Date: 29 Jul 2014 9:03 PM Title: Unexpected Partners - Book 1
Did you edit this? It certainly seems to reads more smoothly. We're did the rest go? If you've decided to edit the plot slightly sounds good to me, but could you say that you're doing so? Please. Thanks.
Date: 29 May 2014 12:34 AM Title: Unexpected Partners - Book 1
This looks like an intriguing beginning, hope I can look forward to quick and regular updates, I never have been very patient! Her character is interesting, I really hope it isn't Shay that betrays her, I don't think she could realistically recover from that considering her prior opinion of love and men. regardless, I have thoroughly enjoyed what I have read so far.
wow! thank you for the positive feedback - will be updating with a few more chapters by hte weekend. the story is finished, but i'm a chronic editor and cant seem to stop re-writing, but i will post and you can let me know if its perfect :)