laugh, yes Edward is still hard on himself but the connection he has with his siblings over rides I guess , we see Edwards struggle but also a bit of cheeky Edward too, I look forward to continuing to read !
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 4:18 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
That had me almost crying right along with Edward. I can't wait to see where you take me on this journey. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the praise. I hope you enjoy the story. Happy reading. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 4:09 PM Title: Cookies
That was cute. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 4:02 PM Title: The Sad Story of Woof
Awwww, poor Woof. Poor Edward. That was really sad. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.
Jess
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2016 12:00 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Oh I love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter presently. Happy reading!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:46 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
thanks so much for this AWESOME!!! chapter ;) i think i would like to slap bella upside the head with this one like the rest of the girls ;) and hug edward so tight!!! but i didn't understand the poem at the top of the chapter though ;D
Author's Response:
LOL Bella could probably use a good smack upside the head. Sigh.
The poem at the top is about Courtly Love. Basically, it's a girl and a guy fawning over each other, but keeping it chaste. People in the 1300s thought that to act on their desires was to commit adultery--even if that desire was acted upon with their spouse. They therefore dreamed up this idea that it was great to fall in love with somebody and worship them from afar, without any of the hanky panky. Poor Edward. I'm taking a poke at his morals.
Great question. Thanks for asking. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 3:16 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
This explains Alice and Edwards nicknames a little better. I want to give Bella a kick in the rear. Edward is being a bit of his mellow self again. Wonderful chapter. Love having doctors in the house. Rose in Edwards corner, good for her.
Author's Response:
Just so you know, the Doveward in my head is not feeling mellow right now. :D :D :D
Thanks for reviewing. xoox j
Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:42 PM Title: Make Haste My Beloved
Really like this story so far ! Need to go back and read the first installment .
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:06 PM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
Just finding this story after reading "Dove . " Very impressed with your writing and your language research !
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 17 Nov 2015 6:03 PM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
Fabulous writing !
Author's Response:
Thank you! And thanks so much for reviewing. <3
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:54 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I don't know how I missed this story but I have now read it from the beginning and it is superb. I think I was initially misled by the summary and didn't realize that you were basically retelling the entire Twilight saga with a lot more interesting details and explanation of Edward'a character and thought processes . I love it. You have done a fabulous job so far . I also see from your author notes that you have already continued this saga in other stories, so I guess I need to find your website and read the others. Keep up the great work !
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't respond sooner. Joys of email.
Thanks so much for your praise. Yes, I have a whole bunch of stories in this series. Almost all of them are on TWCS, but the remainder are posted on FFN. I normally post everything here but I haven't had time, so I hope you'll catch up with me eventually.
Happy reading!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:16 AM Title: Minibusted
Just finished on Forrest and followed over hear. Now that the gang is crashing the party poor Edward and Bella better behave. Can just see the thoughts going through Jessica's head! Shopping trip! Just what Alice wanted to hear
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2015 2:54 AM Title: Cookies
What an outstanding experience at selling Girl Scout cookies. Freakie good!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2015 2:20 AM Title: Unforeseen Events Revisited
I found your story a few days back and I'm having a blast reading it!!! I love what yo have done with each character, but i specially needed to let you know that i love Jasper, thanks for letting us into his mind in this episode.
I can't wait to see what else is coming ;) (no pun intended.... much)
I hope RL is smiling at you.
Bisous.R.
Date: 08 Nov 2015 2:07 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
hi ;) i was so excited when this story showed a new chapter up but unfortunatley there was NO new chapter???? and i reviewed on it already;(
Author's Response:
Hi, I'm not sure what happened, sorry. A 'reporter' over on FFN threatened to report my mature-rated stories so a friend helped me by uploading any chapters I hadn't posted on TWCS. Perhaps one posted twice by accident. Anyway, the last couple of months have not been fun. I'll post a chapter as soon as I can but I lost the next chapter of this when my laptop died. It's going to take me a while to catch up. Sorry for the delay and thanks for sticking with me. xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:57 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
WOW!!! 3 chapters ;) are there 1 or 2 more until you press complete on this section? i can't decide which chapter i enjoyed the most they were all great ;) thanks for posting ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! And special thanks for the five stars.
There will be a lot more chapters before we hit NM. I haven't found a good place to break yet, so this may turn into a really long story. :)
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:02 PM Title: Daddy's Journal (Letters to Renesmee)
I love this beautiful letter for father's day. How appropriate!
Thanks Jess!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, Jan. xoox
Date: 25 May 2015 1:53 AM Title: Make Haste My Beloved
love this and cant wait for more.
Date: 16 May 2015 10:12 PM Title: Make Haste My Beloved
I am loving your stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying them. :)
Date: 14 May 2015 9:16 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
lOVE IT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm about halfway through the next chapter and hope to be able to post again soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2015 2:42 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter ;) i really liked the charlie interaction ;) it's giong to be interesting how the get over this lila incident. l really hope they stick to staying vigins until marriage but go all the way up to that point until then ;D
Author's Response:
*snickers evilly* I think you'll be happy with their (cough) practice. :D
Date: 25 Apr 2015 1:30 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Whenever I post a chapter like this, I worry that it will trigger somebody. I'd hate for that to happen.
Yes, Kate has her canon power. :)
Poor Edward, indeed.
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 7:01 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
AWESOME!!! thanks for the warning at the top ;) i had to read this twice so it could sink in properly ;) i was wondering if you gave us info about kate having her canon power? POOR EDWARD!! ;D
Author's Response:
It was a heck of a chapter to write, both for content and for his confused state of mind. Glad the warning was beneficial. Yes, Kate has her canon power.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:36 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
WOW!! THANK YOU for replying to all my previous reviews ;D i just noticed you posted this chapter and i'm sooo glad i did ;) 1st i can't believe what sam 'said' about leah!!! and i'm really looking forward to a domme bella!! ;D and i'm really glad that jasper is in edwards corner in this chapter ;) and hope lila is dispatched SOON!!! ;D
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2015 8:06 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
sooo cool!!! i'm glad you were able to post a new chapter;) i hope your rl gets better and you can relax soon ;D xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you. I took a break today from everything. My family members all have a nasty cold and I think they've shared it with me, but I don't feel too bad tonight. Might be lucky and miss out on it. Anyway, the next chapter's up, so enjoy. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:32 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
sooo cool!!!!! i'm glad i was wrong about the attack being the 3 nomads ;) i hope all is well in your rl and your in my prayers;) please come back soon and put his adolesence to rest so i can continue with the other parts of the series ;D
Author's Response:
LOL! Ed has a long way to go to get to Eclipse. There's a lot of story to unfold, yet.
Thanks for your prayers. They are very much appreciated! xo j
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:55 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
AWESOME!!! but if feel like i've read it before? have you posted this chapter as something else? it felt like dejarvu? ;D
Author's Response:
Nope, it's the first time these scenes have appeared (mention of vibrator, lace nighty, trip to Greece). They are mentioned in later stories, so if you've read other stories of mine, they'll sound familiar.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:56 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
ooh!!! so the jane in woof WAS jane the pain volturi!!!! so i think that all the pictures that esme etc. post on 'facebook' will bring her to make a visit asap? ;D
Author's Response:
Cackles! Yes, Jane the Pain and Edward once had a very awkward and unpleasant blind date. He isn't over it yet.
Aro does not allow Jane to have Facebook. She tends to be too opinionated. And she overreacts. Besides, he's told her that it's all about sharing pictures of kittens. Once she found out they were not dead or tortured kittens, she lost all interest.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:07 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i LOVED vampire ELVIS!!!! i cried my eyes out when he passed away on the 16th of august 1977 i was inconsolable ;( anyway that was awesome and the intro to bree and the 3 nomads WOW!!!! excellent ;D
Author's Response:
There must be an Elvis vampire. Thank you. Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:49 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i'm TOTALLY with edward on this subject ;) i think bella should invite all the cullen's to her back yard and give them all the tree shreader speech ;D
Author's Response:
Another chipper shredder fan? Woo hoo!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 6:31 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
loved it as usual ;) why are they making themselves conspicuous? the volturi will be on their a** !!! ;D
Author's Response:
Snort. I think there are different levels of conspicuous. Childish pranks? Okee dokey. Blood and mayhem? Not. TV reality show? Watch out, Jane's coming! ;D
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:27 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
that was such a cool chapter ;) i'm so glad you explained the vampire hierachy ;D
Author's Response:
Wasn't easy to fit the hierarchy into the series. Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 11:38 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
WOW!!!! alot happening in this chapter ;) i love how diffent their phsiology works kudos ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks. Yes, I didn't like the canon physiology. If you can't feel pain, you can't feel pleasure, either. Science lesson of the day. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 10:21 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
excellent coule of chapters ;) i liked how you got everyone involved with the 'attempted rape' scene ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks. I could only see them working together to cover up slips. Besides, they all want to take care of Bella.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 8:36 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
sorry i didn't cry but it was still very moving ;D
Author's Response:
I don't always make people cry. Honestly.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 6:07 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
AWESOME!!! thanks for repliyng to my 1st review btw ;D i'm glad i made you day ;) i love how you write and the language you use ;) i have a question on this chapter though when edward mentioned the times they were here he didn't say that they were here in the '80's as in when alice and jasper met the girl scouts in the 2nd instalment of this series? ;D
Author's Response:
You are the first person ever to ask me that question! AWESOME You. Here's the answer: the Cullens were not living there and none of them were working or in school. Alice and Jasper went there briefly to check on the property. They were noticed anyway. But they didn't remain long. Jasper was too thirsty. ;)
Thanks you for all your reviews and compliments.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 1:07 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i LOVE his querks ;) also they have to shave? in the last chapter i forgot to say in the review that he didn't me mention rosealie when he told her the ages of his family ;D
Author's Response:
Snickers. Yes, they do have to shave, because nobody pulled any hair out by the roots before they were turned. Yes indeed, hair and nails do grow after death. He didn't mention Rose's age? Maybe she gets a bit testy about it when people share. :D :D :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i really LOVE!!! your edward and bella ;) they are just like canon but with more gumption ;D
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! That's just what I like to hear. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:38 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i don't know about this dom business? and edward has mentioned spanking bella a few times? is there any slight bdsm in this story when she becomes a vamp? if so i REALLY hope she is the domme 'hehe' ;D
Author's Response:
*whistles nonchalantly* There might be a bit of that. You'll have to keep reading. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 9:20 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
interesting phsyiology and 'law' you've made ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 8:07 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i like how vunerable you've made your vampires ;) and i've never heard of an os penis before ;D and having sam be a paramedic? interesting twists you're making ;D
Author's Response:
I like my vamps a bit vulnerable and my Wolves a bit unpredictable. LOL! Lots of animals have os penises. Whales, for instance.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 6:31 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
i LOVED your twist at making the wolves bullies HILARIOUS ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks. I figured they outnumbered the Cullens enough to be cocky about it. :D
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 12:35 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
AWESOME so far ;) i'm just going to comment on a hope ;) that he is uncut ;) and bella NEVER!!! gets a brazilian wax!!!! ;D
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAH!!! You just made my day. I hesitate to ask what made your mind go in this direction. Yeah, don't tell me.
I'm going to be mean and withhold answers to both hopes. Be assured, there is a purpose to all I do to these two. I will say, however, that several of the males in my series are not cut. xo
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:15 AM Title: Cookies
WOW!! that was just WEIRD!! but funny ;D
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:35 AM Title: The Sad Story of Woof
OMG!!! definate tissue warning for the end, i'm beginning to read this series and i'm off to read the next part, i'm soooo excited ;D
Author's Response:
You're so sweet! Thanks very much for the praise and for reviewing. I appreciate it!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:56 PM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
The way they talk to each other is so playful.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 13 Jan 2015 6:57 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I'm still waiting for Eddie to find out what's in the toiletry case! Perfect as always, keep 'em coming, you write dysfunctional teenage edwardian vampire boys so well it's scary... is there something you need to tell us?
Author's Response:
Oh, you made me LOL! *wipes eyes* Thank you for making my day. :}
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:52 AM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
I loved how Edward was atttentive to her in this chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:50 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
The Picture is not showing it's only showing a red x when u click story PLEASE FIX!!
Thanks for updating such an captivating story again....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for letting me know. I truly appreciate it! Glad you're enjoying the story. I'm hoping to update again this week. :)
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:19 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Huh, it deleted my first review - bummsickles! Anyhoo, awesome as always and I hope you're feeling better soon! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Argh. I hate it when you write a review and it gets deleted. lol. So thanks for re-reviewing. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the well-wishes. :)
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:28 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Awesome, thanks for this wonderful story, now I have to wait all week for another update... I can be very patient when I choose to be. ;) <3 it!
Author's Response:
LOLOL~ I'm churning out the updates as fast as I can, so I'm glad you can be patient when you choose to be. :D Thanks for the praise, and thank you for reading!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 8:48 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I am really enjoying this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:31 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
So I find myself checking this story on a daily basis looking to see if it's been updated- I like it that much! Double update makes me heart melt...thanks for that, and keep up the awesome writing your version is better than Meyers your characters have personality and depth. I heart it sooo much. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kindness. I had some time to write this morning, so about a third of the next chapter is roughed. Hopefully, it won't take me too long to send out another one. Thanks for loving my story. :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2014 9:08 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Thank for updating this intriging story I truly am look forward to the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! And thank you for your review. I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2014 1:21 AM Title: Proposal versus Proposition
So very much better than Eclipse. Thank you Jes Mollly Brown9e.2 /
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2014 6:46 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I'd love to see pictures of Edward in a speedo. Yumm.
Bella is getting better at fendinge off Charlie.
Poor Edward, it must have been really hard not to have fun with a nearly naked Bella. He'll get ther.
Can't wait.
Thanks Jess.
Author's Response:
I've had a hard time finding any pics of Ed in a Speedo. Didn't expect that. I did find one that Soapy made of him in his underwear that looks kinda like a Speedo. Check out my FB. LOL!
He'll get there. Not fast enough to suit Mr. Ed.
Thanks for reviewing, Jan.
xoox j
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:23 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Oh my oh my where to start. I'm jealous you know how to dance. I have two left feet. I love West Side Story and I think they would have been a great Maria and Tony.
I got very soggy when Bella set him straight. Good girl!!!!
Their last dance was beyond romantic. (Wipes tears away).
Hmmmm what will she wear (or not wear). Poor guy with his tape OUCH!
Love this chapter lots and lots.
Author's Response:
I just love torturing Ed with tape. *happy sigh*
I know how to dance but I haven't danced many of these dances. Some salsa, lots of classics, no jive or Lindy or Tap. I WISH I could do those. I married a man who does not dance. At all.
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:34 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Johnny Mathis always makes me melt. His love songs could put me in the mood any day.
Emmett and Jazz, still the pranksters. i'm glad they love Bella so much. Dance attire sounds beautiful.
You and your use of duct tape. Ouch.
I really don't see how people dance to the music they play now adays.
Great chapter once again.
Looking forward to the remaining dance and after party.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Johnny Mathis is great. :) Some of the modern music is great for dancing. It does take a look past the pop standards, though. I like a lot of the Indies.
I have pics of the attire on Facebook. I'm sure I'll catch you there.
Thanks for reviewing. xoox j
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:15 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I sure enjoyed this review. You're right on all counts!
I'm looking forward to the dance, too.
See you next time, hon.
xo
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2014 12:16 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Everything was blurring when this came out. Figured I'd enjoy it better when I could focus.
So funny.... you really are on top of your game Jess.
Jasper really is a little devil. Same blow up doll that Eric has in the hearst?
Bella's volleyball skills are remarkable.
Charlie doesn't stand a chance with Alice.
Looking forward to the dance.
Thanks Jess
Jan
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:14 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Waited a while to read again and give a dress reviw. Loved their "coming out". Lauren is so nasty.
Jasper's romance story would be interesting. Do we get a peek at that?
The locker stuff is priceless.
Edward is beginning to sound receptive to exploring a little. Jess, I loved it.
Jan
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing in both spots, Jan. I appreciate it.
You might see Eddie Boy dress Jazz down a bit by reciting from his novel. LOL!
Glad you enjoyed the fun.
xo
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:01 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
That was beautiful family love. I do believe Edward is starting to believe he is worthy.
Embry is strange.
Author's Response:
LOL @ Embry is strange. Yeah, he's... different.
Edward might just start to crawl out of his shell. We'll see. Thanks for reviewing, hon. xoox
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 2:02 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Think this was even harder to read this time around. I can't condone what he did but can't fault him either. He is after all a man.
Author's Response:
This one took a lot of time to write. It was hard to put on paper, too.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:12 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
The drama in this chapter is simply amazing. I've never understood how people can do such accurate descriptions of a suspect. I couldn't do that if my life depended on it. How can she be so calm? I'd be a basket case.
Author's Response:
Bella isn't normal. Edward's always said this. She doesn't react the way most people do.
(Ed is poking my arm and saying, "See? I told you!")
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
His thoughts(you thoughts) are oh so deep. Amazing
Author's Response:
Quite the compliment. Thank you. xo
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:07 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Totally lovely beautiful chapter. Wish I could dance.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Anthony said we'd take dance lessons, but we've never managed it. I miss it. My maternal side of the family did a great deal of dancing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
The tarts never change do they? Matchmaking can be fun and always makes me think of Hello Dolly.
Author's Response:
No, they never do.
I love Hello Dolly. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 10:19 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
They have such fun adventures. I just realized how hard it is to give a good review when you've read future stories.
Author's Response:
LOLOL! Peril of reading my series in the order I wrote it, sorry. I seem to have the same problem. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:09 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Love his practical jokes. Heck what don't I love about this story?
Author's Response:
He's fun when he forgets to angst, isn't he? Thanks for the love, hon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:39 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
The tribe is getting on my last nerve. Bella way to go chica
Author's Response:
Weeeeeell... they're young. And irritating. Bella won't stand for it. I like my Bellas with a backbone.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:29 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Love a fiesty Bella. They are so comfy in bed. Sweet
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
What an exciting chapter. Charlie's head must be spinning. Beats a dull ride. That's how I get with Ativan but worse.
Author's Response:
Now you're trying to get me laughing. Admit it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:43 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Charlie reminded me of Jackie Gleason in Smokey and the Bandit. Billy is high on my shit list. Naughty naughty Edward.
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHAHAH "Rufus P Coltrane?" omg.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:09 PM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Just when he starts to feel better you send in the squad to freak him out. Very Evil Jess.
Author's Response:
I've always told you I was an evil writer. Right? Right?
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:48 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Carlisle is so special. Hoping to catch up tonight but am working on a spitting headache and two hour sleep.
Author's Response:
Ouch. I hope you get a proper sleep tonight, hon. xoox
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:46 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
I never did like Jacob, poor Edward and Bella. Just when things were going well.
Author's Response:
True, but Jacob didn't mean to cause trouble. He's just a kid.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:25 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Glad the skank club left. Oh, Alice and Jasper, too funny. Ben and Angela perfec match. Edward is gerrinf such and education.
Author's Response:
Perhaps Bella's getting as much of an education as Edward. LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:45 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
They all love eachother so much. An amazing family. I love the Bella told me.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Edward loved it, too. :D
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:05 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
So sad story about Edward's time away. That is why I think Carlisle will ask him to come back. Jem and Eleazar both give advice. Almost similar.
Author's Response:
That's a very good point! Thanks, Jan.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:40 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Love his swagger and his self "discovery". Tanya tried glad she doesn't succeed.
Author's Response:
Can't you just picture Eddie Boy with the t.p.? LOL!
Yeah, Tanya would never succeed with our Ed. He's a romantic.
xoox j
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:13 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Just need to read again. Haven't reviewed here. This really is an awesome beginning Jess.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jan. Glad to see you as usual. xoox
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:22 PM Title: I Hunger for your Touch
I am thoroughly enjoying these stories. I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I do hope you enjoy them. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2014 4:29 AM Title: Make Haste My Beloved
Are you going to finish this story? I really hope so.
Author's Response:
Yes. It takes me about a month to write a chapter of MH, but I'm trying to get through Dove right now. My plan is to have a chapter of MH out in September, God willing. My son needs surgery and I don't have as much time to write as usual. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Please stick with me. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:05 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
Looks like I need to start over here and review too. Hudson is a jer. Bella is precious. Hard to believe Paul and Jacob once like the other. Oh how things change between these two. . I think Edward has had enough of the insults. Little boys and their name calling. Come on you gus, grow up.
Author's Response:
It seems to take immortals a long, long time to grow up, doesn't it? Thanks for reviewing here, hon. xoox
Date: 14 Jul 2014 5:22 PM Title: Prenuptual Posturing
Holy smokes!! I loved every single word of this story!! It is so fanfriggentastic!!! :)=)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I do hope you'll read more of the series. Thanks for reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:15 AM Title: The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
jMolly, It is hard to believe that you only have a single review of this story!! You are a masterful writer and it is a refreshing change to read the prolog to one of my favorite stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Tonia. Kelly Trobough did me the enormous favour of uploading the remainder of my stories here, so actually, Dove has only been on this site for a couple of weeks. I do hope that people will stop by and leave some reviews, but it's good just to be here. I'm very pleased to have you with me. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Toasty Warm
okay Looking for Hunger for your Touch.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:51 PM Title: Toasty Warm
Way too funny.
Author's Response:
Glad I made you laugh. xo j
Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:41 PM Title: Toasty Warm
I gotta say I hate to read stories without double spacing. lol
Author's Response:
I write them double-spaced. When they're uploaded, they change spacing all on their own. I much prefer double spacing, too. :D
Date: 04 Jul 2014 4:08 PM Title: Toasty Warm
See like I said, I don't like Jacob. Say he got Bella to pick him. Two years and a down the road they have a kid. Then out of the blue he imprints on some gal that came into the garage to get her car fixed and Bella is history. Oh the kid stays with him because it is Tribal law.. See so much hurt and damage.. No he was not a good choice.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:41 PM Title: Toasty Warm
Honestly. I gotta say you could loose Jacob and I would be so thankful. I never read the stories of Bella and Jacob. I just don't like the character.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Toasty Warm
very cute..
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Date: 04 Jul 2014 2:35 PM Title: Toasty Warm
You must know dance or somewhere on this lovely internet there is instructions on Ballroom. My daughter used to teach it. When she was a teenager she taught Cotillion classes with her own teacher. Big classes take two instructors.
Author's Response:
LOL Let's just say I spent years in ballet as a kid and our family liked to dance so I learned to foxtrot, etc. And now, I've spent hours and hours researching ballroom, jive, jitterbugging, tap and salsa for this series. Your daughter's lucky to know dance. I'd have loved to have lessons. Hubbs has promised me that someday we'll take some ballroom. I'd love that. :) I'm past being able to ever do aerials, though. Would have loved to be able to do that. Thanks for reviewing!